This is incredible. I read the first 11 chapters yesterday and chapter 12 today, oh boy 20,000 was a lot but a good read. You have a full length novel here man. 

This has been a crazy ride. You've been knocking it out of the park. I don't even know which parts to talk about. Mimi has been such an interesting character. Watching her relationship with Roy has been so entertaining, the two are able to quip at each other so easily. And how she denies his taste. No wonder Sarah teases her so much about the two of them. 

I wasn't as big of a fan of Sarah at first because she seemed like more of an obstacle than a character, but Chapter 11 was HOT. Her playing with him between her boobs was so good; that method of showering a tiny is definitely one I'd love to revisit myself. And seeing how she was careful with him during the shower was satisfying. 

(Before continuing, I'd like to say that your story gave me some inspiration and motivation for my own writing. I'm working on a couple of stories myself, one I'm posting as I finish each chapter which doesn't really have a concrete plot-arc(it's definitely more on the erotica side and just continuous character interactions; if interested: https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=11291) and another which has a plot and character arcs that I won't post until I've finished). 

Quality over quantity(although you have given both) so don't feel bad if it's not coming as quickly as you'd like. 

I am very curious that Roy didn't even talk about Punishment #2. What would the consequences of that be and how did he not want to jump at that opportunity? He really cares about those two doesn't he. 

You are the author but my own preference for every story is to be non-fatal. I never have really understood the fatal part of the fetish, in my mind it just stops all the fun with the death while non-fatal keeps the fun going forever. So usually I like the tiny to be indestructible, although not necessarily invulnerable(pain can be fun) because it allows for more opportunities. I really hope that he doesn't die from it. I know that's a very likely direction for the story that would be bittersweet, but poignant, but I really hope Roy lives. Who knows what the wish will be. (I really hope it's for him to be tiny and not die of anything but old age so the fun continues).

So far it's been amazing and I think you'll continue to astound.

WOW! I didn't think this story would get an update.

I wanna say that I empathize so much about wanting to write more but not being able to regularly, 

It's also rough to have a high read count and then not that many reviews in comparison. (It's especially interesting when people favorite your story but then don't leave a review, I've done it on a couple with the intention of writing a longer review once I had the time, but there's always a time crunch isn't there).

So, firstly I'd like to say that I really enjoy this story. 

I think the interaction in chapter 5 between Chris and Claire was intriguing, I was very surprised that Chris would even care if Richard had a rough home life. In really hard situations we tend to lose empathy which Chris is definitely going through. I think Claire was absolutely right and who cares if Richard has a rough home life, that's no excuse for being such a jerk. (Personally, I hope he gets iced out as a character since he's a guy and well this is a giantess website. That said, I do appreciate the touch of realism of Chris not only interacting with girls. I think maybe Jas asserting her dominance over Rich would be really nice, I see this happening through her wanting to have her fun with Chris and Rich interrupting her and Jas just absolutely destroying Rich because she wants Chris to be her toy alone).

Now onto the review. Chapter 6 Bully, is a great piece of butt content. 

This is in part smut writing so it's alright to be indulgent in the descriptions of the sexy stuff. You have a lot to work with in these situations so don't be afraid to expand the descriptions of what's happening. You can really slow down the action in those moments. Jas had a whole 2 mile run, you can go into the pressure of her cheeks crushing him repeatedly as she runs, the rising sweat as she runs. The feeling of her hole squeezing his face as she runs. Stuff like that. 

Kat is an intriguing character, the envious and jealous little sister seeing her older brother in a whole new light. Would love to see her interactions with him continued, maybe even some partnering up with Jas. Tag-team-torture would be fun to read. Alyssa is also a fun concept to see, the uncertainty with what to do and still liking him is something that has potential.

The constructive, and emphasis on constructive, criticism I have is one, you already acknowledged switching around the perspective, you can have multiple perspectives, just keep it consistent per section. For example, you can split it up with a 

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and have that indicate a new perspective. And two, your dialogue could be a bit more natural. It's not dreadful, but it could flow a bit better. Don't be too hard on yourself because this story is interesting and despite its roughness I'm still invested. That said, it would be good to focus on improving the overall presentation. I don't want that to discourage you from continuing because at its roots this is a good story. 

Absolutely fantastic start man. This story has tons of potential and I'm looking forward to reading it. There are lots of routes for this narrative to go and I think you have the skill to make it an excellent one.

Oh how I have waited for this chapter with great excitement. You know a story has made a real impact on you when even months after reading it you think about it and the characters, the plot, and want to re-read it and continue it and just can't stop wondering about what happens next in the story(even when it is finished, there's always more to explore).

I have really really been wanting you to update this. This story inspired me to figure out how an idea I had for my own giantess couple story it's called "We accept the love we think we deserve", based on a quote from The Perks of Being a Wallflower  and my original idea was interesting and had a different title, but it wasn't something I could put my heart into. But you motivated me to work on a love story. And for that thank you. Right now it's only 16K words, but when it's done I'll release it on the website(For my giantess writing I can write out of order, but not my regular writing that has to be sequential.). This story is so good that I want to make mine as good as I can to give a great product to the rest of the website.

Now for the actual review. HELL YES! This was good. This is top-tier fluffy romance writing and you are killing it. I loved it. I have been swamped since you uploaded and have been saving reading this until I had made enough progress in my work and it was worth it. This was amazing man. You did an excellent job here. The ending of the chapter was perfect. These two idiot lovebirds are so precious together. I hope you get into that specific mood more. And I'm positive you will provide top quality when you do.

I really think that if you wanted to this could be something you could publish. Alternative reality romance. Something like that. But it's good and I think people outside the fetish would like it. There are some stories on this site that are good giantess stories, but there are some that are just damn good stories. And your story is a damn excellent one. You rock.

You're doing a fantastic job at this story. Plot-focused indeed, it's really good and I can't wait to see more in the future.

I love this premise. The dynamic between the two will be very interesting to follow as the story plays out. I'm looking forward to more chapters in the future. So far your execution has been great and I think the rest of the story will follow suit.

Man this story is awesome. 

I love everything about it so far. The characterization is fantastic and the descriptions are excellent.

I think its interesting that you decided to keep vore being fatal(I always prefer non-fatal for everything, but that's me), it does raise stakes, but also makes it harder on Beck. Then again it requires more trust in the relationship. 

I'm really looking forward to the next installment and seeing how the relationship.

I like what you're doing with the story. It's pretty interesting and I am curious to see where it goes.

A piece of constructive criticism I'd like to give is that you have long stretches of dialogue which isn't inherently bad, good dialogue is important for a story like this. But, I'd advise you to add some descriptors in there to spice it up like Kelly smiling or Matt looked away. Something to add more flavor to the flow.

That was awesome man. I don't know what to emphasize other than I loved it. This concept was executed perfectly. I hope that maybe you do it again one day for another big event for the two, or maybe even Andy and Ash. Jake's priorities for the day showed just how awesome he is as a person.

Well, I caught up and I have to say that I am loving this story. The slice of life is amazing. That Jake has a job and can still do things is great.

I'm not normally into micro interactions that small, but you sold it in chapter 2. I still prefer the regular 3 inch stuff though.

I think it's great seeing the interactions between Kacey and Jake. I love the building of her musk to toy with him and how she uses her old clothes as projectiles for him. The way that Jake has learned how to resist her a little bit is amazing. I really like that no matter what she's still concerned about him if she feels he actually gets into any pain. It's important to show that the connection is genuine between the two. Without that connection remaining the relationship between a normal and a tiny loses its spark in my eyes.

It would be interesting if she started using more of his durability and kept him in her sock while walking around, maybe even exercising with Ash at the same time. While of course being worried about Jake at first.

I think the durability should extend to being eaten, even if you don't cover it in this story it would be nice to add an extra layer of comfort to Jake and Andy, but it is your story.

Ash and Andy is very intriguing. Despite Ash's very playful nature she still wants to take care of him properly. She can certainly get ahead of herself sometimes but, she's a great character. 

And Kacey working at the office is very cool. Hopefully Ms. Black will come around a little bit.