A man finds himself losing his wife to a growing Amazon!
666 words. A witchy chapter indeed.
I really liked this chapter. The protagonists defiant nature was one of my favorite aspects of the story pre-witch powers. His situation was really fucked up and going poorly for him, but I liked that he was taking steps to figure everything out. So I'm glad Megan has given him some of his spunk back. Frankly I hope it bites her in the ass. In a sexy way of course.
Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Well, part of Mitch's journey has been loss. He's lost his wife, Emily. Then he lost his dignity. Finally he's been subsumed. I'm not going to spoil things further. We're looking at three more chapters, max.
Thank you very much.
Well, part of Mitch's journey has been loss. He's lost his wife, Emily. Then he lost his dignity. Finally he's been subsumed. I'm not going to spoil things further. We're looking at three more chapters, max.
This story is meant to be lighter in tone (not in destruction!) to my previous works and to some of the projects I'm working on. It's inspired by "Eileen, larger than life":
You can find the Eileen story here: https://giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=695&p=2767&hilit=eileen#p2767
The idea is to take EIleen where it ended and to have her sister get the same growth powers she had 13 years later. Just to keep exploring, the story is written in first person and present tense.
Synopsis: Vicki is a hot and cocky 21-year old bikini model. Oh, and she has become a super-powered 250 feet tall giantess. Her sister Eileen was already a giant 13 years ago, only in the end she agreed on being reduced. Vicki will not make the same mistake. The world has become her playground and she will have no inhibitions as she is having the time of her life with the city. After a while, she will also find out that she can change her size at will and will explore a few more heights, until the only references she can use to measure herself up are geological.
Thankfully (I hope), se has decided to tell us about her adventure first hand...
Absolutely awesome throughout. Top tier mega gts story. I especially loved the powers aspect of the whole thing.
You've obviously set up a possible sequel with the agent and both sisters in the mix if you decide to do one. I can't remember if you address this or not in the story, but what about Mom since whatever caused the girls to grow seems to be genetic?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it so much :)
The powers actually came from the inspiration of the original Eileen story. I always thought they added a very nice touch for a cheesier type of giantess story.
I like to keep options open (as I did in Side Effects), but right now I'm not too sure on whether I'll continue "I, giantess" in an eventual Day 3 or not. I need to work on other projects for a while and come back to this one to see if I still have some inspiration in me... I could eventually use the setting to write "one-offs". Who knows...
As for her mother... I never mentioned her, so the possibilities are wide open :)
Thanks again for the feedback and the encouragement.
Marlin realizes that his dominance and dignity has become vulnerable as reality shifts, slowly shrinking him down in size, while his wife Aava gains size on him. As this change happens, the world around him shifts as if this change has never happened, and this was always the case, and only he realizes that a shift occured. He is constantly humiliated as reality slowly shifts to let his wife overpower hi and completely engulf him.
Slow shrinking story.
Definitely a theme I enjoy seeing play out. Look forward to more.
Audrey, her sister, and her sister's boyfriend are trapped on an artificial world controlled by a mysterious alien force that puts Audrey on top... in a BIG way...
You're killin' it. Great work here man. Love Audrey's attitude now that she's big. She needs some more shorties to lord it over though. Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
That's great feedback. I thought I'd have introduced some new shorties by now, but the writing is really stretching out with the ideas I already had in place. Stay tuned!
A sister and brother go through changes.
Love this story madeofwin.
Its got lots of thing that I like. It's operating in what is probably my favorite size range. It's got relatively slow growth/slow shrink. It's got huge, growing tits. It's got great size content: comparisons, dialogue that reinforces the size difference, etc. It's got size transference.
I just recently (very lightly) criticized another story for incestuous content, but this story is an example of when that sort of thing works for me. It's the main plot point so the whole thing is about the relationship between the siblings. There's also another layer of power transference/role reversal there.
As an aside I also really loved your other story "How I lost my wife" up until about the last four or so chapters. Up until the point where Megan got all the witchy reality warping powers it was one of my favorites. Just thought I'd let you know that I did read it and enjoyed it.
Anyway, looking forward to more of this one.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the compliment. I'm sorry you don't like Lost Wife anymore. I'd say the last couple of chapters have been the climax of her achieving ultimate power. That's not what's going to happen in Allison.
I can understand how the lack of reviews/feedback can be discouraging. I think it's just the nature of the internet combined with this being fetish material. People are mostly here to get off and get on with things. I have been guilty of that myself for a decade plus at this point. It's only recently that I've started to pipe up and give my two cents when I enjoy someone's work. I actually feel really lucky that I happen to share this particular fetish arena with so many talented content creators like yourself. I encourage anyone who hasn't registered and is reading this review to do so and throw a kind word to madeofwin and others whose work you enjoy. It's easy, quick and could inspire your favorite author to create more work that you enjoy.
Anyway, Allison (and How I lost My Wife) is definitely still one of the stories that is currently drawing me back to this site day after day. It's right in the sweet spot for me in many ways. I really like the verbal stuff. All the "shorty's" and whatnot. Good to see the infamous Blake virus is still thriving as well.
Of course, I don't know what your plan is for the story but if I had to offer a suggestion it would be to see others reactions to Allisons and her brothers new sizes/their transformation. Or just more scenes in the outside world in general.
Really looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't know about discouraged, I just don't feel the urge to continue sharing something people don't seem to enjoy. I'll usually move off of that onto something else, or even take a break.
Currently, John has three women in his life. Allison, his girlfriend, and his neighbor. So reactions are going to happen as with this last chapter we've fleshed out how the siblings got here. Next we get to see what John's day to day looks like.
As a short man, having a tall girlfriend can be interesting. When she can shrink you, you might need to reconsider just how much that height difference bothered you.
Edit: When I had this idea it was going to be a one-off with the protagonist getting crushed right after he shrinks, I never expected this to grow to a novel-length story! Thanks to everyone for the support as I continue writing this.
Awesome work thus far. I'm more of a growth guy than a shrink guy, but Fulda's attitude is more than enough to keep me interested. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it!
Great chapter Vintovka. I love how dialogue heavy this story has been throughout. I'll admit to being torn about Fulda being a murderer, but I'm not torn about her attitude. Hot is definitely the word for it. I like that she likes to feel the power.
Great work all around vintovka. I look forward to more.
Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.
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Another stellar chapter. Like other commenters I really enjoy the slow growth aspect to the story. The sibling stuff is interesting but makes me apprehensive about the "incest" tag. Definitely not against it in fetish material, but the downside to crafting and defining characters as well as you have is that the more out there stuff starts to seem off if it isn't handled well.
Definitely enjoyed Julie's playful side. I thought it was a pretty stark contrast to the cafe night. That night was about Sam and this was about Julie's growing obsession with her own size. She either didn't pick up on or chose to ignore Sams discomfort with all the height based play and she was laying it on pretty thick. Definitely no lack of the tension i mentioned earlier.
Look forward to more for sure.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again. I hope when we get there I've handled the other stuff well. I hope you'll let me know one way or the other. Still some chapters to go though and I don't want to give anything away.
Julie will become more playful. The chapters will kind of bounce around like this too. I hope you like it. I think you'll agree that the tension just gets thicker. All the characters in the story grow, and I don't mean physically. I really hope everyone is good with this.
I'll put another chapter before the weekend. I'm not sure if I'll be able to get any chapters up this coming long weekend though. Hopefully, I can, but we'll see.
I’m glad to see you’re still continuing this story, although as someone who really enjoyed the first fifteen or so chapters I must confess that the way the story developed from that point really wasn’t to my taste. If you recall I thought that even having the two sisters involved really diluted the stories focus so you can imagine adding another half dozen people that I really don’t care about into the mix wasn’t an appealing idea for me. Add to that the seeming ease and lack of drama that accompanied all the partner switching and it just sucks me right out of the story. It seems like others are still really enjoying the story though, and I will continue to check in to see how Sam and Julie’s story concludes.
Also, Sam was a real asshole to the girl from the group in this chapter. Not sure what’s up with that. It’s like he’s so used to having every woman he meets want to fall on his dick that he feels personally insulted when someone doesn’t find him attractive.
Author's Response:
By that "girl from the group", you mean Ava, I assume. I didn't do that justice because what you got was the exact opposite of what I was going for. I'll probably drop that path anyway.
I hear you about the "dilution of the story" with all of the others. I'll stick to one track mostly but there are some things coming I need to get out soon.
Sorry littless, what I meant to say regarding the chapter length in my last review is that I do enjoy the longer chapters very much. I perhaps didn't make that clear enough. Longer chapters are definitely a plus. I'll definitely be there day one to read anything else you release.
Anyway, glad to see Julie's growth is still chugging along. I agree with the previous poster in that we can never have too much of the impact of Julie's size on the world around her. I know the story is already fleshed out but I would love to see more of Julie's day without Sam.
Great work as always. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks again,
Like I said before, although it is written, it's all subject to change. I had written this from the perspective of Sam, but I agree that giving more of Julie's viewpoint would be a good thing.
I'm ready. Twist me up.
Julie is becoming truly huge now. Love it. A lot of the more longform slow growth stories end up with the growee at about the 6'6''/6'7''. So glad she's gone beyond that.
Liked the family backstory stuff and the revelations about Sam and Julie's high school relationship. We learn that the girls father was a giant himself so that casts a little doubt on the inversion table growth theory. Maybe it's just a late growth spurt and the inversion table is a placebo? Did the inversion table work on Jill? Stuff to look forward to. I like the idea of Julie being the only giant but I also like the idea of others growing. I know it'll be good either way though.
Another thing I appreciate is that thus far each chapter has been pretty substantial. You can really dig in to each part. Smaller chapters would be okay as well, but the larger chunks are very much appreciated.
Great work littless. This is one of those stories that has me checking back on the daily to see if the next part has been uploaded.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again. As for the questions you have, you'll just have to wait and see. A agree, the chapters are bit long. The first few drafts were twice as long for most of the chapters. I cut lots of stuff out. It's hard to keep track of what is not there anymore when editing subsequent chapters. Such is the trade of the writer, huh?
However, I have another story I'm working on which is very different than this one. The chapters for that one are much shorter; most under 2500 words. The size relationships are also different and it is told in third person. There is a message in it that is pretty obvious, unlike here where the message is developed slowly.
As for the twist in the next chapter, you'll have to wait but I'll give you all a little teaser: it is dark.
lmao at those chapter end notes. Does that mean Mom isn't gonna join the party?
Another two great chapters. The positives from the earlier chapters continue to apply. The size content is top notch. The comparisons, the dialogue, Sams internal stuff and the social aspects are all great. I was definitely wrong to think this story might end up light on tension. I know some people don't like that aspect of these stories but I love it. It especially does a lot for stories like this that strive to maintain a more "realistic" tone. Sam and Julie would naturally have doubts and non-positive emotions about the frankly massive physical changes they're both going through. Of course it's all a balance and I think you've handled it very well thus far.
What else? I love Julie's attitude about her own size. She likes being big after a lifetime of being small so she has to manage her own giddiness at her good fortune with Sam's apprehension about his lack of physical stature and now his very clear shrinking. Also excited to see what Julia's new job at Greg's Gravel entails.
I'm not sad to see Erin go but I did enjoy her chapters and wouldn't mind seeing her reappear. I thought chapter ten was a little light on dialogue especially when it came to the insecurity discussion. Kind of glossed over that but S and J did end up talking about it in the next chapter, so that's good.
Overall I think the story is firing on all cylinders and it definitely hits a lot of my buttons Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again for the kind words. Mom doesn't join the party, so to speak, but she is integral to the plot; both moms. The size is continually changing and more characters will be brought in. We'll see how the size thing will effect both Sam and Julie. And it won't always be in a positive way. We're not done with the sisters -- we'll never be done with them, lol. I'm glad you enjoy the tension, because I do. Lots more coming.
To everyone,
Sorry about the update cycle, I'll put a chapter up tonight. I was away for the weekend.
Hey littless, just caught up on the last two chapters.
First of all the story is still excellent but as I suspected the incest stuff is throwing me for a loop a bit. Maybe it's because my primary interest is the dynamic between Sam and Julie and how their relationship develops in the face of the size changes so anything that distracts from that plot seems like a distraction to me. It sort of popped up quite suddenly as well i think considering the Adam/Julie relationship is only about a month old. At least you do have them stopping to discuss the whole situation so that's good. Basically, If this were a television show I'd want Erin to remain a supporting/recurring guest rather than a main character. Just personal preference of course and I won't be harping on it chapter by chapter or anything if I don't get my way. Lol
I did like the dynamic at play between the three of them when it came to the size play and the relationship dynamics and whatnot. I like the fact that the characters feel fairly "real" for the most part and you do the relationship stuff well. I like the mystery of Julie's growth and Sam's dwindling. Is it actually tied to the inversion table or is something else afoot? Look forward to finding out.
Overall, still invested and still loving the story.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Thanks again for the feedback. Erin is at the forefront now but will remain a supporting character. Don't worry about that. I suppose it is a distraction, but it's part of Sam's life. There will be other characters coming in and out; but not like Erin. There's a reason for introducing Erin this way, but you'll find out later.
As for the mystery of Julie's and Sam's size change I'll just have to say: wait and see.
Again thanks for the constructive feedback. No chapter is final until I send it up to the website. The remaining chapters are all being rewritten all the time. So, things can change a bit, but mostly the story is set. The rewriting is mostly for trying to tell the story the best way possible, but changes here and there can move it along in slightly different directions. I will take the feedback here into consideration.
Sooooo close to being a genuine six footer. Can't wait. Love the veeeery slow shrink as well. I'm sure that will not escape sis's notice.
Great work all around. Eager for more.
Author's Response:
spgts,
Soon. I'm sure you can tell though. Thanks for the feedback.
Absolutely awesome work thus far man. Really love the characters and the scale that you're working on.
I know you've said that gentle is the order of the day but I hope there will be at least some spikes of tension as the story progresses. I'd also like to see Julie and Sam discuss what's happening to them at some point. They've both acknowledged it and Julie has taken steps to put him at ease, but it's still that elephant in the room.
Just stuff I'd personally enjoy seeing of course and I greatly look forward to reading more regardless of the direction you take the story.
Author's Response:
spgts,
I've pretty much tried to get in all that you've suggested. We'll see if I've succeeded in the coming chapters.
A world where there are 3 races differed by size...and each hates the other....live nearby......love nearby and TORTURE NEARBY... WHAT CAN GO WRONG??
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I like the concept but the capitalization issues make the story difficult to read for me.
The story of what happens when a woman's shrunken wife demands that she get a girlfriend.
Hey Edai, no desire to change the story here. I will say that so far I'm loving everything about this. Will Faye's plan work like she hopes or will it backfire spectacularly? I'm along for the ride either way. Great work all around.
Author's Response:
Well, now, that would be spoilers~