Reviewer: Sovereign Signed
Date: December 31 2023
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Man this has been fantastic!! Love seeing the family go from people who were worried that every little thing could kill Jake, to being even semi casual about his safety now that they know he's very durable. They care but they know they have more leeway with him.
As to what I'd love to see, honestly I'd love to see a full tour chapter where Jenna accidentally eats Jake, probably because she was more careless at dinner, and decides when she realizes that she'll just wait til her son comes out the other end.
Jake needs a good week long vacation back inside the woman who gave birth to him
Author's Response: Noted friend! While I don't know if I'm gonna sacrifice a whole week of story to dedicate to it, full tour was always on the table, though I haven't decided who should send him on his way, I'll keep the idea in mind! Definitely a fan of the idea of "returning to your roots" inside of a giantess mother though, thank you for the kind words as well!