Penname: Frizzle [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 16 2015
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Summary:

A young boy goes against his parents' wishes to receive a normal high school education after years of homeschooling. He was subjected to a virus three years ago that was nearly the death of him and multitudes of others, but he lives on strong at the one inch that the virus left his height at. Has he made a good or bad decision?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11637 Read Count: 90018
[Report This] Published: July 13 2021 Updated: September 24 2021
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16 2021 Title: Chapter 5: A Sudden Realization

Hell yeah, CAT FIGHT. CAT FIGHT. CAT FIGHT. Honesty though, Kristi is sexy af and I kind of hope her and Richard develop some kind of bizarre love triangle lmao. Like Richard hates her, but also cannot resist her and vice versa with Kristi wanting to just abuse him, but occasionally has a glimmer of mercy as she gets conflicting feelings.

 

It would make for an interesting relationship and would probably drive Heather up the wall lmao. And if all else fails... SHE COULD EAT EM

 

Keep this up I'm completely obsessed 

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: July 17 2021 Title: Chapter 6: A Hero Feast

Mmph, deliciously tender. Oh Richard, how I envy thee. Oh Kristi, shan't she notice me?

Kristi... Is... B A E

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2021 Title: Chapter 7: A Fight Amongst Peers

"If you want him so bad, you can pucker up and plant one right here. Just like little Richard did."

Alright, I'm officially dedicating my life to Kristi. That sentence alone... Alright, Frizzle, keep your shit together m8...

I am very much curious to see more, MORE... MOAR!!!!

I <3 Kristi :p



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that, my smooth brain was straining at what Kristi was going to say. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Arriving at the Office

Kristi is love, Kristi is life.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: August 01 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Meeting the Principal

Nice twist. Curious how the husband got eaten by his wife. May explain Kristis background a bit, curious to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Free at Last?

Who's the father!?!?!

 

Kristi tsk tsk... I wouldn't have caused so much of a hassle if she had ME instead of HIM...

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2021 Title: Chapter 11: A Friend's Return

Miss Clements is hot and I hope Matt gets crammed up her pu$$y

Summary:

When layabout Shelby gets a replacement TV, she's exposed to a strange new power. She can't find a job and her life hasn't got much meaning, but none of that matters when you can make people look up to you.

One thing's for sure: she's done with ordering takeaway and cooking crap meals.

There's a whole new world of people on the menu.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8948 Read Count: 10514
[Report This] Published: July 13 2021 Updated: July 13 2021
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not many stories here intrigue me to even click them, but needless to say your title piqued my curiosity.

Very interesting premise, and what started as skimming the story turned to reading it more thoroughly as it caught my interest.

I love evil women, especially ones that don't realize they're evil until given the opportunity, so I am quite interested in seeing what Shelby will do with this six inch woman. Not usually into anything that involves over 2" but I'll give this one a shot anyways. Very interesting!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, absolutely fascinating. Disregard my earlier review comment about 2" and greater, that was one hot vore scene. Absolutely cruel and heartless, I love it! You described it great, made it absolutely believable, and I had no doubts that Shelby was capaple of swallowing that woman whole even at 6"

Now I'm curious, did the celebrities die in real life AFTER they went through the television? Or did they die in real life after dying in Shelby's stomach in their shrunken form? It wasn't quite clear, but either way this is giving me DEATH NOTE vibes and I fucking love it.

You speed along pretty quickly, the ending makes me think we're about to see a time jump, so I'm curious to see which direction this will head in.

I've read enough to give you a rating now, at least for the last two chapters, this is a 5/5 for me it is extremely creative and well written (minus some irregular sentence structures but nothing that is too distracting)

Great job, I look forward to my future free time to read more of this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm so glad you like it and took the time to comment! There's a little bit more detail on how the deaths work as you progress, you'll have to wait and see, and I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my gosh... This is brilliant. So now it seems these miniature treats give some kind of health benefits and weight loss perhaps? Interesting. And now Shelby has discovered that teleporting already dead stars works without any consequences... The story thickens...

Question still remains as to why the others stars died at all, and right off the bat! So strange, but does this mean she could take Isla Carr multiple times? Or are they erased from the show almost? So many questions, I'm wondering how they'll all get answered in five chapters total but maybe the story doesn't end there, can't wait to find out x)

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I absolutely love Shelby, man she is evil. Reminds me of Synestra in my own story, just absolutely heartless and cruel and demented... Just my kind of giantess ;)

This answered all of my questions at least, it does seem to implement time manipulation somehow, and though I may not get a clear answer it is enough for everything to fall into place.

It seems the next chapter is the last, and admittedly, I've wasted my work time reading this because I've become absolutely infatuated with this story... And though I feel bad for Brian and hope he finds a way to survive, I also kinda like the idea of Shelby devouring him mercilessly xD

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Called it, it was just so obviously written out before me. Please know it is a huge compliment I give, when I say that reading this final chapter sent chills down my spine.

I knew Brian would be killed, devoured by Shelby, and of course it's hot af to me, but at the same time I couldn't help but feel sad over it. Of course his wife now suffers as her husband dies beside her, and she's painfully unaware of the even more sickening fate on the other end of Shelby's television.

Would have been nice to see a longer scene in her stomach, more thoughts and flashing back of his life etc. perhaps but otherwise absolutely fantastic story. The idea was great, the characters written well in my opinion, just amazing.

Also I realize who this character actually reminds me of now, aside from Synestra it is actually Sabrina in my Prudence series that reminds me of Shelby, absolutely heartless and and an insatiable hunger, probably why I love her so much haha.

Maybe let her know she can check out my YouTube channel sometime and give me a ring through the television, I'll be fun for her... ;)

Great story, thank you. 10/10 will read again.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your comments, I'm really glad you liked the story so much, and it's encouraging to see such reviews. It may be a world I'll revisit later!

Summary:

The author of this piece has a fulfilling day. Full of shrunken people!


Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Entrapment, Vore, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4346 Read Count: 3830
[Report This] Published: July 19 2021 Updated: July 19 2021
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2021 Title: Chapter 1: ENTER the EMPRESS

Noice



Author's Response:

thank u lol

Summary:

A beautiful android cleans up a bit too thoroughly after two young women hold a wild party.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Sci-Fi, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10620 Read Count: 4867
[Report This] Published: July 30 2021 Updated: July 30 2021
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Not Programmed

Autonomous, emotionless vore, digestion and scat? I hit the jackpot. Great read!



Author's Response:

Thank u!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: November 09 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Not Programmed

Aigh I had to come back and read this again. Probably my favorite, top three for sure, vore/scat story ever created. In fact, if you do commissions, I might even pay for a sequel or alternate tale.... Hot damn. No rating, gave one already, but had to make another statement because reading it the second time was JUST AS GOOD AS THE FIRST.

You should consider writing an actual series, I know you do shorts strictly (I think) but honestly you nail the cruel aspect of vore in ways I can only dream of writing. Major respect.

Summary:

A PICTURE STORY collaboration with AMBIE (https://twitter.com/4ft7irl)

Someone's in big trouble after shrinking in front of her roommate! GULP!

See her gallery AND full sized thumbnail here: aryion.com/g4/view/713354


Categories: Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 870 Read Count: 3939
[Report This] Published: August 10 2021 Updated: August 10 2021
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: August 10 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Roommate Rearrangement

Is this the full story? Couldn't help but feel as if I was missing important context the whole time I read it. Nice shorty though! Maybe I'm just used to your longer works lol.

Summary:

 

Three years have passed since Maya found her little lover Six after the carnage she brought upon Saint Minervas hospital. Since then the worlds changed considerably, and only continues to do so as new key players in these changes make themselves known. With a new lover by Mayas side, along with her beloved Six, the world is ready for yet another change. How that change will affect them remains to be seen.


Reviews and critiques are greatly appreciated, not just by myself but by all writers.


If you wanna see where the series began you can check out my first story on the site!
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10793


Disclaimer: Story has chapters that contain cruel content among other things. Also has sweet chapters as well. Any likeness to real-life individuals is pure coincidence.  

-Chapter 57 is now up-


Notice: No longer on hiatus!



 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 282420 Read Count: 118013
[Report This] Published: August 25 2021 Updated: April 15 2024
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Wolves Among Sheep

Good stuff, keep it up!

On a side note, upon reading other reviews, I find it quite ridiculous that someone has the audacity to leave you a 0.5 star rating because HE/SHE is having issues loading the story, when all the other reviews clearly show that the story is there.

Why do you deserve such a shit rating because of an issue HE is having? I honestly cannot stand these types of reviewers on this website, leaving the most unwarranted and not even relevant ratings and honestly I'm tired of seeing this nonsense.

I've had my fair share of negative reviews, I never delete them, I've had the posters delete them sometimes after I ask for clarification. The review I saw below however, on your story, is probably the most absurd I've ever seen.

Anyways, rant over, I just cannot allow you to get walked on for NO good reason because of a site error. Honestly, this is the first ever case where I'd tell you to just delete his review because frankly his issue shouldn't reflect your stories rating overall since it isn't even related.

More power to you my man, and your writing is solid, so keep it up!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: On the Prowl

Incredible, super love it. Suggest an X rating though, anything sadistic or cruel often warrants an X rating since everyone has a drastic idea of what an X rating should be for. That's what I do, at least.

As for the half star review, seems unwarranted. I re-read your summary and pretty accurate to me, also, the summary isn't an "advertisement" it is a "summary", so that seems like a POS move to leave a half star because someone simply has the opposing interest of your stories topic.

That being said, Viper, I suggest posting TAGS FOR THIS CHAPTER in the notes for every chapter, so if people see something they don't want to read, they can opt to not read the chapter and you can avoid other morons from leaving ridiculously biased reviews based on self centered interests.

Keep on writing, you're a very good author and I love seeing how much you improve every time I come back! Makes me want to keep working my bunions off myself haha <3

Keep it up! 

Summary:

Emil is taken to the gym by his girlfriend Vivian. While there he recalls on the world he lives in, his life in it, and just how lucky he is to have Vivian. 


Categories: Couples, Giantess, Feet, New World Order, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2818 Read Count: 7071
[Report This] Published: November 17 2021 Updated: November 17 2021
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute, very cute. I like the history, the names of the Betas, Alphas etc. all very creative. The drug was also a cool addition. Honestly this was set up for more like a series, so a bit disappointing, but otherwise I enjoyed what was written. Kinda hot with that blonde and her sexy foot, however with no prior mentioning of her being barefoot (that I can seem to find) it was a bit confusing, don't imagine gym goers usually walking around barefoot lol.

I won't knock the rating for it, but I'd proof this again if I were you I saw a lot of grammatical errors, repeat words etc. and some of the sentence structuring was questionable, just think it needs another go through. Otherwise, in terms of the dialogue especially, pretty good job!

Very much enjoyed. 10/10



Author's Response:

Still got a ways to go in improving my writing. That said I do believe it used to be muuuch worse lol. 

Also this is a break away from the series I am actually writing currently, with characters separate of the overall plot. The series is Alpha-Beta and can be found in my profile. This story was a brief break from the main, though I'm certain I'll be visiting Vivian and Emil again in the future at some point. They may have only been introduced here but I already love them as a couple XD.

Lastly...you prob right on the barefoot powerlifting. Saw an example of lifting awhile back where the woman was barefoot and that kinds just popped into my head when i wrote that part.

I am very glad that you enjoyed the story! And the feedback is greatly appreciated as well!

Nefarious by KYS Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Blaire, a young and bashful woman, moves to Valdez, Alaska to start a new life free of her oppressive family. After meeting a handsome young man, Jacob, the two hit it off and everything appears to be looking bright for Blaire's future. However, unbeknownst to Blaire, a nefarious trafficking organization has its firm grip around Jacob and his mysterious abilities. It will take everything in Jacob's power to protect Blaire from the very evil he has allowed into his life. Will Jacob and Blaire be able to break free of the biggest and most nefarious trafficking organization in the United States?

DISCLAIMER:
All characters are over the age of 18 years old.
This story has elements pertaining to dark and grim fates, and descriptions that can cause trauma or trigger reactions from those with difficult pasts. If you have PTSD from previous sexual experiences, it is recommended YOU DO NOT READ this story. You have been warned.

TAGS FOR CONSIDERATION:
For now the tags I know will be added for CERTAIN are the ones shown for the story. The below tags are considered, but may or may not be added later on.
- Lesbians
- Nose

SPOILER: (look away if you don't want to be SPOILED lulz)
If it isn't obvious, they traffic tinies. Lmao.


Categories: Destruction, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150045 Read Count: 47415
[Report This] Published: July 05 2023 Updated: October 22 2023
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed
Date: July 23 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Gullivette

Interesting story you have here, quite interesting. Adding Gullivette was an interesting twist, though not her real name, I like the reference. Good stuff, plot itself is refreshing and though I find myself hating most of the characters I'm wondering how Blaire is going to fit into all of this, she seems to be only a side piece for Jacob but I'm sure that somehow she'll end up being his downfall I imagine. That is if he doesn't shrink her, which I doubt but who knows you've continually exceeded my expectations.

Good stuff.