See what happens when a giantess bully sets her sights on the one student who isn't afraid of her.
At first I thought that the soldiers may have only recognized Ben's last name because they had heard rumors of his defiance towards Amy. But now, after getting a glimpse at his father, I wouldn't be surprised if it's because Daniel has a military background.
Sounds like Ben may have been trying to live up to his father's reputation for most of the story. Never backing down and doing his best to defend others.
Good stuff. It'll be interesting to see how they plan to convince the entire town to give her another chance.
It seems I have perfect timing. The next chapter is out now
Now all we need is for the real Godzilla to show up and have Amy beat the tar out of him. That'd show her worth to the community. :D
It sounds like she's in control of herself in the dream, and not simply observing. So it's interesting that she'd take such pleasure in crushing people, but once she awakenes, she's immediately faced with regret. Perhaps she's conflicted. Part of her craves dominance, while she also desires to be treated like a normal human being.
In any case... I'm interested to see what type of plan the guys will come up with to help her.
Just as she's starting to open up...the military has to show up.
I wonder if she's allowed visitors besides her parents when she's under house arrest. That's assuming Ben would want to come back, though, he'd be crazy not to.
Then again, the guys could do her a solid and claim that they came with her of their own free will.
Parkour eh? I think some MMA training could've had more of an effect against bullies, but I geuss no matter the skills, Amy still has the biggest advantage.
Amy's turning out to be quite the goddess. Can't wait to see what else she has planned.
I thought it would make for a more interesting chase rather than run away whenever she puts her foot down.
Yes, Darian I understood what you meant. I was just saying that I'm surprised his friends didn't outright assume that he'd be traumitized by the event, and decide it would be best for him to go home. She didn't say that she wouldn't hurt him, and she went as far to say that she hadn't swallowed him...yet.
She drenched him in orange juice after threatening to drop him from about 200ft, which scared him enough that he could barely stand and vomitted upon reaching the nurses office. My thoughts are that the threat of being swallowed(or possibly chewed) would be an even more horrifying experience.
All I'm trying to say is that it felt to me that Johnny and Mark seemed to be less understanding of his experience then they could of been. There was a possibility that he could've died...especially if she had spit him out from her full height.
I've gotta throw in some criticism with the praise, or I wouldn't be doing my duty as a thinking reader. Not trying to annoy anyone. Just had to get my thoughts out there.
I'm perfectly fine with criticism. I'm just happy that you're reading it. I love to write and I love gts and the fact that so many people are enjoying it is amazing. So you don't have to justify anything, they're your thoughts. If anything I'm grateful for guys like you reading my stuff.
Damn that was sexy! Mouth play is one of my favorite aspects of gts. So glad you included that!
Two chapters in one day?! Is it the constant 5 star ratings? Because I'm willing to keep 'em coming if that's what it takes, and I'd emplore my fellow readers and reviewers to do the same.
Stabbing Amy with a pen? Hilarious! His friends seemed concerned for his safety, but they still advised him to do it, which strikes me as strange. And then after his terrifying(for him of course...I would've loved it) ordeal, they say he can spend the rest of the day at school in his gym clothes. With friends like these...
And I'm not into vore either, but mouth play is a completely different idea if it's done correctly, which this totally was!
Ok, I'll stop now. I need sleeeep.
Hey if it were my friend I'd advise the same thing. And yeah they tell him to wear his gym clothes. His normal clothes are saliva-ish, and its not like they have a spare change of clothes on them. The options are either gym clothes or his saliva clothes. And they took him to the nurse so he's not walking around the school in gym clothes.
Damnit Nostory! Completely ruined it for me! Even though I had the same assumption, but seeing it written makes continuing the story seem pointless.
And yeah...I'm totally joking. To be honest, torture seems highly unlikely. But your probably thinking that he'll just be put in some very uncomfortable situations. Judging by the fact that there is a feet tag in the categories, and that Amy massaged her feet in the last capter, Ben is going to be spending a lot of time with her feet whether he likes it or not. Something tells me he's attracted to feet, so that won't be an issue.
He'll show her that he can be brave around her, and that he finds her incredibly beautiful. She's already said that she finds him handsome, and his defiance makes her feel normal. The coming chapters will reveal more of their attraction to one another.
Man...I spend too much time thinking things through. I've gotta learn to just relax and let the story surprise me. Then again, my predictions could be uprooted at a any time. Amy could take one look at Ben and go on a stomping spree at school tomorrow resulting in lethal force being taken by the military. Probable? Hell no...but anything can happen.
Wow. This chapter is excellent...and that was my thought before he even fell asleep. I'm rally liking Ben's character, and his bravery. It feels all too real.
His relationship with his mother and sister is quite touching as well, and the fact that he didn't tell them right away what happened for the sake of sympathy or possibly protection shows even more about him.
As for the dream. His arousal is warranted because of her size, beauty, and power. But I hope it's not because she crushed him so easily. That should be the focus of his fear.
Amy's got a plan, eh? So the kidnapping might not be for a while, or not at all for that matter. This has to be public. And while she could just grab him in front of all the students and say: "He's coming with me, and you won't even recognize him when I bring him back." It feels like she's got something a bit more extravagent in store. Then again...that could totally work.
Anyways, this was my favorite chapter by far. Keep up the fantastic work. I'm eager to see more.
Uh...wow. Damn. Sorry it's just that when I joined this site like a week ago I didn't think anybody would enjoy my writing so much. I came just to get some ideas out of my head. The fact that you enjoy this so much really means a lot. Thank you. I'll try my hardest not to disappoint.
Sounds like Ben is going to regret his actions earlier. On second thought, nevermind. Getting her attention most likely the best thing that could ever happen to him.
@Nostory Yeah...I really don't think that she's shy. I didn't before, because of how she dropped that kid into her cleavage, but now it's even more apparent. I would however say that she's most likely lonely, and dominating her classmates by making them serve her makes her feel better about herself. That's just a theory though. She could also just be incredibly confident and used to getting what she wants.
I'm eager to see how this develops. It's possible that Ben could become her friend, and make her think about treating her classmates better, or she'll just follow through with her own thoughts, and he'll become her new toy.
I wonder if her parents are rich, and paid for the construction of the school. Otherwise it's hard to make it seem 'believable'...but then again, I suppose that fiction doesn't always have to be.
I like the idea though. She's definitely not shy, so it seems like the fun is just starting.
Very cool.
I know what you mean, I like it when fantasy stories of any kind are thorough. It leaves less room for questions which makes it easier to enjoy.
Speaking of which thank you for enjoying mine.
Ahh, I see. I assumed they expected him to just change and continue on with his day, but this makes much more sense.
Finally...kidnapped. A lot more witnesses than I suspected though. I wonder how long she'll be able to hold on to them before the police get involved.
Also, I'm sorry to say that I noticed a fair amount of spelling errors, which don't annoy me in the slightest, as I could still read it fine. I just figured that if you wanted to avoid chrlorez's wrath, then you might want to check over the chapter again.
But yeah, this rocked. I assumed she would only have Ben to play this. This makes for much more fun.
Haha. When I first saw Darnell's name I thought: 'Huh. Sounds like an African American name'. And then the first words he spoke were: "Fuck yo mama!"
I'm a tad bit confused. You descibed Amber as 10ft tall, but when she reached Adam, she was 8ft.
And Manhattan...small? I'll have to take your word for it, but I thought that city housed over 1.5 million people.
Oh wait...this was just for fun, right? Why the hell am I criticizing? Dick move on my part. Keep it going!
That Amber thing was cuz I sorta rushed to the chapter. This was done with zero proofreading.
And about Manhattan... it is nothing compared to Miami.
From Russia with Love??...that's erm...original.
Ok, so Darnell seems to be not only an arrogant jackass, but he also has no respect for women. He'll be remembering this night for a very long time. I hope the manager is a 100ft Giantess, because we haven't seen many yet!
And even if she isn't, we still have Tyler's experiences to look forward to.
So what your saying is...Tyler is only 4'6''? And with all of his other unlikeable qualities I can understand his lack of popularity with the ladies.
Adam seems like the only good apple in the bunch. Speaking of which... I'm hoping to see how things are going back at his apartment with Katherine.
Executions carried out under every state official including the President?! See, this is why I don't go to strip clubs. Ok, well that's not actually the reason, but it gives me another excuse to stay away. :P
What happened to Anna's father?! And what did she do to those responsible? Perhaps these questions will be answered later...
Soo...is Katherine like...Adam's new girlfriend? A birthday gift turned into a full blown relationship? I wonder what he'll think once he's realized that his friends never left the club... Sure, they were dicks, but weren't they still his best friends?
One handed...bahahaha
You will see that this is not the case. Later stories with Capoza will seem to contradict.
An anthology of shorts detailing the life of a mixed-size family.
Well, this probably wasn't the best of your stories to start with, given my lack of knowledge on the Omega Universe. I'll read Tough Love next, which should give me a better idea of the size roles.
I immediately hated Elena. You don't abandon your child because he inconveneinces you. She showed regret, but that appeared to be more about losing Howard.
Having read the second chapter, it's good to see that Howard and Corey have a much better life. If Elena had kept them, then it probably would've been more out of obligation than love, and she would've grown to resent them.
Looking forward to more!
[Reviews - 3] A common textbook outlining the symptoms, struggle, and history of minature peoples.
A prologue to upcoming stories I intend to write set in this world.
While I'll admit that all of the large paragraphs seemed daunting at the beginning... This was definitely worth reading!
It's an awesome idea you have here. The 'durability' factor is highly encouraging, because I'm mainly attracted to the gentle side of this fetish as well.
Now that we've learned how these people started shrinking, and how easy it is to aquire one, I'm excited to see what stories you have planned.
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. It shouldnt be terribly long before my next work is released, and will probably involve Ms. Liu as mentioned in this story. In fact, I intend to create a fairly in-depth world for my characters. Hope you enjoy what I have in store!
Catie is going to be the first mini to ever be sold legally in the United States! She isn't too excited about it but her step-mother who lead the charge to classify miniature peoples as objects sure is! Now Catie has to spend 24 hours with the woman who ruined her life before she gets sold to the highest bidder. Can Catie adapt to her new life?
Can't really remember what I had said in the other review...
Other than:
Mouth play = Awesome
and
New Format = Perfect
Excellent grammar and I also didn't notice any spelling errors. Although, in a chapter that hot, I seldom look for such things.
Marissa's having her 18th birthday party, and she's inviting her closest friends over for a sleepover. It's bound to be a good time when one offers to bring a minigirl over, and the night only gets better when her best friend Caitlyn finds out what it's like to be a pet.
Two chapters at once? Hot Damn!
It seems that Caitlyn's friends have no reservations when it comes to her modesty. Even Melinda was quite...uhh...friendly. The aphrodiasiac is a really nice touch as well.
It also sounds like you're planning to do a story on the Indian and Fillipino girls as well. I'd also be interested in reading that.
Although, I'm surprised that they haven't been bought already! Their descriptions as well as their behaviour makes them sound incredibly desirable. It'd almost be a shame to seperate them. ;)
Marissa appeared to be annoyed at first when she learned of what Caitlyn was forced to do, but after learning that she enjoyed it, I'm sure that she'll have less doubts when it comes to 'playing' with her later. Lastly, I hope that Marissa buys some powder on her way out, or at least borrows some from Carol. That would definitely speed up Caitlyn's acceptance.
Parent's can make a formal request to reclaim any children that have fallen into the possession of a stranger, but the process is long, and relationships between parents and their shrunken children are infamous for their instability.
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Excellent. That was my only real concern. Even if the process takes a while, at least the parents still have the option.
Though I can see how most parents would find it difficult to support their child for the rest of their life, I still assume that there would be some who would be willing to try.
The fact that they can reclaim their children just makes it seem fair and more 'believable' in my eyes...even if it doesn't need to be, considering it's fiction.
Thanks for taking the time to respond and clear up my doubts. I know you're planning for most(if not all) of these stories to be gentle, so I assume that most tinies will ultimately accept(and hopefully enjoy) their new lifestyle as Mimi has.