Reviewer: MXP20 Signed
Date: May 11 2024
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm so jelly of your writing. The sensory descriptions at the end of the story were fantastic. One that comes to mind is how you described the blood flowing through the giant during their play. And the narrative surrounding Rosemary's experience overall was just fantastic.
Not gonna lie, I thought you were going a different direction with this, haha. Me, knowing your violent proclivities in stories, I thought the giant was gonna be rough with the woman. But wow! This was hot. It alluded to their past without diving in too hard, and the story (chapter?) ended with so many possibilities of where their relationship could go. I really enjoyed that. The smut is great and fits in with the characters' personalities. And it's believable! Although I imagine ejaculating at work might come with some disciplinary actions, I'm happy to see these two do it.
This was great, Nyx. I love these stories I can escape to. And it's M/f! Huge plus!
Author's Response: Coming from a writer that I admire so much, that’s definitely high praise :)
I’ve been exploring gentle scenarios more often, although I have to admit that there was a part of me that wanted him to rampage just because I can’t resist the Dark Side for very long.