Reviewer: Peterparker Signed
Date: September 16 2017
Title: Chapter 1: 1: The Beginning
Loved the latest chapter. Felt a little short but I loved it. I LOVVVEE the FM/m content it perfect. I think maybe she works as a personal trainer, or a lawyer. Something that shows her dominance in life too. Also.. I don't think he should ever get back to his sister. Some stories don't end like they are supposed too. That's what's awesome.. or maybe he does get back to his sister but tells her he's happy being with diane and that he's going to stay with her as her toy. Deep down he hates that he wants her. And I don't think mike should go anywhere! I mean make it a lot about her but add him in too. And LOTS of GTS booty 🍑😍. Hahaha and Diane was going to fart on him 🍑💨😂🤣😂🤣😂. That was funny!!!! Bring those back too! Hahahaha awesome story and can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your awesome response! :D I am glad you are enjoying it so much and that you like the butt scenes, I will continue to add butt scenes whenever I can! And as for Mike I am conflicted on still having him around, I haven't decided because other readers did not like him or the sex between him and Dianne...