Penname: Carycomic [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: December 10 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm a Connecticut Yankee from the Northwest Corner of the Nutmeg State. I was born in 1959, which makes me a reasonably hygienic middle-aged man (as opposed to a dirty old one; lol!). It also makes me an avid science fiction buff, as I grew up reading Silver Age comics and watching now-vintage sci-fi TV shows. Also, a moderate collector of same.
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The Big Mistake by Sonicfan287 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: I am punished by a hot girl after I check her out.
Categories: Adventure, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11654 Read Count: 73156
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: June 12 2009
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The apology

Bobby might have been in the wrong, the first time around. But, Brittany jumped to the wrong conclusion, the second time around. In fact, given the cliff-hanger for this chapter, I'll bet she KNEW he hadn't been taking advantage of his size to be a peeping Tom. She just used that as an excuse to further torment him (which is probably what she had in mind, all along).

So, for my metaphorical money? She owes twice as many apologies as he does!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The NEW escape plan

I know I'm keeping MY fingers crossed in that regard. :-)

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Date: June 12 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Last Hope

Excellent conclusion! Who knows? Maybe this Bobby and Brittany will turn out to be counterparts of the couple over at "Victim of Love?"

Just a thought. ;-)

Author's Response: lol believe it or not, theyre 2 different characters

The small problem by Sonicfan287 Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: I am shrunk by some shrink cola and try to find my friend Kim to help me
Categories: Gentle, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4194 Read Count: 8990
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: November 02 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 12 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What? No counterpart of Brittany in this story? Deduct one point!

Otherwise, this was awesome, all around.

Kim's Small Problem by Sonicfan287 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A sequel to "the small problem", my friend Kim is now shrunk with a shrink ray I find in my basement. Will I be able to fix it and re-enlarge her?
Categories: Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1835 Read Count: 6770
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: November 02 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: November 13 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a sucker for happy endings. Thanks for this one! :-)

The Science Project by Sonicfan287 Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Kim has a science project to do, but unfotunately, what I dont know is, Im about to become her shrunken project.
Categories: Humiliation, Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 683 Read Count: 6573
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: November 02 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: November 09 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not as good as TinyDan's version. But, still alright.

The Magic Bench by Sonicfan287 Rated: G starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A really random story, I sit on a bench at school and shrink down to miniature size.
Categories: Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1302 Read Count: 5269
[Report This] Published: November 02 2007 Updated: November 02 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: November 09 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My guess? Kim wanted to have a day or two of fun with Bobby. So, she used reverse-psychology on him, when she told him about the magic bench.

Either way, this was a pretty good one-shot!

Victim of Love by Sonicfan287 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: I'm in love with a girl named Brittany who doesnt give me much attention, until a jealous exboyfriend tries to shrink her and shrinks me instead. Now I'm in her care until we can find a way to unshrink me and stop him.
Categories: Adventure
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7999 Read Count: 64310
[Report This] Published: November 06 2007 Updated: August 03 2014
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: November 08 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The attack

Somehow, some way, I just know Brittany's going to lose custody of him (if only temporarily). Like, maybe, to some cheerleaders?

Maybe chapter 2 will prove me right.
;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Figuring things out

Hmmmm! Could Christina have been the one Glen was talking to? I guess only the prompt posting of the next riveting chapter will answer that question.

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The trouble begins

And, now, the "fun" begins! *Insert image of mad scientist, playfully rubbing hands together, here*

I just hope Brittany and Christina are only _pretending_ to buy Natalie's story at face-value.

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Date: June 05 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Secret's Out

*Kneels and prays like Gregorian monk.*

Let Brittany be the one. Let Brittany be the one. Let Brittany be the one.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Run for my life!

This piece of Candy is definitely NOT sweet!*

*Sorry, dude. I just couldn't resist it. ;-D

Author's Response: hey, i dont blame you

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The game continues

An unexpected ally? NICE ONE!

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Date: June 09 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Finding Brittany

I'm very glad Brittany and Bobby were re-united. For one thing, there's no way Kathy could have absconded with him, with her softball uniform being so skin-tight. And, more importantly? Megan's temperamental determination to help Bobby w/o re-uniting him and Brittany could indicate that SHE'S THE ONE WHO GAVE GLEN THE SHRINK RAY.

"As I've told you before, Watson. Once you eliminate the possible, whatever remains--however improbable--must be THE TRUTH!"

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Out to lunch

So all those other competitors for "ownership" of Bobby were Brittany's fellow cheerleaders? Never saw that coming!

And, that goes double for the cliff-hanger with Glen. Fabulous!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Hot Pursuit

Suspense suitably prolonged. Bravo!

P.S.---WELCOME BACK! :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Digging Deeper

Are Glen and his friends sadistically shrinking girls who would normally snub them? Or, are they masochistically letting themselves be shrunken-for-hire? The mystery only deepens.

Midwestern Values by asukafan2001 Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A divorced mother of two finds herself apart of a nightmare she could have never envisioned when she finds herself shrunk to just a few inches tall. Her ex husband and his new wife end up taking her kids, while the babysitter takes her freedom. Midwestern Values takes you on a mothers journey for not only her freedom, but a desperate battle to be restored to normal and gain her kids back.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5740 Read Count: 19440
[Report This] Published: December 06 2007 Updated: December 09 2007
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 07 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Huh! You don't often find a female babysitter kidnapping a shrunken _woman_ in this kind of story.

Interesting innovation!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 09 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Alex clearly has more issue than a subway newstand. Because, I refuse to believe Emily was as bad as that, for real. And, the fact that I'm even doing this armchair psychoanalysis shows how convincingly you wrote this chapter!

Now, for a couple of cons. First; you keep alternating "Tina" with "Tiny." Is that how Emily mentally refers to Roger's second wife? Is she normally shorter than Emily?

Second; the correct term for a laryngitic-sounding voice is "hoarse."

NOT "Horace!" lol!

Annihilation and Absolute Absurdity by Sir Lime Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Violence! Action! Women! Giant Women?!? A "not so average" story about a secret agent and his adventure to retrieve the government's most secret scientific achievement.

NOTE: NOT an adult story. Meant for entertainment purposes ONLY.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Slow Size Change, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3213 Read Count: 48045
[Report This] Published: December 13 2007 Updated: August 06 2008
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed
Date: August 05 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Part I

P.S.---sorry for the extra reviews on the first three chapters. I thought sure I had seen this only @ GTS City, when I read it before.

*Blushes redder than embarrassment icon.*

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews! I don't really care how many you send, as long as I get your sincere thoughts.

                                                                      Don't let anyone tell you Otherwise!

                                                                                      Sir Lime

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.