Penname: Max333 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: December 09 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hey there! 
I'm Max333, glad to see you here.
I've started writing stories recently, and I do hope you are enjoying them! If not, well, I'm sorry I didn't match your tastes.


If you'd like to talk, please, do not hesitate. I love meeting new people, so don't mind and send me a message! :) 


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Summary:

Just as a heads up before you begin reading: this is a primarily feet centered story. If you like feet, then you're in luck. But if you don't really like it, then there won't be much more for you. Sorry!

This is a story about Nick, who is a college student who shrinks one day, and needs to get the help of the giantesses that he knew as his friends. This one is set in a political science class, where many students and a professor are nearby.

Also, I've got a Twitter account, so follow me there if you want immediate updates on when I upload new chapters for my stories!

https://twitter.com/sheograth10

I'm also on Discord. Feel free to message me there @Sheograth10 #5326 if you want to chat or have any questions about my stories. I'm pretty active over there.

 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Shrunk at College
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11676 Read Count: 66111
[Report This] Published: January 13 2017 Updated: January 23 2017
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: January 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Going to Class (Story Start)

Hey there !

Great work here, once again. Love all of your stories.

Still, what I think is wrong here is always the same : too many choices. I think I've told you my thoughts about that before, but by giving us too much choices I do not think you're giving us more quality. 

I've thought about interactive stories for a while now, and it seems to me that Max 2 choices every 2 or 3 chapters would be better than 3+ choices every chapter. 

That way, you can create more content. 

At some point, too much choice leads to work that can't be done. You're only human. 

What do you think ? 



Author's Response:

That's a pretty good point. 

I feel like I started with the intention of actually going through with each and every choice, back when I thought of the chapters more of size related interactions and not stories that will eventually reach a satisfying conclusion.

Recently, especially after what I've done with all the rewriting, I've thought less about doing all the choices and more of just creating a single flowing arc.

I think I will keep the multiple choices after each story, but make all but one the 'canon' option. But I won't identify which one that is until I write it. That way, I can mess around with different size based things with each character as I feel like it without it detracting from the overall narrative.

I'll give an example, because that might not make sense by itself (I'll use stuff from Shrunk in College: The Classroom).

  • So for the Orfino route, in Chapter Orfino1.3, I give these 3 choices (see below). The way I'll do from now on it is identify the chapter that was already written as canon, and any other that I feel like writing in the future as noncanon or gaiden chapters. And I'll change it so it is obvious that Option 1 will happen, and the other two are 'what if?' stories. But I'll need to mess around with some of the endings of chapters to make that clear from now on. But it won't be obvious which one is the main option until I write it, unless I'm really certain about the next chapter.

  1. Climb up the end of the couch where Ms. Orfino’s head is, to contact her directly. (Go to Chapter Orfino1.3.1)
  2. Climb up the end of the couch where Ms. Orfino’s feet are, to continue to live out his fantasies.
  3. Ms. Orfino moves her leg, smothering him again with her bare feet and toes.

Obviously, this isn't in place yet, and I kinda just solidified my idea after reading your review. But I will in the near-future, make that change.

Thanks a lot for the feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying the stories!

Take care!

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: January 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Going to Class (Story Start)

Thanks for your answer !

I like your idea, though then your story wouldn't really be about choices anymore, would it ? 

How about building a core story, and each choice would then get its own chapter, that would then get back to the core story ?

I'm thinking about something like

Chapter 1 (core) -> Chapter 1.1 / Chapter 1.2 / Chapter 1.3 -> Chapter 2 (core). 

It means each choice would really have some value, yet whatever that choice would be wouldn't alter the core story. Well, one probably would, but the reader wouldn't be aware of which. 

It's really your idea, only with the addition of small chapters that would make the reader appreciate his choice a bit more.

 



Author's Response:

That's a cool idea, but I think I'll stick with what I'm planning for now.

When I originally made these interactive, they were kind of in the style of how Writing.com interactive stories go. Somebody adds a chapter, leaves a few choices, and somebody else can add next to take the story along. It's definitely different when it's all by one person, and I think this is what we're seeing now that the story has developed further.

I think that our ideas are similar, but mine would have the core story written first and then have other chapters branch off that don't necessarily affect the core story. And your idea has the core story be developed in parallel with the side choice chapters, where any of the side chapters could lead into the next core chapter.

I also want to have a system that looks nice in the Table of Contents and works at the end of each chapter. I'll need to think of a good way of making it obvious where each chapter lies in the overall storyline.

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

Reviewer: Max333 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Going to Class (Story Start)

I see where you're going, can't say it's anything I dislike :)

As long as it allows you to focus on one core story, it's an improvement. 

Can't wait to read from you again, cheers !

Summary:

Guy, 19, has the shrinking disease, and his sexual thoughts shrink him.  His 16-year-old sister offers to seduce him to strengthen his resistance to sexual thoughts.  But she has her own plans for fun after he shrinks.

Size reduction as small as 1 inch.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67636 Read Count: 468779
[Report This] Published: January 18 2017 Updated: August 29 2018
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: January 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Amazing stuff here :)
Loved all of your stories : this one won't change my mind ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the nice comments.

Summary:

An angry girlfriend reads her captive, perverted boyfriend some 'tales of the tiny' to see how deprived he truly is. Stories where tinies are tormented by the feet of their female family members.

The tales of the tiny is an anthology of stories containing shrinking and feet, this volume focusses on the incestual side of these topics specifically. Enjoy!

Features foot fetish content which is argueably rather extreme in places, you have been warned.

 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41103 Read Count: 87255
[Report This] Published: March 16 2018 Updated: July 24 2018
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: August 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Those were amazing stories and amazing ideas. You are my favourite author on this site, for sure. Great work, outstanding work. Keep it up ! Can't wait for book 2.



Author's Response:

Thank you, your words are appreciated. I hope the qualities of my writing that you like are present in the next installment! 

 

As a side note I'd love to see a continutation of your own story or a new one if you ever feel up to it, although I understand if not after all I'm unsure if I'l ever finish BtB.

Summary:

Tom's younger sister Riley has just finished her year long training at Hemlock Academy, a place where they turn ordinary women with sadistic tendencies into dreaded SCOs (shrink correctional officers). 

Join Tom as Riley comes back into his life, now among the ranks of the most feared females in society. Will her desires to inflict stinky footed misery upon her big brother be quenched, or will her new career serve only to feed Riley's desire to humiliate Tom at not just her own feet, but the feet of family, friends and acquaintences?

 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Tales of the SCA
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75706 Read Count: 115478
[Report This] Published: November 29 2018 Updated: August 08 2019
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: January 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Graduation

Still an incredible work. Can't wait for what's to come. The build-up is great !



Author's Response:

Thanks! It feels good being able to take my time on this one. Chapters won't be frequent but with that sacrifice all should be high quality.

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: January 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Graduation

Checking everyday in the hope to see an update ! 

You really hooked me up :)



Author's Response:

Updated my friend! Glad you're enjoying the story, hope you like the latest chapter :)

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: May 24 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Graduation

Loved the interaction with Riley's Friends ! Hope to see again the shy one who would have liked to make him kiss her ass but didn't dare do it... 

Amazing stuff as always



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :) 

Don't worry, we'll see a lot more from these two, Beth especially. I have some fun plans for her.

Research by FTFeet Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A grad student agrees to participate in a reasearch experiment that he doesn't fully understand. He'll wish he read the fine print once the experiment begins, as there is no turning back once it has begun.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9483 Read Count: 25533
[Report This] Published: April 10 2019 Updated: March 09 2020
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: March 11 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Amazing story ! Loving it, and it has amazing potential to make the life of the protagnonist a living hell for a huge amount of time ! You never know what he has signed hehe.



Author's Response:

Now imagine what the consequences could be for breaking the terms of the contact ;)

Summary:

This is a short story about a guy wanting to make his giantess dreams come true. He pays to have an experience, using a new kind of VR that doesn't exist in our world.

Things don't go according to plan, obviously. Where would be the fun in that?

If you enjoy my writing and you have a spare three bucks, buy me a coffee? If you don't got it, just read and enjoy. That's what these stories are for. 


https://ko-fi.com/lilspeck


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13601 Read Count: 40772
[Report This] Published: September 21 2019 Updated: September 22 2019
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: September 22 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Wildest Dreams Come True

Great story, great ideas ! I like your style, please do not be discouraged from the possible lack of reviews. 

I wouldn't mind his sister being even more sadistic to be honest 😈

 

Anyway, cheers, and keep it on ! 



Author's Response:

 I had intended this to be a short story. I got a little carried away with it. But yeah, just a few chapters, then bringing it to close.

Now, though? I have some ideas that could keep this going for a while. And I know what you mean about lack of reviews, but that can often feel like.. Let's say 100 people read it and nobody says anything about it, yeah? Kinda makes me feel like 'Oh, I'm shit at this.'

For the time being, I don't have plans to stop. We'll see what happens.

And it may take me a while to get this story back towards the sister, but we'll def see more of her. I might have make some 'what-if' chapters, just to get some cooler scenarios out there.

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

After a recent development disorder leaves him much shorter than he used to be, Reese has become academically demotivated, and worries he won't receive his diploma in his final few weeks of high school. But his sister, a recent college graduate who's twice as tall as him, moves back home. Her arrival sparks a change in Reese's attitude to start treating his family - and particularly his amazon of a sister - a lot nicer than anyone would reasonably expect. Eventually his sister realizes she might be able to save him from failing his senior year, and Reese does his best to more than thank her in return.

There was some kind of spam attack on the website which is why it says I have over a thousand reviews. The moderators deleted the fakes but I guess the site still says I have a bunch. The real number is like 250ish or something. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: How to Train Someone in 23 Days or Less
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222990 Read Count: 1106509
[Report This] Published: November 15 2019 Updated: July 12 2023
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: November 17 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1

Loving it so far ! I'm really interested of what's to come, his descent into submission and his sister's way toward domination :D

Keep it up !



Author's Response:

Thanks!

My New Life by zephilia Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A mysterious explosion kills a father and leaves the son shrunk. How will the family cope with this new dymaic? How will the boy cope with his new position? Taboos will be broken, secrets will be learned and limits will be pushed beyond any normal persons capabilities. Come join us as we follow Joe through his adventure of discovery in his new life.

 

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19325 Read Count: 80225
[Report This] Published: February 07 2020 Updated: March 15 2020
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: March 17 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Incident

Great story ! Keep it up :D

Love the cruelty haha 

Desire by FTFeet Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

An average college students stops by a mysterious magic shop and pays a psychic to make his innermost desires come true. Sometimes things should stay a fantasy and not a reality.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Incest, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11666 Read Count: 28844
[Report This] Published: March 14 2020 Updated: May 26 2020
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: March 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Changing Destiny

Amazing. I just *love* the whole "got more than he bargained for" stuff. Be careful what you wish for. It's great !



Author's Response:

Same. I've never really dabbled in writing something where the MC had a fetish, but given the twist on it I'm really liking it. Happy you like it! I'm a big fan of Inconvenient Coincidence.

Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: March 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Changing Destiny

Glad you liked it ! 

I'm feeling more and more motivated to begin writing again, honestly. Reading your stories inspires me ! Haha

 

Can't wait to see more :)



Author's Response:

That's awesome! I feel the same way

Summary:

Timothy Springer is a normal 28-year-old guy, standing at a normal 5’8, weighing a normal (if slightly below average) 165 pounds, and working a normal job. Everything about Timothy seems normal and unremarkable…except for his secret fetish. He's a macrophiliac -- he desperately longs to become smaller, weaker, and submissive to the women around him. And he wants them to grow, to surpass him in every way.

His fantasies are impossible...until he meets Maia, a mysterious goddess who appears to him one night. She says that she can make all his dreams come true, but warns him to think hard about what he is actually asking for. Timothy quickly agrees to all of her rules, and his fantasies slowly start to become a reality. But does Timothy realize what he's set in motion? Is this all what he really wanted?


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55437 Read Count: 83602
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: May 12 2020
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: April 13 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Timothy is a Beta

Loving it so far ! The build up is great, can't wait to see what's next !



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Max!  I'll be posting more soon! <3 

Summary: Your forced to smell your 15 year old friends feet.
You thought she was a nice girl incapable of even hurting a fly, turns out, she loves torturing you with the scent of her pungent feet.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Feet, Entrapment, Slave, Odor, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6030 Read Count: 33445
[Report This] Published: April 14 2020 Updated: February 27 2024
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: February 21 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Megan's Feet

Hey there, congratulations for your first story. First chapters felt a bit rushed, but you've improved in the fourth ! 

Would love if things moved a bit slower and if his sister gained a bit of personality, but that's my own taste haha



Author's Response: Yes I wrote them 4 years ago, i’ve gained a little writing experience since and am going change what i’ve wrote to give it more detail.

Summary:

(Author's Note: This was the first story I posted to this website and upon re-reading it, I'm very unsatisfied with the quality of the writing in it. I'm only keeping it up because I don't like it when authors have deleted stories I liked in the past. It's definitely clear I was still cutting my teeth when I wrote this. If you haven't read it, I recommend skipping it since it's not the same quality as my other stories. Hopefully I will be return and edit it at some point in the future, because the quality really is not up to par with what I want it to be.)



I've always been drawn to the concept of a giantess that tortures a tiny man thinking that he loves it. Even better is that no matter what he can’t seem to escape it. What’s even crazier is somehow he starts to enjoy it despite himself. Well Jack, a tiny guy with a very rich absentee single mom, is the boyfriend of a knockout redhead, Jenny, who despite being hot enough to be a model has serious B.O., sweats a lot, and frequently farts. I thought a lot about this specific scenario.


The thing is, he really does love her and she loves him. Since, it’s far too late for his girlfriend to know the truth, he continues the lie that he likes the stink until he’s been conditioned to actually like it.



This is in part an exploration of what happens when you are too willing to put others above your own happiness and the need to stand up for yourself.


Apart the first flashback, the characters are 19 and 20.


The satisfying resolution for the relationship won't occur in this story, but will in a future installment. This will be more of a giantess smut story than a plot story.


Real life Note: If you are in a relationship and you don’t like things your partner does, please speak up. Don’t hold it in. A good relationship should be about making you happy, don’t stay in one that doesn’t and please respect yourself and make sure that your boundaries are respected. It’s much better to be alone than to be abused. You deserve real love. Don’t settle for anything less than real love.



Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Insertion, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: (Tony and Lauren)'s/(Jack and Jenny)'s Adventures
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4822 Read Count: 5586
[Report This] Published: December 28 2021 Updated: December 28 2021
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: December 28 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How I Got Into This Mess

That's a great start of a story !

Can't wait to see Jenny slowly reduce him into her tiny tortured slave while thinking he loves it hehe

Summary: A clueless robot maid dominates her shrunken master.
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1891 Read Count: 1973
[Report This] Published: January 25 2024 Updated: January 25 2024
Reviewer: Max333 Signed
Date: January 25 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Master?

Hey man, I love this kind of setting. Wouldn't mind seeing the story go on for far longer ! Cheers with your work :)