Reviewer: Viper07 Signed
Date: July 23 2023
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Gullivette
This review's taken some time to make, though for good reason. Needed the time to just sit down and read through volume one. Not just where I left off on last but as in re-read the whole of volume one. Can whole heartedly say this has shaped up to be a very intriguing story beyond just the smut. While I do greatly enjoy the leader aspects, as I'm sure many do (Deita for the win, best gal) I am more an enjoyer of plotlines when it comes down to lengthy stories.
The characters are fleshed out, none more so than those who align themselves with the trafficking of humans. Jinshin has her angles, her views and beliefs, Deita can do no wrong and is the beat damn character here, and Jacob is STILL a P.O.S XD. Every character written is believable in a way, they don't feel like cardboard copies or stand-ins, which i greatly value in a story.
Can say, the true personalities of some characters really did catch me off guard. For an example, using best Gal here, Deita seemed very business-like and professional at the start, only for it to be shown later on that she can be childlike while her "sister" is more the level headed one. Revelations of personality like those are what I tend to enjoy.
All in all I have thoroughly enjoyed reading through volume 1 and look forward to what you have in store for volume 2.
Especially now that we have ourselves some new players on the board, heheheh
Author's Response: I've really enjoyed fleshing out each character and evolving the way the interact with each other over time.
I am most excited for Gullivette but admittedly she may not make another appearance until a bit later.