This is just to set up the general rules that will be enforced in the series this is a part of. I will admit that I got the idea for this premise from Reiko-samaa's great short series 'The Game'.
Hey I had a question about the pet forever and transformation forever cards. Does the pet's owner or the body's owner know that the pet/part was human? I know it wasn't mentioned among the ones that knew but I just want to make sure.
Thanks.
Right, I suppose I did leave it very vague. Well to put how I had imagined it into words, after the magic takes hold everyone besides the target and Eris spot viewing them as a 'person' per se.
In the case of a pet, that person has always been a pet to the owner, regardless of age difference. Individuals then get to apply them own principles on the treatment of said pet, like lobbying for rights and how they should be treated, but otherwise will refer to them as a 'pet' if asked what they are.
For the transformation card, the recipient believes they always had the abilities they gained and is free to do as they wish with them. They are also aware that the target is trapped in them and vaguely keeps the same disposition towards them. The target is only vaguely remembered by others as a missing person and quickly dismissed if mentioned.
I hope that clears some of it up for you. I know mentally how I am going to be handling those cards so I didn't bother going into detail with how they work and as such I apologize for any confusion.
The main girls of KonoSuba are invited by a mysterious person to come visit for fun, games and party favors!
Great, I love those tags, Reiko-samaa's videos and specially KonoSuba so I'm really looking forward to this one! For now it's a good start.
Thanks! I'm because KonoSuba has such dynamic and characters I just hope I can keep everyone's mannerisms in tact. Especially Aqua.
Nice one!
I liked the chapter, the butt crush card was one of the ones I was most eager to see, same with the other butt-related cards and some more.
The way you wrote the girls was very in character with them, the same way they would've acted on the anime. Aqua messing with Wiz might come to bite her in the butt later. Darkness meking Chris embarrassed by talking about her being heavy, she grinding while sitting on her and Darkness' reaction in the end was great to read. Also, the way you delayed the description of the buttcrushing and making Darkness say it after the act was clever.
The only criticism I could point is maybe the lack of an answer from Megumin after Eris saying she wants her as a pet. Though that may be nitpicking.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
Thank you very much! I also really like the butt related cards and I was actually really worried I might have strayed from the ggirls personalities, so I'm relieved to hear that isn't the case. As far as Aqua messing with Wiz, let's just say her luck will be much like in the anime and I'm happy I was able to make the first real interaction between two characters characters interesting.
As far as Megumin's reaction, I went for a less is more and subdued her behavior because she isn't entirely sure what Eris would do to her but I probably should have put a little more to it.
Again thank you and I hope you'll like the next chapter as much as the this one.
Great to see even more interaction on this one. Poor Wiz she's having it rough now and the next time there's and interaction with her, it might be worse, for her at least. Aqua and Chris seem to be enjoying themselves, the later one in more ways than she would've expect it seems. And I'm sure Darkness must've been happy of being even smaller this time and of course the foot crush. I'm happy you added at the description things like the smell, I'm a fan of that. And as for Megumin, at least she's having it better than Wiz, she might be able to take revenge at some point. Also I'm a bit happy to hear that even if she were to end up as a pet, Eris might not be as rough with her as with other pets.
You're making this have a comical mood together with the erotica, which is a great thing. Kudos for that. Also, I'm a bit curious and eager to see which character you would introduce when a unaware pair gets played.
Anyway, keep it up.
I am overjoyed to hear so much praise. As like with the show, the character interactions are suppose to be the main draw with their reactions to the events.
I hope to be able to continue making enjoyable chapters in the near future
So a transition chapter, certainly it doesn't feel as powerful as the other but is still nice.
Aqua seem to have been saved for now because of Wiz but I kind of doubt that's enough for her to learn her lesson. Darkness being at that size open a window for a lot of possibiliets and I'm interested in what Megumin is going to ask for. And nice detail with Chris there.
Also, there's something I'm not sure I get. "Pet for the Game" is the only magic card left for the rest of the story?
I'm glad this chapter sat well with you, and hope you will be satisfied with the rest of the story as well. Now that I think about it, I don't think I even mentioned it in the story proper, but there are going to be three rounds in total for this story.
And remeber, Aqua's cards got the 'JOKER' pair that still, so the rest of her cards still need to be reintroduced to the deck.
That's some big karma right there. I'm quite a fan of those scenarios, entrapment and humiliation, with that little bit about Wiz's sweat, so it was a nice combo for me. Also, the way Wiz handled Aqua at the end was cute, even if the tiny is in a shock now.
And that part with Darkness, maybe there'll be a chance for her to be in a equally degrading or maybe worse situation in the future.
Really nice.
Thanks! Yeah, don't get me wrong, I love our resident, stupid, invisible-panties wearing water goddess as much as the next fan but I love seeing her get taken down a peg too >:) And this is only the begining. Everyone will find themselves in enjoyable situations throughout the game, so stay tuned!
I see karma is still strong on this one, nice. The pet card is indeed terrifing with that kind of that effect, Aqua most likely won't be out of trouble for a while, and won't be out of something else if she can't correct the misunderstanding somehow =P I wonder if Megumin thought back about the giant toad's mouth when she suggested Aqua's preference...
And it's nice of Eris to keep the good sportmanship even when she's affected by the cards.
I'll be waiting for more, good job. It's was a really enjoyable first round.
It really is nice to see karma in action, isn't it? Trust me, Aqua can't take it easy just yet and with Wiz unaware that poor wording will result in Aqua unable to resist basically anything, she's in for a long game. As with Eris, she may be basically chaos incarnate but she's gotten bored of doing whatever she wants without regard at least for rules she sets, also she a bit or a pervert so getting up close and personal with her players is always a treat.
I', glad you like the first round and after a short intermission I hope the second will be just as, if not more, enjoyable!
Nice one, I'm curious as to how much the new rules will affect the girls.
And Megumin better be careful with her wishes, Eris might not contain herself after hearing that xD
Yes, the new rules will make playing some of the more... intimate card more interesting, of that you can be sure.
Oh, Eris would be absolutely estatic!
This is a nice start for the second round, the cards that are going to be used now look interesting.
It's now Megumin's turn to savor the karma and it looks like Darkness enjoys being on the other side for once. Also, at this rate Aqua might a get a reputation as a bigger masochist than Darkness, though not in the literal sense.
I'm glad I was able to start the second round off well. Everyone will get to enjoy and explore new facets of themselves they never thought they had, but yeah Aqua is in for a rough ride with a master as clueless about her power like Wiz.
Nice one, Aqua finally has a break though in this kind kf game that might not last long. I can't wait to see what's coming next with Megumin!
Thanks! Aqua can't always be the butt of a joke, so I have to give her something to be hopeful for every now and again. As for Megumin... well she always has loved long hard objects lol
Seems like the effects of the new rules are quite strong in this chapter. Poor Megumin got a taste of what could be being Eris' pet in the future so she might be even more reluctant no that, is that's possible. I'm curious about the next card.
Yeah, Eris wanted to make sure even the most reluctant of people would be able to play any card. Megumin most definitely may be reconsidering her willingness to stay in Eris' world, but first she must repay Chris for what she has done to her.
Well, now that Megumin had her fun is time for her to help Darkness it seems. Really nice.
:) can't always pick on Aqua, then it's just bullying
Well, Megumi shoudl've gotten quite the overwhelming view before Darkness got her in. She should be getting used to thight slimy conducts by now thoug I doubt she plans on getting closer to that again =P At least Darkness got to have her fun, hopefully she'll enjoy what is left of her time with Chris just as much.
And Megumi while not being able to do much for her benefit in this chapter, at least for now she could evade what could've been another unwanted visit to Eri's body in the future.
Oh, I bet the view was magnificent! Darkness has a fine ass, that's for sure.
While she would rather no get use to such experience, poor Megumin can't even claim that they only happened here.
Chris will most definitely make the most of her time with her cute little Darkness, but I think Megumin really dodge a dick-shaped bullet that was primed and ready for her.
Nice to see a longer chapter than usual. Looks most of the girls got their fun in this one, I loved the interactions. Also, Aqua's rest might not last as long as she wanted.
And I also had a bit of trouble managing my time with the tempest trial. Though Legion's inferno mode got more of my interest.
Yeah, I'm thinking I'll write a bit longer chapters, but it will take a bit longer to put them out. I'll get more time once Tempest is over lol
As for Aqua... well 'there ain't no rest of the wicked' as they say :)
Oh nice, a new chapter! Is been a while!
Megumin sure enjoys having that size and I sure enjoy how much power she got over the other girls for now.
Poor Aqua, is just one thing after the other for her. Wonder how will she take whatever happened to her boss after calming down a bit. Also, that was a weird turn, I'm interested in see what is Eris planning to do with "him".
Looking forward for the next round!
Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up sooner lol
Oh, Megumin doesn't even know how blessed she is. She definitely has more discoveries to make later :D
And Aqua... well, she has cleared some trials, but more are to come. As for 'Him', next chapter can't come soon enough
A follow up for another story of mine for the lovely anime (Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid.) If you read it you already know whats going to happen in this story. If you haven't, well you clearly hate anime. >:(
Enjoy!
This was a great one, I feel you could keep the character's personality even while going on territory outside of the show, like the vore part. I felt pretty bad for Saikawa at that scene btw ;_; .
The relationship both of the girls had was shown in a cute way which turns lewd when looked through a certain angle. It was really adorable how they showed they care and thought about the another, aiming for the satisfaction of both. Really good job.
And with Lucoa's apparition at the end one wonders what will be Shouta's future...
With Soul gone for the weekend, Maka finds relaxation and peace in his absense, or, at least she would if Blair wasn't causing such a commotion. Deciding to take matters into her own hands, it turns out that might not be the best idea.
For once the Mouse has a taste of what the Cat has to offer, all bets are off...
Anime - Soul Eater,
A nice Halloween surprise.
Haven't heard much about Soul Eater in quite a bit, so is neat to have a story about it. Quite interesting the role Maka takes in this one, it works especially well with Blair. I remember she referring to herself as a seducer at least once in the manga.
I love the insight into Maka's thoughts as she's being submitted to different circumstances, as well as Blair's teasing. And the mouthplay was great!
Totally looking forward to the next chapter, since the sisters were among my favorites in the series.
See ya~
Various short stories, based on ideas that have come to me and suggestions.
First Story: A Chie and Yukiko (from Persona 4) growth story
Second Story: An unfinished story about Rei and Asuka (from Evangelion) growing into titanic futa giantesses.
Third Story: An unfinished long story, where a girl plays host to an exchange student giantess, as people try to let the cultures mesh for the first time. Little did she know, the giantess is really into her... and still growing!
Fourth Story: A yandere sister giantess story, told from the perspective of the giantess.
Fifth Story: A Futaba (from Persona 5) eating and growing story
Sixth Story: A (not-so-innocent) story of a loving sister's affection for her older twin siblings.
Seventh Story: Growth/Shrink (More shrink) Medb story
Nice chapter! Though I'm not that much of a fan of Medb so my favorite part was the sweaty neet.
I'm kind of in the mood for it, so you can let me know if there's any other Fate size fiction which you want me to write! Even though this involved shrink, I primarily write growth stories, but feel free to suggest anything.
Thanks for the review!
Oh, that's very kind of you! For me, I usually go for F/f shrinking scenarios. As for the characters, maybe something with Shuten playing with a shrinking Raiko, or Ereshkigal dealing with a shrunken Ishtar or the other way around. Though, to be honest, I would love to read about Jack with a shrinking well-endowed servant, taking her as her mother and not wanting to get apart from her, but I'm sure if you would be comfortable with that.
Very nice Ishtar story especially liked the Mashu part.