Reviewer: Gtslover4 Signed
Date: February 18 2018
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Let me first say that I like how much detail you go into what the girls are wearing, the colors, etc. you could have easily said Beverly walked in wearing shorts and a top. But the detail in what color and type of shirt it was, also even mentioning what color the jeans were, all that is great. Not only that but the hairstyles and jewelry you describe is nicely down too.
I appreciated more Blair and hope to see more of her, she is so big I figure the tremors she would cause, could alone flip cars and cause buildings to fall.
As you can tell with my own story, I enjoy my gts couple stories and I see that you are maybe laying the foundation for Thomas X Bree? Its nice to see Bree is on the busty side, I would imagine not counting Blair, Beverly, or Sophie, she has the largest breast in the story so far? Also how tall is Bree? I'm trying to paint a picture of how even though she is peaceful and gentle, she could still be intimidating and powerful. I remember you commenting on my use of having a gentle giantess still display power over a tiny, I'm eager to see if you will take a approach to this as well with maybe Bree.
Maybe Thomas will get the treatment from other tinies that Zeke got once people found out he was dating a giantess. It would be funny to see him coping with all the attention and special treatment he gets just from dating a giantess, except him telling everyone that his girlfriend won't hurt you would be legit, unlike Zeke's statement about Beverly. Maybe Thomas tries to get Bree to make his hometown her turf to stop Beverly from causing trouble when she visits Zeke.
I'm having fun brainstorming all the possibilies of Thomas X Bree! Maybe down the road she will shake her insecurities and show him what's under the hoodie lol!
Author's Response: Thanks man. As you can see, I take going into the details of clothing seriously lol. Also, I like the hoodie joke you made about Bree XD. Took me a bit to understand it.
Yeah, it does seem likely Bree and Thomas would be a thing, huh? And yeah, Bree does have a large rack. Let's just say they're really BIG. I'd say Bree is a bit tall for a girl. If she had a normal height, I'd put her at 5'7 at most.
You could say your story has giving me some ideas on how powerful a gentle giantess can display her power without trying and as gor Blair getting more time... I can only say you might enjoy the future chapters that are yet to come.
A stand off against Bree and Beverly over City Block Y, now there's an idea...
Thanks for the thought out review, dude. It's always nice to see people point out the subtle things in the story like clothing description oh and good luck witb your stories if you do plan on finishing them. ;)