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Member Since: September 15 2023
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AKA Gadget91
AKA Kosmita


Just a size nerd that loves writing stories. I'm not for everyone.

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Apartment Raid by bbbs Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Ben thought moving away would be enough to lose his ex.  He was wrong.


Categories: Mouth Play, Butt, Crush, Feet, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3610 Read Count: 19350
[Report This] Published: May 12 2011 Updated: May 12 2011
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! Somehow I've never seen it before until now.

Summary:

After graduating, a group of freinds head to a public camp ground for a night of celebration for passing into the rest of their lives. Everything is fine, until they are mysteriously shrunk! The group struggles to survive and be noticed in a world of giant people.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Couples , Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Giant, Insertion, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2446 Read Count: 46126
[Report This] Published: September 13 2013 Updated: September 18 2013
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Step Three: Profit

Just one of those stories I keep coming back to. I wish there were more like this. Something about death by condom is so nice, haha.

[Report This] Published: April 30 2016 Updated: September 02 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Jubilee

I'm re-visiting your old stories. I forgot how good they were. This short story, Jubilee, just hits the right buttons. Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked "Jubilee" and this reminds me that I need to write more giant couple stuff.

Summary:

Friends with benefits can come in all sizes, but why should Jenna limit herself to one at a time?


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2013 Read Count: 17665
[Report This] Published: November 25 2018 Updated: November 25 2018
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Classic story. I find myself re-reading every once in a while.

Summary:

Ah, the obligatory superhero origin story. Enjoy my humble beginnings as I explain how I became ShrinkGirl and go on my first not so secret mission! Enjoy and please review! 


Categories: Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Fantasy, Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 951 Read Count: 4453
[Report This] Published: June 02 2019 Updated: June 02 2019
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Make a Wish

This is cute start to your hero story. I'm going to start reading them all.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for your kind words! So ... this story I actually posted back in 2019 and I didn't super love it. Yes, it was a cute start but unfortunately I never felt inspired to keep up with it. So while I kept the story on my page, since it is part of my writing history, I don't count it as "canon" for the ShrinkGirl series. The "real" ShrinkGirl series begins with "A Shocking Start" and hopefully you like that one too. I promise they get better from there and I didn't "hate" this attempt, it just didn't click with me as much. Thank you again for your review and have a wonderful day! 

Summary:

A young man opened up to his giantess friend about his sexual desires. Then he got a normal sized girlfriend who agreed experimentation in their relationship would open new doors. Meeting on a weekend camping trip instead of a bedroom seemed like a great way to change things up. At least in hindsight it did.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Scat, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4155 Read Count: 30675
[Report This] Published: November 23 2020 Updated: October 21 2021
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2024 Title: Chapter 2: Now Together

Just leaving a comment to say I really wished this story would continue. I loved the setup and relationship between the main characters.

Summary:

In a world where Lilliputians, Gulliverians, and Brobdingnagians must learn to live and work in harmony, Jeanine is a Lilliputian woman trying to climb the corporate ladder at Energy Planet. She's about to find out that a Size Equality Protection Act might not be enough to deter a work place rivalry between her and her colossal co-worker however...


Categories: New World Order, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15685 Read Count: 27441
[Report This] Published: July 24 2021 Updated: December 26 2021
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: November 04 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2.5

I'm not sure how I missed this story, but I did. Gave it a read and enjoyed it.

Nell is my kind of giantess. She's great, especially how she embraces her size and superiority over the Lillies. I feel like the main draw to this story is the dynamic between Nell and Jeanine. I wish we could've seen more of this. The smut in chapter 2.5 is good, but felt out of place in the story and the world. Again, I think there should be more focus on Nell and Jeanine with John sprinkled in.

Summary:

This story is set in the “The Tourists” universe created by timeturner. In this universe, people’s body sizes vary according to their country of origin’s size—the bigger the country, the larger its people. For smaller states, like the ones in Europe, this can pose a problem whenever American tourists visit.

In this episode, an American mother and her teenage daughter are visiting Vienna.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Destruction, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22055 Read Count: 22992
[Report This] Published: September 23 2021 Updated: September 30 2024
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 – The Ring

I read this story when it came out, and I didn't leave a comment! That's my bad! The whole, tourist-genre has been hit or miss for me. This one is definitely a hit, and it's mainly because of the MCs. I just adore uncaring, bratty giantess-types that have zero empathy for their victims. This story is great for that. Thank you for sharing!

Summary:

A man who still lives at home signs up for drug trials to make money so he can buy a house for himself and his girlfriend. 

But there are some side effects 


Categories: Feet, Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22099 Read Count: 92011
[Report This] Published: September 29 2022 Updated: November 06 2022
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of my favorite stories!

Marooned by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

A shipwreck with hundreds of survivors on a deserted island. Three of the survivors find themselves much bigger than everyone else. How will it play out? Gilligan's Island or Lord of the Flies? Read on and see.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60101 Read Count: 141878
[Report This] Published: November 03 2022 Updated: August 18 2024
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2024 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Justin

Jamie is probably my most likeable character. I feel like her actions and thought process are realistic for her character. The tinies, aside from Daisy, seem really whiny. I can see why Sam got frustrated with Justin so many times.

I like how each Death is treated so significantly. Makes it really impactful. I'm curious how it's gonna turn out if the giants decide to break loose and treat the tinies worse. Because you mentioned things like different tribes, and disagreements and whatnot, I see the giants forming some sort of dictatorship. I'm actually surprised it hasn't happen sooner. But I see the giants, Jamie at least, unifying all tinies under her rule, and ending any conflicts underfoot.

Summary:

A doctor catches a new virus while at work. How will his wife and daughter adjust to the new power dynamics? Will he be able to find a cure? 


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18764 Read Count: 99593
[Report This] Published: April 09 2023 Updated: July 08 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: February 18 2024 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The dynamic between Mike, Sarah, and Jake were the best part. The scene with Mike getting batted by Jake's member is primo stuff. It's the type of humiliation I love to see. Good stuff.

Summary:

Here is a story based on an actual model used by Godqueen.

Jennifer Rose! Love her!

This story is from the perspective of the tinies.

Hope you'll enjoy this one.


Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1727 Read Count: 1792
[Report This] Published: October 06 2023 Updated: October 06 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: October 06 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jennifer Rose is my go-to when imagining a giantess in my head. She just embodies the role, imho. I really like this tribute story towards her.



Author's Response:

Jennifer Rose is one of the best!
Thus, it is with pain in my heart to tell you that she stopped contributing to the community :(
We must content ourselves with what we have of her.

Summary:

Collection of stories, all about 12 foot tall Quin Marnett and her daily life as an awkward high school senior.


all of these are vore stories, so beware.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7353 Read Count: 4641
[Report This] Published: October 15 2023 Updated: October 15 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Table for 3-- No, Wait, 4

OMG, the end of this chapter! That was amazing. I love Quin.

Summary:

Childhood friendships, especially those between boys, are often characterized by an unspoken bond, forged through countless shared adventures and unwavering trust. Max and Chris were no exception, or so Max thought. This is an X-rated story!


Categories: Couples, Entrapment, Footwear, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: M/f, M/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2442 Read Count: 3590
[Report This] Published: November 10 2023 Updated: November 10 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: September 07 2024 Title: Chapter 2: The Day before

Damn, it's a shame this story didn't continue. I loved that little twist at the end of chapter 1 and it got me excited to see more. I wish you'll choose to continue it again.

Summary:


When an uninvited guest invades a tiny-living complex, mayhem ensues for the tiny residents trapped inside. 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Scat, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10316 Read Count: 28434
[Report This] Published: November 25 2023 Updated: June 13 2024
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my god, yes! This story hits all the right buttons for me. Stacy sounds like my kind of gal. Great stuff and thank you for sharing. Can't wait to read more.

Culture Shock by Ecstacy Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

The Micro Republic is a country known for having the smallest people on the planet. A young couple visiting the United States for the first time is in for more than they expected when they find themselves in the crosshairs of sketchy locals.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/fm
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9016 Read Count: 6219
[Report This] Published: January 02 2024 Updated: October 06 2024
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really promising start! I love this world you built. And a huge plus for starring a Latina giantess.

Roomies by It Was Me Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary:

Callie has been having a rough go of it as of late, but little does she know that someone close by has it even harder than she does.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121609 Read Count: 53757
[Report This] Published: January 03 2024 Updated: November 04 2024
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2024 Title: Chapter 7: Duncan vs. the Ethical Endeavor

Spoiler-free review.

That ending ... I secretly hoped this would happen, but I doubted you'd take the story in this direction. Fuck! My wife was right with her predictions, haha. Brilliant ending and I love how the story and characters are evolving.

Kristie can't keep that mouth shut, huh? Three inches and surrounded by giantesses that dislike her—and she still has to talk with that big mouth of hers. Kinda made everyone's actions against her justifiable. Monica's final straw caught me by surprise (and everyone), but seems reasonable given the situation.

Hard talking around the spoilers, lol. But lemme say, this is my favorite story right now. The F/f situations in this chapter are like a huge payoff for me. I can't wait to read future chapters. All the characters are hitting their strides and leading towards big climaxes, I assume.

As soon as my wife is finished watching Bones, I'll shove this story in front of her face. I'm sure she'll love it.

Thanks again for devoting hundreds of hours in writing such a magnificent story!



Author's Response:

First, I wanted to say that you saying that this is your favorite story right now means a lot to me. We've talked about it quite a bit, so maybe I shouldn't be surprised to read that, but I still was. I'm very humbled by how much some people have taken to this story, and I'm glad you're among them!

Yeah, it was interesting hearing the contrasting predictions between your wife and you. I know this is one of those rare times that you're glad she was right and you were wrong!

Kristie's natural defense mechanism is bitchiness, so keeping her mouth shut is the last thing she'll ever be able to do. I think I mentioned this to you before, but my hope was that I could keep her character true to herself without her coming off as the dumb tiny simply saying terrible things to give our main characters in excuse to fuck with her. I'm not sure if I was able to quite pull that off, but I hope that her character came off as at least somewhat believable in her situation, even if that did help make Monica and company look more justified in doing the stuff they did.

And yeah, Monica is normally pretty calm, cool, and collected, as they say, but it turns out she's significantly less so when you go after the people she cares about. Who knew?

Big climaxes? ... I get it! I get the joke!

As for the time I've put into writing this so far, it's been an extremely rewarding process, so no thanks necessary. I appreciate it, though!

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2024 Title: Chapter 8: Duncan vs. the Resigned Roommate

There are three big events in this chapter. I’m terrible at predicting what’s going to happen in this story, because everything came as a surprise. Well, maybe not the very end, but 99% of the chapter was had me wondering, “Where the hell is this going?”

Professor Stillwell: youdumbbitch.jpeg. His big mouth got him in the end. I was so confused by Alyssia’s and Ada’s plan in the beginning, but it all made sense at the climax of this arc. The ruse that led him to falsely claim Callie as the perp in public, only for it to backfire in a humiliating and spectacular way, played out wonderfully. Seriously, there needs to be a #metoo movement against this scumbag.

Oh, should I be worried you added a male character to your story? The male cop … you’re not going soft on me, are you!?

Maaaan, I don’t know how to feel about Alyssia. I hear what you’re saying through Callie and the others … That they could trust her, and she’s not that bad. But that little game she played with Duncan didn’t sit right. Does Alyssia know Callie is interested in him, or at least has a hint of it? Maybe I’m too overprotective of my Dallie couple. And shit that game of climbing her sounds dangerous as fuck. Hot. But probably not to OSHA standards.

Callie. Sigh. My heart literally broke as she strapped on her sandals as she prepared to leave for clubbing. I can’t be the only reader yelling at the text on my screen, begging her to stay with Duncan. It makes sense, though, from Duncan and Callie’s perspective. But this will they, won’t they was figuratively killing me. They’re so right for each other, but won’t confess it out loud.

Not gonna lie, I was sweating the whole time during that club scene. I was hoping—beyond all hope—that Callie didn’t hook up with any of those dudes. (Whoa, more dudes in the story.) Holy shit, this scene played out masterfully. Callie confessing to herself that none of the guys were Duncan was really touching. And I liked Callie even more every time her inner monologue admitted her attraction to Duncan.

Back home, I was eager to see Callie kiss Duncan. But that wouldn’t have been right in her drunken state. In my horny brain state, it was right. But I agree with how things ended. That last confession at the kitchen table was the release I needed. I’ve been waiting so damn long (100K words) for these two to fess up. But man, it was all worth it. Finally. Dallie. I have a feeling what’s gonna happen in the next chapter ;)



Author's Response:

Right off the top, I want to make clear that Duncan was temporarily moved out of the state during the time of the male cop scene. I couldn't risk having the male cop be in the same general area as Duncan, let alone ... touch him. Ew!

Ha! I'm not sure if I should take you asking "Where the hell is this going?" to be a good thing or a bad one, but I choose good. Now that I've decided this, the polls are closed and you're now no longer allowed to correct me!

Agreed on the #metoo movement for Stillwell. Just to clarify, Alyssia and Ada were slashing his tires because Duncan asked them to. He thought karma hitting Stillwell would pull her out of the funk she was in (not knowing that he was the reason for said funk). They didn't realize he was going to confront Callie and snitch on himself. He did that shit on his own, which I think makes it even sweeter! youdumbbitch.jpeg indeed!

Alyssia does know that Callie was into Duncan at that point, but to be fair, that game was never intended to be sexual. She was getting wet at feeling big because Duncan was struggling to climb her, not so much that it was Duncan doing the climbing, and she certainly didn't expect to feel that way. She didn't even think he'd make it past her ankles! It was supposed to be a way to fuck with him a little bit for always calling her short. That's why she stopped fucking with him once he got high enough that she was worried he'd seriously get hurt. Honestly, when she was trying to shake him off by tapping her foot, she was really trying to get him down before he got too high but trying to save face at the same time. I tried to point out along the way that she was prepared to catch him once he got too high and that she was kind of freaking out about it, but maybe I didn't drill this point home enough.

There's nothing wrong with being protective of Dallie, though. Yeah, you've got me using the couple name again. There's another familiar name you might recognize in the next chapter, too.

I love that you said "figuratively" killing you, as Callie and Duncan weren't stabbing you at the time. So many people misuse the word literally (not so much on this site but in general), so I really appreciated this!

Having said that, I hope you were able to make it to the hospital in time after your heart literally broke! But aside from the near fatal injury, I'm glad that scene had the desired effect. I was hoping the reader would be yearning for her to stay, as it seemed our future couple were moving further apart in that moment.

But seriously, thank you for such a nice compliment about those club scenes. I wanted to show her frustration with Duncan (and moreso herself) while also acknowledging that her feelings for him were too strong to just move on from. I thought these two elements would clash well together, and it sounds like they did for you!

Also, I'm calling the fact that you even considered that Callie would hook up with any of those dudes a win! I wasn't sure if those scenes would create that kind of tension, given that these guys are all brand new to the scene, but to hear that you were sweating it out makes me feel like I pulled it off! 

Yeah, when I started writing this story, this was exactly how I wanted it to play out, but I didn't realize it was going to take me 100K words to get there! It felt damn good to finally get this scene out of my head, though! I'm glad you found it so cathartic.

I think you're really going to like the next chapter whenever you get a chance to have a look at it. I'm pretty sure you've already seen the title for it, so you probably do have a pretty good idea of what to expect.

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Callie vs. the Esoteric Executive

OMG, you were right; I like Monica! Haha, I loved the ending to this chapter. Loved it, loved it. As evidenced in my story, when tinies are subjugated to a giantess against their will, like Duncan's attraction to both Callie's and Monica's feet. It came off really well. I just loved how Monica made that observation and just dove right into it. The entire scene just came off powerful to me.

I'm really excited about where the story is heading now. I thought Monica was going to be another terrible giantess, but there were subtle hints that you dropped that alluded to Monica's admiration of Duncan. Like maintaining his position, ensuring Callie was "good enough" for him. That kinda stuff. I'm excited to see more Monica, to be honest.

Also, that last line, "I never joke about Tokyo." Gave me fucking chills. Good shit man.

I know what you said in the last comment I made, about the mystery of Duncan's shrinking not going away ... It's still a question I'm asking over and over. Because if he's the only shrinkee—then that means his shrinking was targeted. If not a victim of targeted shrinking, then are there other tinies roaming the world?

Anyway, good stuff! I'm taking my time reading your story. I'm stoked I have a couple more chapters to read. It's like enjoying fine wine. I don't want to run through it too quickly.



Author's Response:

I was pretty confident you'd be into Monica! And I'm incredibly happy that you mentioned the word subtle in regard to how I built toward that last scene. I wanted the reader to not be completely sure what to think of her early on and gradually get a feel for her as we progressed through the chapter, and you specifically cited a couple of the things I put in there with the hope of doing that.

And, if nothing else, I was sure that foot scene would get you! Being a big fan of your work, it means a lot to me to read that you, of all people, described that scene as powerful!

And yeah, Monica just said fuck it and went for it once she knew he had the same fetish as her, which I hope came off as her finally opening herself up a bit, too.

As for seeing more of Monica, yeah, she's most certainly going to be around!

I love you mentioning that last line! I was trying to think of a good note to end the chapter on when that just came to me. It just fit Monica so well! You saying it gave you chills helps me think that it hit the vibe I was looking for!

I'm so glad that the fact that the story hasn't really touched on Duncan's shrinking yet hasn't seemed to dull people's curiosity about it. I'll admit to being a bit concerned about the pacing of the plot when I started writing this, but between all the positive reviews and the fact that people have kept an interest in the mystery behind his shrinking, I feel a lot better about how I've structured the story now.

And, again, I'll assure you that said mystery isn't going away. I have a bit of a pet peeve about stories that have random shrinking with no explanation whatsoever (not that I haven't enjoyed some of those, but it's always nagging me in the back of my mind as I'm reading).

I really enjoyed reading my work being compared to fine wine! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2024 Title: Chapter 9: Callie vs. the Delectable Date

As I look back at the entire story, there are intense imageries, forever etched in my brain, that’ve keep reminding me how engaging and charming the story is. 1) Callie's face coming into view during Duncan’s video call to the medical scientist. 2) Ada’s awkward mouth-play. 3) Callie grabbing Kristie for the first time while tempering her anger. 4) Callie struggling with her choice of going to the club or not.

Wanna know what imagery imprinted in my mind in this chapter? Huh? Guess … It was when Duncan slathered chocolate on the tip of Callie’s nose and her jokingly saying, “You little shit.” *swoon* Legitimately brought a smile to my face. And I know that’s special, because GW stories don’t make me smile until after I … Ahh, never mind.

After reading the chocolate fountain bit, I get the impression you’re not into mouth-play? Kinda just skimmed through it, huh? Lol, got ‘em! The mouth scene was amazing. Callie just going for it, and dipping her man in chocolate and then giving him two explosive climaxes, was great to see and well deserved for both characters. And it kept going! In detail! I treasured every moment and was thrilled when Callie dipped him for one last time and shoved his entire being into her mouth. So good!

I shouldn’t gloss over the romantic dinner. That’s a new one for me. I’ve been in this community all my life, and have been reading stories for the last two decades straight. I’ve seen nothing like this before. That dinner was romantic asf, made all the better with sous chef Ada at the kitchen’s helm. I think what would’ve made things better, for me, is if Duncan threw that ball of dough at Ada, just to see it harmlessly bounce off her, lol. I, too, cook a lot and have used Food Network and YouTube as places of inspiration. Needless to say, I felt a genuine connection to Duncan here and was rooting for the guy. His ability to impress the fuck out of Callie was practically me impressing the fuck out of Callie, haha.

Already made some jokes with you through DM about the last scene in this chapter. Something I want to point out is Callie’s comment about normal-sized dicks not gonna do it for her anymore. Imma push horny-brain out of the way, because I want to talk about this casual line, that might hold more weight than first impressed upon. IF Duncan were given the option to grow back to normal … would he do it? What would Callie’s reaction be? I mean, he can tele-work and provide his fair share of funds to the family. He and Callie have proven that, not only, size doesn’t matter, it heightens their lovemaking. So, what now? If he were to grow back, how would the dynamic of their relationship change? A fucking lot it would. Not personality-wise, but they obviously share something unique that comes with the extreme size difference. It’s a real thinker.

Dunky™ huh? This is easily the best nickname for him I’ve heard yet. Dunky™ and Callie, sittn’ on a tree. F, U, C, K, I, N, G. First comes tongue’ing, then comes insert’ing. I like it. Love this couple! With Dunky™ and Callie cemented, I’m super curious where this story will go. My attention goes back to Kristie, and now I wonder if her history has anything to do with the shrinking. I wonder if Kristie was the actual intended target, and not Dunky™. Given her reaction to her manilla file and the secrecy surrounding her family, this is where my mind is. But anyway, I can’t wait to read more about Dunky™, Callie, Ada, Monica, and Kristie. I got them all, right? Yeah, I’m sure I did!

 



Author's Response:

Shit! I didn't expect you to actually trademark Dunk ... that nickname. It's too good, though, so I I guess I have to figure out how to transfer those star-based royalty payments your way. Damn it!

Oh, and you forgot Alyssia in your list at the end there. That was an accidental oversight, I'm sure. Maybe I need to include Aly more so that she's not so forgettable? Oh, I know! Maybe I can write a single vore scene for the story and have her do the eating! Sounds great, right? What do you think?

In all seriousness, though, I do love how certain scenes (and not always the most obvious ones) stick with you. When you told me about how her poking her head into Duncan's video call, I loved that so much! It was such a small part in the grand scheme of things, but it's great how things like that can have such an impact. And, believe it or not, the chocolate on the nose scene was what I would have guessed (if, you know, you would have actually given me time to guess!). I felt that same kind of vibe when I wrote that scene, and I'm so happy that someone singled it out! I'm not sure why you didn't "never mind" at that part, though. Do you not have a chocolate nose fetish?

As always, it means so much to hear any compliment relating to mouthplay coming from you, as I know that's your thing (well, the first part of your thing, anyway; can't get to the stomach without going through the mouth, after all) and you've provided some fantastic vore and mouthplay scenes to never mind to (that scene in Echoes where Jen eats half the bar is one of my favorite vore scenes of all time, by the way; I don't know if I've mentioned that before). I'm glad you enjoyed all the detail and that you found that anatomy diagram to help you through it!

I love you centering in on that romantic dinner. You've never seen anything like that in the community before? That's fucking awesome! It feels great to hear that I've actually introduced something kind of new (or at least rare) with this story.

You know, I actually wrestled with the idea of Dunky (I'll start making payments now, I guess) throwing that dough ball at Ada instead of the backsplash. I agree that seeing it bounce off of her would have been a cool moment showing the scale of weakness the size disparity has left him with, but I ultimately decided that, even though he was upset, it would have been too much of a dick move for him to have thrown it at her, even if it wouldn't have hurt her (it's the thought that counts, or whatever the negative equivalent to that phrase is).

Reading that you made a legit connection to Duncan here and felt like him impressing Callie was you doing it was so satisfying, especially since a lot of giantess/shrunken man story male protagonists tend to get lost in the shuffle and come off as a bit generic at times. I really didn't want Duncan falling into that trap, and seeing a reader actually being able to relate to him is incredible!

The question of what Duncan would do if given the chance to get his size back is a good one. Before he met up with Callie, he had long since given up on the prospect of returning to normal, electing just to try and survive instead, but he started to regain hope since making/reuniting with some regular-sized friends. So, now that everything is seemingly going perfectly for him, how does he feel? I don't know if he's devoted a lot of time to thinking about that lately, which may or may not be telling in and of itself. Then again, the prospect of finally being able to hold Callie in his arms and giving her a proper kiss (and fuck) has to be appealing to, right?

I'm intrigued that you immediately went back to Kristie now that our lovely couple are finally together. Obviously I'm not going to give you a straight answer, but I will say that we'll find out more about Kristie's history in the next chapter. Whether or not that has anything to do with what happened to her (or Duncan, for that matter) remains to be seen.