Penname: grimehead [Contact] Real name:
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Summary: Nobody ever really thought Haley was a mean girl.
Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4381 Read Count: 149124
[Report This] Published: September 25 2009 Updated: November 03 2012
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, what's up, Survivor? I'm that guy who always compliments you on /d/(and always asks about your wife since you brought up that scenario with the milkshake). I really like the story so far. Hope more smells and good dialogue is on the way with maybe some butt stuff too. I heard you saying you'd write more if you had the time off from work and while I, myself, am below the poverty line I'd be willing to send a few dollars your way as payment for what you've already written if you'd let me.

Summary:

 After having little success with the ladies, a young college student is shrunken by his attractive but mature boss, who is looking for a serious relationship to fill a void in her life that she desperately needs filled….


Categories: Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23222 Read Count: 707437
[Report This] Published: March 14 2011 Updated: March 21 2011
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The dialogue you use between these characters is really well done for an erotica because you get both Diane's teasing during the erotic parts as well as serious discussion concerning their relationship, especially in later chapters. I would encourage you to write more fiction with these qualities or even a sequel to this story because it is very endearing.

Summary:

Meet Becky and Dan.  Formerly boyfriend/girlfriend, both are beginning to accept their new roles in what seems to be a pet/master relationship after Dan mysteriously shrinks to just under an inch. Becky's opinion of the situation is unusual...and her interest in what she calls "Scent Reprogramming" is alarming!  To make matters worse,Becky's life and opportunities begin to change and she is eventually forced to seek help from a friend of hers...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45270 Read Count: 285420
[Report This] Published: September 17 2012 Updated: February 11 2017
Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: February 16 2013 Title: Chapter 9: DEAR DIARY

The dialogue at the end of this chapter was the best part since the dream sequence in chapter 3. I love the selfish horny, dominant character when her goal isn't to murder the smaller party. I'd like to read more of the diary writings if that's what you want to do because I think this chapter was pretty good. I just really want this story to advance and I want to see what Brittany is going to be like.

Sweat & Tears by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Muscle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14086 Read Count: 124697
[Report This] Published: September 18 2012 Updated: October 23 2012
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

These characters are really interesting and I'd love more backstory on them if you have any planned. I hope you update this story soon because I'm really enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I wanted to make an addendum to my previous review to say that how you've crafted Alex's character into being a possessive lover to the point of being dominant is really well done. I also like how you've written from Joe's perspective that he's constantly uneasy with Alex's scent around but then we see him becoming attracted to it more and more. I imagine it makes this story immersive even for someone who doesn't already have olfactophilia.

Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 106754
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: December 04 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark

I'm sorry to hear that this story isn't getting as much positive comments as you would like because this is my favorite story you've writtern outside of the "A Little Blackmail" series and I was hoping for it to be quite lengthy. I really like the dialog of chapter 4 and I wish you would write like that more often.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing. part of the desire to move onward sooner rather than later for this story is just the iffy subject matter considering the ages of the characters that some readers have, but soon i'll bring it back several years later on in the timeline to avoid controversy, so to speak. i'm not entirely sure what it is you mean by "like that" of the dialogue in chapter 4

Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: December 05 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Alone in the Dark

I don't see exactly what you mean concerning the ages of the characters with this story. I understand that some people are opponent to an erotica where the characters are 13 and 18 but the first 2 stories in the Blackmail series have Carly at 14 and Jack at 17 as you know (of course). Besides while I'm not sure if there are rules on this website against this but if there are not it's your story so I feel you should write what you want to write about. If that means erotic stuff in this story's setting then I would support you.



Author's Response:

i certainly appreciate your support and the review. in reality, from the beginning i had no plans to include explicit sexual content in the story; i think that people were more off-put by the fact that there was foot interaction in a story on a site that often caters to foot fetishists, making it at least somewhat sexual in nature. the age thing hadn't much occurred to me until recently, and it's something i'm going to be reconsidering in future installments of stories

Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 358850
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

This story is really interesting so far, I especially like all of Mia's teasing and the scene with the gummy bear being deposited in her panties.

 

Your English is pretty good and your writing is so far a lot better than a lot of stories I've read on this site.

 

I look forward to reading more of this and hope there are a lot of micro scenes!

Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 12 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Goodbye

I'm really enjoying Mia's character. A little sister who is a dominant tease but at the same time loving and caring. The paragraph where she explains her swimsuit was really arousing. I look forward to a lot more teasing, loving, and erotic stuff from her character.

Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Little game

Best chapter so far. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

I agree with ShrunkenWolf and would love to see some butt stuff and farting. Please continue your story and many thanks for your writings.

Download/Guide by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A short story. You find yourself mysteriously tiny in the messy bedroom of a young shut-in girl, as she tries her best to turn you into the perfect worshipper. 


Categories: Humiliation, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3434 Read Count: 10773
[Report This] Published: January 07 2013 Updated: January 07 2013
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

While this is already pretty arousing I'm very interested to find out more about the plot concerning Emily and the download. Hope you write more soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks, that's the intent at least. 

I'm going to try to write more soon (grain of salt tho) but likely not a continuation of this just yet. I didn't intend for this to be plot heavy, it's a pretty nonsensical concept. But I appreciate your interest.

Deleted by Deelann Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:



Categories: Humiliation, Adult 30-39, BBW, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 14233
[Report This] Published: April 02 2013 Updated: April 02 2013
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Deleted

This story is the perfect balance between a woman using her size to dominate the smaller party and satisfy herself sexually without being too sadistic for my taste. That makes this story very arousing and enjoyable for me. That fact that the smaller person is male and her boyfriend is extra points in terms of my taste as well. Well written in terms of increasing intensity and domination. I wish she'd played with his penis more but maybe next time.



Author's Response:

Until your review, I never put much thought in a story being too sadistic; well...unless it had blood and gore.  But I already posted a bunch of stories without thinking about it so I guess it's too late to think about it now.  :)

Although I'm glad the story meets your taste, I hope that part of your generous review pertained to your appreciation of the workmanship involved (details, style, dialog, content, and etc.)

Dee

Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: April 04 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Deleted

To respond to your response to my first review, I did enjoy the detail, dialogue, content, and style of this story. I thought mentioning so would be implicit after stating why I enjoy your story. I wouldn't have finished reading this story nonetheless rated it if I hadn't found the writing enjoyable.

 

To go into further detail, the woman's dialogue in a story is usually the most important thing for me next to the scenario. I found the dialogue to be arousing because Stephanie not only gives orders to Doug but also responds to everything he says. I prefer that to when the larger party only gives orders and ignores any possible speech from the smaller party.

 

I like that you chose to express Stephanie's arousal through her inner monologues and how she was aroused with her power over her lover in a sexual setting rather than a murderous one. I also really liked when she said she'd give Doug an orgasm while holding him in her hand and how she noticed and enjoyed that he maintained an erection despite his struggling. I really love when the larger party forces the smaller party to orgasm against their will.

 

The ending portraying that Stephanie didn't really mean any harm and just thought it would be fun for the both of them while still savoring her dominance is what makes me give it a perfect score. I plan to read this story many more times and I hope to read more from you.

Summary:

Two girls take some pills with extraordinary effects!


Categories: Futanari, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Toilet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9917 Read Count: 29918
[Report This] Published: May 21 2013 Updated: May 21 2013
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not super into murder like I know you are but I like mega and farts. Hope you continue this.



Author's Response:

Mega and farts go together like farts and mega.

Summary:

When 18 year-old James wakes up to find himself less than an inch tall, can he survive the onslaught of the day as he finds himself at the unaware mercy of his family members?

 

First time writing anything like this, constructive criticism is much appreciated.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Couples , Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Giant, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4504 Read Count: 161031
[Report This] Published: June 04 2013 Updated: June 18 2013
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - cave explorer

You're going to end it soon? Aw man, we just got to the huge reeking socks of his sister. Give us more of that, his sister, and her panties.



Author's Response:

I plan on writing more stories, most of them will be based on one idea rather than jumping around to different ones. This one is more based on giant couples or more mainly, giant males, but I will have more stories more heavily based on vore or crush and thos other sorts of things, so if this doesn't end up tickling your fancy, I'll probably end up writing a separate story based around something else such as growing giants rather than shrinking people.

Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: June 19 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Day's End

Happy to see he didn't die in the end. I'm a fan of sister/mother stuff so please do more incest stories.

Family or Fantasy by GMD Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Can Lauren choose living out her greatest fantasy over her son?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5227 Read Count: 55773
[Report This] Published: July 10 2013 Updated: August 19 2013
Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: July 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Conflict of Interests

I'd prefer if Lauren went wild with her sexual instinct and dominated her son, especially if her son was aroused against his will and she teased him about it while still being rough with him.

 

I'd also enjoy if there were gentle chapters later on where she explains and somewhat regrets her actions and they maybe come to an agreement and play around some more.

 

I think the first scenario is more arousing but the second is also hot and makes the story more bearable for scared masochists like myself who dislike when the larger party is cruel all the way to the end of a story.

 

I'm interested in incest stories so whatever you go with I'll be reading it.



Author's Response:

I'll see about that. Thanks for your input it will be considered and probably used. Really, all this is influencing the ending and as the chapters go on, I'll make sure to have the story drop a hint on what the next chapter will be so all you readers can ponder what you would prefer. Also, it's really a majority vote so if I get more cruel recommendations than gentle I'll make the next one cruel. But also it IS possible to do what you said and maybe mix it up with regret and stuff. It all depends on how you want the scenario to play out.

Summary:

After perfecting his life's dream, an actual shrink ray, Jake can't wait to show it off! However he unknowingly makes the mistake of inviting his mother, sister, and aunt, and girlfriend to his private cabin in the hopes of surprising them with the device they all said could never be built. He arrives earlier than stated (hence the surprise),only to accidentally shrink himself. And his invited guests won't expect him for another week. Will he survive? 


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Adventure, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Watersports, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8834 Read Count: 109162
[Report This] Published: January 02 2014 Updated: May 22 2014
Reviewer: grimehead Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Please continue this. I want to read about a gross aunt raping her reluctant 1/8" nephew. Also continue Mom's Little Guinea Pig.

Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28671 Read Count: 84342
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: grimehead Signed
Date: January 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

This story seems pretty interesting and your the dialogue is far above average for this type of fiction. Also older brothers held captive by and reluctantly attracted to their bratty younger sisters is one of my favorite situations. Sincerely looking foward to more of this story.



Author's Response:

Yeah, aren't bratty sisters just the best?