Late on the review, but I absolutely adore this, especially the first chapter. I love clones dominating themselves, faeries, being shrunken smaller than a faerie, footplay... gosh it was just so perfect I've already read and enjoyed it a bunch of times. The second chapter was neat too; not my bag but I still enjoyed reading it just because it was a novel and creative perspective. Thank you again and I hope you keep writing!

Absolutely wonderful! I really enjoy the dialogue, pacing and plot development. I've enjoyed the entire series, and am utterly fascinated with where things go from here. I'm also curious as to why they're after Daedra, though I do have a few ideas. Thank you so much for the story!

I absolutely loved this story! Great characterization by all, good array of fun stuff to happen, alluring bad end... simply fantastic. Can't remember the last time I've read a story here that I enjoyed this much.

Lovely start! I enjoy the world, as well as seeing Flo's spunky attitude as well as the dynamic she and Sona are building. Thanks again for a wonderful story!

Hi there, just wanted to say that I found this an enjoyable read. I missed this the first time, and even though there were some elements I wasn't particularly into I still really enjoyed it as a whole. Thank you for writing and updating it!

Heya! So this is ULTRA late, but I stumbled upon this an absolutely loved it. I enjoyed the slow change in perspective and gradual descent into debauchery, on top of enjoying the general XIV setting. Thank you so much for it!

Absolutely amazing! I adored the minor details about Futaba's feet, Makoto's mindset and just the general environment. The playful teasing and pseudo-unaware was wonderful as well.

I do have a few minor critiques that didn't detract from my enjoyment of the story. It's possible that I might've just missed 'em, so if these were included I apologize!

First, I absolutely adored the reveal that Futaba knew exactly what was occuring and shifted things from a passive role in domination to an active one. However, her motivations didn't particularly seem clear. Why did she want to go so far and do these things? What drove her to abuse and humiliate her friend?

Second, it felt like the sub switch in Makoto's brain was flipped a bit too quickly. She went from suffering to being full-on in heat for the towering soles. It didn't feel like a completely satisfying resolution for me as a result; as someone that particularly enjoys the 'breaking' aspect of subs succumbing to their conditioning or their urges, it felt like there could've been a bit more build up, though admittedly it looks like you were simply trying to wrap up the one shot / first chapter.

Regardless, I still absolutely loved this and really appreciate you posting it! I hope you have a great day!

-Jess

Hi there! Sorry for the delay, I wrote a bunch in a review for the first set of chapters then got logged out and a new chapter was posted so this time I'll be a bit more brief, haha.

First, I absolutely loved the story. One of my favorite things about your works is that I get a very strong sense and flavor of tabletop RPG settings. I really love how the general world building really helps sell the setting, and in this one in particular the early combat definitely had me enthralled and really getting a strong Battletech / Mech Warrior vibe. I really felt the punch of the action and it helped get me engrossed from the start.

Second, I enjoy general dynamic of the Union and the Republic. I enjoyed the fact that there was a realistic backdrop and setting for the conflict, and giving a real reason for why our protagonist would go up against the titanesses and how they'd have the tools to do so given their tools of warfare. The story did a great job of showing and introducing the lore well enough to not feel like an intro dump, while still helping establish the other giantesses one by one to feel meaningful.

Third, I thought the smut bits were fantastic. Without going into too much detail I really loved the general atmosphere and teasing aspects in the first few chapters, and adored just how the last chapter landed. The setup perfectly paid off for a bunch of wonderful bullying and foot play. I really loved the touch of taping him inside the boot; it felt like really novel and fun way to help further emphasize the hopelessness of the situation.

Again, thank you so much for the wonderful story. You are one of my favorite authors on here, and I eagerly look forward to everything you write.

Thanks,

Jess

Thank you so much! I've always enjoyed genies, and I really enjoyed the story. It's nice being able to blend a bit of the teasing and humiliation aspects of the sizeplay along with what seems to be genuine care and affection. I think the two make a cute couple and I really enjoyed the read!

-Jess

Gosh, another story so soon? You really spoil us~ once again another lovely work. Generally enjoyed just the general idea of big girls being big, especially in a lovely historical context like this. If only that's how wars were actually fought! Thank you again!

-Jess