Wait, is Furio dead!? Please don't let it be so. Please let it be part of some ruse, and not have him get killed offscreen like this. It's a testament to how long this story has been going on (for years) that you get attached to some of the characters that have been there for years, and while it becomes a little hard to keep track of some of the newer characters, and the characters that come and go, Furio has been there since nearly the beginning. The weird dynamic between the free spirited giant girls and the serious and resourceful old wizard is a recurring highlight of the story. He's the closest thing the girls (or at least Janna) have to a friend, to the point that others amusingly assume that he controls them, and he's the only "tiny" that they respected enough to confide their true origins to. His point of view confusion about earth technology was an amusing highlight. His straight man role and interesting point of view perspective to Janna and Laura's immaturity is a lot of fun, and his knowledge and intelligence make the character a good conduit through which to impart information to the reader to. He's got the interesting position of being the one "tiny" that the girls (or at least Janna) respect enough to really care about.

That's not to say that he's a helpless pet. He seems to be the kind of guy whose knowledge, abilities, and potential, the empire overlooked, until he used his resourcefulness to hand one of the girls their first defeat. And to make it more impressive, once the spell wore off, and Janna realised what happened, she didn't seek revenge, but instead came to respect him. And in Chapter 26 when the girls were rendered helpless by the demon worshipper it was "little" Furio who had to rescue them, and defeat the guy who even they couldn't handle, with a technique that frightened even them, in what had to be the most crowning moment of awesome for a character who isn't Janna or Laura in the story thus far.

A lot of characters have been killed off in this story. I just hope that this interesting, and longtime, stalwart character can get a reprieve and continue to defy the odds.

Thanks for responding and clearing up some of the questions I had.

It seems that since the women in the new society don't poop, and as you pointed out, their fresh pee encourages plant growth, and revitalizes men. It seems there is no need for women's toilets in the new society. Women would probably just pee freely outdoors without shame, and be encouraged to do so. In the country it could be an essential part of farming and forest revitalization, and in the towns and cities it could be a way of keeping the parks and lawns fresh and green. Cities would look much more lush and green. Lower body fashion would probably be just skirts with no underwear to make casual public female urination easier. And due to the revitalizing effect of fresh female urine, men might get peed on daily, start the day off not with a shower from a shower head, but one from a spread overhead vulva to get over the morning soreness and grogginess. Some buildings might even have dedicated peeing ladies in what's left of the bathroom to provide revitalization just in case, and they have to go anyway. This would really elevate the profile of the vulva in society. From being taboo, it's the one thing you can never show in most media, to being unavoidable. After all, it's now responsible for the greenness of the land, therapeutic effects on men, and pussies constantly peeing casually and openly outside.

If women now have digestive systems so powerful they can process most solids into liquids, this could still have some dark implications. You said it's illegal for women to swallow men but I'm sure some have still done it anyway for various reasons. It would be an almost perfect crime. The victim is presumably so thoroughly digested, that their liquid essence is peed onto the vegetation which rapidly absorbs it, leaving behind no body or trace. One other drawback to the lack of an anus, is that the only way for gases from the digestive process to escape would be through the mouth, meaning that the women would presumably be belching rather frequently to make up for the lack of ability to fart.

While you answered most of my questions, the one still left unanswered is how exactly does the new female digestive system work? My guess would be a larger stomach, with stronger acids, and stronger lining, which leads to intestines which act like a closed racetrack, passing food around until it's liquefied enough to pass through the kidneys, bladder, then urethra. I would still like to hear your explanation though.

Maybe include through the story an explanation of how everything works in the new digestive tract, through a medical scenario. Say a chapter where a medical student has his professor show him, and by extension the reader, how the new female digestive tract works by having the 2 men put on protective medical diving suits, and get swallowed along with food by a lovely lady. Maybe, Heather volunteering for the hospital for a little side pay. Since men are so small, surgeons would probably carry out some surgeries manually from within, digestive, gynecological, without needing a scalpel, so a visual field trip into the digestive tract would probably be necessary for med students, and could clear up some anatomical mysteries in the story through a plot scenario. Sorry, but now I got a "magic school bus" style scenario stuck in my head, showing the reader about how anatomy works in this world.

Author's Response:

Such a great response! Thank you for your interest!

Oh, I do like these stories set in the past. Nowadays a giantess would simply be isolated in quarantine in a secret location and that would be that, but in low tech and low infrastructure settings the people just have to put up with them and vice versa, with interesting interactions. Very well written and descriptive story.

In the previous chapter you asked for comments, critiques, ideas, and requests, and seeing that this story is being updated again, I figure I might as well leave some.

Anna seems to be a nice girl, evidenced by her never killing anyone before she accidently killed the indian scout, and she does do a lot of work to benefit the town and other towns, but how do they sustain her?  At over 200 feet tall, she is going to need to have tremendous needs placed on the small towns around her.

The one thing the story hasn't yet addressed is the logistics of her everyday needs and functions. Drinkable freshwater could be a concern, since she needs to drink about the equivalent of a large pond of freshwater water everyday, and since she would have to pee several times a day she would be peeing out the equivalent of a small pond everytime she pees. Due to her size, she would be snapping trees everytime she walks through a new area in a very forested setting. For these reasons any area she spends time in, would become deforested, with cracked trees everywhere, and swampy very quickly. Maybe this is why there is tension with the indians. She's drinking their drinkable fresh water, knocking down their forests, and pissing on them. Her bathing in the lake seems a little wasteful of a drinkable freshwater source, it would probably be more wise and frugal for her to bath in the sea instead, in the long run. And of course there is the question of feeding her. What does she eat? The townspeople are going to have a very difficult time keeping up with her food needs to fuel her huge body. The only one thing that can satisfy her for a day would be a whale, and if there is a whaling port that might help, but she would need to eat a whale a day, which might be impractical. Maybe she is loaned out to other towns on a "will work for food" basis, doing work in exchange for food on a rotating town to town schedule. And the people whose jobs she's doing for them, possibly working on procuring food for her instead. And if she needs to eat she also needs to poop, which might be a problem if she needs to poop out a log the size of a house about everyday. Although if the locals use this, they never have to worry about running out of useable fertilizer. There are a couple of very good stories on this site, "Fracture Factor X" and "Saturn Seven" that involve giantesses in similar old time settings and addressing the logistical needs that their bodies impose on the locals. Although in those stories the giantesses are a bit more amoral, but Anna is so far a gentle giantess due to her upbringing, even if her huge size can cause problems.

How famous is she among the British Empire? Could the ships coming in be bringing relief food as well, for her and the townsfolk, or has she not yet gained the Empires attention quite yet? If she has, there would probably be curious nobles, scholars, and scientists coming in to examine her.

There seems to be some sexual frustration on Anna's part. She's 19 with hormones, a bit of a late bloomer in terms of just beginning to show herself off, beginning to notice and lust for men, and yet the chapter about her bathing mentions that "no man in the world could hope to fill her womanhood" as if it's a lament from her perspective. Also due to the standards of her time she has to wear clothes even if it's wildly impractical for both her and the townspeople. For them to make, and for her to wear, since her one set of clothes (no underwear) would become very filthy very quickly. Could her being caught bathing in the lake be a subtle way of rebeling and expressing herself sexually through exhibitionism. It seems like she wanted to get caught, and when she did get caught she didn't shoo the indian scout away, she instead got turned on to the point that she accidently molested the guy to death when she tried to express herself sexually through direct contact. She was turned on by being caught, but she was also traumatized that the first time she tried to intiate physical erotic contact was also the first time that she ended up killing someone. Could she be beginning to express herself sexually through subtle, and now after killing the guy, non contact exhibitionism? Arranging to have herself get "caught" when she has to have her womanhood exposed like when she's peeing or bathing. She seems to have a thing for Roland too, interesting to see how that goes and if she can find a way to make him stay.

As for story ideas/requests a couple of scenarios would be:

1. Anna despite being a gentle giantess who doesn't consciously hurt people ends up accidently and unknowingly swallowing Roland. During her feeding time as a result of an accident, or a prank gone wrong, he ends up mixed in with her food and due to her size is swallowed whole along with her food without her noticing. Kind of like the giant in the classic disney cartoon "The brave little tailor" or in the Simpsons episode with the Paul Bunyan parody. He uses 17th century matches to start a fire to see in her stomach, or uses a small night lantern. It takes a while before they figure out what happened, digestion is slow, but when they do, she throws him up and is super apologetic and promises to make it up to him.

2. Roland and/or some other characters are trapped in a burning building in town, and with them being in immediate danger, and there being no time to make trips to scoop up handfuls of water like how she's described putting out smaller fires, Anna is forced to put out the fire by exposing her womanhood in front of the town and peeing to put out the fire and save lives, like a giantess version of a scene from "Gulliver's Travels." 

All in all I really do hope to see this story go on, it's detailed, and well written, and a site highlight when it's updated. It seems to be your most viewed, and commented on story so it's popular with good reason. Thank you, and please keep on writing.

I'm kind of hoping Talitha gets a temporary victory and swallows Jack when he screws up somehow, and the rest of the hereos have to deal with the drama of the hero in the villianess' stomach along with William, Peter, Gregory, Joseph, and Francis as she makes a get away with them in her stomach. A "in the belly of the beast" cliffhanger. Talitha's anus seems to come under attack a lot for comic effect. It's funny to the characters until you realise that that's where the partly digested bodies of her victims come out of her from.

Interesting scenario. A "civilized" giantess selling "protection" from wild giantess attacks while abusing her employees. What I can't help but wonder about is the social contract in the world of the story. It's implied that giantesses are very rare but those that live among regular sized humans get a lot of accomadations, special walking lanes, giant sized furniture and devices etc.

I can't help but think of how this world works so, my theory is that giantesses have been a social ruling class for as long as they've been around, like a nobility. The regular sized people have always premptively been prevented from forming much of a military or weaponry by their giantess overlords, and any "peasant revolts" have been dealt with extremely harshly. With rebels and their families being subjected to live swallowings, slow crushings, and other cruel and humilating executions, with the crushed, mutilated, and even excreted remains being put up as public warnings against rebellion.  With a exploding regular sized population and new technology, no weaponry or military though, the social contract changes a little. Giantesses are given huge monetary allowances by cities big enough to accomadate them, which they can use to pay for the massive construction costs of furniture big enough for them, buildings big enough for them, and food big enough for them, Naomi's sandwhich must have involved the sacrifice of a lot of wheat and turkeys. A lot of money must also go into her clothes. Some things might be too logistically difficult like enough water and a plumbing system large enough to accomdate giantesses so they probably bathe in the sea and relieve themselves in designated areas. Cars and planes are probably logistically unavailable too, but at their size and speed they don't really need them. To discourage killings and destruction, any deaths and damages costs come out of the giantesses allowance, while some rich neighbourhoods and towns pay off giantesses to avoid them altogether. To make even more money some giantesses have high paying extra jobs for extra income probably using their huge size as an advantage. Giantess firewomen, construction workers, carpenters, and tailors for other giantesses would probably be in demand. Likewise, there might be some wild giantesses who reject the allowance system and live off the land as naked, but not unintelligent savages, occasionally rampaging and eating humans. The kind that Naomi sells insurance against, and is considering bribing. Insurance also probably covers "accidents" with "civilized" giantesses too.

Naomi kills those who annoy her but it's stated that she seldom does this since she doesn't like to pay for damages and funeral expenses. Since giantesses effectively run the show she can pass off blatant murders as "accidents" but she seems to still have to give the courtesy of pretending her murders are "accidents." In hindsight it's a bit strange that Mr. Stevens' family didn't have giantess insurance, since Naomi would probably demand that all her employees have it, and considering how dangerous she can be, it would be pragmatic for them to have it. Considering that funeral costs are automatically included in death fines this means that someone has the unenviable task of retrieving the bodies of those killed in giantess "accidents." Soon Naomi will be obligated to release the shriveled bodies of Sandra McLaughlin and the others she swallowed while coming up with laughable excuses for their "accidental ingestions" probably claiming that her lawyers somehow got mixed up in her sandwhich without her knowing. Naomi's letter to Sandra McLaughlin's family is going to be fun, with her coming up with a scenario where she "accidently" and "unknowingly" ingested her employee of 7 years and didn't realize it until it was too late. Expresses deepest "sympathies" "regrets" and "sadness" and how her longtime employee will be missed blah blah, and how a closed casket funeral is recommended for the retrieved body, and how "generous" their giantess insurance is and how wise they are to have it.

In addition to selling insurance Naomi should also consider selling safety products. For example, a life support suit similar to a deep sea diving suit, with enough air and protection to pass through a giantess' digestive tract, and strong enough to survive light crushing. Wild giantesses could be instructed to play dumb, and give enough time for those who have survival suits to put them on before swallowing them, or pretending to try to crush them, thus having the survival suits credited with people's survival. Naomi could test the suit design herself before putting them for sale, seeing how much crushing pressure they can take, and making sure that an employee wearing one can make it through her alive after being swallowed by her. Another idea is she could sell "giantess proof reinforcing" of homes. So her company could sell expensive structural reinforcement for homes, however not strong enough to prevent the destruction of the place if a giantess is really serious. The homes could carry home security badges and logos from her company, and Naomi could simply instruct the rampaging wild giantesses to avoid crushing the homes that carry her companies "crushing proof reinforcement" logo. Her company could also have a body retrieval service. A team sent in to recover strewn about bodies, crushed bodies, and even the excreted bodies of the swallowed, or those who were wearing survival suits and need to be picked up alive. Since she's briding the wild giantesses they could agree beforehand on a spots for them to excrete those they swallowed for pickup. Her teams sent in to effected areas can document the destruction caused by wild giantesses, with gruesome footage, and interview survivors who no doubt will credit their survivals, and/or their homes survivals, to Naomi's company safety products. All of this "documentary footage" by retrieval and damage assesment teams could be used as a scare campaign to drum up sales for giantess insurance and safety products.

As for William's reward. Maybe she could present herself naked, and accomadate any request of his for a night. Regular sized human and giantess interactions like that might be fantasized about but rarely realized so this would be a rare treat.

Author's Response:

I've always loved this comment. I can't beleive I've never responded to it. You lay out an interesting take on things. Some of them are right on with what I'm thinking and will manifest as the story progresses. Some other things I hadn't thought of, but I am definitely going to look for ways to incorporate them into the story. Thanks for reading and thank you for your input! I especially like the house reinforcement and the body retreival ideas.

When Becca accused Anna of being a "pervert" and a "lesbian" and that she was going to punish her with her body for trying to get off on her body, and then her stomach started rumbling I thought she was going to swallow her. It seemed like a setup for some vore content. Kind of funny how Becca seems to think Anna is a lesbian who enjoys getting stuck to her pussy and getting peed on by her, and punishing her "is what she wants."

Sorry to hear that you have been having a hard time. I did like the last 2 chapters. Just some things that I noticed.

In chapter 4 it's mentioned that he hears the thunder of 6 gigantic sized kids rushing towards their mothers, but Celia only has 3 daughters by herself. Is there another gigantic mother with daughters in the area? Celia has a dildo sub that he can climb in, with a replica of her pussy that he can copulate with. But considering that she has advanced suits to protect him, even one that the beginning of chapter 5 hints is strong enough to pass through her digestive tract, him copulating with a replica of her genitals seems a little underwhelming considering she surely has protection suits that could allow him to explore the real thing without being crushed or smothered. He's the size of an ant to her so there's no hole or orifice in her midsection that's off limits to him should he go "cave exploring" and like an ant she can still feel him. He could explore her vagina and end up in her womb, explore her urethra and end up in her bladder, make love to her clit, and even explore her anus, without being crushed or suffocated.  

The openings of the chapters foreshadowing him being swallowed alive by his 1700 foot plus girlfriend are really good. I really like the intro to the fourth chapter where he contemplates the primal fear of being eaten alive, how since the rise of the gigantics mankind is forced to confront the fear of no longer being at the top of the food chain, and his pondering of whether it is worse to be eaten by something with a mind that's aware of you. I really love the introspection here, good writing. And to be fair that's what Celia is doing, she is eating him, but without the expectation of digesting him as he travels through her digestive tract.  

In the beginning of chapter 5, it mentions protective armor and Celia speaking to him as he prepares to fall into her stomach. I guess this means he does need a suit to travel through her digestive tract, and that she is aware and can communicate with him. He will also need a means to have her insides illuminated so he can see. I really hope that his trip through her digestive tract is full tour, that he passes in and out through the entire lenght of her digestive tract. Considering how little is known about the eating and internal digesting of gigantics he could even turn his trip through her as a documentary if Celia is okay with it. It would sure get a lot of views. Since she's apparently in contact with him she and presumably her daughters will be very interested and curious in checking in on him as he travels through her digestive system. It's been established that she drinks polluted water and can process plastics and heavy metals contaminating water, but does she eat solid organic garbage as well as metals and plastics? If so it would explain the armor he's wearing, and it must be quite scary and intimidating to see things like whole cars and buses being digested right in front of him in a stomach the size of a small arena. It will be interesting to see how her intestines convert it into waste from the inside.  Celia can make some interesting suits for people the size of ants to her. Since their too small to make by hand, I can assume she has a machine like a 3D printer that makes them for her.

The name of the A.I. Shannon, that's a reference to your MAJOR/Minor New Lives story isn't it. I do like Celia's playful exhibitionism streak, with her admiting that as a Gigantic she has little use for clothes and playfully flashing Erwan her butt in chapter 4. Celia isn't shy and has no problem being intimate with Erwan. One thing I would like Erwan to witness and describe is Celia peeing in front of him due to the sheer scale and spectacle of all that liquid coming out of her huge pussy. In chapter 2 she did afterall drink enough to cause the water level of a lake to drop and the lake to very visibly retract so the spectacle of her passing all that water and then some out of her pussy would be quite something for Erwan to witness and describe. If it replenishes the ground as she says, it's no wonder her territory is so green.

I do like the time and attention to detail put in the story and like how the chapters are long and richly detailed. Seeing this story being updated is one of the highlights of this site.

I love this idea of an extreme size disparity in a relationship with a gentle giantess. It allows for nearly unlimited body exploration, and it's original to see a gentle giantess that's the size of the tallest buildings from our perspective not on a rampage, and instead trying to form a caring relationship with someone the size of an ant from her perspective even when it's not very practical. It goes to show how committed she is to acknowledging regular sized people as individuals. Or maybe she has a fetish for them or both. The future setting and very advanced technology and engineering allows more storyline scenarios, and it helps to explain how the very large have managed to have their basic needs met and maintain comforts too.

Just to nitpick a few things. The main character mentions that the largest gigantics are 10000 times smarter than a normal high genius. This doesn't seem plausible since they would be in an entirely different state of consciousness altogether. Although the character admits that this is a saying and that he's not a science guy.

The restaurant has a terrace at 300m 1000 feet, yet he mentions that gigantics, which is what Celia turns out to be, are about 282.5 times his normal height of about 6 feet, so about 1700 feet. About the height of New York's tallest building. Meaning that Celia is far taller than the restaurant building. Unless she's sitting outside the building, sorry I just had to reread that and it seems to be the case, it just wasn't very clear in the description. The sense of scale of gigantics architecture and facilities must be mind boggling from a normals point of view.

Considering the extreme size difference, Celia and the main character will probably need to communicate with some sort of device. Like a very advanced smartphone that almost never runs out of energy.

And lastly, technically speaking the main character is wrong. None of the scientists in the Jurassic Park movie who created the dinosaurs are killed by dinosaurs. They all leave the island before the tropical storm hits, leaving only a skeleton crew of engineers and the game warden to oversee things. Sorry, but I just can't help but correct the main character there as I've literally seen the movie over a 100 times. Although, in the book, the lead geneticist is killed by a raptor.

I love the premise, and look forward to more. One scenario suggestion that I would love to see is Celia swallowing the main character either unintenionally or intentionally and the advanced technology keeps him from coming to harm while inside her. Heck, deep inside her guts might be the safest possible place for him to be, since at the size of an ant to her, he has a very good chance of falling to his death,getting squished, or getting lost if she tries to move him otherwise. And since it's mentioned that gigantics consume relatively little her insides would be mostly clean but still have more than enough food and water to sustain him. He would still be able to communicate with her, and it would be like being in a very large warm skyscraper if the skyscraper was a beautiful woman who cared about her guest. Maybe, that's why she invited him to a restaurant with a terrace at face level when she's sitting. A gentle giantess saying "Do you trust me?" "Please get in my mouth." There really isn't much endo content in this site, so I'm really hoping for some in this story since it's got a very good setup for it.

Author's Response:

Well, I wanted to get out of my comfort zone, which is basically mini-gts, just to see how I could make a gentle story with a giga-giantess working. Without spoiling, I can actually tell you that the doesn't have a fetish when it comes to Normals.

Matthew's self pity at the end was a nice touch. He's 18, lost in a foreign country, and in the hot and cramped intestines of a sexy slightly older young woman who unkowningly ate him with food. To make things worse nobody knows where he is, not even the female stranger who "abducted" him by swallowing him.

Blast From The Past had the scenario where the main character was swallowed by an unaware girl who got indigestion and defecated him out outdoors in the town park where he was able to get the attention of a friend. But he's so far away from anyone he knows, in a foreign country, and inside an unaware female stranger that he's going to have to get her attention when she poops him out, without getting flushed away. His journey's through Emily and Sarah were relatively clean, but with the huge amount of food and drink that Jessica ate and drank he's for sure going to come into contact with a lot of girl poop and pee when she lets him out by relieving herself. He'll probably be encased into a log. If he's lucky she'll clog the weak european toilet, forcing her to look down and notice him. Or maybe she's the tomboyish type of girl who looks down to admire her work and notices him that way. Since she's unaware she swallowed a minature man, her reaction to finding a minature toy in her poop, then seeing it moving and alive is going to be such a shock to her. I look forward to her suprise and interactions between him and Jessica. After she gets over the shock of finding a tiny young American, in her poop of all places, his invulnerability to suffocation and digestion, and the improbability of it all her interactions with him are going to be interesting. She seems to be a bit of a tomboy, unladylike eating, drinking, and burping and after such an intimiate view of her own body feel she has nothing left to hide from him. I can see her playing the role of the slightly older more experienced and assertive big sister type to the naive young American and guiding him on the female body.

This story does not suck, and honestly you are one of the better writers on this site. You are brave enough to set your stories in a elaborate settings in the past and load them with rich detail and research, then you write a long and detailed narrative giving perspective and personality to your characters. You flesh out your male protagonists and avoid making your female characters into one dimensional horny sadists and make them mostly compassionate to the tiny male and make them more realistic and believable as characters.

Your updates are a highlight and your series of tales of shrunken men from the early 1990's to the present is one of the best on this site. Which is why I find the abrupt ending and announcement that this is your second last story so disheartening. There are so many possibilities in this universe of shrunken indestructible men, and with your talent and attention to detail you can make pretty much any scenario come to life and get a good story out of it. This universe where nearly indestructible shrunken men happen every now and then, and their stories has so much possibility. Heck, in addition to contemporary and near past settings, you could even do stories in the distant past and show a sort of history of men shrinking around women through the ages. Like a medieval or musket age scenario about a young noble man swallowed and passed through the servant girl who has a crush on him, and who he has to rely on more despite the size difference bringing a new power dynamic, or an old west setting, a man shrunken in an old west brothel, or being swallowed and passing through a  tough cowgirl or frontierswoman he has to rely on, or any other setting and scenarioes with this concept.

Would it still be possible to salvage this story? It's not a bad story, and it doesn't suck. The idea of having an older protagonist having to navigate a world of younger women and women closer to his age, juxtaposing his shrinking and helplessness around women with his fears and insecurities about aging around women is an interesting concept.

I was really hoping for more interaction between him and Kim, I was really thinking there was going to be something going on there. The story does start in 1979 when he thinks he's in his "glory days" and later he gets literally swallowed whole by a girl born in 1979, the year he's living in the past in. There's a powerful metaphor there, which I didn't think was just a coincidence. Once again you're a cut above most writers. With all the time in Kim's belly and food raining down on him I was expecting it to end in full tour with him having to spend more time literally in the bowels of "little miss 1979" reflecting on his past, relationships with women, his insecurities about aging and younger women before being shat out of her either as a humilation or rebirth, and being forced to get her attention and confront her face to face. There was a chance for some "Jonah in the belly of the whale" like introspection and character building there, more than you'd usually get in a giantess vore story. The scene in your "Shrunken Abroad" story where the main character cries and confronts his fears and insecurities, realizing he's unready to enter adulthood, and that he's utterly lost in a strange land far from home, and in the intestines of a female stranger, is one of the better scenes in a story on this site. I was expecting a similar scenario here.

Then he gets abruptly thrown up, and Kimberly is abruptly out of the story. Then Francine re-enters and then suddenly she's out of the story too. Then the Southern accent girl enters and abruptly she's out of the story too,  Ben washes down and there's no mention what happens to him and the story suddenly ends. Don't sell yourself short, the story didn't suck, and even if you have doubts about it, it still deserves a better ending than the abrupt and inconclusive one it got. The character is practically indestructible when shrunk, what happened to him?

Would it be possible to continue the story? Have the story continue with him still inside Kimberly and the events of him being thrown up, thrown away with disgust by Francine, washed away like debris, and reports of him missing being just a nightmare dream caused by his insecurities when he passes out from the heat and fullness of Kim's stomach, and just go from there. Or if it wasn't a bad dream could we see what happened to him, like did another woman discover him while swimming in the lake, peeing on the lakeshore, something like that, and decide to keep him for herself.

10,000 views for a story that's less than a month old is not at all bad. And I didn't write a review because I was trusting the story to see how it would go, with updates coming in fast. I'm sure others are the same way, not saying much because they like how it's all going. When I do leave reviews I tend to really go all out in texting it out so I don't leave many. Please keep writing, you have your big story coming up but don't let it be the last one, at least keep the window open for more stories in this style in this universe rather than declaring a definite end. It's an interesting universe with many stories and possiblities.

Author's Response: First thing first, thank you for your kind words. It really can get discouraging when you look around on the site and you'll see a story above you with three reviews already with stars and everything but yet you're still stuck with just one, even though this entire story above you just came out the same day and not oven a single star you have yet. I probably won't salvage it(I actually wasn't planning to write this story that long as compared to "Shrunk Abroad" hence why the chapters are a little bit on the shorter side, ten chapters is actually what I had originally planned), but I'm going to write a prologue tomorrow involving Ben's son, Brandon being set ten years later which will leave a opening for another possible story. The Ben and Kim interaction wasn't really planning on being around that long in the first place, since I really just wanted to use a younger character again, since it's somewhat easier to write for. And yeah, you're right about the symbolism her being born in the same year as the beginning of the story started off in. I actually didn't plan for Francine to be in the story that long, but I did have a idea of her going back to work to pick up something she realized she left and Ben seeing Tiffany and crawling back to her. The original ending I had was Tiffany finding Ben again after what I mentioned in the last sentence and playing nice with him while driving home, and then in the next chapter she wakes up all pissed and worried in the morning, grabbing him and slamming him against the wall, leading to his demise, which is also what I kinda implied happened to her former boyfriend and hence why she moved cities. Honestly after this one I'm probably done doing full stories set in the past, I really only did stuff like the 80s through early 2010s (If you checked my first story, it's a bit rough in my honest opinion but I still read it again from time to time to show how much I've improved) due to the fact I had a good amount of knowledge on what was going on. I might do a one off story set in the 60s and past that, depending on how much material I could get out if it. After the grand finale (Which will be set modern day, hence why I'm waiting for this whole virus stuff to die out for the story could happen) I'll probably do a story involving Jack Cooper getting recruited into the U.S military and doing James Bond type stuff for them, it'll be more of a action thriller mixed with giantess elements, and of course vore. It'll be my ongoing story, ending most likely at 50 or even almost 100 chapters. My last thing to say is this, there's going to be alot of lore on shrinking in this universe when it comes down to the grand finale, and I really don't wanna spoil anything else. Thank you for reviewing, I honestly was wondering if you were reading this earlier in the story, so this definitely is a pleasant surprise. I wish I could actually space out the wording in this paragraph I'm writing, for it doesn't seem like a huge jumble of words, but anyways, thank you for reviewing.