Sorry, just wanted to chime in here to say that I thought you balanced everything going on in this chapter really well. In fact, I assumed that the pacing and feelings explored in this chapter were planned to make the slow and deliberate telling of the next seem even more like an oasis. It all rang very true, like most of your stuff.

Like Olo said, go away until it's fun again. ;-) Or at least until you physically feel like you need to get it onto the screen.

Nice to see some self reflection from Jeanne. I think it just drives home how none of your characters are truly bad, and that anyone amongst us is capable of evil. They're all just doing their best to get along in their imperfect lives, when everything is turned upside down by the introduction of a miniature, living Rorschach test. How each character chooses to respond to tiny Amber is the story. And the chapter structure shows in striking clarity how much Amber has learned from being tiny. Her psychological journey is told so compellingly in each mirrored chapter that I really can't wait to see what happens next. Like the other guy said, I think about this story and these characters just randomly throughout my day. Like I said, very compelling. Thanks for writing it.

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This is amazing. Honestly, I'm not even that big of a fan of stuff this violent, but your writing is always so good, and your giantesses always so wonderfully evil that I can't help but enjoy it.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the always appealing praise.  It's exciting and I definitely appreciate hearing that you enjoy what I do, even though it's not necessarily your favorite sort of stories.  I take pride in trying to be the best at what I do, even if what I do is a relatively specific sort of style.  I hope you enjoy more of my works, and I'll do my best to continue sharing the most wicked and cruel creations I can with the world.

I feel like your protagonist should be wearing a tiny fedora. ;-) Well written stuff. His single minded obsession is going to get him in trouble for sure. Please keep it up.

Author's Response: Lol he probably should be wearing one as I think about it :) A lot more to come!

Nice story. I see that micro unaware is your passion, soul and expertise. I also work at a place where the goal is to have a loaf of bread in every arm. ;-) Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, that's pretty much what I like, and just that. I'm glad someone got where the story is taking place, not that I was really trying to hide it, but I feel it does add depth you can only get if you know the ins and outs of the area. At least I think so, but that might just be me.

These are great stories! Nothing to add or suggest, just wanted you to know how impressive this whole series is.

Honestly a really great start. Your spelling and punctuation are already good out of the gate, so the reader isn't distracted by anything like that. The story you've written is compelling. I'd say don't be afraid to describe just a little bit more, but I think that's just s stylistic choice. There were only a couple times where the writing was a little unclear, and it didn't significantly impact my enjoyment of it.

Can't wait to read more of this, please. :-)

Author's Response:

I appreciate any and all constructive feedback.  I haven't taken an English class in ages haha.  I can definately agree with more desciptions.  Thank you for the review.

I wish I caught this story sooner. Masterful buildup to some very satisfying and wonderfully described size play. I love the Sadie character and her playfulness. Very well written story. I'd love to see a sequel. :-)

This is such a fun beginning! Hope you're able to continue it soon!