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Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 634055
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: September 19 2022 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53

Wait, is Furio dead!? Please don't let it be so. Please let it be part of some ruse, and not have him get killed offscreen like this. It's a testament to how long this story has been going on (for years) that you get attached to some of the characters that have been there for years, and while it becomes a little hard to keep track of some of the newer characters, and the characters that come and go, Furio has been there since nearly the beginning. The weird dynamic between the free spirited giant girls and the serious and resourceful old wizard is a recurring highlight of the story. He's the closest thing the girls (or at least Janna) have to a friend, to the point that others amusingly assume that he controls them, and he's the only "tiny" that they respected enough to confide their true origins to. His point of view confusion about earth technology was an amusing highlight. His straight man role and interesting point of view perspective to Janna and Laura's immaturity is a lot of fun, and his knowledge and intelligence make the character a good conduit through which to impart information to the reader to. He's got the interesting position of being the one "tiny" that the girls (or at least Janna) respect enough to really care about.

That's not to say that he's a helpless pet. He seems to be the kind of guy whose knowledge, abilities, and potential, the empire overlooked, until he used his resourcefulness to hand one of the girls their first defeat. And to make it more impressive, once the spell wore off, and Janna realised what happened, she didn't seek revenge, but instead came to respect him. And in Chapter 26 when the girls were rendered helpless by the demon worshipper it was "little" Furio who had to rescue them, and defeat the guy who even they couldn't handle, with a technique that frightened even them, in what had to be the most crowning moment of awesome for a character who isn't Janna or Laura in the story thus far.

A lot of characters have been killed off in this story. I just hope that this interesting, and longtime, stalwart character can get a reprieve and continue to defy the odds.



Author's Response:

This made me laugh so hard! Thanks!

Also, I never thought anybody would get emotionally invested in any of the characters. Unwise, if I may say so, whatever the circumstances.

Summary:

An anthology of stories about how the Rebalancing of Sexes made younger men desire mature women and vice versa. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Rebalancing the Sexes
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85426 Read Count: 397947
[Report This] Published: May 21 2015 Updated: July 04 2021
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: October 10 2018 Title: The Cougars Get Hotter as the Boys Get Smaller

Interesting and well written story, but I have a few questions on anatomy. I'm not trying to criticize the story, I'm genuinely wondering about how things work.

In chapter 27 you write that due to the back pussy taking over the anus women no longer have to poop, but instead pee a lot more to compensate. Does this mean that women no longer eat solid foods, but get all their nutrients in liquid form? Or if they still eat solid foods, than how do they get converted into pee? Like if say she had been eating corn, how would that get converted into pee?

If their urinary systems pull double duty for the conversion of waste if they still eat solids, wouldn't that make their pee almost like diarrhea. Yet when Heather pees on Anthony in chapter 30, it's clean and sterile, and has a healing effect on him. Does female pee really have a revitalizing effect on the men as implied? And if so shouldn't the men be getting peed on more often.

It's pointed out in chapter 27 that the anus and the end of the intestines are replaced with a back pussy and a miniture womb, but what happens to the rest of the intestines, which take up a large part of the internal space in anatomy, now that they seemingly have no where to go? How does the stomach work now? What would happen if a woman swallowed a tiny man? Would her stomach act as another warm holding pouch now that pooping is no longer necessary?

Actually this scenario of a woman swallowing a male character in the story, might be a good literary way of showing how female innards work now.

Author's Response:

Great question and well thought out! I have seen most of your reviews of other authors and they all seem to be quite thoughtful. I'll do my best. First, let's back out a bit and examine the Goddess of Love's motivations for all these anatomical changes.
The GOL likes to answer each sex's problems with dating and relationship and sex roles by taking them away... and giving them the other sex's problems instead. (One exception is having babies, becuase the GOL thinks motherhood defines a woman.) One problem: anal sex. Men often want, ask, beg for it. Presumably because they like the tightness. Women are less likely to give it to them, because it gives them little pleasure (few nerve endings, no lubrication) and can actually cause injury if their partner is not careful. Men get frustrated. The Goddess' solution: change the world so men can have all the anal sex they could possibly want. But she gives them that wish by shrinking them down to a size at which their reduced penises will fit the backdoor more precisely, and by changing the backdoor so that women desire backdoor sex as much as... MORE THAN... men do.
Another example of the GOL's thinking overlaps with this. Men reach their sexual peak at 18... women, in their thirties. The mismatch causes problems for frustrated young men and frustrated MILFs. Some younger men find sex and relationships with older women appealing, but end up losing the reproduction game and don't have sons to pass on that preference. The GOL wants the sexes to match each others' peaks, not every time, but more often. So she creates a reproductive reason... by splitting male and female fertility periods. Men can only father sons when they are younger, women can only give birth to sons when they are older. Thus there's a biological reason for them to get together. Men who manage to be reduced and become the consorts of mature women pass along that preference to their sons. But now men also have a biological clock!
By creating an evolutionary reason for older women - younger men relationships, the GOL makes it more likely that men will key on the physical and cultural signals given off by women of a certain age. Evolution will reward tiny (or shrunken) young men who key in on the physical attributes of older women... such as cellulite, stretch marks, and of course bigger, often squishier buttocks, which lead their drives to the back door and the second womb... about the size of an almond... which also has the side effect of making a way for men to be born tiny and spend all of their lives smaller than women.
Now to digestion... the GOL essentially comes up with an elaborate system to completely liquefy solid foods and nutrients. It allows women to pass waste entirely through urine. But that urine as as clean as sterile as is the case in the pre-ROS universe. In fact, it also has health giving and life enhancing qualities, as a result of the process. Not only can women heal men with their pee (as in this story and Chapter 18 of A World of Breasts and Buttocks) but in fertile women, pee will also cause fruit trees to spontaneously generate (AWBB Chapter 9) which helps compensate for the loss of male agricultural labor. So yes it does heal men. It also humbles them. Imagine being so lowly that you can't avoid being peed on by a woman... and it's good for you! Men probably get peed on a lot more in this universe than I reference in the ROS series.
Yes this liquefaction process takes the place of intestines... but in no way does it take away from women's enjoyment of food. They eat solids and find them satisfying. In fact, it increases their self-esteem. "I'm so special my poop doesn't stink... oh wait, I don't make poop at all!"
Because the female digestive system can now totally liquefy solid food and make it as clean and sterile as urine, a trip through it would probably destroy any male in the ROS universe. I don't think I've said so explicitly but swallowing a man would be prohibited by the GOL because it would be cruel. But the women would be so sorely tempted... because men's sweat, cum and other bodily fluids taste like chocolate and have similar effects on women's bodies. So they can lick and suck him like a lollipop or popsicle but that's it. Knowing that they taste like chocolate, you can imagine that women think often about swallowing them and find it incredibly, tantalizingly frustrating that they can't.

Thanks for your question, whackamole1... 

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: October 11 2018 Title: The Cougars Get Hotter as the Boys Get Smaller

Thanks for responding and clearing up some of the questions I had.

It seems that since the women in the new society don't poop, and as you pointed out, their fresh pee encourages plant growth, and revitalizes men. It seems there is no need for women's toilets in the new society. Women would probably just pee freely outdoors without shame, and be encouraged to do so. In the country it could be an essential part of farming and forest revitalization, and in the towns and cities it could be a way of keeping the parks and lawns fresh and green. Cities would look much more lush and green. Lower body fashion would probably be just skirts with no underwear to make casual public female urination easier. And due to the revitalizing effect of fresh female urine, men might get peed on daily, start the day off not with a shower from a shower head, but one from a spread overhead vulva to get over the morning soreness and grogginess. Some buildings might even have dedicated peeing ladies in what's left of the bathroom to provide revitalization just in case, and they have to go anyway. This would really elevate the profile of the vulva in society. From being taboo, it's the one thing you can never show in most media, to being unavoidable. After all, it's now responsible for the greenness of the land, therapeutic effects on men, and pussies constantly peeing casually and openly outside.

If women now have digestive systems so powerful they can process most solids into liquids, this could still have some dark implications. You said it's illegal for women to swallow men but I'm sure some have still done it anyway for various reasons. It would be an almost perfect crime. The victim is presumably so thoroughly digested, that their liquid essence is peed onto the vegetation which rapidly absorbs it, leaving behind no body or trace. One other drawback to the lack of an anus, is that the only way for gases from the digestive process to escape would be through the mouth, meaning that the women would presumably be belching rather frequently to make up for the lack of ability to fart.

While you answered most of my questions, the one still left unanswered is how exactly does the new female digestive system work? My guess would be a larger stomach, with stronger acids, and stronger lining, which leads to intestines which act like a closed racetrack, passing food around until it's liquefied enough to pass through the kidneys, bladder, then urethra. I would still like to hear your explanation though.

Maybe include through the story an explanation of how everything works in the new digestive tract, through a medical scenario. Say a chapter where a medical student has his professor show him, and by extension the reader, how the new female digestive tract works by having the 2 men put on protective medical diving suits, and get swallowed along with food by a lovely lady. Maybe, Heather volunteering for the hospital for a little side pay. Since men are so small, surgeons would probably carry out some surgeries manually from within, digestive, gynecological, without needing a scalpel, so a visual field trip into the digestive tract would probably be necessary for med students, and could clear up some anatomical mysteries in the story through a plot scenario. Sorry, but now I got a "magic school bus" style scenario stuck in my head, showing the reader about how anatomy works in this world.

Author's Response:

Such a great response! Thank you for your interest!

There are a couple of reasons for maintaining women's bathrooms. One is that with so many women peeing outdoors, the world could become a forest or jungle, with growth choking off everything. This, from Chapter 18 of AWBB:

"Amber strolled toward the restrooms. On her way she passed a sign, "WIPE SHOES BEFORE ENTERING." This was out of more than neatness. A piece of soil trotted into the restroom might contain a seed, which could be turned into a tree should it fall into a bowl and encounter a stream of urine from a woman of childbearing age."

Another reason, also outlined in Chapter 18 AWBB, is to give traveling women a private place to get satisfied by their money... something they might need five or six times a day. 

I haven't thought much about it, but yes the vulva would be everywhere, as the center of culture. Its shape would appear in art and architecture, much like the phallus in our universe. The shape of multiple parentheses, one inside the other, would likely be a common meme. Tunnels would be seen all over the place, not just where needed under mountains or rivers. Needless to say, men would be much more knowledgeable of how to engage with and make love to the vulva, often standing smaller than it is tall. 

Yes, women would go bottomless a lot. I tend to think female business outfits (the only kind) would be much like 1980's mullet haircuts... business on top, pleasure below. They might wear a professional blouse but bare their bottoms and wear just garters or stockings on legs. The only reason to wear panties would be because their men would like a place to rest between pussy-attention sessions. For that application granny panties might work better than thongs. 

The Goddess of Love is very interventionist, and would likely throw a lightning bolt at a woman who swallowed a man. Not to say there might be one willing to take the risk...

It might prove to be an interesting scenario... tiny men used as gastroenterologists and gynecologists... wearing suits to protect themselves from digestion. But perhaps the suits wouldn't protect the tiny man from an attack by the woman's oxytocin... causing him to produce his own oxytocin and bond, at least for a time, to the woman he is treating, requiring her to accommodate him as a lover for a time. 

Thanks again for some stimulating ideas!

Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2541643
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: July 22 2017 Title: Chapter 175: Snatched

Very good long running story. Long time reader and this is my first post. I have a plot suggestion for the story. When Mrs. Green and Tom land at the airport they are intercepted by crooked airport security and customs agents who have been tipped off, and paid off by the Russians. Knowing that she is going to be detained for several hours, have her belongings confiscated and searched, stripped nude, and even cavity searched, Mrs. Green takes a drastic measure to smuggle Tom into the country. She takes out a minitature atmospheric diving suit puts Tom into it it and swallows him. Those diving suits can withstand extreme pressure and have enough air to last almost 2 days. She smuggles him back almost like a drug mule, by swallowing him and having him pass through her body. Meanwhile we get things from Tom's perspective as he goes on his "fantastic voyage" through her digestive system unharmed. He's been on, and inserted in, women's bodies, now he gets to go through one.

It's an interesting concept, Tom has been swallowed by women twice so far in the story, not staying in the stomach for long, and even anally inserted several times. With a scenario like this he can get swallowed, spent a long inside her, go through her, and not die, while being smuggled in on his way to freedom in the one place the bad guys can't check. The suit could also be used in later chapters for protection for kinky play since he would probably be allowed to keep it since it factor into the paid for expenses of retrieving him. 



Author's Response:

A very very interesting concept...

Summary:

A story about a larger-than-life girl growing up in colonial New England.


Categories: Gentle, Breasts, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32768 Read Count: 95867
[Report This] Published: September 21 2018 Updated: October 05 2023
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, I do like these stories set in the past. Nowadays a giantess would simply be isolated in quarantine in a secret location and that would be that, but in low tech and low infrastructure settings the people just have to put up with them and vice versa, with interesting interactions. Very well written and descriptive story.

In the previous chapter you asked for comments, critiques, ideas, and requests, and seeing that this story is being updated again, I figure I might as well leave some.

Anna seems to be a nice girl, evidenced by her never killing anyone before she accidently killed the indian scout, and she does do a lot of work to benefit the town and other towns, but how do they sustain her?  At over 200 feet tall, she is going to need to have tremendous needs placed on the small towns around her.

The one thing the story hasn't yet addressed is the logistics of her everyday needs and functions. Drinkable freshwater could be a concern, since she needs to drink about the equivalent of a large pond of freshwater water everyday, and since she would have to pee several times a day she would be peeing out the equivalent of a small pond everytime she pees. Due to her size, she would be snapping trees everytime she walks through a new area in a very forested setting. For these reasons any area she spends time in, would become deforested, with cracked trees everywhere, and swampy very quickly. Maybe this is why there is tension with the indians. She's drinking their drinkable fresh water, knocking down their forests, and pissing on them. Her bathing in the lake seems a little wasteful of a drinkable freshwater source, it would probably be more wise and frugal for her to bath in the sea instead, in the long run. And of course there is the question of feeding her. What does she eat? The townspeople are going to have a very difficult time keeping up with her food needs to fuel her huge body. The only one thing that can satisfy her for a day would be a whale, and if there is a whaling port that might help, but she would need to eat a whale a day, which might be impractical. Maybe she is loaned out to other towns on a "will work for food" basis, doing work in exchange for food on a rotating town to town schedule. And the people whose jobs she's doing for them, possibly working on procuring food for her instead. And if she needs to eat she also needs to poop, which might be a problem if she needs to poop out a log the size of a house about everyday. Although if the locals use this, they never have to worry about running out of useable fertilizer. There are a couple of very good stories on this site, "Fracture Factor X" and "Saturn Seven" that involve giantesses in similar old time settings and addressing the logistical needs that their bodies impose on the locals. Although in those stories the giantesses are a bit more amoral, but Anna is so far a gentle giantess due to her upbringing, even if her huge size can cause problems.

How famous is she among the British Empire? Could the ships coming in be bringing relief food as well, for her and the townsfolk, or has she not yet gained the Empires attention quite yet? If she has, there would probably be curious nobles, scholars, and scientists coming in to examine her.

There seems to be some sexual frustration on Anna's part. She's 19 with hormones, a bit of a late bloomer in terms of just beginning to show herself off, beginning to notice and lust for men, and yet the chapter about her bathing mentions that "no man in the world could hope to fill her womanhood" as if it's a lament from her perspective. Also due to the standards of her time she has to wear clothes even if it's wildly impractical for both her and the townspeople. For them to make, and for her to wear, since her one set of clothes (no underwear) would become very filthy very quickly. Could her being caught bathing in the lake be a subtle way of rebeling and expressing herself sexually through exhibitionism. It seems like she wanted to get caught, and when she did get caught she didn't shoo the indian scout away, she instead got turned on to the point that she accidently molested the guy to death when she tried to express herself sexually through direct contact. She was turned on by being caught, but she was also traumatized that the first time she tried to intiate physical erotic contact was also the first time that she ended up killing someone. Could she be beginning to express herself sexually through subtle, and now after killing the guy, non contact exhibitionism? Arranging to have herself get "caught" when she has to have her womanhood exposed like when she's peeing or bathing. She seems to have a thing for Roland too, interesting to see how that goes and if she can find a way to make him stay.

As for story ideas/requests a couple of scenarios would be:

1. Anna despite being a gentle giantess who doesn't consciously hurt people ends up accidently and unknowingly swallowing Roland. During her feeding time as a result of an accident, or a prank gone wrong, he ends up mixed in with her food and due to her size is swallowed whole along with her food without her noticing. Kind of like the giant in the classic disney cartoon "The brave little tailor" or in the Simpsons episode with the Paul Bunyan parody. He uses 17th century matches to start a fire to see in her stomach, or uses a small night lantern. It takes a while before they figure out what happened, digestion is slow, but when they do, she throws him up and is super apologetic and promises to make it up to him.

2. Roland and/or some other characters are trapped in a burning building in town, and with them being in immediate danger, and there being no time to make trips to scoop up handfuls of water like how she's described putting out smaller fires, Anna is forced to put out the fire by exposing her womanhood in front of the town and peeing to put out the fire and save lives, like a giantess version of a scene from "Gulliver's Travels." 

All in all I really do hope to see this story go on, it's detailed, and well written, and a site highlight when it's updated. It seems to be your most viewed, and commented on story so it's popular with good reason. Thank you, and please keep on writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the excellent and well thought out response! You made some great points, I'll address them one by one:

Eating/Drinking: Plenty of water for her in nearby rivers and lakes. Food is definetly more challenging. I assume with her help the farmers are able to grow enough crops to keep her sustained. Perhaps there's a bit of supernatural handwaving where she doesn't need to eat very much to survive. It's not something I've given much thought to, I'm more interested in Anna's relationships, interactions, and erotic stuff.

Going to the Bathroom: I absoltely detest scat and piss erotica. I will never ever include poop or pee in my stories. To each their own, but I think it's fucking gross. Sorry lol.

Reputation: Anna isn't well known outside Little Standish and the nearby colonies. The story is set in a time period where news traveled slowly, with tall tales and myths being spread by word of mouth. Any stories about a giant woman in the New World would be dismissed as sailor's tales. Little Standish is quite remote from the outside world. 

Sexual Frustration: You hit the nail on the head. Anna is exploring her sexuality, but obviously normal relations for her are impossible. I like your exhibitionism idea.

As for your scenario requests: sorry, no poop, no pee, and definetly no digestion. I get sick just thinking about that sort of stuff lol.  

Thanks for the kind words. I encourage you to check out my other stories, especially "The Vivarium", I think there's stuff there you might like :)

Summary:

 

The story begins in a mediavel setting, where the peaceful kingdom of Siona is one day faced with the threat of being attacked by a 100 ft tall giantess that goes by the name:  Talitha the Terrible.

 
No one knows from where the giantess came from, but all are aware of her enormous size, her body able to rival the size of a mountain. During the first few days where Talitha the Terrible first appeared in the kingdom, the mountain of a woman would rampage in villages to eat the villagers along with their livestock, and would later destroy the buildings for fun.  


After a week of village attacks, the giantess decides to rampage in the town. The knights of the kingdom were all powerless in her presence and unable to defend their home. She continues to rampage towards the part of town where the royal palace resides and demolishes the palace down. Talitha then kidnaps and walks away with the princess. Leaving the palace in ruin, and many of the houses destroyed. The king, angry and humiliated, orders scouts to track the giantess and puts up a quest with a great reward to anyone able to slay the Terrible Talitha and rescue his beloved daughter.


A brave young man that just got his house destroyed on the very day, decides to do something about the 100ft terror and takes on the quest to defeat and slay the evil giantess.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18227 Read Count: 51894
[Report This] Published: November 04 2018 Updated: December 07 2018
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: November 06 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Talitha the Terrible attacks the royal palace

Interesting scenario, a feral, uncivilized wild woman giantess causing trouble for a small kingdom.

Just a bit of a inconsistency about Talitha's size. It's said she's 100 feet but in the first chapter she swallows 30 people whole, to do this she would have to be a lot bigger, at about 100 feet a giantess would only be able to swallow one person at a time, it would be like swallowing a skinny pickle. Maybe Talitha is bigger?

Jack causing Talitha to panic when he goes into her anus is funny, but I don't know why Talitha didn't just use her anal muscles to fart him out or squeeze him out like a turd instead of panicking.

I can pretty much guess that the poison isn't going to kill her just badly irritate her digestive system, adding to Talitha's misery.

It seems that her skin is too thick for sword or arrows to have much effect, so that leaves her insides as her vulnerability. Maybe Charon can cast an invulnerability spell on Jack, and trick Talitha into swallowing him. With her soft insides under the threat of Jack and his dagger as he stays and passes through her digestive tract, Talitha can be forced to submit under the pain and threat of having her insides cut as long as Jack stays inside her going through her.

Author's Response:

Ah, yes. Now that you mentioned it, 30people in her mouth didn't make sense... I will edit and change that part of the story. ( Do excuse my inexperience as this is my first time writing a giantess story )... but thank you for putting this to my attention kind sir :)

Also it wasn't Jack that entered her anus but in fact an actual rat that got caught up in the debris of the crushed house. Which is why she shrieked at the sight of it and panicked to get it off her body.

And let's not forget about the other magical weapons Smith is currently crafting, perphaps something more powerful than the glowing dagger?

And as for the poison... a very good guess sir :)

 

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: November 13 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Jack fights the Titaness alone

I'm kind of hoping Talitha gets a temporary victory and swallows Jack when he screws up somehow, and the rest of the hereos have to deal with the drama of the hero in the villianess' stomach along with William, Peter, Gregory, Joseph, and Francis as she makes a get away with them in her stomach. A "in the belly of the beast" cliffhanger. Talitha's anus seems to come under attack a lot for comic effect. It's funny to the characters until you realise that that's where the partly digested bodies of her victims come out of her from.



Author's Response:

I don't know how but what you are hoping for is indeed what i have in mind for the next two or three chapters.

Yes, as you hoped, Talitha will get a temporary victory because Jack got too confident and screwed up while fighting the titaness. As a consequence of his mistake, he will end up in her belly and will need to figure out a way for him and the little boys inside to escape.

 

NOTE: However i wont be able to publish the new chapters this week as i am currently facing the final exams of my final semester so i wont have time to write.

I ask that you wait patiently till my exams finish and i promise to finish the story by at least next week.

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: November 17 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Man vs Giantess

Good cliffhanger as things start to fall apart for the heroes. Talitha's giantess flatulence acts as a reminder to Jack of the boys still in her digestive tract, and the fact that he will likely soon to joining them. At her size there's no no way he can outrun Talitha, hopefully Charon can pass him some sort of protective amulet or something before he's swallowed, to protect him and the others from the heat, pressure, gases, and acids as they travel through Talitha's innards. Jack seems to be going from hero to Jonah, traveling through the giantess' innards as punishment for his overconfidence, a trip into Talitha's digestive tract could humble the hero. Talitha could maybe make a getaway with the with Jack and the others in her digestive tract, and maybe Mason or the princess in a "king Kong" like scenario with the good guys thinking she's won.



Author's Response:

To be honest, i have no idea how i should finish this story in a proper way. You have given some good suggestions however and have sparked some ideas in my head. I hope that i can write out a finale to this story which you will find enjoyable :)

Summary:

William is the new chief assistant to Naomi, a giantess that owns a company selling giantess protection to the little people of the world. Things quickly go wrong when William gets his family inadvertently involved in this giant woman’s life. They must learn how to deal with Naomi if they want to survive.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68701 Read Count: 203590
[Report This] Published: July 05 2019 Updated: August 16 2020
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: July 22 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Pressing Engagement

Interesting scenario. A "civilized" giantess selling "protection" from wild giantess attacks while abusing her employees. What I can't help but wonder about is the social contract in the world of the story. It's implied that giantesses are very rare but those that live among regular sized humans get a lot of accomadations, special walking lanes, giant sized furniture and devices etc.

I can't help but think of how this world works so, my theory is that giantesses have been a social ruling class for as long as they've been around, like a nobility. The regular sized people have always premptively been prevented from forming much of a military or weaponry by their giantess overlords, and any "peasant revolts" have been dealt with extremely harshly. With rebels and their families being subjected to live swallowings, slow crushings, and other cruel and humilating executions, with the crushed, mutilated, and even excreted remains being put up as public warnings against rebellion.  With a exploding regular sized population and new technology, no weaponry or military though, the social contract changes a little. Giantesses are given huge monetary allowances by cities big enough to accomadate them, which they can use to pay for the massive construction costs of furniture big enough for them, buildings big enough for them, and food big enough for them, Naomi's sandwhich must have involved the sacrifice of a lot of wheat and turkeys. A lot of money must also go into her clothes. Some things might be too logistically difficult like enough water and a plumbing system large enough to accomdate giantesses so they probably bathe in the sea and relieve themselves in designated areas. Cars and planes are probably logistically unavailable too, but at their size and speed they don't really need them. To discourage killings and destruction, any deaths and damages costs come out of the giantesses allowance, while some rich neighbourhoods and towns pay off giantesses to avoid them altogether. To make even more money some giantesses have high paying extra jobs for extra income probably using their huge size as an advantage. Giantess firewomen, construction workers, carpenters, and tailors for other giantesses would probably be in demand. Likewise, there might be some wild giantesses who reject the allowance system and live off the land as naked, but not unintelligent savages, occasionally rampaging and eating humans. The kind that Naomi sells insurance against, and is considering bribing. Insurance also probably covers "accidents" with "civilized" giantesses too.

Naomi kills those who annoy her but it's stated that she seldom does this since she doesn't like to pay for damages and funeral expenses. Since giantesses effectively run the show she can pass off blatant murders as "accidents" but she seems to still have to give the courtesy of pretending her murders are "accidents." In hindsight it's a bit strange that Mr. Stevens' family didn't have giantess insurance, since Naomi would probably demand that all her employees have it, and considering how dangerous she can be, it would be pragmatic for them to have it. Considering that funeral costs are automatically included in death fines this means that someone has the unenviable task of retrieving the bodies of those killed in giantess "accidents." Soon Naomi will be obligated to release the shriveled bodies of Sandra McLaughlin and the others she swallowed while coming up with laughable excuses for their "accidental ingestions" probably claiming that her lawyers somehow got mixed up in her sandwhich without her knowing. Naomi's letter to Sandra McLaughlin's family is going to be fun, with her coming up with a scenario where she "accidently" and "unknowingly" ingested her employee of 7 years and didn't realize it until it was too late. Expresses deepest "sympathies" "regrets" and "sadness" and how her longtime employee will be missed blah blah, and how a closed casket funeral is recommended for the retrieved body, and how "generous" their giantess insurance is and how wise they are to have it.

In addition to selling insurance Naomi should also consider selling safety products. For example, a life support suit similar to a deep sea diving suit, with enough air and protection to pass through a giantess' digestive tract, and strong enough to survive light crushing. Wild giantesses could be instructed to play dumb, and give enough time for those who have survival suits to put them on before swallowing them, or pretending to try to crush them, thus having the survival suits credited with people's survival. Naomi could test the suit design herself before putting them for sale, seeing how much crushing pressure they can take, and making sure that an employee wearing one can make it through her alive after being swallowed by her. Another idea is she could sell "giantess proof reinforcing" of homes. So her company could sell expensive structural reinforcement for homes, however not strong enough to prevent the destruction of the place if a giantess is really serious. The homes could carry home security badges and logos from her company, and Naomi could simply instruct the rampaging wild giantesses to avoid crushing the homes that carry her companies "crushing proof reinforcement" logo. Her company could also have a body retrieval service. A team sent in to recover strewn about bodies, crushed bodies, and even the excreted bodies of the swallowed, or those who were wearing survival suits and need to be picked up alive. Since she's briding the wild giantesses they could agree beforehand on a spots for them to excrete those they swallowed for pickup. Her teams sent in to effected areas can document the destruction caused by wild giantesses, with gruesome footage, and interview survivors who no doubt will credit their survivals, and/or their homes survivals, to Naomi's company safety products. All of this "documentary footage" by retrieval and damage assesment teams could be used as a scare campaign to drum up sales for giantess insurance and safety products.

As for William's reward. Maybe she could present herself naked, and accomadate any request of his for a night. Regular sized human and giantess interactions like that might be fantasized about but rarely realized so this would be a rare treat.

Author's Response:

I've always loved this comment. I can't beleive I've never responded to it. You lay out an interesting take on things. Some of them are right on with what I'm thinking and will manifest as the story progresses. Some other things I hadn't thought of, but I am definitely going to look for ways to incorporate them into the story. Thanks for reading and thank you for your input! I especially like the house reinforcement and the body retreival ideas.

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: April 09 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Apologies and Realizations

I don't believe Naomi really had any remorse for her massacre. If she did she would have vomited out Michael who no doubt would still be alive in her stomach. Human acids aren't that fast acting or strong, so assuming he doesn't drown or suffocate, he's probably still alive inside Naomi during her bath which is a pretty scary thought. William might be morbidly looking up Michael's vitals from the transponder to see how long he can last inside her. It would be interesting to get a POV narrative from a swallowed character. Poor Michael, he had the most passive role in the mutiny so he gets singled out for the most drawn out fate. The others were killed relatively quickly by crushing when Naomi was acting out of anger, but she singled Michael out for the most for the most drawn out ordeal. Granted, she gave him a chance, but his indecisiveness fed her need for power tripping and dominance, and what could be a bigger power trip than swallowing some "useless piece of shit" and shitting them out later. Naomi seems to really detest indecisiveness and an inability to stand up to her. It seems to bother her more than anything else. I wonder if that was the lesson she was trying to teach Max? When she wouldn't let the workers in the bathtub go unless he made up his mind and stood up to her.

Despite her killing so many mutinous employees by crushing, and swallowing she states "I don't want people to think that I mistreat my employees" in the last chapter, and in this chapter she talks about having to sign "accidental death forms both strongly implying that there are limits to her behaviour and some accountability required. It would fascinating to get the perspective of those who have to clean up after Naomi and manage the fallout. With so many crushed employees how do they put an acceptable spin onthat in the official report? How do they organize and seperate the bodies for the families? How do they minimize and sugarcoat Naomi swallowing Michael alive? And are they obligated to get Michael's body back to his family after it exits Naomi's digestive tract? Afterall, someone is going to have to provide an acceptable account of the events of the last chapter and a facade of accountability and cooperation. Getting the details and perspective of those who handle Naomi's worst moments and how they handle them and clean up for her when she does bad things would be fascinating.

Naomi has a regular but huge bathroom. There must be some limitations on water usage otherwise she could use up too much of the local water supply. Limits on how many bath's she can take, how many times she can flush the toilet, can't just keep the sink running etc.

Is maintenance's job maintaing Naomi's body? The maintenance team is located in her bathroom, every giant bathroom fixture has staircases for regular people, even the toilet, and instead of simply wiping off her own feet during her bath, she has 40 people clean her feet for her. It seems like the maintenance team is there for her power tripping. Why else would she have all that human effort go towards something she could easily do herself with just a few wipes. This and every fixture having staircases for a huge team of her employees is telling.  Although her bathroom maintenance team probably genuinely comes in handy in the very rare occasions when she needs a hard to reach, or gross spot cleaned.

In addition to her power tripping Naomi seems to show an exhibitionist streak. She has 40 people in her bathroom crew work on her feet while she bathes. They have surely seen and done more for her. Naomi doesn't need them around, but she keeps them around, and there's no way they and Max didn't see her naked. But her nudity doesn't fluster her or her regular maintenance crew. Max on the other hand. Naomi didn't plan on Max joining her bathroom maintenance crew but she for sure is going to capitaize on it big time. She won't kill him, but she seems to get a kick out of pushing his buttons, grooming and pushing him into presumably becoming her little protege or boy toy. She must know that he has a fetish for her huge body, what it can do, and it's power, and having him as her bathroom attendant is going to make seducing and molding him so easy. She'll be there flashing him whenever she needs to bathe, relieve herself, or have a sensitive area cleaned, and he'll be there witnessing every intimate detail, and getting a thrill out of it even if he might try to keep it a secret. It's his job now, and I'm sure she'll enjoy using her body to dominate and seduce him both physically and mentally. She seems to know she can do  anything in front of him or to him and he'll be turned on. He was even aroused when she nearly drowned those workers in front of him. She seems to be trying to seduce and mold the whole family, but Max, being young, male, and having a giantess fetish already, is going to be her special prize.



Author's Response:

Michael's fate was very ironic, indeed. But because of her God complex and others inability to read her, his chances of survival were slim. Like you say, she really detests indecisiveness and not standing up to her. But if you're tiny, you just want to make the decision that will please her, and how can you possibly know what that is? And wouldn't you be terrified to oppose or stand up to someone that much bigger than you? Haha. And I agree with you also that she truly doesn't feel remorse. I think she lies to herself and tells herself that she does... but obviously not true. One of the many issues wrong with her.

A perspective from a tiny that is swallowed would be cool. I haven't written something like that before and it's something I'd like to try. And yes, a tiny person's perspective of the carnage and results of her actions is something I've wanted to do. I did that for a much earlier chapter, but deleted that scene because I felt it slowed the story down. Maybe I'll rewrite it into a future chatper. Both good ideas!

As far as how this world works, I've put very little effort into expalining it. It all makes sense in my head, but I feel incredibly bored writing about it. I imiagine the water for the bath as having a limite, and it must be filtered after each use so she can re-use it and not deplete the cities water source. A shower function would be very limited for that reason. I imagine chefs preparing meals at their regular size, and then she just enlarges it with a sizer. But I honestly haven't thought about the toilet or bathroom issues as far as logistics are concerned...

The maintenance crew is for her body, and cleaning up after her... not really anything engineering wise. So you are absolutely correct. And yes, again, the only reason she has it is because she can. It's a power move. They can be more detailed. But it would be so much easier and faster to do things yourself. But no tingle of excitment for her in doing things that way.

I always enjoy your reviews, thanks for commenting. It makes me think about the story and character developements alot. I admit, there are a few chapters where I got a little sloppy with that. But your reviews inspire me to address certain things from time to time. And I think the biggest take away for me this time is to do some perspective writing. Thanks for reading!

Tour Group by Notkent Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

A tiny family gets more than they bargained for when their holiday plans take an unexpected turn. A tale with characters galore and hopefully, something for everyone.

 

Will continue soon on my Patreon (https://www.patreon.com/NotKent?fan_landing=true).


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Incest, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77931 Read Count: 315822
[Report This] Published: September 01 2019 Updated: April 12 2022
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: April 24 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

When Becca accused Anna of being a "pervert" and a "lesbian" and that she was going to punish her with her body for trying to get off on her body, and then her stomach started rumbling I thought she was going to swallow her. It seemed like a setup for some vore content. Kind of funny how Becca seems to think Anna is a lesbian who enjoys getting stuck to her pussy and getting peed on by her, and punishing her "is what she wants."

Summary:

Erwan, living at the outskirt of the fabled Gigantopia all his childhood, moved there at eighteen. Then, his life took a bad turn, and just as he believed he had finally started to find his groove, he discover that bigger surprised await in the biggest city on Earth !


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gigantopia
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65547 Read Count: 117645
[Report This] Published: September 15 2019 Updated: December 02 2020
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter. I liked the foreshadowing at the beginning of Celia swallowing Erwan, and Erwan realising he's about to go where few others have gone. At about 1700 feet tall the sense of scale will be amazing, a stomach the size of an arena, and over a mile of intestines. He'll be spending quite a long time on his fantastic voyage through the digestive tract of a gigantic. There's a lot of suspense and questions with that foreshadowing opener. Does she swallow him intentionally or unknowingly, is he in danger or not, does she provide him with a device like the necklace to help and/or protect him on his journey through her, and of course the sense of wonder of passing through a female gigantic. I will have to wait and see and I look forward to the updates.

There seems to be a lot of greenery in and around Celia's house. Is this because of her ability to eat and drink garbage and polluted water and expell nutrient rich waste. Like Celia drinking from polluted lakes and peeing out clean nutrient rich urine to replenish the ground. She's too big to have her own sewer line, and she can replenish the environment just by peeing. This is one of the interesting abilities mentioned in the last chapter, and one worth exploring and Erwan witnessing. So I was wondering if all the greenspace is a hobby of hers because of her ability, like planting baby trees, except with small parks in pots.


Having Erwan play with her nipple is an interesting and creative way for them to have foreplay considering the size difference. When they get to the pussy and she spreads it, I can see Erwan trying not to faint from all that pink. Considering that he's about the size of an ant to her, the easiest way for him to get a reaction from her is to get into her through her urethra/peehole since it's the smallest hole there, but big enough for him to get into and still be kind of tight enough for her to feel and get a reaction from a man the size of an ant. Her vagina is probably too big. Like the nipple sex it's a creative way to get a feeling despite the size difference and she's so huge no orifice is off limits. He could also get on her clit too, which would be bigger than him, but the pubic hair would get in the way. I don't see how she sees it as a safety net since at his size it would be like obstructive tree branches, and in the last chapter she was careful about loose hairs potentially hurting someone.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. You're the one who gave me the idea of Erwan exploring the inside of Celia. There will be at elast one chapter dedicated to it, the incipit of each chapter is really just a tease to that moment :) ! I therefore can't answer any of the questions you're asking here, it'd be far too much of a spoiler! 

Considering the greenery around Celia's house, it'll be explained and her natural calls will be explored a little. After all, even if they don't eat and drink as much as Normals, proportionally speaking, they do need a lot of water and food. Their kind of food, mostly. But her truly enormous trees (really, they are not baby trees XD) are indeed a hobby of hers, when they are in the pots she had crafted for those. Think of all the ones she has outside her house as a vast interconnected park, while the ones inside are more jardins and even tropical greenhouses. 

I haven't yet thought about how Erwan will interact with her pussy, but I can definitively say that she didn't thought about the problems with her hair down there, because I hadn't! Somehow, I felt that they "acted" differently than her hair elsewhere ^^ ! But you'll notice that her hair does fall near Erwan at some point in this chapter, and it's because when she's aroused, and she can be easily, she tend to be a little less careful. But I'll definitively try to think about all of this.

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sorry to hear that you have been having a hard time. I did like the last 2 chapters. Just some things that I noticed.

In chapter 4 it's mentioned that he hears the thunder of 6 gigantic sized kids rushing towards their mothers, but Celia only has 3 daughters by herself. Is there another gigantic mother with daughters in the area? Celia has a dildo sub that he can climb in, with a replica of her pussy that he can copulate with. But considering that she has advanced suits to protect him, even one that the beginning of chapter 5 hints is strong enough to pass through her digestive tract, him copulating with a replica of her genitals seems a little underwhelming considering she surely has protection suits that could allow him to explore the real thing without being crushed or smothered. He's the size of an ant to her so there's no hole or orifice in her midsection that's off limits to him should he go "cave exploring" and like an ant she can still feel him. He could explore her vagina and end up in her womb, explore her urethra and end up in her bladder, make love to her clit, and even explore her anus, without being crushed or suffocated.  

The openings of the chapters foreshadowing him being swallowed alive by his 1700 foot plus girlfriend are really good. I really like the intro to the fourth chapter where he contemplates the primal fear of being eaten alive, how since the rise of the gigantics mankind is forced to confront the fear of no longer being at the top of the food chain, and his pondering of whether it is worse to be eaten by something with a mind that's aware of you. I really love the introspection here, good writing. And to be fair that's what Celia is doing, she is eating him, but without the expectation of digesting him as he travels through her digestive tract.  

In the beginning of chapter 5, it mentions protective armor and Celia speaking to him as he prepares to fall into her stomach. I guess this means he does need a suit to travel through her digestive tract, and that she is aware and can communicate with him. He will also need a means to have her insides illuminated so he can see. I really hope that his trip through her digestive tract is full tour, that he passes in and out through the entire lenght of her digestive tract. Considering how little is known about the eating and internal digesting of gigantics he could even turn his trip through her as a documentary if Celia is okay with it. It would sure get a lot of views. Since she's apparently in contact with him she and presumably her daughters will be very interested and curious in checking in on him as he travels through her digestive system. It's been established that she drinks polluted water and can process plastics and heavy metals contaminating water, but does she eat solid organic garbage as well as metals and plastics? If so it would explain the armor he's wearing, and it must be quite scary and intimidating to see things like whole cars and buses being digested right in front of him in a stomach the size of a small arena. It will be interesting to see how her intestines convert it into waste from the inside.  Celia can make some interesting suits for people the size of ants to her. Since their too small to make by hand, I can assume she has a machine like a 3D printer that makes them for her.

The name of the A.I. Shannon, that's a reference to your MAJOR/Minor New Lives story isn't it. I do like Celia's playful exhibitionism streak, with her admiting that as a Gigantic she has little use for clothes and playfully flashing Erwan her butt in chapter 4. Celia isn't shy and has no problem being intimate with Erwan. One thing I would like Erwan to witness and describe is Celia peeing in front of him due to the sheer scale and spectacle of all that liquid coming out of her huge pussy. In chapter 2 she did afterall drink enough to cause the water level of a lake to drop and the lake to very visibly retract so the spectacle of her passing all that water and then some out of her pussy would be quite something for Erwan to witness and describe. If it replenishes the ground as she says, it's no wonder her territory is so green.

I do like the time and attention to detail put in the story and like how the chapters are long and richly detailed. Seeing this story being updated is one of the highlights of this site.



Author's Response:

I may have made a mistake around the Gigantic kids and meant six feet (three pairs of feet, in fact) :p. I'll re ad chapter 4 again just to be sure of it, at a later date XD !

I assure you that vaginal exploration (hell, body exploration) will be a theme, but we'll be taking things relatively slow. he can't go and get lost in her pussy on their very first date after all! 

I'm glad that you like the intro of each chapter. Ideally, it should be basically its own little story in the future, but used to delve into some more introspective elements, i guess. 

We may or may not see her urinate sooner or later, but I'm not yet set about it. And Shannon's name is indeed a nod to M/m ^^ !

As always, thanks for the kidn review, I'll try to keep up the good work for you to enjoy the future of this series :) !

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: October 08 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm guessing Gigantics are very rare in the world, judging by what a big deal one appearing by the restaurant is, and the description in the first chapter of hundreds of bodies if they dropped dead, not thousands, or millions. At their size they should be easy to spot from miles away, yet the main character and other normals are ignorant or only half right about basic things about Gigantics like what they eat and drink. Although Celia seems embarrassed to admit that she eats garbage and drinks dirty water, so maybe what they consume is something Gigantics don't like to advertise.

The portable indestructible small apartment pendant is a neat idea. With a small bathroom, food, drinks, and air he could probably stay in there for a long while before having to leave his safe place. Although Celia implies her friend has a fetish and different way of doing things. Look forward to seeing what she means by that.

So Gigantics drink dirty water, eat garbage, and give back to nature with their nutrient rich waste when they relieve themslves on the ground. Interesting. In chapter 1 it's mentioned that their bodies break down into nutrients for nature relatively quickly when they die. I'm guessing their solid waste, and possibly liquid waste too, work the same way too. If this is the case shouldn't Gigantics be encouraged to drink and eat as much as they can? Is this like a role or hobby for them, since they could help revitalize the most polluted and/or barren parts of the world this way, like for example the Aral sea. For a normal like Erwan having to stick close to a Gigantic like Celia, the sight of her doing something as simple as peeing to give to the ground must be an awesome sight, a literal river coming out of lady parts the size of a building. Also about lady parts, I'm curious as to the how the relationship will be consumated although I'm sure they'll find a way.

Are the digestive tracts of Gigantics mostly upsized versions of human ones, or do they behave differently, to accomadate their diets? Do they process organic matter well or just certain inorganic matter, or both? It would be interesting to see how their innards work.

Personally, I'd love to see a scenario where Erwan is swallowed by Celia. Maybe unintenionally as a dramatic scenario, or intentionally. At her size it would be ideal for an endo type scenario. Erwan seems to be very afraid of getting eaten by her, wondering if she has dozens of skeletons in her digestive tract, how many people she's drunk in the past, and listening to rumors of the cannibalism of Gigantics, so a scenario where he's swallowed by his love could force him to face his worst fears about his partner. It would also be neat to see how her digestive tract works first hand, due to her different diet, and the description of her as a living recycling plant.

I am really liking the world building so far and am interested in how this world is shaping up, and I like how you add in details in your descriptions and narrative. Good work.

 



Author's Response:

Gigantics are, indeed, relatively few, really, a handful compared to the masses of Normals, or even Smalls. They also live largely secluded lifes, inhabiting remote placed in Gigantopia, even if they sometimes deign to walk into the town proper. And because of their size, while they aren't necessarily aloof or disdainful of smaller humans, they tend to favor remaining amng them - and they are far smarter than Normals, even Titans can't compare, so sometimes, conversations with others aren't as rewarding as staying with them. Strangely enough, they are indeed embarassed by their diet, probably because the first of them were just Normals who grew up so gigantic !

The portable apartment is but an example of strange, almost esoteric technology created by the Gigantics, more will come into play - especially when it'll be time to consume their relationship. As for the friend, she'll make an appearance down the line and we'll know what her fetish is. 

Concerning the diet and the insides and everything, I can't say much, because it'll pop up in the next chapter or the fourth at the latest. The scenario you'll have in mind and the fears of Erwan will also be used sooner or later! I'm not trying to avoid the answers, but I swear it'll come in the story itself :) !

Thanks for the praise about the worldbuilding. I'm mostly a worldbuilder before a writer, I think, so it's really great to hear !

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: September 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this idea of an extreme size disparity in a relationship with a gentle giantess. It allows for nearly unlimited body exploration, and it's original to see a gentle giantess that's the size of the tallest buildings from our perspective not on a rampage, and instead trying to form a caring relationship with someone the size of an ant from her perspective even when it's not very practical. It goes to show how committed she is to acknowledging regular sized people as individuals. Or maybe she has a fetish for them or both. The future setting and very advanced technology and engineering allows more storyline scenarios, and it helps to explain how the very large have managed to have their basic needs met and maintain comforts too.

Just to nitpick a few things. The main character mentions that the largest gigantics are 10000 times smarter than a normal high genius. This doesn't seem plausible since they would be in an entirely different state of consciousness altogether. Although the character admits that this is a saying and that he's not a science guy.

The restaurant has a terrace at 300m 1000 feet, yet he mentions that gigantics, which is what Celia turns out to be, are about 282.5 times his normal height of about 6 feet, so about 1700 feet. About the height of New York's tallest building. Meaning that Celia is far taller than the restaurant building. Unless she's sitting outside the building, sorry I just had to reread that and it seems to be the case, it just wasn't very clear in the description. The sense of scale of gigantics architecture and facilities must be mind boggling from a normals point of view.

Considering the extreme size difference, Celia and the main character will probably need to communicate with some sort of device. Like a very advanced smartphone that almost never runs out of energy.

And lastly, technically speaking the main character is wrong. None of the scientists in the Jurassic Park movie who created the dinosaurs are killed by dinosaurs. They all leave the island before the tropical storm hits, leaving only a skeleton crew of engineers and the game warden to oversee things. Sorry, but I just can't help but correct the main character there as I've literally seen the movie over a 100 times. Although, in the book, the lead geneticist is killed by a raptor.

I love the premise, and look forward to more. One scenario suggestion that I would love to see is Celia swallowing the main character either unintenionally or intentionally and the advanced technology keeps him from coming to harm while inside her. Heck, deep inside her guts might be the safest possible place for him to be, since at the size of an ant to her, he has a very good chance of falling to his death,getting squished, or getting lost if she tries to move him otherwise. And since it's mentioned that gigantics consume relatively little her insides would be mostly clean but still have more than enough food and water to sustain him. He would still be able to communicate with her, and it would be like being in a very large warm skyscraper if the skyscraper was a beautiful woman who cared about her guest. Maybe, that's why she invited him to a restaurant with a terrace at face level when she's sitting. A gentle giantess saying "Do you trust me?" "Please get in my mouth." There really isn't much endo content in this site, so I'm really hoping for some in this story since it's got a very good setup for it.

Author's Response:

Well, I wanted to get out of my comfort zone, which is basically mini-gts, just to see how I could make a gentle story with a giga-giantess working. Without spoiling, I can actually tell you that the doesn't have a fetish when it comes to Normals.

Concerning the intelligence, it'll be adressed and be a (small) plot point, because it won't be a too plot heavy story (I've done this with New Lives, far too much ;p).

As for the restaurant, yeah, Celia is outside, and towering over it. We'll see her eat next chapter and how she is different from Normals in ways far more deep than just her size, and yet remains extremely human. As for the device, it's also a major part of the second chapter, I've been thinking about it since even before writing the first word of this one !

And yep, he is indeed wrong about Jurassic Park. It's a shame, because it's the best film ever (fight me!), but it's really old to him, so I'll give him a pass. 

I'll admit I hadn't thought about the endo element. I won't make promises but it could appears, indeed. Perhaps not in the second chapter however, but I'll keep it in mind. 

Summary: Fresh out of high school, 18 year old Matthew Poindexter visits a friend he's been talking to for months on Myspace over in England for two weeks. Once he arrives in England, he walks near a patch of grass near the airport and picks a 3 leaf clover, jokingly eating it. Little did he know it would really affect his trip.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Unaware, Body Exploration, Butt, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42067 Read Count: 121506
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: May 07 2020
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed
Date: April 09 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Day Before Takeoff

Great to see that your writing another story, "Blast From the Past" is one of my favorite stories on the site. The amount of detail you put into your latest stories is amazing, and they are well researched. I tried looking for anachronism's in your last story and couldn't find any. This story is off to a richly detailed start too. You get the idea that the main character is usually the setting, especially in works dealing with the past.

Things I really liked about "Blast From the Past" as well were the indestructability of the main character, gentle more realistic giantesses, and the richly detailed vore and full tour scenes. I really hope these things carry on into this story as well.



Author's Response: Thanks haha, I always do research before I write a story. And these things will definitely carry into the story, no doubt about it.

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Day 9: Lost In Berlin

Matthew's self pity at the end was a nice touch. He's 18, lost in a foreign country, and in the hot and cramped intestines of a sexy slightly older young woman who unkowningly ate him with food. To make things worse nobody knows where he is, not even the female stranger who "abducted" him by swallowing him.

Blast From The Past had the scenario where the main character was swallowed by an unaware girl who got indigestion and defecated him out outdoors in the town park where he was able to get the attention of a friend. But he's so far away from anyone he knows, in a foreign country, and inside an unaware female stranger that he's going to have to get her attention when she poops him out, without getting flushed away. His journey's through Emily and Sarah were relatively clean, but with the huge amount of food and drink that Jessica ate and drank he's for sure going to come into contact with a lot of girl poop and pee when she lets him out by relieving herself. He'll probably be encased into a log. If he's lucky she'll clog the weak european toilet, forcing her to look down and notice him. Or maybe she's the tomboyish type of girl who looks down to admire her work and notices him that way. Since she's unaware she swallowed a minature man, her reaction to finding a minature toy in her poop, then seeing it moving and alive is going to be such a shock to her. I look forward to her suprise and interactions between him and Jessica. After she gets over the shock of finding a tiny young American, in her poop of all places, his invulnerability to suffocation and digestion, and the improbability of it all her interactions with him are going to be interesting. She seems to be a bit of a tomboy, unladylike eating, drinking, and burping and after such an intimiate view of her own body feel she has nothing left to hide from him. I can see her playing the role of the slightly older more experienced and assertive big sister type to the naive young American and guiding him on the female body.

 

 



Author's Response: You've got it exactly right, I might let her figure out who he is, but I'll decide that tomorrow. I wanted to pull on the heart strings with that ending, so that's why I added it. I plan on having him travel through the sewers in the next chapter, but who knows, we might get some more interaction with Matthew and Jessica. His trip in Europe is almost coming to a end, so we'll see what happens next.

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Day 10: Nurse Jessica

That was a very good chapter. Some thoughts.

1. You don't have to apologize so much about the parts where the ladies poop him out. It's inevitable that he's going to come into contact with the poop, farts, and pee of the girls who swallow him in full tour scenarios. It's a one way trip and the girl's digestive systems job is to process food and expell waste, along with anything that can't be digested like our hero, so everyone can pretty much expect scenes like this to be inevitable.

2. It's kind of funny how Sarah has him turn around so he doesn't see her nude when she gets off the toilet. She seems to forget that he must be very intimate with her body, having travelled through her insides, and seen, and felt her asshole when she shit him out into the toilet earlier in his saga. He definately saw her anus and genitals when that happened.

3. The main character is pretty young, and like most teenage boys he's probably horny, and probably a virgin. Yet despite this, the only times he's "gotten inside a woman" has been in a vore sense rather than in a sexual sense. There's a lot of warmth and intimacy in traveling through a girl, but so far his only views and interactions with girls private parts is when their being used to expell, things like him. At his age these are likely among his first few views of in person female nudity. Him gawking at Jessica's asshole even though he's just been shit of her asshole encased in her shit, and her asshole is currently farting on him, is something a horny teenaged boy would do. Take the opportunity to gawk at any female nudity on the rare occasions it happens in person. You mention how you like to keep the focus on the woman's privates instead of the poo during the inevitable scat scenes. Well gawking at their privates is something a horny teenaged boy would do.

3. I have to wonder how his experiences effect his view of females and his developing sexuality? Girls are supposed to be the weaker sex, and he's supposed to be a gung ho young man, yet the girls around him are in charge, carrying him around, hiding him, even swallowing and pooping him out. A very dominating scenario. Girls are supposed to be the fairer sex, yet at his size he's been witness to some potentially gross and unladylike actions. He's seen girls eating and drinking heavily, from inside their stomachs too. He's seen their digestion, he's seen and been part of girls pooping, and witnessed girls farting, peeing, and burping. I wonder what kind of attitude he's developing about his experiences thus far?

4. I liked his interactions with Jessica. It was funny how she first thought Matthew was a parasitic worm while while examining her work, then tried to get Karl to look. Or her burping to annoy her coworkers. She seemed like a brazen, mischevious, and seductive type. I thought she was going to seduce Matthew. I was kind of suprised she didn't reveal him at the hospital, mentioning how thet met, andshowing off his invulnerability by swallowing him with a pill cam, or something like that, where they could have done tests on him. Or revealed him to the media and getting famous that way, but I guess she wanted him to herself. It was good to see them interact but I kind of would have liked to see even more between them.

5. Jessica mentions how Matthew has "really been somewhere no man has been before" once she realizes Matthew has gone through her digestive tract after she swallowed him. Does this take place in the same universe as "Blast From The Past"? If so this has to have happened before to other guys as well, before. If this is isn't in the same universe this must truly be a unique occurence.

7. Matthew mentions having to clean up poop in store aisles regularily from people pooping in there as pranks. I've worked part time at a major store for a while, and I've never seen this happen before. Even on the very rare occasions when a little kid throws up or someone cuts themselves regular employees aren't supposed to clean up bio material, only the janitorial contractors are. Never seen this as a prank, the customer pranks generally involve positioning toys in suggestive positions and poses, and occasionally opening condom boxes and leaving them where they shouldn't be. Like on the cucumbers.

8. On the return homehe's going to have get one of the girls to swallow him to get him through airport security after 9/11 and on the long flight home, and through airport customs again. He might have to be swallowed and pooped out, then swallowed and pooped out again due to the long time.

9. Is he going to stay small when he gets home? If so will this story get a sequel? Will he go public and reveal his small size and invulnerability to the media? Maybe get a woman who isn't shy to swallow him along with a pill camera on tv to demonstrate.



Author's Response: 1. Eh, yeah I just didn't want to gross out anyone, so yeah that's why I kinda did that. 2. I've dated some girls who had weird standards like that, so I added that in. 3. I mean, he does have a girlfriend back at home haha, so he does wanna keep loyal to her. Plus I really wanted to stay more in the R rated stuff and less X rated stuff. I feel like every dude at one point figures out that girls can be as gross as guys in one way or another, so this would definitely be his experience and how he realizes it. 4. Thanks haha, I kinda tried to flesh out Jessica a bit before we left her. 5. All my stories I write on here are set in the same universe, and the last chapter of "Blast From The Past" Anthony mentions that he's never told anyone. 7. I mean, I've heard a couple of stories from friends who've worked at stores and all and hearing about some idiot taking a dump in the aisles and running off, I just really added it as a after thought. 8. He'll grow back during the story, trust me. I'll put out another story after this one is finished about a guy who didn't grow back. 9. No, he won't. There's a character in this universe named "Jack Cooper" (He was the main character of the first story I wrote on here awhile ago, but deleted) who actually does become famous due to this (This story was set in summer of 2007). Matt will bump into him in the epilogue section of the story, to show off how he was before he was famous and shrunken. Jack Cooper is mentioned in "Just Like In The Movies" a couple of times too, and the main character of that story meets him at the end. Mattthew and Anthony will make a appearance in one of my future stories, I plan on writing it once the virus is over for it would be way easier for the story to happen, it'll be one of the few Modern day set stories on here that'll write. So it will kinda be like a sequel for most of the characters I've made a story about so far.

Summary: In the seventies, Ben was a stud, he could easily get any woman he wanted, now it's the late nineties and his heyday is now behind him, he's divorced, his friends have moved on from him. The only thing he has left is his looks, seemingly aging well over the years. He hits it off with a new Midwestern transplant by the name of Tiffany at his job, who's about 30. She shrinks him due to some type of potion made out of English grass, wanting to keep him with her forever. He's always wanted to find love again, but he never wanted it to go this far!
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25500 Read Count: 57249
[Report This] Published: July 01 2020 Updated: July 28 2020
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2020 Title: Chapter 9: End of The Road

This story does not suck, and honestly you are one of the better writers on this site. You are brave enough to set your stories in a elaborate settings in the past and load them with rich detail and research, then you write a long and detailed narrative giving perspective and personality to your characters. You flesh out your male protagonists and avoid making your female characters into one dimensional horny sadists and make them mostly compassionate to the tiny male and make them more realistic and believable as characters.

Your updates are a highlight and your series of tales of shrunken men from the early 1990's to the present is one of the best on this site. Which is why I find the abrupt ending and announcement that this is your second last story so disheartening. There are so many possibilities in this universe of shrunken indestructible men, and with your talent and attention to detail you can make pretty much any scenario come to life and get a good story out of it. This universe where nearly indestructible shrunken men happen every now and then, and their stories has so much possibility. Heck, in addition to contemporary and near past settings, you could even do stories in the distant past and show a sort of history of men shrinking around women through the ages. Like a medieval or musket age scenario about a young noble man swallowed and passed through the servant girl who has a crush on him, and who he has to rely on more despite the size difference bringing a new power dynamic, or an old west setting, a man shrunken in an old west brothel, or being swallowed and passing through a  tough cowgirl or frontierswoman he has to rely on, or any other setting and scenarioes with this concept.

Would it still be possible to salvage this story? It's not a bad story, and it doesn't suck. The idea of having an older protagonist having to navigate a world of younger women and women closer to his age, juxtaposing his shrinking and helplessness around women with his fears and insecurities about aging around women is an interesting concept.

I was really hoping for more interaction between him and Kim, I was really thinking there was going to be something going on there. The story does start in 1979 when he thinks he's in his "glory days" and later he gets literally swallowed whole by a girl born in 1979, the year he's living in the past in. There's a powerful metaphor there, which I didn't think was just a coincidence. Once again you're a cut above most writers. With all the time in Kim's belly and food raining down on him I was expecting it to end in full tour with him having to spend more time literally in the bowels of "little miss 1979" reflecting on his past, relationships with women, his insecurities about aging and younger women before being shat out of her either as a humilation or rebirth, and being forced to get her attention and confront her face to face. There was a chance for some "Jonah in the belly of the whale" like introspection and character building there, more than you'd usually get in a giantess vore story. The scene in your "Shrunken Abroad" story where the main character cries and confronts his fears and insecurities, realizing he's unready to enter adulthood, and that he's utterly lost in a strange land far from home, and in the intestines of a female stranger, is one of the better scenes in a story on this site. I was expecting a similar scenario here.

Then he gets abruptly thrown up, and Kimberly is abruptly out of the story. Then Francine re-enters and then suddenly she's out of the story too. Then the Southern accent girl enters and abruptly she's out of the story too,  Ben washes down and there's no mention what happens to him and the story suddenly ends. Don't sell yourself short, the story didn't suck, and even if you have doubts about it, it still deserves a better ending than the abrupt and inconclusive one it got. The character is practically indestructible when shrunk, what happened to him?

Would it be possible to continue the story? Have the story continue with him still inside Kimberly and the events of him being thrown up, thrown away with disgust by Francine, washed away like debris, and reports of him missing being just a nightmare dream caused by his insecurities when he passes out from the heat and fullness of Kim's stomach, and just go from there. Or if it wasn't a bad dream could we see what happened to him, like did another woman discover him while swimming in the lake, peeing on the lakeshore, something like that, and decide to keep him for herself.

10,000 views for a story that's less than a month old is not at all bad. And I didn't write a review because I was trusting the story to see how it would go, with updates coming in fast. I'm sure others are the same way, not saying much because they like how it's all going. When I do leave reviews I tend to really go all out in texting it out so I don't leave many. Please keep writing, you have your big story coming up but don't let it be the last one, at least keep the window open for more stories in this style in this universe rather than declaring a definite end. It's an interesting universe with many stories and possiblities.

Author's Response: First thing first, thank you for your kind words. It really can get discouraging when you look around on the site and you'll see a story above you with three reviews already with stars and everything but yet you're still stuck with just one, even though this entire story above you just came out the same day and not oven a single star you have yet. I probably won't salvage it(I actually wasn't planning to write this story that long as compared to "Shrunk Abroad" hence why the chapters are a little bit on the shorter side, ten chapters is actually what I had originally planned), but I'm going to write a prologue tomorrow involving Ben's son, Brandon being set ten years later which will leave a opening for another possible story. The Ben and Kim interaction wasn't really planning on being around that long in the first place, since I really just wanted to use a younger character again, since it's somewhat easier to write for. And yeah, you're right about the symbolism her being born in the same year as the beginning of the story started off in. I actually didn't plan for Francine to be in the story that long, but I did have a idea of her going back to work to pick up something she realized she left and Ben seeing Tiffany and crawling back to her. The original ending I had was Tiffany finding Ben again after what I mentioned in the last sentence and playing nice with him while driving home, and then in the next chapter she wakes up all pissed and worried in the morning, grabbing him and slamming him against the wall, leading to his demise, which is also what I kinda implied happened to her former boyfriend and hence why she moved cities. Honestly after this one I'm probably done doing full stories set in the past, I really only did stuff like the 80s through early 2010s (If you checked my first story, it's a bit rough in my honest opinion but I still read it again from time to time to show how much I've improved) due to the fact I had a good amount of knowledge on what was going on. I might do a one off story set in the 60s and past that, depending on how much material I could get out if it. After the grand finale (Which will be set modern day, hence why I'm waiting for this whole virus stuff to die out for the story could happen) I'll probably do a story involving Jack Cooper getting recruited into the U.S military and doing James Bond type stuff for them, it'll be more of a action thriller mixed with giantess elements, and of course vore. It'll be my ongoing story, ending most likely at 50 or even almost 100 chapters. My last thing to say is this, there's going to be alot of lore on shrinking in this universe when it comes down to the grand finale, and I really don't wanna spoil anything else. Thank you for reviewing, I honestly was wondering if you were reading this earlier in the story, so this definitely is a pleasant surprise. I wish I could actually space out the wording in this paragraph I'm writing, for it doesn't seem like a huge jumble of words, but anyways, thank you for reviewing.

Summary:

Hey everyone ! 

 

 

 

It's a new story but interactive, set in the Gigantopia Universe and with short chapters, which can be written in a day or two max. The rules of the interactive bits are in the story proper, I hope you'll enjoy it !

 

 

 

It'll be very mixed in size and gender of protagonists, so I hope it'll be good enough folks :)


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Giant, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Gigantopia
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43121 Read Count: 120624
[Report This] Published: August 04 2020 Updated: January 07 2021
Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Bedroom - Lorena and Lupita

Good to see another story in the Gigantopia universe, hopefully another of many. The "Tallest Milf Story" was very good. Since no one has commented on a suggestion for a scenario yet, I'll give it a shot. I really enjoyed the full tour vore body exploration chapter in "The Tallest Milf" so a full tour vore (mouth to anus) body exploration with one of the larger contestants like Lindsey gulping down 1 or 2 of the smaller contestants in the living room, and having their digestive tract act as the setting for the rest of the chapter or the next chapter would be interesting. "Tallest Milf" showed it could be safely done, and it would probably be a television first for this world. Good intimacy with the larger feeling and seeing from the live feed the smaller contestant passing through her, and/or 2 smaller contestants exploring the insides of a larger being together.

Judging by the scales provided by the first chapter, Normals can be swallowed and passed through Giants, Titans, and Gigantics, while Gigantics can swallow and pass both Normals and the 70 foot Smalls, which shows how intimidatingly big they are that they can easily swallow whole something or someone as big as a bus or a whale. "Tallest Milf" showed that Gigantics eat and drink industrial waste and scrap, and expell super clean water and dirt to replenish the earth, having no need for toilets, but do the diets and digestive systems of smaller Titans and Giants work the same or are they more similar to a Normal human's. Afterall, there are toilets in the large bathroom and a large working kitchen. "Tallest Milf" had a Normal pass through a Gigantic, so it might be interesting to have a Normal pass through a Titan like Parvati, or a Giant like Monica, although a trip through a Gigantic like Lindsey by a Normal and/or a Small on television would be nice too.

For some reason involving the Javascript I can't seem to vote on strawpoll, or even see how the vote is going, but if I could vote for one character it would be the Normal Lorena, since her small size gives her the most capability to go places.



Author's Response:

Ooh ! An excellent idea ! Sadly the chosen contestants for this round are... not comptabile with it :)

However, I keep in mind because it's really great !