On hiatus. A sister with a size fetish and MAGIC POWERS does stuff.
Also, apologies, the formatting here is fucked and the summary used to be wrong.
Wow man one of the better stories I've read in a long time, the description of the interactions was great, hope to see more from you in the future.
Author's Response:
thank you! I would really like to write more of my old stuff, including this one
Fantastic story, I love the idea of his friend not knowing he's on the meatball
great story, I love the voyeur aspect to it, it adds a lot of suspense.
Author's Response: thanks ronnie, I have always been a voyuer fan myself, so its easy to write what you like.
Great addition to the story. I love the unaware/voyeur aspects and the concept itself feels fresh. It's a decent length too, not so short that you feel cheated, not so long that it gets boring. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I gotta say, this is one of the better vore stories I've read in awhile. But I'd expect no less from Galstaff. Speaking of which, are you going to continue your other adventures?
Author's Response:
I'm baffled that my story can recieve almost a thousand views in twenty four hours. Thankyou for the huge compliment. Let's just say that if you have a direction you want a story to go feel free to suggest and I will do my best to integrate any ideas suggested.
Yeah I can see where this is going and I would say definitely post the next chapter ^_^ I don't think anyone would be offended.
Aw man, you really left us hanging there lol. Well you certainly know how to build up anticipation. Great job and I hope the next installment comes soon ;)
Cool new story, I like the description of the little city as well, and the fact that Leslie is a lot bigger than her sister. It makes her seem more menacing
cool, love the description of all the destruction. Maybe some barefoot action next time? :)
cool story. I'm glad you took your time with the descriptions instead of rushing things, good job. I'm more of a barefoot fan but i still enjoyed it.
Author's Response: That's great, thanks mate :)
An overly curious college girl finds a strange box on her roommate's desk that, unbeknownst to her, is filled with thousands of tiny people. If only she weren't so clumsy....
Then how about not saying anything at all KazumaR1. Jackass. Anyway, this is a great story dude, action packed with rich descriptions. I love the unaware element of it too. Maybe in your next story you could have some unaware crush (wink wink).
Ever been to those tiny, Asian massage parlors? Ever wondered what happens if you don't pay? Find out!
The slower pace really paid off, you have a wonderful eye for detail. Ever think about doing some voyeur stories? I'll be reading your future work in either case, good job!
In the near future, male crime offenders are shrunken and tortured under the soles of female correctional officers. This becomes especially awkward when one of the officers is your mother!
Love this story, and I actually like the fact that the mother isn't aware. It adds to the angst of the character in a "if only she knew" sort of way. Keep up the good work!
Love the voyeur/unaware theme, can't wait to see it develop.
Each chapter is a self-contained, independent story of a son's torture at the feet (or butt!) of his mom.
Great to see you back in action, Ace! Loved the second story.
This has been my favorite chapter so far. I've been a longtime fan of unaware, and I've always wanted to read a story with this particular scenario. You're really good at creating a sense of impending doom and fitting a lot of tense descriptions into a small amount of text. Really looking forward to the coming chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review, I hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters then, because I too am a fan of this scenario!
A dysfunctional family learns to deal with each other in an unconventional manner.
Quite possibly my favorite story so far this year. I'm a big unaware fan and most people aren't able to create the sort of drama and tension that makes unaware so engaging. I'm also digging the pseudo-unaware aspects where the giantess isn't so sure if the tiny kids are real. Looking forward to the continuation of this adventure :)
There is definitely a fine line I am toeing to keep both the aspect of drama and adventure, as well as the light-hearted, fun aspect in good balance, but you'll notice, if you read the most recent chapter "Unintended Consequences" one of the two had to win the battle. Thank you for your review, and kind words! Being the author of a story in the running for anyones favorite of the year is certainly something I appreciate, and thank you for mentioning it!
This is a sequel to my earlier story "A Matter of Perspective." Basically, it's a tiny city story, with a very few twenty-somethings doing a whole lot of crushing. You can find the original here: http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=1139
Cool, big fan of the original. There aren't many sequels that get made to stories, and this is one of the better ones :)
Sammy throws a party for her best friend while inviting a bunch of her enemies. What was she thinking?
Really dug this chapter, love the dynamic of one character being aware while the one doing all the destruction is unaware :)
Larry and his girfriend were having a very romantic evening ,when a strange spider bites them. They think nothing of it until they both shrink while making love. The only problem is they were making love on Larry's moms bed.
Hi there. Love the unaware aspect to your stories, I've read most of them. I enjoy your descriptions, and I like that you take your time. I do have one bit of advice. Your stories tend to be pretty over the top and overtly sexual. If that's what you're going for then great. But I think if you took a more realistic approach with how the characters react (i.e. people get scared rather than aroused) then it would be easier for people to be drawn into what's happening. Also, you might not want to put them into such overtly sexual situations, because then you don't leave yourself a lot of room to build to a great ending. Maybe start out with almost getting crushed or eaten and then it can become sexual towards the end. Just my opinion, in any case I look forward to more :)
Thanks for your insight,im a little impatient when it comes to the action i'll admit. My future chapters and stories will hopefully continue to keep getting better at pacing the whole story. Im trying to incorporate certain characteristics into my characters,but will take into account your advice at building story levels.
