Penname: MXP20 [Contact] Real name: he/him
Member Since: September 15 2023
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Apartment Raid by bbbs Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Ben thought moving away would be enough to lose his ex.  He was wrong.


Categories: Mouth Play, Butt, Crush, Feet, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3610 Read Count: 20087
[Report This] Published: May 12 2011 Updated: May 12 2011
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! Somehow I've never seen it before until now.

Summary:

After graduating, a group of freinds head to a public camp ground for a night of celebration for passing into the rest of their lives. Everything is fine, until they are mysteriously shrunk! The group struggles to survive and be noticed in a world of giant people.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Couples , Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Giant, Insertion, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2446 Read Count: 48054
[Report This] Published: September 13 2013 Updated: September 18 2013
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Step Three: Profit

Just one of those stories I keep coming back to. I wish there were more like this. Something about death by condom is so nice, haha.

[Report This] Published: April 30 2016 Updated: December 21 2024
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Jubilee

I'm re-visiting your old stories. I forgot how good they were. This short story, Jubilee, just hits the right buttons. Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked "Jubilee" and this reminds me that I need to write more giant couple stuff.

Summary:

Friends with benefits can come in all sizes, but why should Jenna limit herself to one at a time?


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2013 Read Count: 19148
[Report This] Published: November 25 2018 Updated: November 25 2018
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Classic story. I find myself re-reading every once in a while.

Summary:

Ah, the obligatory superhero origin story. Enjoy my humble beginnings as I explain how I became ShrinkGirl and go on my first not so secret mission! Enjoy and please review! 


Categories: Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Fantasy, Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 951 Read Count: 4763
[Report This] Published: June 02 2019 Updated: June 02 2019
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Make a Wish

This is cute start to your hero story. I'm going to start reading them all.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks for your kind words! So ... this story I actually posted back in 2019 and I didn't super love it. Yes, it was a cute start but unfortunately I never felt inspired to keep up with it. So while I kept the story on my page, since it is part of my writing history, I don't count it as "canon" for the ShrinkGirl series. The "real" ShrinkGirl series begins with "A Shocking Start" and hopefully you like that one too. I promise they get better from there and I didn't "hate" this attempt, it just didn't click with me as much. Thank you again for your review and have a wonderful day! 

Summary:

A young man opened up to his giantess friend about his sexual desires. Then he got a normal sized girlfriend who agreed experimentation in their relationship would open new doors. Meeting on a weekend camping trip instead of a bedroom seemed like a great way to change things up. At least in hindsight it did.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Scat, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4155 Read Count: 34152
[Report This] Published: November 23 2020 Updated: October 21 2021
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2024 Title: Chapter 2: Now Together

Just leaving a comment to say I really wished this story would continue. I loved the setup and relationship between the main characters.

Summary:

In a world where Lilliputians, Gulliverians, and Brobdingnagians must learn to live and work in harmony, Jeanine is a Lilliputian woman trying to climb the corporate ladder at Energy Planet. She's about to find out that a Size Equality Protection Act might not be enough to deter a work place rivalry between her and her colossal co-worker however...


Categories: New World Order, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15685 Read Count: 29745
[Report This] Published: July 24 2021 Updated: December 26 2021
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: November 04 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2.5

I'm not sure how I missed this story, but I did. Gave it a read and enjoyed it.

Nell is my kind of giantess. She's great, especially how she embraces her size and superiority over the Lillies. I feel like the main draw to this story is the dynamic between Nell and Jeanine. I wish we could've seen more of this. The smut in chapter 2.5 is good, but felt out of place in the story and the world. Again, I think there should be more focus on Nell and Jeanine with John sprinkled in.

Summary:

This story is set in the “The Tourists” universe created by timeturner. In this universe, people’s body sizes vary according to their country of origin’s size—the bigger the country, the larger its people. For smaller states, like the ones in Europe, this can pose a problem whenever American tourists visit.

In this episode, an American mother and her teenage daughter are visiting Vienna.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Crush, Destruction, Giant, Humiliation, Lesbians, Muscle, New World Order, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/fm, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33853 Read Count: 46871
[Report This] Published: September 23 2021 Updated: March 04 2025
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 – The Ring

I read this story when it came out, and I didn't leave a comment! That's my bad! The whole, tourist-genre has been hit or miss for me. This one is definitely a hit, and it's mainly because of the MCs. I just adore uncaring, bratty giantess-types that have zero empathy for their victims. This story is great for that. Thank you for sharing!

Summary:

A man who still lives at home signs up for drug trials to make money so he can buy a house for himself and his girlfriend. 

But there are some side effects 


Categories: Feet, Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22099 Read Count: 131690
[Report This] Published: September 29 2022 Updated: November 06 2022
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of my favorite stories!

Marooned by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

A shipwreck with hundreds of survivors on a deserted island. Three of the survivors find themselves much bigger than everyone else. How will it play out? Gilligan's Island or Lord of the Flies? Read on and see.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65412 Read Count: 177401
[Report This] Published: November 03 2022 Updated: February 13 2025
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2024 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Justin

Jamie is probably my most likeable character. I feel like her actions and thought process are realistic for her character. The tinies, aside from Daisy, seem really whiny. I can see why Sam got frustrated with Justin so many times.

I like how each Death is treated so significantly. Makes it really impactful. I'm curious how it's gonna turn out if the giants decide to break loose and treat the tinies worse. Because you mentioned things like different tribes, and disagreements and whatnot, I see the giants forming some sort of dictatorship. I'm actually surprised it hasn't happen sooner. But I see the giants, Jamie at least, unifying all tinies under her rule, and ending any conflicts underfoot.

Summary:

A doctor catches a new virus while at work. How will his wife and daughter adjust to the new power dynamics? Will he be able to find a cure? 


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Breasts, Couples, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18764 Read Count: 106780
[Report This] Published: April 09 2023 Updated: July 08 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: February 18 2024 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The dynamic between Mike, Sarah, and Jake were the best part. The scene with Mike getting batted by Jake's member is primo stuff. It's the type of humiliation I love to see. Good stuff.

Summary:

Here is a story based on an actual model used by Godqueen.

Jennifer Rose! Love her!

This story is from the perspective of the tinies.

Hope you'll enjoy this one.


Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1727 Read Count: 2257
[Report This] Published: October 06 2023 Updated: October 06 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: October 06 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jennifer Rose is my go-to when imagining a giantess in my head. She just embodies the role, imho. I really like this tribute story towards her.



Author's Response:

Jennifer Rose is one of the best!
Thus, it is with pain in my heart to tell you that she stopped contributing to the community :(
We must content ourselves with what we have of her.

Summary:

Collection of stories, all about 12 foot tall Quin Marnett and her daily life as an awkward high school senior.


all of these are vore stories, so beware.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7353 Read Count: 5462
[Report This] Published: October 15 2023 Updated: October 15 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2023 Title: Chapter 3: Table for 3-- No, Wait, 4

OMG, the end of this chapter! That was amazing. I love Quin.

Summary:

Childhood friendships, especially those between boys, are often characterized by an unspoken bond, forged through countless shared adventures and unwavering trust. Max and Chris were no exception, or so Max thought. This is an X-rated story!


Categories: Couples, Entrapment, Footwear, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: M/f, M/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2442 Read Count: 4248
[Report This] Published: November 10 2023 Updated: November 10 2023
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: September 07 2024 Title: Chapter 2: The Day before

Damn, it's a shame this story didn't continue. I loved that little twist at the end of chapter 1 and it got me excited to see more. I wish you'll choose to continue it again.

Summary:


When an uninvited guest invades a tiny-living complex, mayhem ensues for the tiny residents trapped inside. 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Scat, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13781 Read Count: 42119
[Report This] Published: November 25 2023 Updated: March 20 2025
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my god, yes! This story hits all the right buttons for me. Stacy sounds like my kind of gal. Great stuff and thank you for sharing. Can't wait to read more.

Culture Shock by Ecstacy Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

The Micro Republic is a country known for having the smallest people on the planet. A young couple visiting the United States for the first time is in for more than they expected when they find themselves in the crosshairs of sketchy locals.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/fm
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12819 Read Count: 11497
[Report This] Published: January 02 2024 Updated: April 09 2025
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really promising start! I love this world you built. And a huge plus for starring a Latina giantess.

Roomies by It Was Me Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 112]
Summary:

Callie has been having a rough go of it as of late, but little does she know that someone close by has it even harder than she does.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148665 Read Count: 70194
[Report This] Published: January 03 2024 Updated: February 03 2025
Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2024 Title: Chapter 8: Duncan vs. the Resigned Roommate

There are three big events in this chapter. I’m terrible at predicting what’s going to happen in this story, because everything came as a surprise. Well, maybe not the very end, but 99% of the chapter was had me wondering, “Where the hell is this going?”

Professor Stillwell: youdumbbitch.jpeg. His big mouth got him in the end. I was so confused by Alyssia’s and Ada’s plan in the beginning, but it all made sense at the climax of this arc. The ruse that led him to falsely claim Callie as the perp in public, only for it to backfire in a humiliating and spectacular way, played out wonderfully. Seriously, there needs to be a #metoo movement against this scumbag.

Oh, should I be worried you added a male character to your story? The male cop … you’re not going soft on me, are you!?

Maaaan, I don’t know how to feel about Alyssia. I hear what you’re saying through Callie and the others … That they could trust her, and she’s not that bad. But that little game she played with Duncan didn’t sit right. Does Alyssia know Callie is interested in him, or at least has a hint of it? Maybe I’m too overprotective of my Dallie couple. And shit that game of climbing her sounds dangerous as fuck. Hot. But probably not to OSHA standards.

Callie. Sigh. My heart literally broke as she strapped on her sandals as she prepared to leave for clubbing. I can’t be the only reader yelling at the text on my screen, begging her to stay with Duncan. It makes sense, though, from Duncan and Callie’s perspective. But this will they, won’t they was figuratively killing me. They’re so right for each other, but won’t confess it out loud.

Not gonna lie, I was sweating the whole time during that club scene. I was hoping—beyond all hope—that Callie didn’t hook up with any of those dudes. (Whoa, more dudes in the story.) Holy shit, this scene played out masterfully. Callie confessing to herself that none of the guys were Duncan was really touching. And I liked Callie even more every time her inner monologue admitted her attraction to Duncan.

Back home, I was eager to see Callie kiss Duncan. But that wouldn’t have been right in her drunken state. In my horny brain state, it was right. But I agree with how things ended. That last confession at the kitchen table was the release I needed. I’ve been waiting so damn long (100K words) for these two to fess up. But man, it was all worth it. Finally. Dallie. I have a feeling what’s gonna happen in the next chapter ;)



Author's Response:

Right off the top, I want to make clear that Duncan was temporarily moved out of the state during the time of the male cop scene. I couldn't risk having the male cop be in the same general area as Duncan, let alone ... touch him. Ew!

Ha! I'm not sure if I should take you asking "Where the hell is this going?" to be a good thing or a bad one, but I choose good. Now that I've decided this, the polls are closed and you're now no longer allowed to correct me!

Agreed on the #metoo movement for Stillwell. Just to clarify, Alyssia and Ada were slashing his tires because Duncan asked them to. He thought karma hitting Stillwell would pull her out of the funk she was in (not knowing that he was the reason for said funk). They didn't realize he was going to confront Callie and snitch on himself. He did that shit on his own, which I think makes it even sweeter! youdumbbitch.jpeg indeed!

Alyssia does know that Callie was into Duncan at that point, but to be fair, that game was never intended to be sexual. She was getting wet at feeling big because Duncan was struggling to climb her, not so much that it was Duncan doing the climbing, and she certainly didn't expect to feel that way. She didn't even think he'd make it past her ankles! It was supposed to be a way to fuck with him a little bit for always calling her short. That's why she stopped fucking with him once he got high enough that she was worried he'd seriously get hurt. Honestly, when she was trying to shake him off by tapping her foot, she was really trying to get him down before he got too high but trying to save face at the same time. I tried to point out along the way that she was prepared to catch him once he got too high and that she was kind of freaking out about it, but maybe I didn't drill this point home enough.

There's nothing wrong with being protective of Dallie, though. Yeah, you've got me using the couple name again. There's another familiar name you might recognize in the next chapter, too.

I love that you said "figuratively" killing you, as Callie and Duncan weren't stabbing you at the time. So many people misuse the word literally (not so much on this site but in general), so I really appreciated this!

Having said that, I hope you were able to make it to the hospital in time after your heart literally broke! But aside from the near fatal injury, I'm glad that scene had the desired effect. I was hoping the reader would be yearning for her to stay, as it seemed our future couple were moving further apart in that moment.

But seriously, thank you for such a nice compliment about those club scenes. I wanted to show her frustration with Duncan (and moreso herself) while also acknowledging that her feelings for him were too strong to just move on from. I thought these two elements would clash well together, and it sounds like they did for you!

Also, I'm calling the fact that you even considered that Callie would hook up with any of those dudes a win! I wasn't sure if those scenes would create that kind of tension, given that these guys are all brand new to the scene, but to hear that you were sweating it out makes me feel like I pulled it off! 

Yeah, when I started writing this story, this was exactly how I wanted it to play out, but I didn't realize it was going to take me 100K words to get there! It felt damn good to finally get this scene out of my head, though! I'm glad you found it so cathartic.

I think you're really going to like the next chapter whenever you get a chance to have a look at it. I'm pretty sure you've already seen the title for it, so you probably do have a pretty good idea of what to expect.

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2024 Title: Chapter 9: Callie vs. the Delectable Date

As I look back at the entire story, there are intense imageries, forever etched in my brain, that’ve keep reminding me how engaging and charming the story is. 1) Callie's face coming into view during Duncan’s video call to the medical scientist. 2) Ada’s awkward mouth-play. 3) Callie grabbing Kristie for the first time while tempering her anger. 4) Callie struggling with her choice of going to the club or not.

Wanna know what imagery imprinted in my mind in this chapter? Huh? Guess … It was when Duncan slathered chocolate on the tip of Callie’s nose and her jokingly saying, “You little shit.” *swoon* Legitimately brought a smile to my face. And I know that’s special, because GW stories don’t make me smile until after I … Ahh, never mind.

After reading the chocolate fountain bit, I get the impression you’re not into mouth-play? Kinda just skimmed through it, huh? Lol, got ‘em! The mouth scene was amazing. Callie just going for it, and dipping her man in chocolate and then giving him two explosive climaxes, was great to see and well deserved for both characters. And it kept going! In detail! I treasured every moment and was thrilled when Callie dipped him for one last time and shoved his entire being into her mouth. So good!

I shouldn’t gloss over the romantic dinner. That’s a new one for me. I’ve been in this community all my life, and have been reading stories for the last two decades straight. I’ve seen nothing like this before. That dinner was romantic asf, made all the better with sous chef Ada at the kitchen’s helm. I think what would’ve made things better, for me, is if Duncan threw that ball of dough at Ada, just to see it harmlessly bounce off her, lol. I, too, cook a lot and have used Food Network and YouTube as places of inspiration. Needless to say, I felt a genuine connection to Duncan here and was rooting for the guy. His ability to impress the fuck out of Callie was practically me impressing the fuck out of Callie, haha.

Already made some jokes with you through DM about the last scene in this chapter. Something I want to point out is Callie’s comment about normal-sized dicks not gonna do it for her anymore. Imma push horny-brain out of the way, because I want to talk about this casual line, that might hold more weight than first impressed upon. IF Duncan were given the option to grow back to normal … would he do it? What would Callie’s reaction be? I mean, he can tele-work and provide his fair share of funds to the family. He and Callie have proven that, not only, size doesn’t matter, it heightens their lovemaking. So, what now? If he were to grow back, how would the dynamic of their relationship change? A fucking lot it would. Not personality-wise, but they obviously share something unique that comes with the extreme size difference. It’s a real thinker.

Dunky™ huh? This is easily the best nickname for him I’ve heard yet. Dunky™ and Callie, sittn’ on a tree. F, U, C, K, I, N, G. First comes tongue’ing, then comes insert’ing. I like it. Love this couple! With Dunky™ and Callie cemented, I’m super curious where this story will go. My attention goes back to Kristie, and now I wonder if her history has anything to do with the shrinking. I wonder if Kristie was the actual intended target, and not Dunky™. Given her reaction to her manilla file and the secrecy surrounding her family, this is where my mind is. But anyway, I can’t wait to read more about Dunky™, Callie, Ada, Monica, and Kristie. I got them all, right? Yeah, I’m sure I did!

 



Author's Response:

Shit! I didn't expect you to actually trademark Dunk ... that nickname. It's too good, though, so I I guess I have to figure out how to transfer those star-based royalty payments your way. Damn it!

Oh, and you forgot Alyssia in your list at the end there. That was an accidental oversight, I'm sure. Maybe I need to include Aly more so that she's not so forgettable? Oh, I know! Maybe I can write a single vore scene for the story and have her do the eating! Sounds great, right? What do you think?

In all seriousness, though, I do love how certain scenes (and not always the most obvious ones) stick with you. When you told me about how her poking her head into Duncan's video call, I loved that so much! It was such a small part in the grand scheme of things, but it's great how things like that can have such an impact. And, believe it or not, the chocolate on the nose scene was what I would have guessed (if, you know, you would have actually given me time to guess!). I felt that same kind of vibe when I wrote that scene, and I'm so happy that someone singled it out! I'm not sure why you didn't "never mind" at that part, though. Do you not have a chocolate nose fetish?

As always, it means so much to hear any compliment relating to mouthplay coming from you, as I know that's your thing (well, the first part of your thing, anyway; can't get to the stomach without going through the mouth, after all) and you've provided some fantastic vore and mouthplay scenes to never mind to (that scene in Echoes where Jen eats half the bar is one of my favorite vore scenes of all time, by the way; I don't know if I've mentioned that before). I'm glad you enjoyed all the detail and that you found that anatomy diagram to help you through it!

I love you centering in on that romantic dinner. You've never seen anything like that in the community before? That's fucking awesome! It feels great to hear that I've actually introduced something kind of new (or at least rare) with this story.

You know, I actually wrestled with the idea of Dunky (I'll start making payments now, I guess) throwing that dough ball at Ada instead of the backsplash. I agree that seeing it bounce off of her would have been a cool moment showing the scale of weakness the size disparity has left him with, but I ultimately decided that, even though he was upset, it would have been too much of a dick move for him to have thrown it at her, even if it wouldn't have hurt her (it's the thought that counts, or whatever the negative equivalent to that phrase is).

Reading that you made a legit connection to Duncan here and felt like him impressing Callie was you doing it was so satisfying, especially since a lot of giantess/shrunken man story male protagonists tend to get lost in the shuffle and come off as a bit generic at times. I really didn't want Duncan falling into that trap, and seeing a reader actually being able to relate to him is incredible!

The question of what Duncan would do if given the chance to get his size back is a good one. Before he met up with Callie, he had long since given up on the prospect of returning to normal, electing just to try and survive instead, but he started to regain hope since making/reuniting with some regular-sized friends. So, now that everything is seemingly going perfectly for him, how does he feel? I don't know if he's devoted a lot of time to thinking about that lately, which may or may not be telling in and of itself. Then again, the prospect of finally being able to hold Callie in his arms and giving her a proper kiss (and fuck) has to be appealing to, right?

I'm intrigued that you immediately went back to Kristie now that our lovely couple are finally together. Obviously I'm not going to give you a straight answer, but I will say that we'll find out more about Kristie's history in the next chapter. Whether or not that has anything to do with what happened to her (or Duncan, for that matter) remains to be seen.

Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2024 Title: Chapter 10: Duncan vs. the Diffident Domme

Upfront, I want to highlight what I thought the juiciest part of this chapter was. Kristie’s backstory and Monica’s reaction to it. Love it. I wish we could see more! Kristie went from villain to my eyes to a misunderstood character with deep-seated trauma. Trauma that she's bottling up or straight-up ignoring. I empathize with Kristie and totally get her attitude towards everyone. Poor thing.

This certainly complicates things with Monica, and her past action on Kristie. Wow. I can’t wait to see Monica confront this. Both with herself internally, and when she inevitably speaks to Kristie about it. They have such an interesting relationship! Kristie, with her freedom to roam around Monica’s living space, to the little dinners they have together. I must see more of this! Lol. I’m hoping Monica can mend things with Kristie and then those two forming a significant relationship.

Yay! We finally got to read about Callie’s feet, haha. The first part of this chapter, dealing with the logistics of Dunky getting close to his girlfriend’s giant feet, was great. And, of course, Callie, not understanding the draw to her feet, still played along with her boyfriend to fulfill his kink. Although we all expect Callie to play along with her boyfriend, I loved she did nonetheless! And who would’ve guessed that she would like it herself? Lol.

Ever since Duncan’s close encounter with Monica’s feet, I’ve been waiting—waiting!—for Duncan to get lucky with Callie’s feet, haha. All the descriptions were awesome. Especially all that play time he had with her arch. That was hot. And the ending sex scene with Callie was endearing.

Even with all the playfulness and almost zero-problem relationship they have together, Callie is still concerned with Duncan’s well-being and is over-cautious she’s not using her size against Duncan. Boy … that girl is a keeper. Those two are perfect for each other. Would be a shame if something came along to disrupt that …

I have my theories as to the bigger picture of the story. Like this conspiracy with Natasha. I’m still convinced that Duncan got caught up in something that wasn’t entirely his fault. I believe Kristie is gonna have more airtime in the future when things come to a head.



Author's Response:

I wasn't sure how people would respond to Kristie's backstory, given what she did to Duncan before, so I'm really encouraged with your reaction to it!

Deep-seated trauma is a really good term for what's wrong with Kristie. She's not a good person, but then she never really had a chance to be one either. An entire life of being made to feel like she's not good enough, culminated in being sexually abused by a spoiled, manipulative brat who suffered pretty much no consequences for his actions, has shaped her into a bitter, hateful person. I'm so glad that you're able to empathize with her, as that was something I knew was going to be tough to pull off after I wrote that first segment of chapter two.

Obviously Monica is in a really tough place with everything as well. She was already feeling guilty before this, maybe moreso because of the action itself than feeling sorry for Kristie, but now that she understands why Kristie is the way she is, how much does that change things for her? Doing what she did to a victim of sexual abuse certainly can't help her conscience, and understanding why Kristie does the things she does suddenly makes her seem a lot more sympathetic. Of course, none of that changes the fact that Kristie raped Duncan. You're correct in that things between them just became a lot more complicated!

Who would have guessed that Callie would get into having her feet worshipped indeed. It's funny how these things just always seem to work out! I'm glad you found the foot stuff with Callie and Duncan to be worth the wait. That was always going to be a conversation that came up at some point in the relationship; they just had "other things" that they needed to do first (like everything in chapter nine, for example!).

And yeah, Callie noticed a shift in her behavior with Duncan, so it bothered her, even if she's still really tame compared to most other giantesses on this site. I tried to hint as early as chapter two that she had some deeply buried desire to be more dominant, although not necessarily change her personality. It's more like there's a part of her that she keeps hidden, something that doesn't necessarily fit what was expected of her growing up (she was told women are supposed to be more submissive), so she assumed it was wrong. So it's actually kind of a big deal that she trusts Duncan enough to let that side of her come out and have some fun; she knows he's not going to judge her for it. She was just afraid that he didn't like it but just wasn't saying anything.

No comment on any potential disruptions or theories. We'll certainly see more of Kristie, though. It just remains to be seen whether that has anything to do with what happened to Duncan.

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Date: January 23 2025 Title: Chapter 11: Ada vs. the Sultry Showoffs

Hello, sir. You don’t know me. I stumbled on your story a few days ago and promptly ignored it. I don’t read. My thing is to gloss over chapter titles and guess what happens. My wife has read your story (like the words between chapter titles) and wanted to share her thoughts and opinions on the arrangement of said words.

Starting off with Kristie and Monica, my wife liked how they both felt guilty about their past behaviors. She said it was necessary for them to feel bad and air out before moving forward together. My wife predicts that Monica and Kristie will have a meaningful relationship in the near future. The way they both came together on their own was enjoying to see, and she’s really rooting for them.

She loved the sex scene with Callie. My wife said it was exciting to see Callie let loose, and at one point, she thought Callie was gonna share Dunky with Ada and honestly wouldn’t mind seeing this. My wife said she’d love to try the finger thing on me if I was a tiny, by tying me up with string so I couldn’t go nowhere (too bad I’m not into this fetish.) It’s hard pulling an opinion from my wife, but she said the entire sex scene was enjoyable.

Finally, she’s excited about the story’s direction and the sudden appearance of Natasha. My wife read this chapter in one go and couldn’t put it down. She said to keep on writin’!

 

As for me, I can’t wait to read the chapter title of your next update. Actually, I’ll have my wife read it to me. I’m far too busy and not into this fetish. I like pioneer-era stories about the Oregon Trail.



Author's Response:

Good day, sir!

It's an honor to not know you. I hope you've recovered from stumbling over my story, as I've not updated my liability insurance in some time. Normally I'd be concerned about revealing this to you, but thankfully you don't read, so I should be in the clear here.

I so very much appreciate the attention you've paid to my chapter titles, as I've put more of my thought into those than I have those meddlesome words separating them. You wouldn't believe how long I debated things like vs. vs. vs. Shit. I mean vs vs. vs. Fuck, that still doesn't look right. Vs versus vs.? Uh, what's alliteration again?

I'm so glad to hear that your wife enjoyed the said words in my little story, but, based on her thoughts as shared here, it looks like she actually read the unsaid ones as well! I certainly wouldn't have blamed her for sticky to just the dialogue, so thus was a pleasant surprise!

As for the said words, both said and unsaid, I was really happy to see that your wife seems to be enjoying the progress being made between Monica and Kristie. Based on her feelings on Kristie earlier in the story, which I'm completely unaware of since this is our first meeting, I was really curious how she would take to this development. She's 100 percent right that both women had a lot to process both internally and to each other in order to process their guilt and confront those past behaviors. That she's actually cheering these two on now really makes me feel great about how I've written them to this point!

My deepest sympathies for you not sharing our happy fetish here on this site. Being tied to your wife's fingers while she fingers how to use those fingers must be a terrible thing to imagine for you, and my heart aches for you! I mean that with the same degree of seriousness as the rest of this very serious and in no way jocose (hey, I learned a new word today!) response to your review of your wife's review. You're so unlucky to be so lucky!

I'm thrilled that she enjoyed the exhibitionist sex scene so much, though! Yeah, it would have neat if Callie would have shared Duncan with Ada, now wouldn't it? Hmm if only someone would have had that idea in the first place ...

Oh well, I suppose Callie is allowed to be selfish once in a while. And Ada certainly didn't not enjoy the show herself!

That Natasha twist landing with your wife at the end of the chapter makes me happy as well! It was a short segment, but it sounds like it did its job!

And keep writin' I shall! It's quite motivating to here that she read the chapter in one go. I tend to put a lot of words between those exciting chapter titles, not unlike another certain writer that I apparently don't know!

Please tell your wife, as always for the first time, that I really appreciate her taking the time to share her thoughts on this story with me!

The Oregon Trail, you say? Sounds hot! I think I might just have to see if my close personal friend Google has any dysentery porn on them.

Side note: Do NOT Google dysentery porn! The search results are absolute shit!