Reviewer: combine45 Signed
Date: July 09 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aha, a return to your normal form. This was an exceptionally cruel one, Alicia seemed clearly insane and capable of using horrific magic.
The thought occured to me how elves are nearly always portrayed as being more powerfull than humans in alot of fantasy, but they are usually very peace loving and tranquil never exploiting that power. Lilisila being terrified of her own daughter made Alicia just that much scarier. Not the type of story I normally enjoy, but you had me anticipating what would happen if Alicia snapped, and dropped the little girl persona.
Author's Response: I'm not honestly sure where it came from, just kinda appeared on the page one evening.
Indeed, its a trope I always kinda lifted an eyebrow at since mythologically speaking Fae were generally not nice creatures. As for them being more powerful, probably the age thing.
That scene in particular was a spur of the moment thing. Usually its the mother controlling the daughter, but here I figured I'd switch it up. Might be elaborated on if I ever opt to use the setting again.
Well, I'm happy it kept your interest at least! Trust me, I know what you mean in that account. Sometimes something just isn't your cup of tea.
Anyway, thanks for the review, and letting me chat your ear- er, eyes off!