A girl develops an overwhelming craving.
Excellent as per usual. Also have you considered making a longer chapter based story because I think you could really pull it off.
Yeah that's kind of the goal with every series I start... it doesn't always work out as planned >.>
THAT SAID I'm trying to make Woodsmeet happen! And by trying I mean feeling terrible about myself until I make progress on it.
Tiny man steal, politburo find. Read to find out how end.
This kinda reminds me of eastern Europe for some reason
Jack's best friend calls him over for a day. He stays alot longer than that. She's got a secret to show him, one that he'll surely NEVER forget.
I know I'm a little behind, but thats ok... right?
anyways, I have to give you props for the in-sock content. This line in particular made my day...
"To anyone else, it would seem like Tricia was smushing a bug forcefully. No, she was just stepping on her tiny boyfriend."
This line was clever. before this line it was all from Jack's perspective, but this line gave the reader two perspectives to create a mental picture from.
Well done. Look foward to reading more.
Love this. Jack is busy pioneering his new girlfriends boobs, meanwhile all the normal people on facebook are giving him props for it.
...If only they knew lol.
I do wonder how that would go over...
I'm really loving Jack's snarky commentary, and Tricia's bubbly yet slightly standoff-ish reactions. :D
There's definitely more of all that coming!
I have been missing out on this story. I'm glad to see i'm not to late.
anyways good job GMD Tricia's turning out to be an excellent giantess. I guess I'm going to have to read on and find out what happens next
You got lucky with your timing! Next chapter actual shit happens. Good shit.(?)
This is a fictional story based on historical events, it is being done for fun. It will have less smut then most stories, and rely on its action and storytelling to carry it, hopefully this will not backfire on me.
The year is 1945, in a last ditch effort to thwart the Americans, a final defensive naval battle off the Okinawa's is about to commence. This is the story of those five thousand men aboard ten Japanese warships. Only this time the ships mysteriously sailed through a rift in space. They have now been stranded on another planet. This planet has giant people, unknown dangers, and other wonderful things the sailors can't even imagine. Mix in some Japanese legends and lore; and then add a completely different culture made up mostly of female giants, can they possibly hope to survive in this new world?
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. Historical characters and events are a work of fiction and do not represent correct history, duh. Japanese legends and myths are roughly used and have been changed to suit the story, no insult intended.
Hey ErikAFreak I just started reading this story and needless to say I am impressed.
Judging from your replys to everyones comments you seem to have a good understanding of physics. Are you formally educated in the subject or is your insight due to the reaserch you mentioned in chat?
Anyways I hope to read more when I have time.
Hey I already answered your question in Giantess chat. Since other's might be curious I'll also answer you here.
First off thank you for the review. My understanding of physics is mostly related to research, but it also helps I studied the higher math's and sciences while in college. I just went the IT Computer Tech editor/writer route in college. My friend is at a university becoming a particle physicist, so there's that.
I'll try to review your Rise of the Nephilim when I get the chance to fully read and take it in.
Its been a while since this was updated, anyways welcome back EricA.
I also look foward to reading that update someday since as of right now I am only on this chapter.
As for my thoughts on this chapter...
In terms of fantasy I have no interest in male giants, but from a literary perspective I found the attack on the village to be quite well written.
I thought the pace of the attack was arguable the best part. It was very sudden and brutal as one would expect from a fight between primatives.
Keep up the good work EricAfreak.
Thanks a lot Amateur. Make sure you catch up to the latest chapter soon. I don't care much for male giants either, so turning them into the bad guys probably worked out really well for me in this regard. I'm glad you liked it so far, make sure you save some time for your own writing as well.
Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?
As requested I will review this story, Mr. Bing
This is shaping up to be a good story man. I thought Amy was going to be the main giantess, then BAM she got shrunk as well. You pulled the ol' "Honey I shrunk the kids" trick.
Seeing that carycomic is commenting on this, I have the feeling that this will be a gentle story.
Any teenager wearing a death metal T-shirt in a giantess story is basically saying "I'm a sociopathic teenager, but you'll never know that until its too late"
"You and all your little friends are the size of insects, and I’m much, MUCH bigger than you. Therefore, I can do whatever I want with you."
Dat logic. :)
Dingbing you have quite the talant for eliminating potential plotholes.
Oh, man! Just noticed I had like 5 new reviews, haha! It's good to see you're finally reading this story, and I'm definitely glad to hear you're enjoying it. I look forward to continuing to hear your thoughts as you get deeper into it!
A fairy is captured by a deranged girl and shown the crueler side of humanity.
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Honestly the fairies deserve torture.
“They’re vile creatures. And ugly. Disgusting.”
“They lack the breeding of we noble fairies,”
“Reaping resources from the land for their own benefit,”
Let the slaughter commence!
Had to chuckle at this. Everybody but Mivera is kind of an asshole, right? Thanks for reading/reviewing.
I honestly have to commend you for rendering the damaged human mind in such a realistic fasion. You took the high route here and instead of making her a killer out of plot convenience, you took the time to develop her psychologically.
“I didn’t… murder… anybody…” Caitlin growled unsteadily. “She… betrayed me.”
“I’d hear my parents screaming at each other in the other room and she’d hug my thumb and tell me it would be okay as long as she was there. And… one day… my dad came home… drunk,”
Like many psychopaths and deranged individuals her insanity was caused from childhood trama.
... Well played Jacksmith well played.
Nina is more cunning than a game of thrones character. such scheming from her.
Also I really like this chapter. Ann finally gets her break.
My prediction for the story is as follows...
1)Nina is trying to shrink everyone
2) If Ann wins then she'll keep Nina as a foot toy as punishment.
It would be bad form for me to tell you what happens next. All I can say is, "We'll see." :)
Dee
The plot thickens? hopefully?
Another good chapter from you deelann. you should be more active on this website, we need fun loving writers like you.
I believe there are about 5 more chapters according to my outline so yes, there is room for the plot to thicken. :) I have a lot of outlines to write on and sequels to be written because of the nice readers on this site requested them. So I have the work to keep myself more active and would love to do so, but circumstances keep me away. I'm hoping soon that I'll be able to.
Dee
And about this chapter...
I found the dialogue to description ratio to be reasonable given the length of the chapter.
I also enjoyed the descriptions that included Ann's thoughts on her situation as it was happening in the story. It made the gts content significantly more enjoyable.
As for the story. I look foward to seeing how you will escalate this one. Will Ann get her revenge? Will Nina figure out how to shrink more people? Will the Heralds turn on each other?
I look foward to finding out. :)
P.S we try to host a writers meeting every friday in the Egiantess.com chatroom at around 9:00PM eastern time. We don't always meet up, but you should peek in every once and a while just to see. I for one woud appreciate your company.
Hows come I knew that you'd say something about the chapter length? :) It's over 1,300 words which meets my quota.
It seems you've put some thought on the outcome. That makes me feel good that you're interested enough to do that.
As for the meetings...I need to wait until things cool down for me and then I'll consider visiting.
Dee
Ann is getting the beating of a lifetime and I can't wait to see what Nina has in store for her.
In my opinion this story needs a semi-gentle gts who gives Ann occasional relief by being slightly less cruel than the others.
This would give you a chance to develop Ann's character a bit more by focusing more on a relationship between two characters rather than just sex.
Just an idea though, and either way I'm still looking out for this story.
Keep up the good work
Great minds think alike! Gotchya covered AW! It's coming up in the next chapter (which I'm almost done with). Ooops! I gave something away! I hope I didn't ruin it for you. :)
Since these chapters are 3 to 4 times longer than I want them to be, I can't post chapters and teasers on schedule. I've written about 9,000 words in 5 days. That's more than the average professional novelist and I still can't keep up. This is why I don't like writing long stories. No matter how hard I work, I can't keep up wth schedule. But at the sametime, the story is leading me to write long chapters. In order to obey my sadistic mind's bidding, I must continue as planned.
My brain is mush from me trying to be creative and I'm starting to get burned out from all of this writing. But the story compels me to keep writing. I'm hoping to have the next chapter done by the end of today but it won't have a teaser at first.
Sorry for my complaining. I guess I needed a fellow writer to vent to and empathize with me.
Dee
Deelann! its been a while man, what have you been up to?
I've been going through some life-changing events. Between that and the holidays, I haven't been able to write like I'd hope.
Dee