This month I have been reading the history of Inheritance and the initial part of Animus I don't know how many times in a row. Analyzing it and the truth is that I cannot stop reading it. I am one of those who immerse themselves in stories and try to draw at least one lesson or conclusion. What I always wonder is why Bridget was allowed to be the executor who carried out Lexi's sentence. Even in a conventional investigation, if a detective or criminologist from an investigation team has a sentimental relationship with a suspect, it is automatically removed from the investigation. As Evelyn said, what was Bridget trying to prove? In the long run it would hurt. even if Lexi had been guilty the damage would be done no matter what. Wouldn't it have been better for another executor to handle the case? Oh well, I guess Lexi being innocent was even worse because her own sister was the one who did her senseless harm. It was devastating in both ways. From what we see in this chapter, the feeling that her sister dehumanizes her and sees her as if she were an insect still remains in Lexi.

That is why I would like to see how the literary teacher Jacksmith solves these conflicts between the sisters. As Bridget told Lexi:

Please, please keep writing this story Jack. It is very good.

You are right Kurogane335 in your assertions. I think the second thing you said was fine, Bridget believed with all her heart in the system her parents founded. That was her mistake, but it is normal after all it is not a perfect system but it is quite fair (given the situation of the universe in which it is framed) Even so, Bridget believed in that system more than she believed in her adoptive sister and although these contradictions are manifested in her being in the Inheritance story yet she should have at least given her sister some credit. Ask for the investigation, see if at least what Lexi said was possible. It's just that for some Omegas it's hard to see the flaws in the work when you just admire its magnificence. How quickly Evelyn realized that something was wrong just by remembering that Nathaniel's last name. But she was two weeks to realize in which her daughter had to make her sister suffer. But still I think Bridget is taking things very seriously. It is normal for her to suffer that way. It's not every day that you realize that you made the person you care about most suffer senseless. It's okay at first, but to separate completely from her sister? Not looking into her face again? I think that would cause more damage to both of them. Between good sisters everything is solved sooner or later.

As for the instantaneous size change, it remains to be seen if it is from Bridget or Lexi or someone else. It may be that Lexi, given her contacts with Kayla, will do any of the alternatives you mentioned. There is also the possibility that he asks her to be an Omega to share her sister's point of view and also become a champion of world justice (or worse, a cataclysmic force that consumes it hahaha. Although I doubt that Kayla will allow it). Although I think that with the fame that Lexi has (the apple never falls far from the tree) it is difficult for Kayla to grant it to her.

Oh, wow. It's... wow, I'm speechless. I can't even imagine the amalgamation of emotions I felt when I read this chapter. Despite the way Alma expressed herself, something still made me feel sorry for her. It is that behind everything she said to her daughter, as you wrote Jack, there were traces of truth and simply Alma used these grains to plant the seeds of doubt and her twisted thoughts of her in her daughter. But I don't know, I felt sorry for Alma. Maybe it's because she pushes away the only person who could love her somehow I don't know... Wow, fantastic story. I didn't think you'd update it so soon Jack. And it seems that the long-awaited meeting between Bridget and Lexi is approaching. Another thing that surprised me... Jenna musical artist, seriously? Wow that introduces a personality trait of hers that she didn't know about. How mysterious is the soul of this character.

In short Jack keep it up. This Omega universe is really exciting and full of many good stories. Thanks for following this story, friend.

Fun continues

Great history so far. Waiting for the Next chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it :D

Well, I don't want to be too picky, but I think if the giantesses wanted something from Jack, they should treat him better. After all, the existence of their race is at stake. I mean... maybe I'm wrong. Although perhaps it is the immaturity of the queen's daughter, but, friend, it is more suffering than happiness that has fallen on Jack and if we want the little boy to have courage in his task, they should give him pleasure not suffering.

Hi Greenmon. I congratulate you, you have the ability to create wonderful and truly unique characters. The story so far, impeccable. They are very good ideas.I would like to ask if there is a possibility to incorporate dragon girls into your story or nekos. When I say dragon girls I mean giant girls but with draconic characteristics. For example dragon tails, claws or scales in some places but his torso and face are human. And if you also add a naive or playful personality, with that unique touch that you give to each character, I think it would be wonderful. Thank you for sharing this great story with us. Keep it up

Author's Response: I don't think it's much of a spoiler at this point but the dragon mentioned so far is in fact a dragon-girl with features much like you described. As for nekos, not sure they fit this setting, but my other story Conquest of Earth has a lot of giant catgirls with very playful personalities, if that's your thing.

Sexy story and very well narrated. It is incredible, besides the fetish, there is always that drop of feelings that makes reading attractive and makes your face blush.

The part that I laughed a lot was when you wrote

The resultant of these two forces is a null vector.

Well most of the time it isn't. Almost always the positive forward is greater hahahaha. I guess the little mouse really had a strong will. But as a phrase from Buena Fe, a musical group from my country, says: There are things that pull more than four carts

I don't know why I have a feeling Amber won't sit idly by. Let's see, for now I'm glad those two lovebirds are back.

Author's Response: We haven't seen the last of her

Wow, this just keeps getting better. It is an exciting development of events. I assumed that Amber would be that, the discordant note between those two. Oh, and Amber meets a guy who's a tinie hunter. wow that doesn't sound good