Bryan discovers that his cute niece, Cindy, rules over a small kingdom of micro men that live in a shoebox in her closet. He has to play his cards right, otherwise he will find himself micro-sized and at the whim of a little girl!
Interesting start. Please continue...
An 18 year old girl inevitably finds herself shrunk and in the hands of her torturous and cruel younger 15 year old sister. But when she's given the chance to pay back each and every wrong, what could possibly happen?
I love it. Can't wait to read more. There is going to be more, isn't there?
Yes, there is more.
This was originally posted as my first GTS tale. After meticulously editing, and some drastic rework, I added some detailed concepts that will hopefully improve the overall story.
The main character "Violet', a beautiful female scientist will ultimately succeed in shrinking the entire world-wide 'male'-population..... Enjoy...
What a thrilling scenario. Will this story be continuing at all. Can't wait to see what Taylor does to Violet's victims...
Should you continue? Yes please. I'm hooked already...
Modeled after the Incredible Shrinking Man story by Richard Matheson, I will attempt to take you through various tragic stages and scenarios impressed upon a man with a shrinking disease. These scenes may not be in chronological order so please do not expect gradual size reduction.
Another great chapter. I'm really loving this story as the tension really is quite indescribable. I must confess that I too was hoping that Rebecca would grab herself some new toys. I dunno what it is about those younger giantesses, but they always seem to be so cruel, and yet at the same time nonchallant in the way they treat their tiny charges.
Can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Not to give away any spoilers but ... Well, just keep reading Closetslave. :)
Rebecca was just used as a ploy to show what horrors many people would be regularly experiencing out there if that reality were a true one.. I also wanted to use her as a source to save the guys rather than abduct them and save them with nothing more than her ominous presense alone.
But I do agree with you how young people can be very cruel and selfish which somebody drastically reduced in size would have to put up with whether they wanted to or not. That in itself is something that seems to be overlooked a lot in this genre for some strange reason. Her brother Paul will always have to be av victim of her impulses and he will be one probably for the rest of his life. The next chatper will be very soon Closetslave and thank you for chiming in with some comments as they are truly appreciated!
I love this concept. The secrecy of the situation. The poor wife going crazy next door wondering where her husband is, and all the time these cruel dykes have got him all to themselves. I can imagine them walking past his house throwing insults and abuse at his wife, and all the time, poor hubby is buried somewhere very wet and slippery.
Please continue...
Women took over, shrinking men and reducing them to objects. Follow the journeys of these hapless men, nothing but playthings subject to the every whim of the woman that purchased them.
Oh man. This is awesome. Please continue...
A woman in her mid 40's suffers from arthritis and back pain. She is used to see her therapist and masseuse Mrs. Olsen for Shrunk Massage Therapy, a controversial method that proves to be good for her condition. But one day she meets the newly hired masseuse... and her name is Kelly.
Enough said.
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Awesome chapter. I love how you describe things in such a way that you can feel the anticipation in Mrs Allen as she sinks deeper and deeper into her own depravity. She sees Kelly as a Goddess and is perhaps in love with her now. I find myself wondering though, will Kelly change and become more cruel?
Will she come up with some way to keep her little toy for herself? Will Mrs Allen regret her decision to give in to her urges.
I certainly hope so, because then it will get even more exciting...
Thank you for your review. I am happy you enjoy the story so far. We'll see what happens!
A man is tricked into going through a portal leaving his old life behind. He instead finds himself taking the place of himself in an alternate reality. A reality where women are in charge and controll the hights of men as their "keepers". What exactly does that mean and how will his new family treat him now that he is nothing more than a slave. Most importantly, is there a way back.
A story I started on my DA but thought it might be enjoyed here!
Awesome. Great start to this one. Can't wait for the next chapter...
A shameless Shrinking fantasy about a world where finger sized men are being sold to and abused by self gratifying women.
This has so much potential. You really should continue it. I really enjoyed it...
As an STD that shrinks its victims develops into a plague, some people look to find a cure. Others look to find a profit.
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What a great start. Will you be continuing this one?
Sure will!
After a rich businessman evades punishment for his perverted crimes again, his own lawyer has the chance to deliver a special kind of justice under her feet when she finds him shrunken in her office.
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Another awesome chapter. I was wondering when the red-head would show up again, and if I'm honest, I'm hoping she does again. Might be nice to hear a little of her back story, or perhaps just Rachel catching another impromptu sight of a tiny arm reaching up for mercy as Larissa dangles her shoe at her desk, before dashing his hopes for freedom in an instance...
Larissa is one of a couple central figures in this series, so she'll appear in later stories, with a much larger role in at least one.
This is awesome. Please continue. It's very much in a similar vein to my own story, Grafted. Which you can find on this site...
Thanks! I remember reading your story before. I'm a huge fan of person being transformed onto another person's body parts but remaining sentient. There aren't too many stories like this either.
A great chapter. I'm loving the fact that the little guy is terrified of what is happening to him. Hope he stays terrified. And when his year is up, something happens to stop his release...
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Venus Inc. the #1 platform for women’s online shopping since the outbreak. Real products for real women. Part of the reason they are so successful is because each product is thoroughly tested and vetted by their executive team. Follow Ms. Evans, the mountainous BBW who’s mission is to grow the business with her hands-on approach to discipline, meetings, performance reviews, quality control, and anything else she deems important at Venus Inc.
Love where this is going, and the Mildo transformation details have me salivating for more. I hope Ms Evans is cruel, as I suspect she will be from the last chapters.
She will be cruel. But not purposeful, just like he's an object. Next part should be coming tonight or tomorrow. Keeping it a slower burn for his full transformation.
An intern gets kidnapped and shrunk for a frumpy woman's sextoy.
Wow, what an awesome ending. I have to say though that it's a shame there will be no more to this story. But then it's arrived at a logical conclusion I guess. Saying that it would still be nice to perhaps see it revisited some time in the future. Maybe a kind of 'One Year On' sort of thing, with Lynn spotting Dotty out and about, shopping maybe, and stopping to chat with her.
I'm particularly partial to 'Unseen Torment' in GTS stories so to speak, you know, the kind of thing where perhaps a tiny person is hidden upon a persons body and suffering, whilst all around nobody is any the wiser. Maybe Dotty will have found out a way to keep Meep within her and remaining alive? Another modification utilising a breathing tube perhaps?
Whatever the case, thank you for posting this great story. It was a wonderful read...
When a man finds a professional dominatrix who will deliver up his deepest darkest fantasy - to be trampled underfoot without mercy, without end and without reprieve - what will it be like for him?
Nightmare? Wildest fantasy come true? A true nirvanna? Or a hell in the truest sense of the word?
While for her, might it be just business as usual?
A brutal little tale about just such an experience. A man who has gotten himself shrunken by a new and fabulous nanotechnology, from one of the world's top technology firms, with protection from a crushing death to go along with it, but leaving him able to feel all of the pain, the anguish, the unstoppability of her crushing weight.
A story of bitter regrets, of surrendering, of exhultation to the experience. Journey with him through all of these, and a dominatrix who gives it to him exactly how he wanted it.
If you're a fan of size-difference-trampling, this will be a yarn for you. Live it through his experience, experience it vicariously. If you live for the fantasy of being squashed, especially without mercy, then this tale will be one you'll probably love.
Wow, what an awesome story. I really loved her cold detachment and casual manner. I'm hoping that you'll continue this one as it'd be great to read about how she ignores her 'Shoe' whilst with her clients. Perhaps they might even get off on it.
Many thanks for posting...
Heh, I have thought about expanding on it. So who knows! Maybe one day soon!
Yes! So glad you decided to add to this story. I really loved this chapter, the way you describe his hopelessness. For me it's all about the nonchalant and uncaring detachment being shown by the dominatrix and how she's just doing her thing and ignoring him to the point that any reminder of his presense is simply an annoyance to her.
I have to admit that I'm not particularly a sneaker and sock fan, much preferring high heeled shoes and stockings, but this story and the way you describe it all is so exciting, and I guess the casual daily footwear adds to the scene.
Thank you so much. Can't wait for more...
Oh, I thought about putting him in a high heel, either in her bare feet or with stockings. I kept running into a delimma with the thought, however! His being against the bottom of her foot, would make the high heel too tight for her, and therefore too uncomfortable for her to wear! And I want my dominatrix to be a thinking woman, not just a robot of a character that I flub things for, just to make thing work. High heels have stiff insoles and very little room to spare inside, they supposed to fit the woman's foot snugly so there's no wobbling and sliding of it as she walks, and stuff like that. The possibility of twisted ankles and all like that, you know!
So, I thought "old sneaker". It might be a bit unsighly for a woman in her profession, but it could work. The sneaker might be a little tight as the high heel would be, but it would be a lot less uncomfortable for our dominatrix to wear. Also, she has the confidence to pull it off. One of her customers might remark on it, but she might say in response, "Are you here to get whipped? Or to stare at my feet?"
In future installments, I am thinking about having a customer get curious about it. "Do you hear that?" he might say. "There it goes again! It sounds like it is coming from in this room!"
And... we'll see where that goes! :D
Glad you're enjoying the story!
Yes, that makes perfect sense, F00tprint. Preferences aside I think that realism trumps it. Well, as much as being shrunk and becoming pretty much invulnerable can be real of course, but I get your POV. You clearly are thinking deeply on the details of this story and I'm really happy to see you go wherever you feel is best in future instalments. I'm sure that whatever you come up with will be as thrilling as the previous chapters are, and I really like where you're going with the curious client hearing something.
Will he be shocked and put off, will he be casually dismissive, or will he be wanting her to show him more? Indeed, by the very nature of their likely clandestine arrangement, will our dominatrix perhaps find that she is enjoying having a little foot freak beneath her feet, and then choose to keep him and not allow him to leave?
So many ways this story can pan out...
Yep, so many ways it can, indeed. ;)
But it's probably going to be a few weeks, or maybe a little longer, before I'll be able to get out my next installment. I had a snowed-in weekend, which gave me ample time to write and refine these two first chapters. But the roads are clear again, so I'm back to driving again (yeah, trucker inRL if you can believe it!), so unless I get snowed in again, I'll probably only have the ends of the months to work on my story.
That said, if you haven't already, you might give Part 2 another read. I just did a little tweaking to it, added some description here and there, but the things I did gave a it little more umph and a little more impact.
Either way, once again, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And thank you very much for dropping me your reviews. Those are always appreciated.
Another great chapter F00tprint, and a surprise one at that as I was resigned to a wait for the end of the month. Such a detailed account though that really conjures up the hopelessness of the shrunken mans situation, and I love the hidden aspect of it all as well. As the client is a submissive though, I half expected the dominatrix to use the fate of her little shoe prisoner as a means to torment the new guy. You know, kind of like a 'I have a man imprisoned in my shoe right now, and if you don't behave, you'll go in the other one' scenario.
"Oh, you don't believe me? Then take a look, worm"... ;-)
Thrilling...
LOL! I hadn't thought of that! But heh, also, for a reason.
I've never been a fan of the quick-shrink-gadget. Raygun, pull trigger, guy shrinks. In my love of realism (if a less-than-a-foot-sized-person CAN be realistic, as you so aptly pointed out!), I look at the technology as something that has to be administered under special circumstances and with monitored care. A few weeks in a womb tank, for instance, keeping the subject sustained and protected while the tech rewrites their genetic code for the new size. This is what happened to our victim. Which, I had plans to describe to some small degree further on in the story. I was planning to have one of the clients get curious, and start asking question when our hero was revealed. But heh, since you got curious, I thought I'd explain it here. ;)
Glad you're still enjoying the story! Stay tuned! There's more coming!
On the note of this installment, I got another snow day, and decided to use it to do some writing. And it's still winter, so you never know!
Cheers! :D
