I'm a JP→ENG Translator, and have done many fan works in the past decade. Recently, I did a professional translation for a doujin game that sold over a thousand copies with good reviews, and I am hoping to do more professional works in the future.
I like both giantess and shrunken male, but what I really like is when the cute girl grows bigger, and the male shrinks smaller. Ideally, I want this process to continue until the girl grows as big as a planet, or the male becomes 10,000~100,000 times smaller. Despite the extreme size difference, I like it when the characters can still see, hear, and interact with each other, even if it may require a harem of girls at different sizes, or magical intervention. I also like fantasy races, particularly petite kemonomimi characters, with huge, soft, lactating breasts that grow bigger and bigger, and exaggerated pear-shaped bodies with thunder thighs. Finally, I like TS, where a male character becomes one of the aforementioned female kemonomimi characters, but much shorter, so his head can be smooshed between the bosoms of the other kemonomimi Onee-sans. Despite most people wanting to see big girls dominate and humiliate tiny people, I personally enjoy the opposite much more. The idea of a smaller party dominating a larger one is the epitome of cuteness for me.
I'm currently working on a simple breast-oriented size-fetish game that is illustrated by Yeni to help her with her financial situation (check website). The game will be aimed towards those that like the following (JP):
おっぱい・ロリ超乳・膨乳・パイズリ
巨大娘・巨大化・ほのぼの・いちゃラブ
犬耳・ペット
双子・複数プレイ
The game will primarily focus towards those with breast fetishes, but with size-fetish thrown in that caters to those that want to have a loving relationship with pet puppy girls whose job is to help their diminutive master with his job. Kind of like how blind people have dogs to help with their everyday tasks.
The witch Lilith takes care of a customer with a specific order.
I'm glad Makiura's story inspired you to write this. At first I thought the perspective and name 'Lilith' was a coincidence, but there's plenty of nods to the original. Another author, Jellytea, also tried his hand at this perspective after reading Makiura's story, but I feel like you've done a better job at nailing the eroticism in a way that's more appealing in English.
Upon reading this, I also read and enjoyed your other story 'Shrinking in the Morning'. Erotic extreme size difference relationship stories are rare on this website, and it seems our tastes are similar enough that I'll be looking forward to anything else you have planned in the future.
Hi. I'm glad you liked the story.^^
But to be honest, I have no idea, which story you are talking about. ^^"
It is possible i read it once and it influenced it but as it stands, it wasn't intentional.
As for the name Lilith: It is actually fairly often used as a name for a witch or a female demon in fiction since, according to myth, Lilith was supposed to be Adam's first wife but she rejected him and God's order.
Alex is a young genius scientist who has created a lot of inventions at a young age. His sister, Amber, and her friend have started a livestream to not feel inadequate to him. Alex has created these Nanobots to enter into a body and change it. Alex tries to put some in his family's cat but things might not have turned out so well.
This story is back by demand from reviewers so enjoy the story.
Alternate Ending is out. Hope you all enjoy it.
Some of the Tags: Transformation, Mind Alteration, Unaware, Lactation, Dominance, Impregnation, Anime Catgirls, Age Progression, Gender Bender.
The third chapter was interesting and opened many possibilities for a continuation that I can only guess what you have in mind. Especially regarding the kittens; their presence makes me wonder if there's going to be a montage or time skip for when they're somewhat older and how Alex deals with the widening size difference between him and his cat-hybrid pseudo-family. You had a nice blend of maintaining the erotic nature of the story while explaining things typical of a fantasy or science fiction story where we're learning about the habits and biology of fantastical creatures.
Hopefully the 'Furry' tag on the story doesn't deter any potential readers that would've been interested in reading and reviewing this. Rarely does a writer tread these sorts of waters, and sometimes for a unique story, it takes a while before its potential target audience finally discovers it.
Thank you for your response. I do hope the 'furry' tag does not discourage readers. I think this is some of my greatest writings yet. I can not go into much detail about the story's future but there will be a larger size gap between Alex and has cat-hybrid pseudo-family.
I like the idea there's going to be a sexual dimorphism between the converted men and women. Having the men shrink into mouseboys would allow for a great size difference without requiring that the catgirls grow too colossally big to function as a society on planet Earth. Curious if it's going to be a multi-size tier society where there's various mouseboys and catgirls winding up at different static heights, or if it's going to be progressive, where all mouseboys progressively grow smaller while the catgirls grow bigger through some means. The latter feels more appealing to me, especially if there's a trigger; mouseboy gets caught by horny catgirl, and winds up smaller after the lovey-dovey kitten making process, thus making Alex's journey to fix things ever more difficult the more he fails and becomes closer to a real mouse in size.
In any case, since you already worked out what's going to happen in the future, I'll be looking forward to what you actually have planned for this story
thank you for the review. I am aiming for the sort of world were human, catgirls and mouseboys are trying to figure out how to live together with one normal size, another small and exploitable, and the last one is big and horny. I look over the reviews and look over ideas and suggestions that people review and see if I can put it into the story, I am tweaking the story a little bit already because of some reviews and like the ideas. I am looking over your ideas and seeing if I can add it to the story. I have the ending planned out but that doesn't mean I can't change it, tweak it, or create alternate endings. I do say though that as Alex tries to fix things, he will be more of a mouse in comparision.
The last two chapters felt like they underwent a tonal shift with Alex dining in rubbish bins. Thinking back on it, the plot feels like a movie that has been edited in a way where certain scenes and plot points don't make sense until a director's cut with the removed and alternate scenes is later released.
It's hard for me to understand the time lapse and distance Alex travelled when he escaped from his mother. I would have to reread that particular chapter if I want to fully and accurately articulate my feelings. You introduced the nano-treats that cause growth, and had the kittens partake in them, making me believe they would experience a growth spurt similar in intensity to their grandmother, but the results were far tamer than what I expected, and makes Amber feel like she was frozen in time with her daughters despite her friend migrating away and Amber converted her and Alex's father. When Alex was brought into the bedroom with the computer, I thought his daughter was going to grow until she filled up the entire bedroom like Alice in Wonderland, and I thought Alex's blanking out when entering the commands into the computer were the result of Amber's punishment. So most of this 7th chapter felt like a big question mark when Alex believed he succeeded in changing things back to normal, like you wanted to push back the results of Alex blanking out to the chapter after this one with filler that might've worked better if the reader was more emotionally invested in Alex succeeding to symphasise with the sense of despair at having the rug pulled out from under him, but it's still hard for me to even wrap my head around the idea he was on a long, exhausting journey eating garbage.
In any case, I'm hoping the final chapter makes up for what I was hoping was going to happen in this chapter. The idea of the catgirls having multiple breasts opened up a scenario in my head of what it would be like for someone tiny to traverse their bellies and reach the breast valley crossroad. Like one fetish fantasy with multiple breasts is that it's possible for horizontal Paizuri between the top and bottom sets of boobs and Paizuri between all four sets of breasts. With size fetish, there's something called a fullbody Paizuri, and with multiple boobs, I'm curious how different this play experience could be described with additional rows of breasts.
Maybe once this is finished, I'll go back and reread this story to determine if my above issues were due to my short term memory and the long lapse of time between chapters.
Thank you for your review. I believe from this sort of review I see that I missed to put some key details and connect things correctly. I will need to go over things and do some editing so that the story is as clear as possible.
Hopefully I can answer some of the questions here and clirfy some things.
From the time Alex escapes his mother to getting home is around two-half weeks to three weeks. his mother was located faraway from people so she could unbirth people and tranform them in secert. I needed some time to show the great distance Alex had to travel while hitchhiking. he had to eat garbage along the way to avoid being seen by people. He was small at three feet and he had mouse ears and mouse tail. That draws weird attention that he did not want. He had to live low.
For the kittens, there growth was going to limited at the beginning. the four kittens shared one muffin while each of the other girls ate an enitre muffin, there is not the same amount of Nanobots inside the kittens. The Nanobots needed time and energy to create more Nanobots for themselves. The mother also overdosed on the energy bars to allow her to grow really big. I am trying to keep the law of conservation of mass and energy as best I can, I will bend that rule but I try to keep it. We will see the kittens become bigger now that Amber is in complete control of Nanobots.
The reason Alex blacked out was because he was so tired of having sex with Lola. He was at the point of complete exhaustion when he attempt the computer. I will have to make it clear during the edits that he is passing out from being tired than a mental attack from Amber for using the computer.
Hopefully I can get the sense of hope pulled from underneath him right in the edits.
For the Paizuiri idea, I like it and hope to put it in the story.
Yay! I'm glad you've returned to this series and are working on the actual ending. Alex 'marrying' the family cat Mabel in this wholesome alternate ending is something I didn't expect. Hopefully the real ending is as 'wholesome' as this one, even if it may be considered a bad ending; I want the colossal catgirls and micro-mouseboys to also live happily ever after.
While I understand the need to maintain suspension of disbelief, hopefully the true ending satisfies the other reviewers and my hopes and dreams for even bigger catgirls in the continuation. Though, I'm not sure how big of a size difference the other reviewers were hoping for or how big you can manage to write within the limitations of your own imagination in regards to the catgirl's biology in relation to the new world society. Since they're based on cats, they'll surely have better eyesight and hearing than a regular human, and their cat-like dexterity and sensitivity would allow them to interact and play with significantly smaller objects and creatures.
There isn't much size-fetish fiction with catgirls over the last two decades, so congratulations on contributing to the handful of existing stories. Kari by Kamaria was one of the first English stories I read when I discovered size-fetish fiction on the internet over a decade and a half ago (it also has the best growth sequence I've read until now). Kamaria decided to go with a catgirl from a different planet who shrinks down to visit Earth before growing back to her true height of 52 miles tall, though the single reviewer back then said 52 miles is TOO DAMN BIG, which might be a sentiment that persists even to this day among western reviewers. In comparison, the OG webhost for the Japanese community, Yunzo, has an original character, Eliza, that is often depicted as being tera sized and gentle, and I don't believe I've ever seen any reviews or comments in the Japanese community complaining about such vast sizes and how it's impossible to interact or whatnot, since the ability to interact is entirely left to the whims of the author and what they want to do with the character in their story.
In any case, thank you for returning to this story. Looking forward to what you have planned for Alex and his titanic titty kitty daughters in the midst of their growth and heat period. When I read this alternate chapter, I kept imagining what things would be like in the alternate reality where the emergency signal failed (i.e. Alex still marrying catgirl Mabel and having cute and affectionate kitten-daughters).
Thank you for your review and the constant reading. I am glad that I was able to expaned a limited explored area. I hope that it inspires more people to write or look into it. I didn't see much in this area so I decided to test the waters in this subject and it turned out pretty good. I will have to read Kari and see about that story. I do have to say that 52 miles is massive, nearly eight times the height of Mt. Everest, but in some cases that is fine. it is all how you get there and what everyone can do.
As I am working on the true ending of the story, the catgirls will become bigger than before as Amber has more control of what catgirls actually become. I cannot promise colossal size catgirls but they will definitely have a larger presence. The catgirls have better eyesight and hearing than humans, I don't know how it will play in the true ending but I know that cat-like dexterity and sensitivity will play a part in playing with little objects.
In this final chapter, Alex will interact with his kitten daughters again, this time with bigger growths and heat periods. For Mabel, I will try to get a cameo or the sort of her catgirl form in the chapter but I cannot promise if it will be big or not.
I am currently rethinking and writing the true ending as I am getting more reviews of what people want. I know what I am aiming for but I can change some stuff how it is supposed to get to that point.
This story caught my eye, since I enjoy anime-style catgirls, breast expansion, and giantess growth. There's hardly any GTS-themed stories with catgirls, and I'm pleasantly surprised you included multiple breast transformation as well. Cats generally have eight nipples, so the idea of 8 similarly head-sized boobs jostling and jiggling on bi~ig and playful catgirls frolicking around makes for an erotic mental image. Only thing that could make it better is if they lactated titty kitty milk as well.
I'm going to be a little sad when this one ends with Amber and Maria at amazon-size in the third chapter, since I'm a fan of continued growth up to the giga-size range. It's a waste to have catgirls without at least a cat and mouse size difference. Cats are also notorious for being extra affectionate when their brains are flooded with oxytocin when they're expressing milk, and tend to mother the nearest tiny and cute creature (mothering even puppies, birdies, mousies, and tinies).
Thank you for the review. I do enjoy some anime style catgirls and have that as the basis of their transformation. I went with four boobs on each girl to keep it closer to that anima cat girl vibe but still trying to get close to a real cat as much as possible. I liked the idea of them lactating and becoming affectionate in that way so I added it to the story.
I do have idea, if I continue the story, that the catgirls will become bigger.
Wendy wakes up in the same barren wasteland as she has gotten used to.
Just how did she come to this place, why was this her fate?
Read and find out.
I had to read a little into it before realising this is fan fiction?
There were a lot of character name drops, so I'm guessing I might've had to acquaint myself with 'Fairy Tale' (?) to fully appreciate this. Though, I'm hoping that series isn't like 'One Piece' where any erotica written in its universe feels inappropiate; unlike a series like 'Eiken' where the original author purposefully made it smut-compatible. In any case, any story containing breast expansion, growth, and extreme size differences is my cup of tea, so I'll be looking forward to any additional chapters in the future.
This is a story about the Tanuki girl Moriko. She's playful and energetic, and shrinks plenty of humans down to bring back with her, all to be her friends. See what it's like for one tiny human, when they wind up being too close to her foot right in the middle of her gaming time.
Moriko belongs to @pocket_latte on Twitter! See the story note section for a few images of Moriko hanging with her tiny friends.
https://twitter.com/pocket_latte
I feel like I would've enjoyed this if there was a backstory somewhere that explained a lot of unanswered questions regarding Moriko and the reasoning behind her collection of shrunken friends and so on. But being that it's a commission of an original character, I guess the commissioner didn't offer much for you to work with other than gamer and feet play. If it weren't for the attached illustrations, I would've had a completely different mental image of Moriko in my head based on your description of her.
This wasn't a commission. I just like the character and the person who made them is pretty cool. I just didn't want to bog the story down with a bunch of backstory.
I thought I was pretty accurate on how Moriko looked based on her design. But again, since the images are there, I didn't want to spend a lot of time going over every physical detail of her in written form.
It's just supposed to be about a slice of a day with the character.
Either way, thanks for the review!
Deep in Asia, a doctor stumbles upon a woman growing exponentially. Follow along for the month of May 2021 as he notes down his findings.
The lack of an unaware tag, and the contents of this chapter, give me hope that extreme-size difference interactions are in store in future chapters. This is very rare in western size-fetish fiction.
Often western writers assume that someone big would have the same number of cones in their eye, thus making it so their ability to perceive objects would be the same as a normal sized human, but if their eyes have many, many cones adapted to function properly, then they would actually be able to percieve far more than the average person; it's been said that if we had a vast enough 'eye' in outer space, we would be able to see all the light from a star and actually watch its past events like you would a movie. Furthermore, much of what we believe we perceive is our brains taking a ton of data received from the body and constructing the objects we see, hear, and feel in our minds based on what the brain automatically determines as relevant or important. So, I'm hoping Ran ascends into a goddess that has the capacity to interpret and feel her followers and focus on whichever ones she's most interested in. One of my fetishes is a huge girl trying to find a teeny-tiny person.
In any case, I'll be looking forward to whatever you actually have in mind for the future chapters; I'm under the assumption you've already written everything so you can drip-feed it here without any delays. Keep up the good work~.
I love this idea. Altough not what I had in mind for this one, it's definitely something I could use as a pseudo reason for enhance perception. I really like making my stories suspend disbelief as much as possible, and that could be one other way. I'm curious: when you have this idea of a large girl trying to find a microscopic person, do you envision from the giant's point of view or the tiny? Both would make for a much different perspective. I also checked your profile out, and I really like the idea of the smaller party being more in charge of the situation. It's a fun contrast. If you want you can send me a response here or through my other accounts (deviantart, patreon, twitter, giantesscity forums). Thank you so much in any case for the comment.
"I'm under the assumption you've already written everything so you can drip-feed it here without any delays. Keep up the good work~."
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IF YOU DO NOT LIKE DEGENERATE MORAL DEPRAVITY AND VIOLENCE, DO NOT READ
Kal wants to end his pathetic life, but before he could succeed he is visited by the Goddess, Freyja. She gives him a chance to live his life in another world, but working for her during Ragnarok.
Kal is determined to fulfill his fantasy of a giantess harem. He is given powers in a world of magic and fantasy that rival the gods themselves. He uses them to absolutely wreck havok and chaos upon the world with his ability to SHAPE FLESH.
This story is meant to explore absolute degeneracy and depravity. I want to get to the bottom of the well in terms of morality with size changing (excluding some things, I guess, like violence on children).
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"Let's Ragnarok!"
The summary warning made me put this story on the side burner for a couple weeks before I decided to start reading from the first chapter. I found the contents so far to actually be enjoyable, though I still don't know if your aim is to make shameless erotica of taboo topics and the enjoyment the characters feel while partaking in the taboo, or if your aim will be akin to the many other western size-fetish authors whose fiction is meant to elicit a disgust response by being as horribly gross as humanely possible. I'll stick around if it continues to be the former, and skim past the latter.
I particularly enjoyed the 2nd chapter with the fairies--fantasy races and lactation+shrink being some of my kinks, and started reading the 3rd chapter wondering what was going to happen to Kal. With what happened to daddy, I guess Kal's harem is going to consist of a fair number of orphans and widows when the effects of his magic unintentionally ruins the surrounding human society.
With the way you wrote the warning, I kind of thought Kal was going to turn into a bastard with his newfound powers. But so far, it seems it's more like he's a conscientious person with subconscious kinks influencing others that's going to cause him trouble reining in any sort of normalcy in his life in another world. Curious if he's going to remain a victim of his fantasy harem or if he's eventually going to figure out a way to dominate them and earn some respect.
I can't offer a critique of the writing other than I found it readable, and the pace was a breath of fresh air compared to other stories that go on forever. Considering your interest in exploring the well of degeneracy, there's a size-fetish author on Deviantart called Happiest in the Shadows. He keeps working on multiple serials, and I've never been able to finish any of them though he went pretty deep in the well to make his characters do and experience horrible stuff. Part of what makes him an absolute degenerate is how he drip feeds the reader promises of their fetishes being explored, and takes forever and ever to get around to it; that man is not normal ("sence, sence, sence"). In essence, you explored a taboo and made it entertaining. You're a good goy.
In any case, I'm looking forward to the future edited chapters and what other fantasy races aside from the fairies you plan to explore in this Norse(?)-themed world.
Thanks for the comment!
I suppose I meant degeneracy in terms of rape and body horror and other things like not-overly detailed gore. I don't want Kal himself to be a bad guy. One of my internal themes is "the road to hell is paved with good intentions." I want to convey a sense that what happened to these characters was really fucked up and the reader will know that these were unintended consequences of Kal.
Alice thought she was dating a normal human boy, but it turned out to be a nano boy, who is not much taller than the width of a hair to her. How will they handle their relationship?
Thanks for writing an extreme-size difference relationship story~. There aren't very many of these in English, so I appreciate your attempt at creating a world with tech where it may work out in interesting ways.
Going by the warning about future chapters becoming gross, I wouldn't know what to suggest that fits within your own personal interests. Regardless, keep up the good work.
Thanks! I'm not sure how a story being gross would limit the possibilities, if anything, it allows for more interesting stuff. Gross stories can still be cute or romantic, or contain elements that aren't 100% gross, like for example the spit in this chapter.
Living in a frontier village on the edge of society, any new visitor is instantly the talk of the town. So, when a young, Holstaur girl passed through the village just a few days before rumors of a Sabbath being established nearby, Alex couldn’t stop worrying about her. Knowing that Sabbaths despise Holstaurs in particular on principle, he ventures into the woods to find and hopefully shelter her from the radical loli supremacists.
It's going to be sad if all of the effort to world build and set up the character's background and personalities ends with this single chapter; it felt like 20% or less of the story was spent on size smut. Well, crossing my fingers Rodderick manages to win another commission raffle and asks for a continuation, or whatever else it would take for a second chapter somehow happens.
I will admit that I got a bit carried away witht he world building on this one lol, I was just having so much fun combing through the lore of the setting. Rodderick has said that I set everything up perfectly for a sequel, so if he wins again, maybe he'll be more inclinded to request one :D
The seven month wait was worth it; I enjoyed this chapter very much. I don't know anything about the implications of Alice Succubus in this universe, but since Alice in Wonderland is the progenitor of size fetish shenanigans, I'm really looking forward to what is in store in a 3rd chapter. Will their be 'drink me' Alice titty milk that shrinks its victims? Will 'eat me' confectionery make Alice Succubus grow?
If only there's a way to increase Rodderick's chances of winning another raffle. Regardless, thank you for your hard work.
I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this. Since Rodderick seems to give me some creative license with these, I could probably get away with Alisha developing breast milk that shrinks people, maybe after her transformation into a 'True Alice'. As for what an Alice Succubus is, essentially they represent 'purity' and 'innocence' without realizing that they crave sex and mens' 'life essence'. After sex, they forget the act but not what was said during it and revert back to being a 'virgin'. Gotta say, the MGE author is creative.
We all know that in some cases, Chijinda wasn't killed after being defeated by his enemies (Be it massive girls, Bio weapons or even other wordly beings), and on this series, we will explore what exactly happened after that game over screen.
I'm not sure what to do for future chapters, so feel free to request a character or scenario if you wish, even if you made it up.
Expect spoilers for Shrink high and Shrink high gaiden (2).
This story reminded me of the sad fact I-raf-you wasn't able to sell enough copies of Gaiden to pay artists to do illustrations for all of the bad endings, including this one for Tetsukamen (Iron Mask). Dunno know why you're using English and French for her name; if you're going for French, her name would be 'Masque de Fer'.
It's been ~8 years since I played, so I only have a vague recollection of A.S.'s Shrink School setting. Usually when I replay Gaiden, it's to revisit Mizuho Land and the third ending where Tetsukamen and Mizuho both defeat Chijinda and misunderstand when they asked him to choose whom he wanted to be shrunk by. Don't remember what kind of effects a double dose of the shrink serum had, but I do remember Mizuho trying her best to locate his mini-mini size.
In any case, for the above reason, I wouldn't know what to suggest should happen in this particular route where Iron Mask monopolises Chijinda all to herself.
Traversing across the empty expanse of space, a lonely and somewhat obsessive goddess sets off to an intergalactic journey to find her soul mate. The giantess will do anything to get with her one true love, from pampering, world domination to otherworldly fun. Will the two of them last?
A small tale of a gigantic goddess and normal sized human in their exploration of love on whether If such a strange relationship can truly stay afloat.
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FINISHED STORY
Extreme-size difference relationships is a genre that is rare in the western GTS scene. So, I'll be bookmarking and checking for updates in the future.
A relationship where there is a sexual dimorphism between male and female, and the larger female's body being designed to make interaction possible is erotic. Like if someone was actually gigantic, instead of seeing less, they would see more. They have more cones in their eyes, and a larger brain to process what they're seeing. Same goes for their body; even if a lover is an ant in comparison to a nipple larger than the planet earth, the tiny hairs on her body would sense the teeniest vibrations allowing her to listen to the heartbeat of a lover embracing a never-ending plain of tit-flesh. There's lots and lots of interesting ideas to explore in this theme.
Wow I never even considered some of these. But it’s definitely worth keeping mind of. I’m aiming to explore a range of genres, but ideas like this definitely are worthwhile noting. Thanks!
but I agree that the growing ones are pretty good, it’s mainly what I’m interested in. No disrespect to the shrinking fun tho.
Wow I never even considered some of these. But it’s definitely worth keeping mind of. I’m aiming to explore a range of genres, but ideas like this definitely are worthwhile noting. Thanks!
but I agree that the growing ones are pretty good, it’s mainly what I’m interested in. No disrespect to the shrinking fun tho.
EDIT: Now with actual Micro-content, yaaaay!
Follow the story of a 22-year old guy who slowly (but in bursts) shrinks down to 1/2000th of his original height, like so many others. He's always known that he would likely eventually shrink, but that doesn't mean he's truly prepared for it. Luckily, he has some allies he can count on in the form of his older sister, his best friend, and mutual friends that mean well.... but don't always act the same to a shrinkee as they would a regular person.
Inspired by essentially every virus-related shrinking story I've ever read, with a few of them standing out. If you recognise elements from anyone's work: I'm sorry. I don't mean to copy but there are just things I adore. It's also possible that I don't even realise something's been done before... cause I'm dumb like that.
Enjoy!
>Hope we'll see him helplessly trapped between the girls's city sized feet or skyscraper sized toes
He would have to shrink much, much smaller than 2000th of his regular height to become small enough a girl's feet is city sized. With the provided estimates, their feet would at most be as long as the CN Tower is tall, which is pretty big when I started using visual models to imagine the sorts of extreme size difference scenarios await Lio if he decides to go bouldering atop his girlfriend's breast and nipple.
Though, even with such an extreme difference, some part of me feels a faint thrill imagining the possibility Lio might be making headlines and breaking world records when his variant of the virus is somewhat different and sends him spiralling downwards to genuine speck proportions the normal human eye can see before he becomes truly microscopic (the human eye can normally spot objects between 0.1~0.01 millimetres). It would be funny after all the planning and preparations, Lio finds himself bug-sized relative to the interior of his McMini-Mini-Mansion filled with the cutting edge in comforts and technology. With the advancements in miniaturisation tech, the fancier mansions could come equipped with something like a robotic personal servant to clean up after the tiny. Like robot angel catgirl maids (since they're small, their wings allow them to fly like a drone).
Regular people will be huuuuge to him indeed.... Even the smallest parts of their bodies would outsize him. There's a reason I mentioned beauty marks and freckles when describing the ladies... he's gonna be outclassed even by those things.
Unfortunately, Lio will not be breaking headlines with a variant of the virus that makes him even smaller. Trust me, it's really really tempting, but that won't be happening. The reason the virus shrinks to 1/2000th was to explain why he got as tiny as he did. That being said, it's an amazing thought and it does float through my mind quite a bit..... Maybe some other time, or with dreams, I have yet to decide.... and wonder what would even happen in a dream sequence at such a size.... (Ideas always welcome ;P)
There will be no robotic personal servants and especially no robot angel catgirl maids. Sorry, but I'm just not doing that, ever. The most you're getting is like, a micro roomba.
[Reviews - 4] After an encounter with a 2 ft-tall Neko woman, it seems like more and more Animal Girls started forcing their way into Michael's life. Being a broke college student living in a cheap 1-bedroom apartment, this is going to prove difficult, especially with how many people seem interested in his new companions.
Chapter 5: Why can't we live together?
Note: Tags will be added as new chapters are published.
As someone who is always seeking kemonomimi plus size-fetish, this story has caught my attention, and your story-telling abilities thus far are quite nice. If you can keep up the 3-4 day chapter schedule, checking this page may very well become part of my daily routine.
I'm curious what kind of story you have in mind, since you're only updating the tags as the story progresses. The fact the protagonist seems unphased by the existence of the Japanese catgirl gives me the impression animal girls are normal in this universe, so this isn't going to be like Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path's 'Master! Master!' serial where the protagonist is trying to keep his ever-increasing harem of animal girls a secret. Animal girls being a normal part of society has a lot of potential. I'm guessing based on the title, this is going to be 'shrunken woman' or 'amazon' since the apartment needs to remain big enough to house all the animal girls, though your previous story with the nano tag makes me hopeful extreme size difference is in the cards in the future (i.e. cat and mouse play, full body tongue baths, etc.). I'm unfamiliar with any Japanese legends or media that use Tanji as a name for a cat, and people who have named their cat that tend to give it to male cats. Though, with her foul mouth 'poor bastard' as her English equivalent of 'binbou-yarou', Tanji strikes me as a tomboy cat girl with a wagamama body. Curious how this sort of relationship is going to develop in the coming chapters.
In any case, thank you for writing this. Keep up the good work.
Thank you a lot for the comment!
You are right in your assumption. I am hoping to add a lot of different sized girls - some big, some small, and some even smaller.
I am still new to writing, so I might need to iron out the details. But the basic premise is that animal girls exist in the universe, except that they are extremely rare and seen as a novelty for the rich. Micheal really doesn’t know about any of this, not only because it’s a relatively new trend, but also because he came from a farm in southern USA. He’s an outside in this world’s version of American West Coast which is under higher Japanese influence. But he’s heard enough to not immediacy assume that some sorcery is at play
Once again, I really appreciate the kind words.
Wow, if a ookamimimi is 9 feet tall when a nekomimi like Tanji is 2 feet tall, I'm curious how big something like an ushimimi (cowgirl) would be in this world. Would be funny if the expression 'milk truck' is literal rather than figurative when referring to the bosom of a holstein-girl. Also, Cinnamon... Mia is really cute. Depicting cuteness is incredibly difficult, but I feel you nailed it with her; she's both adorable and amusing. Your skills as a writer make it easy for me to visualise the various scenes as illustrations.
We're already at chapter 4, and I'm already intrigued and captivated by this world you're sharing. If this were a book, it would be a real page-turner that's hard to put down. It's the perfect blend of size-fetish science fiction. Hopefully others feel the same way; if it ever feels like the reader response here is akin to cricket chirps, I'll be more than glad to give you a shout-out elsewhere to help draw in more readers. You have something really good going on here.
I am glad that you are enjoying the story! As this is my first attempt at writing a long-form tale like this, I am happy that it is going well.
I find your idea of cowgirls being used to produce milk very funny. The main character could for example see a little image of a cowgirl on the bottles of milk he drinks every day and realize that it is actually a ushimimi milk instead of a cutesy marketing character.
Wow, thank you for the offer! I would be grateful if you could give me a shout-out. Seeing feedback is always a great motivator to keep going.
I appreciate your continued support.
-Silicon
I hope the Holiday bustle calms down for you; still waiting for the next chapter before I voice my own thoughts on the cliffhanger (waiting until you introduce certain plot elements so I can give you a proper shout-out to give you more views; getting reviews from that would require users to register an account here).
Your writing quality is akin to Jelly Tea, and it was crickets when he started putting pen to paper on this site. He built himself up a following by reposting his stories on Deviantart, and then he created a Twitter account to sort of act as an RSS feed for followers of his writing. Greenanon is also similar to you, and his reviewers are mostly from 4chan's /d/ gentle giantess board (right now, your story is mostly shrunken women, and the SW thread's community is somewhat small).
Cowgirls having their faces printed on milk bottles reminds me of a meme known as the 'Henton's Round Meal: Macaroni and Beef'. On its packaging is a photo of Davis for a contest 'Win a Visit with Davis'. So like with the idol handshake and photo campaigns in Japan, I'm imagining some milk bottle with a similar contest with a word bubble over the cowgirl "I'll come to you".
An elf finds himself at the mercy of the house brownie after some magical experimentation goes wrong.
This is an exceptionally well-written fantasy story with the perfect amount of eroticism sprinkled in each chapter. I like fantasy creatures, so Gilda being an elf-like and voluptuous faerie with a long tail and neotenic face is all the more interesting as you describe how she goes about her day-to-day activities and interacts with the household and its family. I love stories like these.
The speed at which you uploaded chapters made me wonder if this was a repost from elsewhere, and I found your other accounts and rentry, which assures me you have the sort of character to finish this tale in good time. Doesn't surprise me you're primarily a furry writer, though with all of the anime-influence, it feels closer to a pseudo-kemono. Makes me all the more curious in what kind of style you would have Micah and Gilda illustrated as.
In any case, thank you for your hard work.