These stories are always an emotional roller coaster.  The hotness of being commodified by beautiful elves contrasted with the reality of how cruel and unfair the whole thing actually is.

Love this story as with your others.  I think I found a typo:

 The Zweihander elite infantry that Albar was feared for among its neighbors.

Either the "for" isn't supposed to be there or they're feared for something that is absent.

Aside from that small hiccup, love the story, and love having some elves get theirs, even if we know how it ends.

One of my favorite stories on this website!

(story spoilers ahead)

With this, the final chapter, I think Nalista is accurate in her statement that it's something that has been put in motion.  Even if the empress isn't that personally pissed off about it, she has to give the elves a show of strength to reassure them that they aren't going to be sacked by the next campaign.

Of course, people don't usually respond to shows of force like this by giving up, so future humans will probably do their best to resist all the same.

What really set this apart from some of your other stories for me was the plentiful backstories for both Nalista and Rickard.  Even if my primary motivation for reading was smug elf feet, it's always better with characters who feel real, as opposed to just being afterthoughts (though I apprecited the random side characters too.)

Honestly this was more of an empowerment story than strictly a size story, though obviously the two are related.  And aside from that it was almost more of a comedy, but I don't think that necessarily makes it dumb, so much as clearly a FF14 Fanfic.

The descriptions of exactly how Kazuma was disintigrating her enemies really let the reader imagine what kind of power trip she was going through.  On the flip side, the way she just waded through enemies was also effective. The idea that her ring was stronger than the boss was actually probably my favorite scene.

Overall, good work Private.

Aigle pushes my buttons for very particular reasons, but beyond that there's a few things I really like about this story.

A: The gradual growth, it's nice to see her at varying levels of interaction with the humans.

B: You do a good job introducing us to the concepts of this world, familiar enough to anyone who reads fantasy, without burying us in "As you know" exposition.

C: Aigle's reasons for destroying the city, already somewhat minor and capricious at the beginning, only became more so when her motive is revealed near the end.

D: On the one hand I know she didn't really care, but it might have been good to have Cornia as a survivor semi-intentionally, otherwise her message at the end seems a little ditzy on her part.

Great job with this series, you’re doing a good job with the world building!  I’d personally love to see an older woman get toe warmers for a cold, rainy day, but regardless I’m excited to see what directions you go with this! Love the lore.

Outstanding job with the start!  I’m really curious what makes this spa randomly shrink people who weren’t wanting a particular service?  Hope to find out!