Penname: midnightwriter85 [Contact] Real name: Jay
Member Since: September 14 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

  Like so many that come here to escape, I enjoy reading these tales too.  I'm trying to write some of my own, but I'm finding that it's a lot harder than it appears...


  Hopefully, some of this amazing talent will rub off on me!  I am trying to get better at fantasy writing, and I really appreciate getting reviews from everyone who reads.


 


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Spring Breaks by Itty-Bitty-Mini-Committee Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Rebecca Sullivan all but owns her classmates already, but she wants to push the envelope that much farther over spring break . . .

I'd like the community to get involved, further instructions in the End Notes! 


Categories: Entrapment, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8586 Read Count: 40662
[Report This] Published: June 30 2017 Updated: August 03 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Wednesday, March 25

  Ho, man. That was perfect! I'm in love with Rebecca, she is so Hot! ~and, sweaty, too! ;`)  So, I'm still alive, great! I would most definitely become her little slave/toy. She has all the control, and just like a real Goddess, she can do as she pleases with me. However, I would simply love to be durable enough to take whatever she does to me, and survive to please her again, ...this is so hot!

  I could actually picture her riding along slowly down that forest road, ...swerving along in serpentine trails, leaning to the left and right as she slightly shifted her butt on that small seat. Forcing her tiny passenger into her moist cleft - squishing her cheeks together - lightly squeezing and teasing him. I love it! I want more! Great chapter Man!

 

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: July 15 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Thursday, March 26

What a teaser, ...far too short!  One sentence. Was that it?  ...his life, so meaningless that he didn't even get to feel anything... Lol - that's cool though, whatever... 

I thought that you could have at least drawn it out just a tad longer though, in my opinion - you could have written two or three chapters for each one. Creating more of a personal/emotional development- with Rebecca - being so careless and self-centered, it would make sense that she would actually destroy her victims without any thought, but that was simply so short. ...it didn't last long enough to actually leave an impression.

 



Author's Response:

I tried here, but . . . all I got was "pervy" and "likes unaware giantess". I just didn't have anything fun to work with like I did for the other three. Luckily, the remainder of Rebecca's week is filled with far more interesting people, which means longer chapters. 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Friday, March 27

  Discipline me, in a balled-up stocking... after smothering betwix those magnificent walls? Okay, ...I'm still ALIVE!  ALIVE!  Yes.  LOL!  ;`)

  I think, I'm in love with 'Sweet Rebecca'.  

Lana's Laboratory by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Against all odds a shrinking experiment is a success, and it's up to one of the subjects to get the scientist's attention before it's too late.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Footwear, Feet, Legwear, Giantess, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3208 Read Count: 10996
[Report This] Published: July 24 2017 Updated: July 24 2017
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Lana's Laboratory

 Amazingly detailed. Your 'spot-on' imaginative descriptions, creating this terrifying, yet extremely realistic view. The perspective told from her hapless subject's new reality, made her appear so real - I felt it.  

 The mystery of her other victims lingering in the background, and his journey across the great tile plain, ...taking him beneath her chair...

 Awesome story!  ;`)

Cheerleader by Trawis Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A cheerleader takes a disliked teacher into her own hands... 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7455 Read Count: 33670
[Report This] Published: December 22 2017 Updated: February 05 2022
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is the best story I've read recently. I really like the way that you dropped right into the action. The situation, so perfect, was well thoughtout and the fast pace is literally 'Breathtaking' 

I hope that this isn't a short story. This one has got some merit. I would love to see this girl and her friends use her shrinking stuff over and over again.  As for the 'Teacher' I'd say that once she has broken his spirt and he succomes to her overwhelming power and size, and starts being a good little pet... she'll just squash him! 

 The way she casually takes him is such a turn on, I love it! The rating should be at least fifty stars! * * * * * * * * * * *

  Please keep it going, I can't wait for the next update! *.*  

Rituals by minifriend Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A couple explores their new mundane after mutually agreeing to undertake a Diminishing, whereby one's height is reduced to around one foot. Primarily set weeks after his new size sets in, the couple works to maintain the rhythms of a happy, healthy relationship in the wake of an enormous, if welcome, change.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32763 Read Count: 52320
[Report This] Published: February 09 2019 Updated: June 12 2020
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Hungering

  Extremely erotic. You write so detailed and aware of the all the enviroment - so addictive reading this... you place the reader right into the story. I have to agree with Tallie '100 percent', just so incredible!  please, please, Please   Never Stop!  If someone in Hollywood would use this for a script in a Movie it would be so perfect... 

 I especally love the interaction between them when their teasing one another, it feels so right. Makes me wonder if you haven't really experienced this in real life! :)

 I be adding you to my fav's now.

 Amazing stuff!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your kind words! I plan to keep writing for as long as folks keep enjoying it! Thanks so much for the fave and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Chapter 5 is well underway.

Fantasy House by Northgate Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

The Fantasy House is a strip club in the middle of nowhere that is rumored to grant you your secret fantasy for the right price.  Unfortunately for Rick he found out that get that fantasy may have a higher price than he expected and that Karma can be a bitch.


Categories: Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19566 Read Count: 71412
[Report This] Published: February 17 2019 Updated: August 25 2020
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: April 07 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - A Pledge

Really like the situation that you've created here. The suspense (and the fear) constantly building at just the right pace. You're writing seems familar... a bit like one of my favorite authors. Thomthumb.  I could easily visualize the sight of Vicky's enormous feet. Although, I'm not into that, I still found it quite interesting - given the circumstances - the domination factor worked very well.

I don't want to see her kill him. However, the constant teasing is something that drives the suspense. She could, (Vicky) continue the thrilling bits to the point of madness... which I think that she has in mind, reguardless of what he says or does in response to this gentle torture, she's loving every minute of it... the way she bound him to her desk top. The helplessness he suffers at her control is so fascinating.

I would like to see her force him to put lotion all over her entire body while she lies naked on the floor - completely ignoring him - and maybe, occasionally threaten to squash him.

 Keep it up- I like where this is going!

 

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Possible Escape

Kaylee just casually captures him and leaves him there... crap! I thought that he could trust her. Oh well, he'll have to knock over that vase before he drowns.

When Vickie returns, he's gonna be in for it, if he doesn't do some serious kissing up. I like to see her force him to trim her bush. Maybe, do a little leg shaving, too. She could make him a little razor with a broken shaver and make him her little landscaper...

Last chapter was kinda short... I liked it, though, I like the way Kaylee picked him up and carried him - easily - casually capturing him after all the work he had to do to escape from Vicky's bedroom.

 Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)

Guardians by Nigma Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

In the midst of the shrinking epidemic, those that are Immune can earn money caring for the afflicted. Follow the story of one man as he prepares to have his life changed forever and the young woman that will become his Guardian.

She has sworn to keep and protect him, her house mate however has other plans…


Categories: Butt, Giantess, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13276 Read Count: 126657
[Report This] Published: June 07 2019 Updated: June 21 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: June 21 2019 Title: Chapter 8: 8

Oh! wow, you completed the storie here? S*%$! No, no, no... you can't do that! I will go crazy wondering what the shit happens to him! And, Sofia won't get to finish out her punishment... or whatever she had in mind for the poor man. 

 Hey - this was freaking amazing... loved every single moment of this amazingly detailed story. I read it all in one frantic sitting! I couldn't stop! 

I hope that this is continued, in some form or fashion... great stuff! 

 

The Potion by Vatrena Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A tiny attempts to find a fabled potion for growth, but he only ends up finding out how cruel the world can be to tinies, especially those who decide to snoop in a witch's home.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2937 Read Count: 10175
[Report This] Published: June 15 2019 Updated: June 15 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 17 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Part III

 Very nice Vatrena. I found myself wondering what the giantess witch was really up to... leaving her door wide open, and allowing tiny Nate to return to her hut. It was a little too short and quick.

 There were a lot of room in your set-up for a multitude of different senerios... she could have had a cage with several little captives trapped inside - a reptile or two to guard her quarry. She could have kept Nate, for so much longer and slowly tortured him in various ways. Sexy ways... forced him to watch the torture of her other captives. You write very well, it just felt kinda rushed. Like you were just wanting to finish the first tale?

 Slow down and just write us a longer more involved fantasy-like story - enjoy yourself and image yourself as the giantess. Savor each moment as if it is really happening and take us for a ride... I like your discriptions and the personality created within the giantess witch.

  Look forward to your next story! 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review!

Well, to be honest, I wasn't really rushing it as much as I just wanted to write a shorter story. I didn't want to write anything longer since I didn't want to put in a lot of time if I didn't know how it might end up.  Although I do like the creative thinking there! 

And myself was the exact person I did image in the giantess. 

And again, thank you. I might do that. Just wanted to throw something short out to see how it goes first. I might make it into a series. Maybe a universe of its own.

And I am looking forward to seeing you read the next one! 

Mean Women by Lashwalker Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Short stories about cruelty for fun, personal gain or otherwise. Tags will be added as they appear in the story.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Humiliation, Scat, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3677 Read Count: 12489
[Report This] Published: June 26 2019 Updated: June 28 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: June 26 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Swim Champ

What a bunch of CRAP!  Lol! ha,ha, ha    I just had to say that! Couldn't help myself!

  She shouldv'e taken him home with her first and teased him a bit more. Stuffed him inside her cleveage and went for a run. Then, maybe a swim... took him home and flushed him.

  Nice story though, I enjoyed it!

Careful What You Sue For by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

After a rich businessman evades punishment for his perverted crimes again, his own lawyer has the chance to deliver a special kind of justice under her feet when she finds him shrunken in her office.

Visit my Patreon for early-access chapters and exclusive stories: https://www.patreon.com/JacksmithShrinkStories


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21867 Read Count: 126958
[Report This] Published: July 13 2019 Updated: May 18 2020
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa, yes. I have to agree with the other reviewer. This senerio is very interesting. I like to see the 'cocky smart-ass' get his just dessert... And, with the 'giantess' being a lawyer (An intelligent profesional ~ Giantess) Oh Man, That's All the better!  There's just somthing about a Powerful Woman in a Powerful Position! Lol! I've watched court television and when there is a Woman Judge... I don't know, she just does something for me... I instantly view her as a Towering Giant Woman and I just can't pull myself away!



Author's Response:

The atmosphere of this story will definitely play on those kinds of courtroom/power dynamic vibes, even if most of it will take place in other locations. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

 Oh Wow, that entire scene was incredibly amazing! Just a short space of time, as it was (in reality) - it would have quickly played out, but wow!  The simple act of Rachels thoughtless stroll across her office... the glass castle of her desk - her collosal feet moving about like two earth-movers as she casually tapped her toe...

 I could easily imagine the shock of intensity after Sam hung-up his phone and slipped it back into his pocket - her eyes seaching him out, then suddenly falling onto him..

 Her hand wrapping around him  YES!  I love this Jack!  Lol! 

  Can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

This story definitely takes a slower pace, especially in those kinds of moments, but will hopefully still feel action-packed.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

 Hm, Rachel is having a giant power trip. And, if Sam doesn't already have a full blown foot fetish, he's about to quickly develope one! Lol!  

 So very well descibed - it's so easy to visualize Rachel's giant hand and the inside of her breast pocket... I love it! :)



Author's Response:

They've both got some major realizations coming soon; thanks for reading.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

  You really have a way with words, Jack. I was so looking forward to this chapter and it was well worth the wait... Poor Sam, he still has no idea how vulnerable he actually is ~ Now!

 Rachel's sence of humor is so elequint and subtle, yet demanding enough to send chills up your spine... she could crush him into a flattened out paste, with just a slight flex of her pretty little toes. But yet, she simply holds him inside there, as gently as a mother Croc holding her miniscule babies inside of her terrific mouth...

  Love it!  Can't wait to see how she plays with him when she gets out of her office! :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Rachel is definitely still finding her footing here.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh man, a whole new perspective of the female foot. Quite an experience, He might find it safer if he just quietly accepts it, and becomes her her pet...

Beautiful detail in the descriptions, I could almost feel the heat and smell that powerful scent!

 Can't wait to see what Rachel does next! :)



Author's Response:

That'd probably be smarter of him. We'll see more after not too long.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 Tauntingly, steamy... 

 Oh, poor Sam, what a Tangled Mess he's in! :) I though he was going in (inside) the Nylons! I'll bet she breaks him in no time at all!  I Love It!

Can't wait to see what she does next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'll try to post the next part before too long.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: December 25 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sam No!  Don't say It!  Poor Guy has to learn to keep his mouth shut!  <*.*>

  Nice Update! I'll bet she has him inside that moist humid space again before he has a chance to enjoy a single breath of fresh air! Great stuff!

 Oh, and  'Merry Christmas Jack' and  a Happy New Year, Too!

 



Author's Response:

Some people need more than one lesson to learn the same thing.

And happy holidays to you as well.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Holy crap! I knew it!  Rachel's Stockings... YES!

 Nice visual discriptions. Makes the reading like watching it on video. I'td be so thrilling to actually see this happening to the poor guy... but I guess, in this case, he really deserves It! Lol!



Author's Response:

This story is definitely paced in a lot of ways to feel like real-time, so I'm glad that's coming across. Thanks for reading.

Society Proper by SharpieQuill Rated: X [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Decades after the Great Miniaturization, society has found its stride, and the appropriate place for shrinkies. 


Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Breasts, BBW, New World Order, Humiliation, Slave, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11337 Read Count: 27891
[Report This] Published: July 24 2019 Updated: August 07 2019
Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
Date: July 24 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Puppy

Quite the contrast as to what I was expecting. Based on the Title, Lol!  Human nature would probably (and eventually) develope into this...  I'm interested in what the woman in the glasses is up to... I've a feeling that the man is going to find out! And, it won't be so funny Lol!  I like this world that youve created here - seems that it's more realistic and 'believe-able' than most storys here. I'm curious to see where you go with this.

 Very well written and the nature of the set-up feels real.

 I wait to rate, I need more first...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.