Penname: Viper07 [Contact] Real name: Snek
Member Since: August 13 2021
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm new at this giantess writing stuff so go easy. Or not. Know what? Screw me feelings! ABUSE ME!!!


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Summary: Feature

Andrew is a simple office man, seeking a hassle-free, organized life. A marriage to a brash, hygienically-challenged giantess proves to be an imposing situation. Yet, in a way, opposites attract, and Andrew finds that his devotion to his marriage, and his wife, outlives his own personal sense of cleanliness.

This is an episodic tale of fluffy one-shots, of differing scenarios Andrew finds himself in.

Previously called "Welcoming Home".


Categories: Slave, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Muscle, Odor, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Massive Mutagen
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100479 Read Count: 112800
[Report This] Published: February 18 2020 Updated: October 30 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Home

Just got around to reading this. Such a lovely relationship shown here. The type that, even with some presentable hurdles, it's clear they care for each other a great deal! They are a wonderful couple and I very much enjoyed watching as Andrew pushed on in his effort! 



Author's Response:

Fancy seeing you here Viper! I've enjoyed your own couple's tale immensely. Andrew's going to have a far larger hurdle in the next chapter, whenever it will come out.

Deliverance by Kardo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A young man at a bar assaulted for his diminutive stature is saved by a good samaritan who holds a dark secret. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 324818 Read Count: 356973
[Report This] Published: February 24 2021 Updated: October 09 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Reception

Very nearing the point of no return here. With Ruiwen close to one of her targets, under orders of Jisoo no less, and Maddie so near then things are almost certainly going to spiral out of control. 

And this is why you gotta let bygones be bygones Jisoo. Shoulda listened to Eren. Now we are so close to an issue that could be avoided had you never given that order. 

Really noticed how plenty of the Fang ladies go on about how what they do is for the benefit of the world, only to give in to their vices in the name of the "greater good". Sounds like some people ain't practicing what they preach lol.

"Hypocrisy is the audacity to preach integrity from a den of corruption" -Wes Fesler

Maybe their intentions were good at one point but they've definitely fallen to some of the seven sins yessir. 

Great chapter as always Kardo. I always look forward to when you update. 



Author's Response:

There are lots of things that would never have happened if Jisoo had managed to let things go, right from the beginning if she had listened to Eren and not gone after Mikayla, Alice and Sylvia it's very possible she and Eren would have had a comparably 'normal' relationship. The Fang ladies are definitely revealing their true colors as more about them is revealed! When they aren't 'arbiters of justice' their moral ethics are very questionable to say the least.

Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: June 24 2022 Title: Chapter 51: Results

The best plans are always the most ludicrous, as Maddie clearly saw for herself. Now she got a taste of what the other women of the corporation possess, and boy did she benefit from it.

I do wonder though how this is going to affect Ren in the coming future. She knows she's in a very tough spot. A clear rock and a hard place situation. The rock of course being Jisoo and the hard place being...the rest of the corporation. Eager to see just what's going to happen when everyone discovers the situation with Eren. 

Carnage is coming. And a whole lot of it.  



Author's Response:

Ren struggling between her newfound guilt and care for Maddie is at conflict between her family, which as we've seen doesn't treat her very well because she's just a low ranked member. Whether or not her decision to listen to her consciousness comes back to bite her later we'll have to see!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: July 03 2022 Title: Chapter 54: Fall From Grace Part 3

Even after everything she's done, I can't help but pity Grace. She lacked what Jisoo had, and that's a drive to become a better person. Grace knows that she's a monster. She can lie as much as she wants, disguise the truth in any way she sees it, and even deny it to her last breath. But she knows that she is one. Whether she lives or dies it'll come about because of her actions. So, I pity her. That said I cannot resist saying this. 

Grace


Get, and I cannot stress this enough, FUCKED



Author's Response:

Grace this entire time has deep down resented Jisoo because she was living proof that even a monster can change if they have the heart for it, but Grace due to a combination of her upbringing and personal moral failures could never cross the boundary to the 'light side' and sought to drag Jisoo down with her if that's what it took. It was important to make sure she was not so despicable throughout the story that she was hated completely by the reader, but also enough of a villain that her downfall was satisfying. 

Thank you for the kind words!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16 2022 Title: Chapter 55: Fall From Grace Part 4

Grace had this coming for a veeery long time. Kinda surreal though to see this once seemingly invincible woman be reduced to the very thing she's preyed on since her introduction. In her eyes, and even to her supposed family, she'd now be seen as even less than human. The very same humans they've mocked for so long. 

Grace was given a punishment far worse than being killed, she was humbled. A false got cast down. What a wonderful wake-up call, not just for her but for the rest of the corporation. Oh, they'll be shaking in their boots now. 

A wonderfully cathartic chapter. 



Author's Response:

We will definitely get to Grace's mental state a bit later, after a few more events cement her new place in the social hierarchy that she considered herself the apex of! As Jisoo stated this is a fate worse than death for Grace, since to her power is everything and she considers it worse to be 'broken' rather than dead. Hence her earlier actions in the story where she was obsessed with proving she could 'break' people like Thomas and Alice.

And she's had this one coming pretty much since her introduction I think! It'll be exciting to get back to how her arc concludes in a few chapters. 

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2022 Title: Chapter 63: Stolen Scheme

As it would turn out Suji did have an alternate plan

The immediate thought which came up after finishing this chapter. And just when Jisoo wished that she would propose an alternative. Talk about timing. Ultimately, this was sort of inevitable. History had a way of repeating itself and once again the original influencers of the diminution are finding themselves on opposite sides of the playing field.


Jisoo has the clrsr advantage in most cases no, seeing as she's practically all-powerful. The one thing holding her back from putting a stop to Suji then and there would be her vow to never harm another living creature. A vow I am more than certain Suji is banking on. I don't think the scare tactics Jisoo used prior will have much affect on her sister. 

There's also one variable who's own opinions should be addressed that I think Jisoo is overlooking. What exactly would her mother think of her decision?

Jumping the gun again, Jisoo. Just like you did in a past life and just like you did with Maddie. 



Author's Response:

You're spot on in this analysis ^. Jisoo pretty much did exactly this in her past life as Daiyu, and Suji basically did exactly what she did as Baochai. This time Suji is trying to pre-empt her sister and using her knowledge of Jisoo's willingness to hurt other people, intends to do things her own way. 

As for Keqing, she's more or less content to let whatever her 'daughters' want play out and focus on her monastery and the people there, and now she's responsible for reincarnating Satsuki and raising her properly. But she's definitely got her eyes on things.

Summary:

A young boy goes against his parents' wishes to receive a normal high school education after years of homeschooling. He was subjected to a virus three years ago that was nearly the death of him and multitudes of others, but he lives on strong at the one inch that the virus left his height at. Has he made a good or bad decision?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11637 Read Count: 90211
[Report This] Published: July 13 2021 Updated: September 24 2021
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: September 16 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Free at Last?

Hohoo the plot thickens for Richard Cothmire. He ain't out of the woodwork yet. Side note, Heather did nothing wrong! Straight up decked Kristi first chance she got. Respect.

Summary:

 

Three years have passed since Maya found her little lover Six after the carnage she brought upon Saint Minervas hospital. Since then the worlds changed considerably, and only continues to do so as new key players in these changes make themselves known. With a new lover by Mayas side, along with her beloved Six, the world is ready for yet another change. How that change will affect them remains to be seen.


Reviews and critiques are greatly appreciated, not just by myself but by all writers.


If you wanna see where the series began you can check out my first story on the site!
https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10793


Disclaimer: Story has chapters that contain cruel content among other things. Also has sweet chapters as well. Any likeness to real-life individuals is pure coincidence.  

-Chapter 58 is now up-


Notice: No longer on hiatus!



 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Alpha-Beta
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 291472 Read Count: 118820
[Report This] Published: August 25 2021 Updated: April 30 2024
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: August 27 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?

So I noticed an issue where when I'm logged in the story kinda disappears from the chapter, but when read looted out of an account it's visible. Really strange. Not sure if everyone having that issue but I guess if it happens try reading while logged off of your account? Not sure if it's a 100% solution but it's worth a try.

Cape-tivity! by 2KFSK Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

In a world of superheroes and superpowers, Catherine Denise -- codenamed: Caldera -- is having a bad day. On her first outing as a proper supervillain, the heist went wrong, her powers overloaded, her team left her, and worst of all, she's been handily defeated by the city's greatest hero, Imperia, a woman with the power to change the size of anything she can touch.

Rather than send her to the wolves of the criminal justice system however, Imperia offers Caldera the chance to join her, train with her to put her powers to use.

But once safely in the hands of Imperia, sequestered away from the world, Caldera realizes this shining hero has her own motives. And she soon comes to learn that the deepest, darkest evils have the potential to hide behind the brightest facades...

What could Imperia be planning? And will Caldera escape in time to avoid her wrath? Find out in...

CAPE-TIVITY!


Cape-tivity™ is a subsidiary of 2KFSK Productions



Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Humiliation, Breasts, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26631 Read Count: 18263
[Report This] Published: May 19 2022 Updated: July 30 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2022 Title: Chapter 7: #6 Suiting Up

Finally caught up to the latest chapter and HOOOOO BOY is this an amazing story! Emily's methods of torturing those under her abuse are some of the most unique I've ever seen. I mean....just look at the phone charger scene. NEVER would have thought of that. She's a definite BEAST and I am down for that!



Author's Response:

I really enjoyed figuring out creative ways to use their superpowers in their torment. After all, why else create a ridiculous superhero pastiche to put a bunch of hot ladies into??

Summary:

Micha is planning on proposing to his longtime girlfriend, Juni. A nerve wracking endeavor for anyone, and even more so when you barely measure up to her ankle. Mix-sized couples were still a bit taboo, but her gentle and playful nature washed away his concerns. And despite their physical differences, they’re just like any other couple, they share romantic moments, the occasional fight, and even a fair share of teasing. 


Their relationship was flawless– well except for one tiny detail: she had a bad habit of torturing tinies behind his back. 


But nobody’s perfect, and what he doesn’t know can’t hurt him. They should stick together for better or for worse… right?



Categories: Butt, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30341 Read Count: 38318
[Report This] Published: July 18 2022 Updated: July 10 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One, Heaven

Micah and Juni are such a cute couple and share a very tender relationship. Kind and caring but there's also room for some teasing, as Juni demonstrated. 

And despite there differences in size there's no real sense of Micah or Juni being superior over the other. They treat each other as equals for the most part which i find just sweet. 


A wonderful story overall.



Author's Response:

Thank you for a wonderful review!! I'm so happy you're enjoying their relationship. Making sure Micha and Juni really felt like a couple instead of just a big and a tiny was one of my main goals. I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds :)

Summary:

Macintosh has resigned himself to the fact that he would live a quiet, solitary life. A cosmic entity with apocalyptic power, however, disrupts this destiny, in her pursuit of an eternal companion.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Gentle, Muscle, Odor, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4402 Read Count: 3191
[Report This] Published: August 16 2022 Updated: August 16 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: World-ending Proposal

Can't think of much better than a devoted apocalyptic eldritch sweetheart. A destined beloved who is given the choice of being with such a powerful beauty. Who could possibly say no?



Author's Response:

I can, if I was promised a flustered, muscly shark grill that can bend space and time. And who's name rhymes with "Zilla".

Fathomless by Kardo, Viper07 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

All myths have some basis in fact, and the origin of a utopian underwater civilization is a story of legend.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2809 Read Count: 2634
[Report This] Published: August 17 2022 Updated: August 17 2022
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Fall of Atlantea

A wonderful representation of the legend of Atlantis. The idea that it's now little more than a collection for a curious monstrous girl is just too good. 

Though, anthill may be more appropriate XD

Seeing as she can now observe them at her own leisure. That is should they survive the trip into the sea. 

Author's Response:

She’s stuffed a lot of the humans into her “sensitive inky areas” which is up to the reader to determine what exactly that is lol. The rest she’s put in her stomach, and others are in big globs of slime on her tentacles which act like protective bubbles.

We’ll see if there’s much of a city at all when we eventually get to her lair at some point!

Summary:

Henry was in a rough place. Forced into a pirate crew, he encounters a creature of the deep when she’s captured in their net. Wishing to set her free, Henry and rest of the pirates are woefully unaware that there’s another individual who wishes to see the creature go free, and she’s not going to show mercy. 

Who would’ve guessed that gigantic axolotl humanoids have strong familial bonds?


Warning: There is some heavy violence and gore ahead, so either batten down the hatches and brace for the storm; or turn back now! 

Created from several conversations with people on the giantessworld discord. 


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24964 Read Count: 16144
[Report This] Published: September 02 2022 Updated: August 13 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Returning the Favor

Here is the carnage I was promised! And boy did you deliver on it! Abyssus is far more monstrous than I could have imagine. And her mother's even more so. Truly beasts worth fearing should you get on their bad side. 

But despite their monstrous nature it's the much smaller Abyssus who shows restraint. Even with her gore covered face she somehow shows herself to be an adorable creature. 

Top tier content!

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Doing The Right Thing

Funny to see Aby unaware of some of the things humans are accustomed to.

Don't know if I've said it before. In case I haven't, Abyssus really feels like she embodies the jovial and curious spirit that comes with being someone so different from humans. A large contrast to her mother who, while caring a great deal for her daughter, doesn't see her most recent interest in the best of light. With Ira around Henry gots his work cut out for him. But so long as he with Abyssus then I'm sure things'll be fine.

....hopefully

Summary:

In a world beset by monstrous creatures known as Kaiju; Valkyries are humanity's shield and greatest oppressors. A series of anthologies about some of the Valkyrie's and their (mostly cruel) shenanigans.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Destruction, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Eldritch Sweethearts
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4661 Read Count: 7356
[Report This] Published: September 26 2022 Updated: February 25 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Sixth Sovereign - Akira I

That beginning 
Getting some House of the Dragon vibes there lol
Some very nice carnage and brutality here. All this is just one big bother for Akira and I just love that. 

Summary:

An ambitious Sith apprentice has been dispatched to a remote planet to hunt down a powerful, yet reclusive Jedi Master. Her strange abilities, however, end up cutting his ego down to size.


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Sci-Fi, Gentle, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8722 Read Count: 1820
[Report This] Published: May 30 2023 Updated: May 30 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Confrontation in the Forest

I don't see why Severus is in such a foul mood. Man gots the golden deal here! There or worse places he could have found himself in. Shrunken before a master who doesn't care for him, or worse a BEACH! Sand already gets everywhere at normal sized, imagine the hell it'd be for him!

A fun story that was well worth the wait. Truly you are a user of the force. A master of the Dark Size.



Author's Response:

Severus's old master was a beach. Lots of sand for him to work through there. Since we're in a forest, I, unfortunately, cannot work in any sand-related scenarios (cue Darth V sighing in relief).

Summary:

For years Arthur dreamed about being shrunk and dominated by the powerful mages of the Elven realms, and his dreams came true when the Archmage Tyrael recruited him into her household. Now he serves as her live in manservant and shrunken toy on command, exploring his desires at the hands and feet of the Archmage and her apprentices. Life seems idyllic, until one day without warning Tyrael announces that they are embarking on a dangerous journey across the Human realms, and into the wilds in pursuit of a goal she won't reveal.

A story about an elven archmage on a quest with her favorite human, and all the kinky uses they find for shrinking magic along the way.


Categories: Odor, Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Fantasy, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25754 Read Count: 21271
[Report This] Published: June 10 2023 Updated: July 31 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The Observatory

As always the smut is incredible, but beyond it I found the interactions between Tyrael and Arthur cute. 

Dare I say... Adorable!?

They got a lovely bond there, one that I very much enjoyed reading beyond the smut. Always enjoyed characterization and the characters you write never fail in that regard. Clear to see with Tyrael's moment of silence over Arthur's mortality. 

A great first chapter.

That said... That constellation do be looking very familiar. Almost like looking in a mirror. I'd advise staying on that star's good side. Been know for its temper.





Author's Response:

It's a very traumatic constellation to observe! Anyways yeah they do have a bond, they're both people with very strange desires that compliment each other perfectly, it's clear why Tyrael is acting a little more foolishly than she might by pursuing certain magical paths that she'd normally avoid.

Nefarious by KYS Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Blaire, a young and bashful woman, moves to Valdez, Alaska to start a new life free of her oppressive family. After meeting a handsome young man, Jacob, the two hit it off and everything appears to be looking bright for Blaire's future. However, unbeknownst to Blaire, a nefarious trafficking organization has its firm grip around Jacob and his mysterious abilities. It will take everything in Jacob's power to protect Blaire from the very evil he has allowed into his life. Will Jacob and Blaire be able to break free of the biggest and most nefarious trafficking organization in the United States?

DISCLAIMER:
All characters are over the age of 18 years old.
This story has elements pertaining to dark and grim fates, and descriptions that can cause trauma or trigger reactions from those with difficult pasts. If you have PTSD from previous sexual experiences, it is recommended YOU DO NOT READ this story. You have been warned.

TAGS FOR CONSIDERATION:
For now the tags I know will be added for CERTAIN are the ones shown for the story. The below tags are considered, but may or may not be added later on.
- Lesbians
- Nose

SPOILER: (look away if you don't want to be SPOILED lulz)
If it isn't obvious, they traffic tinies. Lmao.


Categories: Destruction, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150045 Read Count: 47516
[Report This] Published: July 05 2023 Updated: October 22 2023
Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2023 Title: Chapter 1: ~Volume I~ Chapter 1 - Prologue

I've caught up with the story and do have to say I am very much liking it so far. The characters don't just feel like they're placed there for plots sake, they have their own interests and agendas; points of self satisfaction in Deita's case. Safe to say, thus far, she's actually my favorite character. In the case of Jacob however, those thoughts have been shown in previous reviews. A true piece of work that, while being a main character, has no pleasant future in store for them. At least in my eyes. He's well past that point of return even if he tries to do right. Several millions of dollars too late as it were. 

Very much looking forward to future chapters!



Author's Response:

At this point I may like to reveal that my inspiration for Jacob and this story came from Better Call Saul and Breaking Bad lol. Jacob has a long, arduous road ahead of him.

Your comment about my characters have their own plots and agendas, that's a big compliment, thank you so much. I'm very much aiming for a world where the characters feel real with their goals, livelihood and outcomes. Nobody is safe, not in a world like this.


Liz for instance, there was no reason Jacob had to shrunk her, but he did it anyways. The same goes for future characters down the road as you'll soon seen.

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2023 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Gullivette

This review's taken some time to make, though for good reason. Needed the time to just sit down and read through volume one. Not just where I left off on last but as in re-read the whole of volume one. Can whole heartedly say this has shaped up to be a very intriguing story beyond just the smut. While I do greatly enjoy the leader aspects, as I'm sure many do (Deita for the win, best gal) I am more an enjoyer of plotlines when it comes down to lengthy stories. 


The characters are fleshed out, none more so than those who align themselves with the trafficking of humans. Jinshin has her angles, her views and beliefs, Deita can do no wrong and is the beat damn character here, and Jacob is STILL a P.O.S XD. Every character written is believable in a way, they don't feel like cardboard copies or stand-ins, which i greatly value in a story. 


Can say, the true personalities of some characters really did catch me off guard. For an example, using best Gal here, Deita seemed very business-like and professional at the start, only for it to be shown later on that she can be childlike while her "sister" is more the level headed one. Revelations of personality like those are what I tend to enjoy. 


All in all I have thoroughly enjoyed reading through volume 1 and look forward to what you have in store for volume 2. 


Especially now that we have ourselves some new players on the board, heheheh



Author's Response:

I've really enjoyed fleshing out each character and evolving the way the interact with each other over time.

I am most excited for Gullivette but admittedly she may not make another appearance until a bit later.

Reviewer: Viper07 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07 2023 Title: Chapter 1: ~Volume I~ Chapter 1 - Prologue

Once again, I've managed to catch up with this still heavily enjoyed story. What more can I give other than my encouragement here on its continued development. As the story's progressed I've found myself enjoying the characters more and more, though none more so than Jinshin (Apologies Deita my dear, you've been replaced). Her own conviction of beliefs is something I enjoyed more than I thought I would have. Learning she was just repeating the sins of her past tormentors was a certain treat to read through. 


Also quite liking the characters both introduced and explored on it volume 2, though again the spot of my number 1 goes to Jinshin. That said, Annie's proving quite the force to be reckoned with as well, selling home that she's every bit the monster Jacob can be. It'll be fun when those two eventually come to blows.  


Icing on the cake for me still is how the story is planned out, intended to be more than just another fetish tale on the site. Always enjoyed stories that actually had a story to tell. Solid work here. 


However, and this is only my personal idea, I feel Deita's lustful revelations could have been allowed to cook longer. Greater hints prior to the reveal, and maybe even extending that over the course of a few entries in the story. Doesn't take away from my overall enjoyment, but it is just a thought of mine.


Keep up the incredible work! 



Author's Response:

Regarding Deita, I couldn't agree more. Which is why I have a lovely idea that I believe should more than make up for some lacking and justly due content hehehe

Thank you so much for reading!