Penname: Amateur Wordsmith [Contact] Real name: Jared
Member Since: February 09 2013
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Summary:

Doug finds himself in a position to live his fantasy.  Stephanie, his girlfriend, realizes that Doug's fantasy is not as wierd as he described it.  In fact, she wants to make his fantasy hers.


Categories: Humiliation, Adult 30-39, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, BBW, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5919 Read Count: 13319
[Report This] Published: April 02 2013 Updated: April 02 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Stolen Fantasies

*strolls casually in* oh hey dudemanguy what are you lookin at? whats that you say another deelann story I guess I better read it as well.

 

You have done it again deelann you have perfectly rendered macrophilia in a way that is not only believable but also extremely interesting.

that being said I felt as though the story needed more gritty details, but otherwise the story is amazing.

(plz don't hate me for criticizing)

 

 



Author's Response:

No hating here brother!  Perhaps you could elaborate on the missing details...

Dee

Summary:

When most of the student body and faculty of Hayes High School are inexplicably shrunk, what will happen to them?

Chelsea Dewinter, finding herself still fully sized, knows the answer.

It's her.



Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30637 Read Count: 264826
[Report This] Published: April 05 2013 Updated: May 27 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Excellent! simply excellent. this is an incredibly well-written story. I don't know if its the characters or your writing style but something about this is really appealing.

Please continue

Summary:

A shrunken girl has become useless now that her owner has found a boyfriend, but maybe there is one more use for her...

WARNING: Contains bodily violence and sexual violence. Its X-rated for a reason!


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Humiliation, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Danza Macabra Series of Short Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2541 Read Count: 30417
[Report This] Published: April 07 2013 Updated: April 07 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: New uses for old toys

This is so brutal...and yet I like it for some reason. which is strange because I don't normally go for this kind of thing.

Anyways I think that you should expand on this story maybe make a chapter where the fish her out of the bin and use her again (sry perverted part of my mind speaking here).

 



Author's Response:

Heya, thanks for rating/reviewing :)  Glad you enjoyed it!

 

I think if i was going to continue this i would most likely use a different tiny, the idea of the conclusion of this was to emphasise how truly worthless the SW had become to her former lover.

Summary:

Two women have inequally unpleasant experiences in a customer service interaction.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4180 Read Count: 6074
[Report This] Published: April 10 2013 Updated: April 10 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You two should really make storys together more often.

Flushed by Casanova Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

This story is about half feet, half toilet. Really aggressively written toilet. After a very obvious point, it becomes incredibly toilet-heavy, so do not proceed if that isn't your thing. You've been warned.

Other notes: this story has almost no plot, but was nonetheless directly inspired by a collage made by the excellent darty. You can find the collage in question here: http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/download/file.php?id=302807&mode=view

And here's a link to his full thread: http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=101748

One last thing: I did not bother to proofread this piece... I apologize for any typos, weak language, etc.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Toilet, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4212 Read Count: 15006
[Report This] Published: April 12 2013 Updated: April 12 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Cas, I thought I'd stop by and leave you a quick little review.

 I'd like to say great story, you have very nature dialogue skills. Every snippet of conversation between the two girls was highly engaging. It was also quite natural sounding, not disconjointed like so many other works.

The only criticism I can think of is that in my opinion you didn't go to far into detail when it comes to the other senses. You have a lot of visual and olfactory descriptions, but not many tactile and auditory descriptions. again though, thats just my opinion.

Once again, great read. I liked how they just flushed him away like he was nothing, it really brought the whole 'arrogant cheerleader' persona to life.



Author's Response:

Interesting thought about the other sensations. I'll definitely try to be more expansive with my descriptions, which of course every writer can improve on.

And yeah, those cheerleaders are total bitches. Thanks for the review!

Perfect Sister by GMD Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

An 18 year old girl inevitably finds herself shrunk and in the hands of her torturous and cruel younger 15 year old sister. But when she's given the chance to pay back each and every wrong, what could possibly happen?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8800 Read Count: 82013
[Report This] Published: April 24 2013 Updated: June 08 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very good, and the sister on sister dynamic you have going is suprisingly erotic



Author's Response:

Hey, here it is! Thanks for the review and I'm glad you actually enjoy it, seems like many people do (Go Figure). I'll give you a review that's just as positive!

 

Hunger by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A girl develops an overwhelming craving.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2399 Read Count: 5249
[Report This] Published: May 07 2013 Updated: May 07 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent as per usual. Also have you considered making a longer chapter based story because I think you could really pull it off.



Author's Response:

Yeah that's kind of the goal with every series I start... it doesn't always work out as planned >.>

THAT SAID I'm trying to make Woodsmeet happen! And by trying I mean feeling terrible about myself until I make progress on it.

Is Story by Firestone Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Tiny man steal, politburo find. Read to find out how end.


Categories: Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 953 Read Count: 3563
[Report This] Published: May 18 2013 Updated: May 18 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This kinda reminds me of eastern Europe for some reason

My Best Friend? by GMD Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Jack's best friend calls him over for a day. He stays alot longer than that. She's got a secret to show him, one that he'll surely NEVER forget.


Categories: Humiliation, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Gentle, Insertion, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18132 Read Count: 176536
[Report This] Published: May 19 2013 Updated: February 15 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I know I'm a little behind, but thats ok... right?

anyways, I have to give you props for the in-sock content. This line in particular made my day...

"To anyone else, it would seem like Tricia was smushing a bug forcefully. No, she was just stepping on her tiny boyfriend."

This line was clever. before this line it was all from Jack's perspective, but this line gave the reader two perspectives to create a mental picture from. 

Well done. Look foward to reading more.

 

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love this. Jack is busy pioneering his new girlfriends boobs, meanwhile all the normal people on facebook are giving him props for it.

...If only they knew lol.

 



Author's Response:

I do wonder how that would go over...

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm really loving Jack's snarky commentary, and Tricia's bubbly yet slightly standoff-ish reactions. :D



Author's Response:

There's definitely more of all that coming!

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have been missing out on this story. I'm glad to see i'm not to late.

anyways good job GMD Tricia's turning out to be an excellent giantess. I guess I'm going to have to read on and find out what happens next



Author's Response:

You got lucky with your timing! Next chapter actual shit happens. Good shit.(?)

Summary:

 

This is a fictional story based on historical events, it is being done for fun. It will have less smut then most stories, and rely on its action and storytelling to carry it, hopefully this will not backfire on me.

The year is 1945, in a last ditch effort to thwart the Americans, a final defensive naval battle off the Okinawa's is about to commence. This is the story of those five thousand men aboard ten Japanese warships. Only this time the ships mysteriously sailed through a rift in space. They have now been stranded on another planet. This planet has giant people, unknown dangers, and other wonderful things the sailors can't even imagine. Mix in some Japanese legends and lore; and then add a completely different culture made up mostly of female giants, can they possibly hope to survive in this new world?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. Historical characters and events are a work of fiction and do not represent correct history, duh. Japanese legends and myths are roughly used and have been changed to suit the story, no insult intended.

 


Categories: Gentle, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Giant, Unaware, Vore, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31129 Read Count: 62483
[Report This] Published: May 21 2013 Updated: April 04 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Depart

Hey ErikAFreak I just started reading this story and needless to say I am impressed.

Judging from your replys to everyones comments you seem to have a good understanding of physics. Are you formally educated in the subject or is your insight due to the reaserch you mentioned in chat?

Anyways I hope to read more when I have time.



Author's Response:

Hey I already answered your question in Giantess chat. Since other's might be curious I'll also answer you here.

First off thank you for the review. My understanding of physics is mostly related to research, but it also helps I studied the higher math's and sciences while in college. I just went the IT Computer Tech editor/writer route in college. My friend is at a university becoming a particle physicist, so there's that.

I'll try to review your Rise of the Nephilim when I get the chance to fully read and take it in.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Tree Burning Men

Its been a while since this was updated, anyways welcome back EricA.

I also look foward to reading that update someday since as of right now I am only on this chapter.

As for my thoughts on this chapter...

In terms of fantasy I have no interest in male giants, but from a literary perspective I found the attack on the village to be quite well written.

I thought the pace of the attack was arguable the best part. It was very sudden and brutal as one would expect from a fight between primatives.

Keep up the good work EricAfreak.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Amateur. Make sure you catch up to the latest chapter soon. I don't care much for male giants either, so turning them into the bad guys probably worked out really well for me in this regard. I'm glad you liked it so far, make sure you save some time for your own writing as well.

Summary:

Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?


Categories: Crush, Adventure, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59434 Read Count: 208993
[Report This] Published: May 21 2013 Updated: June 17 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As requested I will review this story, Mr. Bing

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is shaping up to be a good story man. I thought Amy was going to be the main giantess, then BAM she got shrunk as well. You pulled the ol' "Honey I shrunk the kids" trick.

Seeing that carycomic is commenting on this, I have the feeling that this will be a gentle story.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Any teenager wearing a death metal T-shirt in a giantess story is basically saying "I'm a sociopathic teenager, but you'll never know that until its too late"

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"You and all your little friends are the size of insects, and I’m much, MUCH bigger than you. Therefore, I can do whatever I want with you."

Dat logic. :)

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Dingbing you have quite the talant for eliminating potential plotholes.



Author's Response:

Oh, man! Just noticed I had like 5 new reviews, haha! It's good to see you're finally reading this story, and I'm definitely glad to hear you're enjoying it. I look forward to continuing to hear your thoughts as you get deeper into it!

Fairy Terror by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

A fairy is captured by a deranged girl and shown the crueler side of humanity.

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2913 Read Count: 56576
[Report This] Published: May 29 2013 Updated: June 13 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2013 Title: Fairy Terror

I honestly have to commend you for rendering the damaged human mind in such a realistic fasion. You took the high route here and instead of making her a killer out of plot convenience, you took the time to develop her psychologically.

 “I didn’t… murderanybody…” Caitlin growled unsteadily.  “She… betrayed me.”

 “I’d hear my parents screaming at each other in the other room and she’d hug my thumb and tell me it would be okay as long as she was there.  And… one day… my dad came home… drunk,”

Like many psychopaths and deranged individuals her insanity was caused from childhood trama.

... Well played Jacksmith well played.

 



Author's Response: Thanks. I always do my best to make my characters believable so the story is easier to get into. Well... as believable as a murderous fairy-hunting teen can be, anyway. Since a major theme of the story is the idea of the abrupt loss of innocence, it seemed fitting to give Caitlin a rough childhood origin. I appreciate the review/rating!