Great chapter :)

I don't know why I didn't read this story sooner. Can't wait for the next chapter

Really enjoying this story. Check for updates every time I'm on.

My vote is for Jaz. I've been hoping that she'd be the one he gets assigned to. Alas that doesn't seem like that is going to be the case now.

I'm usualy more interested in shrinking stories over giantess stories, but I gotta say this story had me hooked. You do such an awesome job at creating very real and fleashed out charaters, that story preferance fall to side and you just find your self sucked into the story.

Great chapter. Lots of interesting info, that create even more questions

He told her what he did durring the day, does that mean he told her about exploring her sneakers? Possible solution to saving your stories but only having s hared computer, you could save your stories to a usb flash drive. Loving the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter

In contrast to what I see in other reviews, I think you did an amazing job at forshadowing his depression. Granted I was reading it as more of a Manic-Major Depression illness. Your hints were no more or no less subtle than the hints you would get from a real person suffering from depression. Maybe that's why others have had a hard time picking up on the hints. Unless you've had depression or known someone who has0 or simply studied it, it can be incredibly hard for someone to notice the signs. And like I said before, you really are an amazing writer. You have the tallent to be getting paid to write. Hell your stories are so good I'd even recomend them to friends who aren't into the gts thing and have no doubt they'd still enjoy them. 

Another great chapter. And yea you'll get no complaints from me that it was up sooner than later. I think this is my favorit story at the moment. As always, looking forward to the next one :)

Hmmm.. Excelent chapter and you got me thinking. Actualy a few things that Peter has said, thought and done have me thinking. I'm starting to wonder if Peter has a Manic-Depressive Illness (aka Bipolar Disorder). In an early chapter Peter refers to hitting his first wall. He talks as though he is on a medication but due to his current situation is now without it (but never flat out says medication I'll admit). In another chapter Peter mentions that he is keeping an even bigger secret from Emily and is afraid of how she would react to learning it. On multiple occasions Peter has shown him self to act impulsively and maybe even recklessly at times. He seems like a very active and creative person. He generaly is calm and collected but can get aggitated and irritable. 

Since fighting the spider however he seems like a slightly different Peter. Which is understandable given the enormous stress he was under and his lack of sleep as a result. He seems more quiet, reserved and maybe a little anti-social. He also doesn't seem to enjoy things he would normaly enjoy (painting Emily's toe nails). Again understandable and really not that different. Not until he take offence to the prank with the spider and Emily saying "small thing" anyway. From there you see a major mood change in him and see him bottle up his emotions until it all comes out in a big explosion. Durring his explosion his thoughts express anger, guilt sadness, sellf loathing, loneiness, hopelessness and ultimately morbid sucicidal thoughts that lead to a suicide atempt. 

I say attempt because you say this isn't the end and I trust you.  So yea this is what this chapter has got me thinking about. To be honest when reading his thoughts in this chapter I thought that Peter was having auditory hallucinations. Assuming Peter does have a Manic-Depressive Illness and did have a major depressive episode, I would assume it was brought on by the stress with the spider and his lack of sleep. 

All that being said I could totaly be way off base with all of this and am simply way over analyzing all of this. Regardless as to wether or not I am right or not, it once again goes to show  how gifted and tallented you are as a writer. You truely have a gift at writing charaters who don't feel like characters in a story, but feel like real people. 

As always, looking forward to your next chapter :)