Reviewer: Nanoname98 Signed
Date: April 08 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This piece of art is simply the best form of written fetish entertainment that I have ever had the luck to stumble upon. No, this is description is not doing this ambitious story full of intricate storytelling, huge plot points, great character work and creative descriptions justice in the slightest! "Mirror" deserves so much praise and love, and even much more attention! From the first chapter, I could already tell that the author knows what they are doing. The story is well thought-out. It's ment to go somewhere and hits all the plot points it wants to hit. All the surroundings make sense, the different worlds are creatively built and described. Both the plot focused parts and the sections more focused on the fetish are executed wonderfully <3! It takes a few chapters to really get going with the size changing stuff, but it is absolutely worth waiting for it. And, in fact, the story is easily captivating enough so that I wouldn't have mindeed reading ten more chapters before encountering the first size changes. Also, the whole size changing aspect isn't burnt and wasted like many stories tend to, but first teased and then slowly built, incorporating all kinds of nuances of the fetish. Everyone will find something for themselves. The main characters ooze charm and personality and play off each other well. The moments of tension can get indeed very tense and downright chilling or creepy. Yes, there are horror elements inside this story and most of them totally hit. This story struck me, it overwhelmed me with its quality writing and I couldn't stop reading. I can't wait to read the next chapter, now that the story seems to build up to the grand finale. The story takes great elements or inspirations from stories like Inception, Matrix, Alice in Wonderland, and has characters that, from time to time, remind me of some of my favorite anime characters in the best way possible. I could gush about this story all night, but I wanna conclude this review with a big thank you to the author. You definitely have a knack for long, thought-out stories, you know how to accentuate the erotic parts, the lightharted humor and the thrilling horror of this surreal world you created, and I can't wait to read more from you <3!
Author's Response:
I can't be anything but humbled by your effulgent praise. I'm glad there is so much you've found to enjoy from the story. It certainly validates all the time I put into crafting it.
I can't remember how long I thought about the idea for this story before I actually started writing it, but it was a very long time. I certainly never would have found the time to write it if the pandemic hadn't turned the world upside down in 2020. It took me nearly all of last year to write all 32 chapters (and that doesn't even include the editing, which has been ongoing now for five months), and I must admit there were times I didn't feel like ever finishing. I came close to completely abandoning this project multiple times. But what eventually motivated me was the hope that somewhere out there, someone would read it one day and find it worth their time.
I wish I could write a lengthier response to all your points because they are so well thought out, but for the sake of brevity I will only say thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
...well, now the pressure is on, I hope you like how the story ends! :/