Reviewer: D F Signed
September 24 2022
Chapter 60: Chapter X-57: Fireside Chat
Awesome work as always, I’m a big fan of the direction the story is heading :)
As for voting, I’ve already voted, but I’ll put it back at the top for easy counting: Naru!
I love your story, and all of your characters. If you’re up for it, could we have a bonus chapter of all of your characters instead of just one? It would be awesome to see more of the side character. Author's Response:
Hey D F,
Just mentioned this to Tinyguy and Vegetaboy, but since the messages still applies I'll copy paste the response:
I also think personally I would like to write about Naru (not that it's the end of the world if it doesn't win the vote) So i think my own personal vote would be her, but I'm going to respect whatever the majority vote is here, so we'll see.
Still, upon reflection of the characters, she's the least i wrote about and explored, which is kind of disappointing, as there are more details about her i would like to share. I think i kind of got carried away in the moment of writing the story, and didn't realize until it was too late that she's probably the least focused on. Alas. Perhaps if i really want to write about her I'll do it as a one off after this story is done.
As to doing one of every character:
My personal goal is to have all of the characters be equally interesting and unique (easier said than done). So i'm glad it's a bit of a conundrum.
However, for now, as they say with the highlander: There can only be one!
I don't want to water down the bonus chapter in anyway by trying to do too much. It will probably be a long chapter, hopefully highlighting some of the personality/behavior of the specific character deeper in a very macrophile type way. Perhaps if I feel like it in another story we can look more at these characters, but that will be a very distance and speculative future.