Penname: Afroking [Contact] Real name: Jonny
Member Since: April 29 2012
Membership status: Member
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Been reading for a few months and ive read about almost every stoty LOL. God bless every writer. And I found out im in the top 10 Most Prolific Reviewers! cool beans


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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
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Date: September 17 2012 Title: None

 

I also like 'My Giantess Girlfriend' I like that story the best out of the 3 u got if u can continue it that would be cool. glad to read more

Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: September 17 2012 Title: None

 

I also like 'My Giantess Girlfriend' I like that story the best out of the 3 u got if u can continue it that would be cool. glad to read more

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2012 Title: None

 

before things got really crazy like swat,army,and police i liked it. turning into a demon was a twist. You totally did not have to write about the army and stuff lol. This story could have gone in other directions.

Sweat & Tears by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Muscle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14086 Read Count: 142140
[Report This] Published: September 18 2012 Updated: October 23 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

 

is there going to be some sweaty foot action? that would be cool. also how small do u plan on him getting? nothing is better then having a 2ft servant around the house! :)



Author's Response:

Yes there will be feet, probably my favorite aspect of the fetish so for sure there will be. I don't want to say exactly how small, but smaller than 2 ft. But it's a gradual shrinking process so there will be time spent w/ each size on the way down...

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

 

alex seem to be very ditzy is she going to be dominant or aggressive/playful? because one of your categories is gentle/kind. I dont know how she is. She seems oblivious to joe's humiliation, or she dosent care. Feed Me More!



Author's Response:

Well, yes and no. First of all I'm sorry if I betrayed your expectations. I might remove the tag if it seems misleading (however its not that far into the story yet).

I put gentle because Alex wants to do her best to help and take care of Joe. Obviously this hasn't been really necessary so far although there was a bit in this chapter. I don't want to spoil much but, even as the shrinking continues, Alex doesn't have malicious intent. So it is gentle in that sense. But its not a completely gentle story becasue she's 1. very playful/aggressive in her ways although she doesn't mean anything by it, and 2. not very competent at taking care of others (immature).

She's definitely more oblivious. She would care if she really knew, but doesn't think of it that way and Joe is too timid to say anything yet.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

u should keep in gentle/kind because the way u described it is that she wont be sadistic. thx for answering now i know more about alex. It would be cool/helpful to get a ch. from alex's pov. God I cant wait for more!:)

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Date: September 22 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

 

I hope the form a deeper friendship. I can't wait till Alex actually realizes he is striking lol. In the next ch or so can u maybe add in some actual foot worship? I know its hard because he seems to stay away from her feet even though he likes her socks lol. His love for her smell grows deeper lol. Keep up the good work :) "Feed Me More!"



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'll definitely be writing in more feet stuff. I made him gradually more accepting of her smell until he suddenly liked it and craved it since I like the idea of it having that secondary effect besides just shrinking, and it keeps him exposed to it and shrinking more (if only he knew it was the cause). And I like the parallel of growing to love her smell -> growing to love her. 

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

Best image 4ft Joe kneeling at Alexs feet worshipping them. picture it u love it dont you lol.



Author's Response:

Believe me, I've spent a lot of time over the years imagining this scenario with tons of different girls, lol.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I need more lol such a good story!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

I want this story back im really missing it lol



Author's Response:

Hey I'm sorry about that. I'm trying to get back into the groove of writing, but the problem is that I hit kind of a snag where I wasn't satisfied with what I needed to do immediately after the ending of the last chapter. I wrote something but wasn't satisfied with it. So unfortunately the solution I came up with is kind of complex and requires like 2-3 chapters of content, and some stuff that's kinda tricky to write for me since it's mostly not going to be from Joe's perspective from the rest of the story. I should have kept it simple like I originally intended but, well, lol. 1-2 more days and I should have it done, but I've been a combination of busy and unmotivated unfortunately....

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

 

"Thanks to Afroking from the comments for emailing me to let me know he was still interested in seeing me continue the story" I wish all author were like u lol. Im so glad I wrote u because this is a great story and boom another great chapter. I love how Alex dosent seem to notice or care about Joey's frustration.Have u figured out an end size for Joey, I think it should be around 7 or 6inches. Only because Alex is already really tall. I hope Joey learns to want to worship Alex, instead of being made to worship her. thx for coming back im always here to help. Motivation for the WIN!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks again! I'm glad you're satisfied. We'll see how things play out...

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

don't make me beg for more I have no shame.



Author's Response:

soon....

Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: December 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

are u still working on this story?



Author's Response:

I haven't abandoned it and will finish it eventually, but I just don't know when. Sorry.

The Toy Boy by Julianz Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Shrunken by his friend, Julian is forced to spend a week with each of his 6 friends, that are girls. He is doing fine, until he is kidnapped and tortured by his biggest crush ever, and her 2 evil friends. Until, he escapes and tries to find help.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7207 Read Count: 63135
[Report This] Published: September 26 2012 Updated: October 19 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

not bad at all. Im use to your stories going by a little faster than others. you are the type of author who likes to get straight to the action. u seem to like names that start with J (My name starts with a J) I like that u have so many different ideas in your head. Try not to forget about your other stories! :) (FEED ME MORE!)



Author's Response: Yeah, I figured that. I am getting better at writing, thanks to your comments. My real name is Julian. I'm really happy because this is my first story that has all 5 starts from the reviewers. -Julian

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

lol combining the two different stories. Im looking forward to their meeting. good surprise I give u that.

Summary:

See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57433 Read Count: 177645
[Report This] Published: October 01 2012 Updated: December 17 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: BOY'S ON BERRIES

 

love the story so far. Im happy to know their im more to come. Another story from the great timescribe!



Author's Response:

865 readers and 3 new reviewers in less than 2 days. I'm truly honoured.

Thanks for the high praise. Guess I'd better get another chapter up.

Summary: A sequel to a previous story, commissioned by aaron from this site. This is a sequel to, "Family Matters" by me.

A few years have passed since Katherine Beaumont, a normal sized girl in a family of giantesses, has had her adventures with her aunt and mother.

She lives on her own now, and is having a party with her friends when she gets a visit from an old family member, who has some other plans for her weekend.

SPECIAL NOTE! This story has 2 alternate endings! The reader is left to decide which ending they would like to see. Chapters 3 and 4 are the 2 alternate endings!
Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6134 Read Count: 44205
[Report This] Published: October 09 2012 Updated: October 09 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bump in the Night

 

another good one by the great Emma Gear I love all your work big fan.

A Nice Family by Julianz Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: As the last of his race, "Marcus" needs help from the humans. Which was against thier laws. He ignores it, since there is nobody to tell him he can't, and confronts a human. He finds more than help, he finds something much better.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4717 Read Count: 34024
[Report This] Published: October 13 2012 Updated: October 19 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: October 14 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

 

good work.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: October 19 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

 

End of story?



Author's Response: Sorry, its a surprise.

Summary:

A college women's gymnastics team and the coach are hit hard by the desires arising from the Rebalancing of Sexes. It's made worse when their boyfriends and husband are kidnapped by a rival team, forcing them to grab the last male on campus to meet their needs.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Rebalancing the Sexes
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41351 Read Count: 241752
[Report This] Published: October 23 2012 Updated: August 12 2015
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapters 15, 16 & 17

 

I have to apologize I did no think this would be a good story. I dont know wht it was but the name was too long or something. idk. This story is fantastic, I love everything about it. I love the connection between Amber and Jason. Hope to see more of their relationship unfold.



Author's Response:

Thanks and I'm thinking about adding to their relationship and the others, and maybe moving a few around. Please check out the other stories in the "Rebalancing the Sexes" series!