A very intriguing start, and as always a pleasure to see your name pop up on the most recent page.  I myself am in a similar boat with not showing up at frequently, although I've still got my fingers crossed continually for the 3rd Fairytale Romance story to show up eventually...  Nice work!

While this is a solid premise and you convey your ideas pretty effectively, it moves along so quickly that I think it goes beyond just dispensing with backstory and instead becomes more like summary.  I agree with the first reviewer; don't be afraid to beef this up a little more.  You have a lot of room to grow here without it becoming overly complicated, as you say you want to avoid.

Very nice work.  You've got some solid description throughout that engages the senses well.  The sorority pledge dare was a nice touch to make the event seem a bit more plausible than just a couple of psychos showing up on the doorstep.  You did a good job in general of making the story feel self-contained, especially in the more light-hearted ending, compared to how stories of this type often conclude much more gorily.  If I had to critique something, I'd say the dialogue here and there from the girls was a little more stiff than it needed to be, such as how they don't use contractions as often as most college girls do, but that's a very minor nitpick.  Again, a great little tale here, 5 stars easily.

You're building some good steam on this story.  The set-up seemed a bit rushed to me, what with Georgia seeming to get over her new position in life pretty quickly, but these last couple chapters have been pretty great.  You don't see many stories that handle the gentle giantess angle like this, and the relationship of the characters comes off as much more playful than risky, which is a nice tone to have.  The newest chapter's truth or dare game in particular was very creative in its uses of their different sizes, and contained some pretty enticing situations without it seeming off on the part of either character, due to their intoxication.  If I could make one critique, I'd say don't be afraid to show us a bit more of Georgia's emotional side; as I said, she seems to have gotten over her permanently shrunken situation pretty quickly, so it might be interesting to see how she's really handling all this.  Well done, keep it up.

I like this a lot.  The idea of a giantess being willingly revered by a town is pretty enticing, and the crush sequence was fun.  I was hoping she was actually going to switch bodies with the giant girl so that she could crush her former tiny body with her new mind inside it, or even eat her.  Still, great stuff!

This is a nice start.  You do a good job of keeping the unaware angle light and playful.  There are some spelling/grammar mistakes around that might be worth cleaning up, and sometimes the verb tenses don't match up, but overall this is a decent way to jump into your tale.  Keep it up.

Though this is only a premise, I like a lot of the inherent conflict of the world you've established with this brief conversation regarding the treatment of the races and what it means to be a person.  It'll be interesting to see how you explore those themes further when your tinies start interacting with an actual giantess.

Seriously, you better be prepared.  I've got notes.

Also, now that I've realized after that last conversation just how sharp you are at narrative analysis (and how unfortunately good your memory is), I'm now combing back through my draft of Time-out 6 with terror in my heart that something doesn't line up and you'll catch it. So, you know, THANKS, you son of a bitch.

But really, thanks.  And be ready!

Motions, indeed.

Glad that Steph got a last development in her storyline here, since she had the lengthiest emotional journey of the three who attacked Corey, at least in the scope of this story. I half-expected she and Claire were on their way to visit a grave for her brother, but that would've been a tad grim, I suppose. What you went with was quite nice.

I liked that we finally got to see all the Lindons together. That was a nice image to provide ever so briefly before they all part ways again for wherever they're headed now. The idea of having three Omegas all circled up together with Corey and Howard like little specks of dust hanging out on the girls' fingers was great, difficult as it is to imagine given the scale. I'm eager to see them in a new setting beyond the bounds of the Lindon house.

I appreciated how the final moment with Abby encapsulated the varying degrees of the story's subtitle, not just in the obvious ways for Claire's charges, but for everyone that's been impacted in some way by the events here and the challenges they'll face in the future. It was a nice mix of hopeful but still appropriately cautious of what'll almost certainly eventually lead to some new conflict. And hearing the Fire spelled out again in much more explicitly dire terms, succinct as it was, leaves a great promise for further difficulties for everyone.

Anyway, it was a fun ride. Glad to see this installment brought to a fitting close.

This is a very solid start.  You've got a great hook for your beginning by throwing your readers right into the midst of your plot and initially skipping over the introductory material setting up the size-changing antics.  It gives the story an atmosphere much like a concentration camp and, especially given the number of tiny people in captivity, immediately provides the story with some heavy stakes.  Well done here, and keep up the good work.