Hi there, I just stumbled on this story and read it all in one go. I really like it. Your descriptions and narative are top notch, very professionally written. So props for that, first of all. Second, your imagination is quite impressive as well, as these are some creative scenarios you come up with. Third, your characters are amazing. Mike is a good friend, and a great character to act as the readers eyes and ears for this journey of yours. And Kelly is a freaking gift. She's so playful and unapologetically kinky. What impressed me even more about her is in the chapter where she made the black woman on the bus grow. She claimed that she disliked it when people go straight into goddess mode, and said how she doesn't view herself as a goddess. That right there, I love that.

Now, as an author on this site (not a great one, but I suppose I barely technically qualify) the last thing I want to do is tell someone else how to write their story. I can't write someone else's story better than they can. However, since you said that you're taking suggestions for the next chapter, I would like to submit a few. Feel free to use any or none of them. I'm sure I'll like the story either way.

-should Mike have some kind of fetish that can be incorperated into Kelly's giantess fantasies? Maybe he likes her feet, or is turned on by her power?

-would you consider a part where Kelly restricts herself to a size of maybe one or two hundred feet tall, and goes up against the military in some kind of classic giantess movie battle? Maybe she could even hold Mike in her hand the entire time like a much bigger King Kong? I just think picturing that would be cool

-most importantly, i would really like to see more of Kelly's personality explored. She's so fascinating. She has the power to literally hold the world in her hands and end it, but she doesn't view herself as a goddess? She likes to toy with, and even kill people, but if she knew that she couldn't bring them back, she wouldn't do it? She has all of this power, and still treats everyone else like an equal (except for when she toys with them). And she acknowledges that she doesn't know better than anyone how to improve the world, so she chooses not to change or rule it. I really want to know more about her. I want to know what makes her tick. What her morals are and what she believes in. 

Hope this comment wasn't too long for you. This story is now in my favorites list and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing it

Hmmmmmm, I'm very interested to see where this story goes. Take your time with it and I think you've really got something. The characters alone, with their differing beliefs and personalities certainly set up a very good premise. Keep this up.

Ah the Miller's Daughter makes a return! I was just thinking about this story not too long ago. I'm glad to see you're still active on this site, and that Anna hasn't gone away quite yet. I really enjoy her. Her description is beautiful and your writing is top notch quality. The chapter was short, sweet, and wasted no time in showing the audience what we want to see. But at the same time you took your time with the descriptions of the fight between the Natives and the giantess. That was very well done. A vengeful giantess who protects her people is comendable, and likeable. What originally drew me to Anna, though, was that she was a gentle giantess, which is my favorite kind. I think you've found a good balance here with her character. Next I'd like to see her playful side again as she interacts with more people. One of my favorite tropes for the gentle giantess are when kids play at her feet, which she enjoys, while she has a conversation with someone else. That way you get to see her be playful and huge while also learning more about her as a character. But that's just what I like personally. Don't go writing this story to please others. Keep writing it the way you want to, because that's the reason it's coming along so well.

Well well, interesting premise and excellent build up to the next chapter. They seem to be kind of short, but high in quality, and you can crank them out fairly quickly which is impressive. Yeah I'll definitely be keeping up with this story. I've always liked stories with Amazons being muscular and powerful in intimate settings. I've always appreciated a good show of strength. Keep doing what you're doing with this, because it's good.

This was a pretty good read. A little more taboo than usual for this site when factoring in the child-like mentality, but that didn't ruin it. The descriptions were well done and definitely hot, good attention to detail. I'm personally a big fan of how Carrie is dominating without being mean in anyway. I love that aspect in women, both fictional and real. When they can show off in a seductive way but still be caring and not cruel. That was very well done on your part. Now I've got some questions in regards to the cliff hanger "to be continued?". Keep in mind these arent critisisms. Just probes of thought if you decide to make a sequel.

The most important one being, where do the characters go from here? 

Carrie- she's now the tallest, strongest, and smartest one around. What does she do with that? What new ways do she show that off for Nate by dominating him? I'd definitely like to see more of the dominating but caring attitude, never make her go cruel or mean. But there definitely could be other ways she utterly dominates him like that. And what if she does so to others? Who, and how? Maybe not in a seductive way like with Nate, but a seven foot amazon with muscle would definitely find opportunities to show off in front of others. Maybe Jessica?

Nate- now he seems to be in a bit of a perdicament as far as character goes. The medication made him regress. How then do you have character development for someone like that? Maybe if Carrie is the owner of the journel now his role becomes reduced to just her play thing/ward that she wants to care for. But they're also apparently lovers so that makes for a strange dicotomy.

Jessica- I'm not even going to suggest anything. She's a well written and likable character, but she's also a blank slate of potential. There are so many things she could potentially be used for, whether or not they're sexual in nature or platonic. I'm going to leave that up for you to decide.

As you can tell i enjoyed this. Not just because it was hot but because I see potential for what you can do with characters like this. Whether or not you want to continue it is up to you. 

I'm really enjoying this story. Normally I'm more of a fan of equality between different size roles. The giantess loves the tiny and views him as an equal, which admitably you don't see here often. However I find myself enjoying this. It's like a Twilight Zone episode where the world is crazy and the protagonist is sane, but may be losing himself. That's an interesting dynamic to explore, and you've done it well so far by having Thomas question why he's becoming so aroused by his mother and sister's feet. Speaking of which, the foot fetish aspect is pretty erotic so props to you for also writing that well.

Now I have two requests. Normally I don't make requests of authors because I don't want to tell you how to write your own story. Please, by all means continue the story as you see fit. It'll be at its best quality that way. These are more just private wishes

1) I love brother and sister relationships, and I hope to see one bloom between Thomas and Julia. At the very least I hope no one's too cruel to Thomas.

2) Would it be alright if my next story draws inspiration for it's two main characters from Thomas and Julia? It was originally inspired by the story Growth Potential, but I wanted to make a version of that between siblings, and this story is a lot like what I was aiming for. Only instead of a shrunken brother it'll be a giant sister

Regardless of my thoughts, keep doing what you're doing, because it's really good. I've already added this to my favorites, so that should be obvious enough already.

I think this is a good set up to a story with a great premise. I really enjoyed your story Growth Potential. Your writing quality is some of the best I've read. Everything is detailed and laid out like it's coming from a book. The descriptions paint a vivid picture making it easy to follow along, and your fetish scenes are highly attractive. The only complaint I could bring against it is less of a flaw and more of a personal thing. I like gentle giants. Playful is one thing, but I still like all parties involved to be willing and able throughout the whole thing. THIS story looks like it's going to be right up my alley, so I'm looking forward to what comes next.

As someone who writes stories on this site I don't like to push things on other authors because I know that you have a set vision in mind for your story, and trying to mess with that would only detract. I can't write your own story better than you, so don't feel like you have to include anything I bring up. But I like in depth characters to balance out the fetish material. And these characters raise some questions in my mind. Blake and Katherine seem like they could be the kind of couple who could have anyone they want for a toy, even without shrinking powers. What's their history with Lucas? Why are they such good friends with him when normally they'd seem like the kind of people far out of his league? I love it when characters like Blake and Katherine aren't superficial and are friends with quality people rather than shallow people, but I'd like to know why he's so close with them. How much do they really care about him? Was Katherine genuine when she said that Lucas is like family to them? Was she just manipulating him? Would they be at all concerned if his life was ever put in jeprody?

I only ask these questions because I like to put myself in the main character's POV and if I were Lucas I'd want to make sure beyond all doubt that the people whose hands I'm putting my life into genuinely care about me.

Anyway I'll try to keep the comments shorter in the future. I just like high quality stories that are both really hot, and make me think about things. When I start thinking I can end up rambling. Keep up the good work and I'll keep my eyes out for more chapters.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, considering I'm the one who kept imploring you to write more. You'd think I'd be more on top of things like this. 

Anyway those chapters gave me exactly what I was looking for. Some nice and sexy playing around with the tiny one, and Kat reveling in her power. And I like the direction you're eventually going to take it in, with Kat outgrowing Blake and being the most powerful of the two. I hope she doesn't have the same kind of god-complex Heather had in GP. I enjoy it when giantesses enjoy their power, and get turned on by it, but I stop enjoying it when they stop seeing the tinies as people. That's where the gentle giantess lover in me takes over.

Once again I'm not going to tell you how to write your story. Only you can write it as best as it possibly could be, so I won't even try. But I would like to mention something from GP that I absolutely loved that you could possibly include in this story, or maybe not. It's all up to you. My favorite chapter in GP was the one where Ben had a dream that Heather and Jason were mega giants and had sex while using tiny people for pleasure. I love the descriptions in that chapter. Very well done, and hot. If you're ever debating with yourself what kind of fetish material should be included at certain parts as you're writing this, maybe that could be one of them. I'd like to read something like that again.

I finished catching myself up on this. I know I haven't commented yet, so I'll be changing that as this story updates more often. For now I just want to say you have an incredibly detailed and well developed writing style. Your descriptions are spot on and paint a vivid picutre of everything that's happening. I especially love the characters, and how likeably they are. I've always loved character development, even and especially in fetish stories. I'm more invested in the actual kinks when I know and like the characters. 

Your story is a slow paced one, which I can't fault you for. It's whats allowed me to like the characters in the first place. But I am itching to see what action will come of this later. Feet action has been teased, which I'm eager for. And I'm very interested in the slave tag. Now let me be clear, I love Jessie's personality, and I don't want to see her lose that. However, that's what makes her the kind of character I want to see be served by others. The gentle and graceful Queen. Someone who smiles down on her tiny subjects as they kiss her feet and pats them on the head and tells them good job. I don't know if that's what you have planned for her and her dad, but you have it set up perfectly for that outcome.

But in the end it's your story, and you need to write it to be the way that you want it to be. I know there's a few stories of mine I wish I could go back and redo, but they are what they are, and I've only learned from it. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see what becomes of Jessie and her dad by the end of this.

It's been a busy week, so I haven't written a comment in a few chapters. Just wanted to change that. The previous chapter makes sense, both narratively and practically, in being a short summary chapter. I'm sure you had a full day on your hands, but you managed to put something out all the same, which is impressive. 

I've been very excited with the direction you've taken the story in. Max and Jenna both becoming giants and outgrowing the amazon tag that we thought they'd be confined to. It's opened up some new possibilities, and some new scenarios that take place outside of a dream. I'm now all the more eager to see Max after she reaches the end of the month. The load is going to be immense, and I can only imagine how much she'd grow. 

I don't know what you've got planned for the last few chapters (assuming this story ends with NNN) and I love it. The only thing I know for sure is that it's going to involve sex and a lot of it. Max and Ben have both been starved for the entire month, so they're both going to want to go at it. Only thing is, what are they going to do with Max being so huge? Hope they figure something satisfying out