Oh no! I hope the punishment is nothing too harsh. Good chaper though.

This story is quite funny, even if it not very believable. Strange the military would never come and attack Chai. Technicalities aside, it was still reasonably entertaining.

The characterization of Celia (I assume that's her name) is really good, or at least better than in most of the crap on this site

Perhaps you should do a spin off. Maybe because of her harsh upbringing she uses her powers for crime?

I think you've got an interesting set up for a future story. I'd really like to see her get revenge on her dad too. He's a awful man.

The paragraphing might be something to improve because there a lot of short sentances that are on their own that are not speech. I say this because the story will look more organized. Other than that I think it was pretty good. And if you do decide on reusing the characters on this story I'd love to hear about it. I think there is a lot of potential.

I have no sympathy for the ungly kid now... The story could be more compelling but it's a decent start although I didn't tihnk Kloe would just kiss a random stranger.

I don't think Kloe derved this, she seems like a nice person. :/

I understand English isn't your first lanugage but my issue isn't with spelling (your spelling is pretty good) but the large gaps between the lines. It's a good start but you could add soem description. I don't liek ripping stories apart in any case unless it's something I really don't like. I'm a gentle person, just like the sort of giantesses I like actually. Perhaps if you find the time you could take a look at some of my own stories to see how you coudl develop them. they say a good author is someone who reads a lot, and while that statment is debatable I think it would be a good experience for you.

Ok now I'm not sure what to believe. If Kate perhaps eats like a pig then maybe she is fat after all? But I can't be sure. You haven't actually provided that much description, though I am liking the story so far.

It's so nice to see this story back, but I wondering what happened to the speech marks in this chapter.

Dam, it's a shame you never got this finished. You were just getting the interesting part.

A zombie giantess is very creative. I’ve not seen it done before. I actually shed a tear when Chloe was being attacked (did I just say that?!) but then I was happy the evil man got he deserved. One minor this is that it would be better if you split the separate sections into chapters because it was a lot for me to take in and long chapters can be daunting for people and put them off. I was sad when the nuked her, even if she is a zombie. :/

I found the story to be very descriptive, it’s a shame Chloe’s parents couldn’t stop her though.

This was funny “You're acting like there's a giant zombie out there killing all our friends and trying to eat us right now!”

Other than that however, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I’m going to add you to my favourite authors. And I’ll have a look at some of your other stories tomorrow; there are lots so I don’t know where to start. If you return the favour that would be brilliant, but it's ok I don't mind too much.

This looks promising. I hope to see more stories from you in the future and not be discouraged from a lack of reviews. Once thing I will say though is that there seems to be a lot of dialouge and maybe the story could benifit from more decription of the scenery because I'm finding it hard to visualise some areas. But that's a matter of opinion.