Penname: Mr in A suit [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 26 2019
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Bio:

Just a fan of gentle giantess stories. I like romance, the chracters interactions and the development of their emotions in doing so, not just the usual sadism (of the giantess) and masochism (of the tinies).


I most enjoy stories where th mc gets shrunk and has to deal with his/her relationship with family and friends. 


Thats it. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.


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Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 411107 Read Count: 246735
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: February 18 2024
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2022 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

My PC broke down during the weekend and I finally managed to get it to connect. What is the first thing I do? I go wash the dishes LOL

Poppy, Poppy, Poppy... I like when she kisses Annabelle. I like how she kisses Annabelle. Am I shipping Anna with Poppy? Am I? Of course I am! And my goddesses, she is strong! It seems she took out Bitsy and Managed to overpower Steven like it was nothing.

I could say Poppy is stronger because Anna is a especial kind of type 0 and other things... but I want to wait the next chapters. Maybe we will get more info on her mother or more interactions that flash out what exactly is the deal with Anna, Poppy and imprinting.

Now that I think about it, Anna’s train of thought during chapter 24 could be foreshadowing Bitsy’s master death. How a type 0 react to their master’s death?

Ralgar made a comment about the giantesses working out. It’s an interesting set. Maybe Anna on Molly’s bellybutton or Harper’s armpits, helping with exercises – but only managing to tickle and make then horny.

That’s it for now. I will wait the next chapter to comment more. But take care of yourself, please. Don’t overwork and don’t worry. I think I talk for every single fan of your story and characters when I say your health comes first.

And about writing, I am trying my hand on short story and drafiting concepts. Your replies are a great incentive. Thanks and I hope you are feeling better. See you on the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Ha, sorry about your PC, Mr. In a Suit.

Lol you're the first person to ship Poppy with Annabelle. I definitely can get on board, there's nothing wrong with a little Loki-esque situationship. 

All of your imprinting theories are so interesting. I know you probably perked up at the most recent chapter with all the Blood-Blessed stuff. Slowly--slowly more will be revealed. 

Also, I think short stories--especially flash fiction--is a great way to get into it. 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Warning: this comment contains high levels of Nell x Anna shipping. That doesn’t mean I don’t care anymore for Harper, Leah, Naomi and Molly (I shipp Anna with all F4). It’s just that I have high expectations for Nell's development with Anna... and the fact that I already filled almost two pages with this comment.


What you did with this chapter is what most series strugle or simply don’t bother to do: you expanded on the world using just enough already established elements as to not fell unattural and rushed. The reader can more or less find elements on past chapters that allowed the introduction of a shrinkee comunity and resistance movement now.

I say comunity, but, judging by byte’s testimony, we are talking about a whole society that is maginalised by the giants. It’s not just Byte. The suits dialogues and demeanor also hints that this is not just about 4 rich families who hate shrinkees, but a whole ideology that puts the 4 families at the top of the food chain.

Chapter 26 managed to higher the stakes of Annabelle story, it gave a political depth to it,  it introduced a war and it made all those things in a way that made sense to the reader. I guess what I am trying to say is... GOOD JOB... VERY GOOD JOB MAN.

Now... a curse, Poppy and Annabelle... yeah I think it’s pretty clear where I am going with this, right? Although shipping Poppy with Anna might come out as a joke, the end game for Poppy is to ensure Anna’s safety.

And how can a smaller being survive? By forming colonies or by using hosts... larger hosts in a symbiotic way. That’s why the F4 are obsessed with her. Poppy might call them goddesses and worship them as higher beings, but the giantesses are unable to live withot her the same she is unable to survive without them.

This is not some evil scheme, it’s a biological response from Anna’s body to protect her. I once saw a vídeo explaining how the effects of cocaine on our brain are similar to being in love... that is Annabelle’s blood blessing (and curse). She can’t control it, to survive her body affects both giants and shrinkees, sonner or later making everyone addicted to her. The ultimate survival mechanism.  

 Effects may vary from one specimen to another, Anna clearly being on the stronger side of that spectrum... and judging by the way Byte puts it, the reaction never really seizes and it’s rare, very rare, even within his society... so much so that I think his commander will not be pleased to learn he left a type 0 with the BSA...

To fully urderstand my theory, we have to talk about Nell (a.k.a my favourite giantess... a.k.a the one I shipp the most with Anna... a.k.a show me more Nell x Anna request TT_TT). She is not perceived as a gigantic being not because she is a friend, but because Anna deems her as too weak. Chapter 26 portrays Nell exactly like that – a  submissive person who may try but ultimately can’t
stand against others... at least not for Kyle.

About this point, I emphasize that once again the issue with survival came up and Anna actually regreted leaving the F4 side... the f4, not Nell or Dufort. Poppy recognizes the F4 and Zoey and not Nell. But I also don’t think this is everything.

About this point, I emphasize that once again the issue with survival came up and Anna actually regreted leaving the F4 side. I missed seeing the F4 reaction to their beloved Poppy “kidnaping”, I especially missed seing how they and Nell reacted.

Although she is portrayed as a meek person and (because of it) a possible ally, I don’t think Nell is just that. Her arc semms to be about repression... and the devil is always in the details... oh she saved Kyle? Yes, but she put him in her shoe... what a strange place to hide someone... You see? That’s why I want to see more of her, I want to know how her desires and personality will develop by interacting with... Anna/Poppy.

For example – the pale girl in whom Anna see so much of herself smacks a ladybug without noticing... and Anna realizes, for the first time, how big those clumsy feet are, semms like just the delicate big toe would enough to engulf her... And Nell... Nell is just pretending, she actually noticed the ladybug and crushing it right beside Annabelle made her heart pound... like it pounded when she had Kyle at her feet...

That is also why I missed seing the giantesses reaction after waking up... did Nell felt relief because her “friends” were able to escape? Undoubtedly. Tha tis the her pattern, she wants to do good. But did she also felt despair for not knowing if Anna was safe?... Maybe... just deep down, in one corner of her heart... she wished Anna was brought back to her... maybe she even searched for her... hoping to take and hide her away in one of her flats... after all, if having down there Kyle felt so good, having a type 0 must fell like heaven...

I am not saying I think Nell is or will become evil, but I think she will imprint and will have to fight the urges, fight the imprinting until she confess her growing desires to Anna... and how Anna will react? Will she blame herself? She will be directly responsible for Nell situation...

Well... that’s it. About the commander... I need to think. My guess is as good as everyone else. Yes, the chapter is pointing towards Anna’s mother or someone from her family... but we will have to wait and see. Either way, nothing and no one can change the fact that Anna is a type 0 now (probably the most valuable in the world).

She is Poppy and, yes, a threat to everyone else. She can count on herself, but that is not going to protect her from the rest of the world. The giantesses will.


Thanks for all the effort, all the care and work, for all the details, for posting here... Thank you for everything. See you on the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hahaha! I love Annabelle x Nell. They're both so similar, but also so different. 

There will most certainly be more Annabelle x Nell moments coming up. Your comment about the ladybug got me thinking so I may change up somethings (so thank you!)

As always, your comments are always great to read

But Mr. In a Suit...you nearly gave me a heart attack because one of your theories is in my outline...word for word. I actually muttered "What the Fuck" out loud when I read this comment. I had to check the chapter to see if I had accidently tagged it on at the end. 

So like I said, you should get to writing! 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hello! Me again. These are my thoughts on what I think is most likely to happen in the next few chapters... so yes, another theory of mine. Just somethings I wanted to add after writing my first comment and reading some others here.

I think a good order would be Harper, Molly, Naomi and Nell, leaving Leah as the end game. Why? Because Harper and Molly can soft Anna’s heart, she will be surprised she is actually able to bond with those gigantic beings, at least when they are alone.

With Harper she might be surprised the co-ed has some tastes they share, some series and foods both like and actually talk about. Anna might come to the realisation Harper could actually be a good girlfriend... you know if she wasn’t so cling and sex crazy... like her parentes.

With Molly, she might find an inteligent Woman, with ideas and maybe ideals for her own life, as well as a fragile ego. Someone too much aware of her body and her parents expectations. She will find someone whose soul and body could shine and be real friends with her... if she didn’t try so hard to be... what her parents want her to be (much like Nell situation maybe).

With Naomi and Nell, Anna will be the prize in their sibling rivalry, and while Anna will try to favor Nell (inviting Naomi’s jealousy), she will find a more “Sweet” side to her punk-rock overlord, while Nell is more and more affected to the imprinting effects, acting more and more like the F4 usually does. Ultimatelly the sisters bond for “Anna’s sake” (maybe a united front to protect the tiny from their insane mother´s experiments?) in a threesome, Nell obviously fully imprinted at this point – which doesn’t stop her from being embarassed and confused after everything (but more happy than she ever felt before).  

After all this, becoming aware of the effect Poppy has on the giantesses and feeling, against all odds, really guilty about making the F4 even more crazy than they already where, comes Leah. Someone she can bond even deeper, on a psychological level, given both lost their mother figure and the Governor... well it’s a liar and a bastard who terrifies even our queen Leah. 



Author's Response:

I can't say much to this without jumping into spoiler territory (other than, you are very analytical)...but I will say that I cannot wait for your reaction to these next several chapters. 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I  was unsure how to approach this chapter because it is so touching. Annabelle reminiscing not only the hard stuff of her past, but also her mother’s touch at the end... God, you said the bound part would come next chapter, but, for me, the bounding already started there.

Once again, everything is very twisted When it comes to the relationships... to the point Harper’s parentes make no sense – They say and do all those things to Anna... and decide to give her their Family name. Is it because of imprinting or they are really just not all there when it come to shrinkees?

Changing topics, we saw how Anna desires attention and protection. Naomi is really the one I remember most when thinking about showing some real concern for Annabelle, but my gut teels me you have something big prepared for queen Leah and the governor (who is taking the stage as the most dangerous foul in the story). My gut tells me they have a lot in common (Leah and Anna) in terms of Family and the desire for a mother figure, a figure who won’t ever abbandon them.

I am even more curious about how will you develop each one’s feelings and desires... That’s it for now. I will not try to guess more than I already did, I want to wait and see what will happen now.

Thanks for the quick update and for always answering. It’s good to have this channel to Interact with the writers.



Author's Response:

Reading the comment makes me excited to see your reaction to the most recent chapter, Mr in A suit. 

I know the relationship between Annabelle and the parents (and the FF) can be difficult to grasp (because it is so twisted like you said), but I guess it comes down to them sincerely liking Annabelle, but their lust surpasses whatever feelings of happiness they would like to provide for Annabelle. Like, "This thing is so cute and amazing, and I want it to be happy, but the faces it makes when it's in pain are too fun to ignore." I mean that's a dark interpretation of what I'm talking about, but it's similar. 

As always, I can't comment on your theories because I just know that I'll spoil something. But just remember this comment when you read Leah's chapter. 

I will say about developing their feelings for each other...this is 100% the most difficult part of writing these sections. Part of the reason the most recent chapter took so long to write is because I kept swapping out scenes. Finding the balance of push and pull is really difficult. I didn't want Annabelle to fall too quickly, but I wanted to make it known that she's not immune to the giantesses' charms. 

Thanks again for your comment! You always make me analyze this story a bit differently. 



Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I know someone said it already and I agree: the dream sequences in this chapter are amazing, and that is because they are ambiguous. They do not convey just a sense of fear and dread.

On one side, we have a portray of how Annabelle is seeing herself more and more like property of the F4 – and in doing so it makes sense she will start to feel attract for things as well – Harper’s feet and boobs – instead of the person - she can barely understand Harper is a person due to how big she becomes during her nightmare.

But then, we have the other side – the side of self-discovery – Annabelle apparently finding out she might like... feet... or boobs... but more feet kkkkkk. Anyway, it became a trigger for pleasure, it “felt right”, but also strange... different, something I can definitely relate to.

Harper is very secure about her sexuality and how others see her, so she is perfect to make Anna take a first step towards finding a sexuality of her own. On the other side, she is very insecure about how Poppy sees her – thinking of herself as dumb and less loved when compared to Nell.

Annabelle is surprised, since she never thought anyone was really paying attention to her – the complete opposite of the F4.

This two chapters with Harper are all about one side and the other, slowly giving glimpses of both – the psychological scars of Anna and her goddess, ultil they reach a climax where the captive wants her captor inside of her.

But, one question remains – for all the giantesses in Annabelle’s life: is it love? Would They just kill her if she wasn’t a type 0? Judging by Harper and Zoey obsessions even before shrinking, I’d say yes, Anna has charisma, she draws people, and they start loving her (even if in a very warped and messy way).

But for the tiny, it’s a question without answer, she will never be sure and she doesn’t see herself as worth, much less special. I am guessing this carisma is the base for her type 0 imprinting unique power.

Psychologically twisted, complicated and deep? Yes, and that is why I love this story in so many levels. Changes are happening, revelations on all sides, and, as I stated in other comments, I believe Nell and Leah will be very important in this process.

About Zoey... I can think of a couple of ways she might reappear, even as a pawn to Leah’s father,  after all Annabelle can “never hope to fight against Zoey”. But I don’t want to think too much.

Right now the spotlight is elsewhere. I stick with Nell on top, Leah and Naomi together in second place... But I don’t want to be unfair with Harper and Molly, They are both interesting and amazing characters. Obviously I want Naomi and Nell arc to begin, but I think Molly is the next one.

I am also curious to see how each giantess will react when it’s time to say goodbye to Anna. 

About Patreon, I never paid too much attention as I don’t have a lot of money, but I will try to help as I can and I am sure others would too.

Also, stop worring. It’s too late to change – if you start making shorter chapters now it will be too strange kkkkkkkkkkkk

As Always, thanks for sharing your writing and sorry for any misspelling. And sorry for taking so long to comment - work keeps getting in the way of everything and I end up writting late at night or in a hurry TT_TT



Author's Response:

Mr. In a Suit! Always so astute!

I'm so glad that you caught the sexuality thing. It will come up again in later chapters. The fact that Harper and Annabelle are both ridiculed for their sexuality, despite them having completely different expressions of their sexuality is a point I was trying to drive home.

Like I've said in other comments, Zoey will appear, but unlike other elements of this story that some readers have already predicted, I don't believe many will guess how she is reintroduced until it happens. 

As for seeing how Harper and the others react when it's time to transfer Annabelle--I really want to keep the FF as separated from each other during this arc. I even debated showing the video chat and Naomi's call, because I want to focus on the FF as individuals. 

I will say there is one hand off between two members of the FF that I will be writing in great detail. I'm going to be super honest with you Mr. In a Suit. This is the one part of the story that I have flipped flop on multiple occasions. There is something I have been building on since chapter two and not one person has commented on it, so I've debating if I want to write a scene with this element of the story included in it. I really don't want it to be a "jumping the shark" moment, but it's not like it hasn't been there the entire time. I think I'm going to hint at it strongly in the upcoming chapters, and if no one mentions it, then I'll leave it be. (Also this isn't an invitation for predictions or anything lol. I just don't want to ruin people's suspension of disbelief if I include something that wasn't conveyed well enough) 

ANYWAY, sorry for the rambling. 

Also lol at the long chapters--yeah, I've given up on trying to skim it down. It's not happening. 

Thanks for the comment Mr. In a Suit, and sorry dumping my writing process in this response. 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Man, you have my utter admiration for the dedication you put in your writing. I am officialy a fan and I am sorry for not commenting on ch. 29, but I think it was for the best.

First, I never thought Poppy would give up on Molly, because I don’t see Poppy and Annabelle as entirelly separate individuals, and her imprint episodes with both Harper and now Molly are proof enough.

Annabelle interactions with Molly are, in my humble opinion, among the cutest in the series because, being who she is, Annabelle empowers Molly - she isn’t judgmental towards her and is capable of recognizing her good traits and efforts even after everything that happened (the shrinking, the torture and humiliation). I think this is a bit true to all 4 giantesses really.

And that’s exactly why Poppy’s comments about Anna not being an equal to Molly as well as Molly own remarks at the end leave a sour taste. Especially because Anna deserves her love and Molly really acted as a person in love with the shrinkee! You don’t say sorry to a bug, you don’t fight your sadistic freaking rich parents for a bug! You don’t endure chores for a bug! And you certainly don’t need a bug like Molly admitted needing Poppy!!

The giantess even says Anna should accept the feelings she secretly harbors for her... well talk about yourself. What would happen if one of the 4 actually admitted being in love with the shrinkee?   

God! This chapter and Molly got me so frustrated! Would she actually punish Anna after everything if she had continued? And just as I was  starting to shipp Anna with all female characters, even Anita. And the dream sequences were giving me hope... but not Mrs. Gates. Mrs. Gates can drop dead.

Molly is down to my least favorite character (I love her) and will remain there unless she confess her love for Annabelle... Now that I think about it, using her real name could be a sign of true closeness... Oh God... I am starting to doubt any of the four really love Anna again. TT_TT

What a great chapter, your effort really shone in every line.Can’t wait for the next one. And I know you said it wasn’t an invitation for predictions, but as we are entering what feels like a crucial part of the story, I have to look into ch. 2 again. I wouldn’t be myself if I didn’t at least tried LOL.



Author's Response:

Thanks Mr in A suit, your words are very kind.

I'm a bit biased, but I also agree that every interaction one-on-one with each giantess have some really cute moments. I also understand what you mean about Molly and Annabelle being really compatible in a way that affects their relationship in a way that's different from the other FF.  

Ha, I agree with you about Molly's comments, there's a lot of cognitive dissonance going on with her (really all of the giantesses).

Ah, the love comment. Your comments are always so difficult to reply to Mr in A suit, because I have to be careful not to spoil anything. Okay, I'll say that there is a scene coming up in a few chapters, in which this issue is brought up. It's not particularly long, but it is commented on. 

Ha! I've been reading a lot of theories about what I was referring to, and honestly you guys are a lot more intelligent than me. It makes me embarrassed to say what it was now, because your theories are a lot more sophisticated than what I had planned (actually that goes for a lot of the upcoming plot)

I mean I'll just come out and say it: It was a C plot for two of the FF. Their relationship has always been tumultuous, and it will be explored in an upcoming chapter, but it was going to reach its breaking point soon. This is the element I was referring to.  The scene I was referring to that I was debating changing was essentially how that breaking point was going to be conveyed. The cannon straight-forward way I was to write it was through violence (I think it was you who commented about Annabelle being on the floor while Nell and Naomi fought, and I said that I already had a similar scene prepared with a different set of characters--this is what I was referring to). 

The other way I was going to convey their climax was through well...different means. 

I'm not saying anything more! I still haven't decided what I'm going to do about that scene, but it's coming up soon, so I guess I have to make a decision. 

Anyway, thanks again for your comment Mr in A suit. Once again, you have given me an existential crisis. 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thinking about my last comment in ch. 30, an idea popped up concerning  honesty and the next arcs. It’s not that Harper and Molly aren’t being honest about their feelings for Poppy, but that They lack a motive to really surpass that wall between. Everyone around threats Annabelle as Poppy, as a beloved pet, so they don’t have  a reason to threat her any different, because really doesn’t matter what she says, since she can’t escape them anyway.

The momment Molly threated Poppy as a lover and Anna had her episode was the night she felt her grasp slipping because of the parents interference. But she soon secured Poppy, wenting back to her usual self despite the great shift in her house dynamics.

This might be even more pronounced in Naomi’s house, because she will have, not only her parents inteference, but a direct competition for Anna’s atention with her sister – and Nell uses Poppy real name, genuinely acknowledging her humanity and has a lot in common with the shrinkee (including being bullied by her sister).

My guess: the questions for the next arc will lie with the sisters feelings for Poppy and for Anna – how jealousy will affect all the imprintings.

Sorry for commenting twice on the same chapter again. And Happy Easter!



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right, Mr in A suit. I think you'll see when the FF start getting some push back how they re-evaluate their relationship with Annabelle/Poppy. Based on this comment, I'm sure you'll have a lot to say about the most recent chapter.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Monsters is really the best word to describe the governor and it’s friends/family. They fucking ate children! Did the giantesses participate in that? If so, I would prefer cutting my own head off than ever imprinting on any of them. Leah’s chapters managed to really made me understand this feeling of dread and fear Anna has when confronted with the giantesses, so much so she is comming back to some old habbits... not that other chapters didn’t but... they fucking ate children!!

And Toe Jam... talk about being indoctrinated, but I guess anyone would become strange if your own mother wanted to kill you and your best friend enslaved you... Monsters. Oh but Leah cried and she couldn’t get rid of Toe Jam... FUCK THAT! Anna is right, she stripped her of any sense of self, she treated her as a thing!! Monster.

Sorry for ranting, but, as I said, Leah’s chapter was heavy and eliminated any sympathy I could ever feel for her as a reader... so I must ask: did all the giantesses ate children like her parents?

I even wish Toe Jam had touched some of Anna’s blood. She would be better off worshipping Annabelle. On that note, Toe Jam interactions with her and Annabelle scenes as a giantess were the best, the highlight of these last two chapters. The dream scene was as perfect as ever and it made me wonder if the 4 co-ed also ever dreamed of Anna as a massive giantess. The irony: the BSA top dreaming of being the size of a speck.

About Oliver I simply can’t bear to think Anna will end up with a man, and this chapter is a warning: Byte will betray her as Oliver did. No. Anna has to open and come to fall in love with a giantess.  Only then she will really find balance as a tiny – she will feel safe but also free. A difficult task even if she wasn’t the size she is.  

There is more I wish to talk... about Naomi, about Poppy and how Annabelle did not forget her real name during the imprints (thanks God. Annabelle is such a beautiful name, much better than Poppy), but I will leave that for another comment.

Yes, I hate Leah and no, I don’t feel sympathetic towards her because of her mother, since she was also part of the BSA (probably choose to mary the governor because of that).

Great chapter, I can’t wait for Naomi and Nell next. For holding own to her kindness, Annabelle is the true goddess of this story.



Author's Response:

Ha! I won't confirm or deny if the FF have ever eaten babies before, but I will say they did not eat those particular babies that the colony Shrinkees are referencing. 

Hahahaha, Mr. in A suit, sorry to say, but you seem to be in the minority of your feelings towards the FF. I personally believe the things the FF are not forgivable, but I'm not a Type 0 Shrinkee with hormone-filled thoughts. 

God, I honestly cannot respond to anything else you've written without spoiling anything (seriously, I've tried) . All I can say is that I look forward to your comments for the upcoming chapters. 


(You're always trying to slip me up)

Thanks as always for your dangerous review, Mr in A suit.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2022 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

 I had planned on commenting chapter 33, and then saw 34 was out. What
a day! And I totally support more chapters for the Sano arc! God knows how sattisfied I am to see Nell and Anna together.

Anna became exasperated because she didn’t stand up for Tessa, but she has no real power in business matters and it’s just too cute how Nell became so selfaware of her opinion. Anna just can’t see it because: 1. usually she is the one being selfaware of others; 2. Nell is bigger than a building to her.

But, despite her lack of power, Nell acts out whenrever Anna is involved – she is probably the first person to treat Nell with kindness and friendship inside the BSA and the same is also true to Anna. They are lonely and have a lot in common.

Does that mean Nell will help with the Dufort’s reunion? Maybe, but she will certainly want to keep Anna to herself. The reason is simple: Nell will imprint on Anna the same way Steven’s owner did. If you asked me now, I’d say neither Dr. Sano nor anyone knows what Anna really is.

Everyone assume she is just type 0 because she has the healing factor, but, as Dr. Sano said, she is one of a kind, something that has been pointed many times in the past. She is stronger than Bitsy, Steven is not imprinted but Poppy only appears to her and we can assume her healing factor is also stronger. The first one in almost a decade? So she can very well be something a little different.

Yes, Poppy is obsessive but over any and all giants and giantess. Poppy doesn’t really care who, she will call any girl her goddess. Why? If everyone
can be, no one really is to her. The only one Poppy really cares…

It’s really something to think. Seeing how Naomi treats her, how she is not used to praises and is not regarded as a heir, I can understand why Nell would even be willing to imprint on Anna if it meant forging an unbreakable bound between them.

And Anna and Naomi? Oh I can see a dream sequence: Naomi has Poppy in her hands, but she is not the big one here. Soon a shadow is cast upon the two as a certain stale stench impregnates the air. Naomi doesn’t understand, but Annabelle remembers the aroma of Nell’s socks.

I will comment more on Artemis, but I need to think after this last chapter.

You always put a lot of effort and I just want you to know that I am grateful. As always, thank you for your dedication and for sharing on the site. I might
not comment as often as I did due to work, but I am reading. I am going to follow this story till it’s over!



Author's Response:

Hey Mr in A suit,


Another thought provoking comment. To be honest, I haven't given much thought to Annabelle's Naomi nightmare yet, but your idea is interesting. Though, I'm not sure how much I want Naomi and Nell to interconnect just yet.

As always, your theories are always fun to read. 

I'm glad you're liking Nell and Annabelle's dynamic. Their relationship will start showing some interesting parallels to other characters pretty soon. 

I'm struggling to come up with something else to say that isn't a spoiler, so instead I'm going to leave with: I think you are going to really enjoy the upcoming chapter.


Thanks again as always Mr in A suit. 


And don't worry about commenting. Whenever you can, I appreciate it.


Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2022 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Something was bothering about my last comment, but I could not pin down what. Now I know. I got so carried away about the new information regarding type 0 and forgot something crucial about this arc: Anna also has a sister, we just got confirmation she is alive and their relationship is the complete opposite of Nell and Naomi.

I focused so much on the feelings that I believe Nell harbours for Anna – and could lead to some desire and imprinting – that I forgot Naomi and how she
could also fell some form of true love (a.k.a respect) towards Anna.

Yes, she is cruel, but equally warped. This last chapter goes to some lengths to make it clear a trait of Naomi that has already been brought up several times: how she tries to hide behind a mask what she really feels and is. You see, if Naomi really hated her sister and acted like Leah and the others, she wouldn’t be one to pull Nell out of harms way.

But she did. The chapter made it clear she were the one who did. The chapter also made a point to make Anna remember her own sister while showing us how perverted Mr. and Dr. Sano are as they brought up both their
daughters.

And in that perversion, what do they want? Their daughters to love each other, but only in name, only as a brand (and that is exactly what the F-4 are: a brand to Naomi, as the heir, to stick to). My Goddess, I pieced all this while at dinner!

It didn’t even occur to me as I read that Anna might work towards healing Nell and Naomi’s relationship. But it might! That way we would have not only
the start of Naomi’s redemption, but Anna gaining true allies – and maybe romantic interests – within BSA.

Judging by Artemis priorities, Annabelle will need Nell and Naomi.

Sorry, sorry. My other comment focused too much in one piece of information instead of looking at the chapter as the start of Nell AND Naomi’s main arc. Sisterhood is something central in the narrative and you left the Sato sisters arc as the last, a possible turning point in Anna’s misery at the mercy of the BSA.

I don’t expect, if it happens, that Naomi just completely change in a single day. And she will most likely feel a rivalry with Nell when Anna is involved… but they will no longer be enemys or the heir of the Sano’s talking to the ugly duck of the family. They will be sisters. And sisters who fell deeply in love with the same shrinkee who is suffering because of them and their families.

I hope you see this new comment before posting chapter 35. Again, I am grateful for all your effort. Thank you and until the next chapter.



Author's Response:

This is such a well-thought out point, Mr in A suit.

I can't speak on what hasn't happened yet, but Naomi and Nell's relationship most certainly has some parallels between Annabelle and Artemis'. If you've read the newest chapter (Spoiler for ch 35), you probably saw a snippet of Nell and Annabelle comparing their better-liked sisters. 

Whether Naomi and Nell grow closer as a result of their shared love of Annabelle is yet to be seen. It may be the very thing that shatters their relationship permanently...


Thanks again for the comment, Mr in A suit.


You always make me consider my characters in a deeper and new way.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2023 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Hello! Passing just to wish you a Happy New Year. May 2023 be full of
peace and inspiration for all of us!



Author's Response:

Happy belated New Year, Mr in A suit! Thanks for still reading!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2023 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

First and most important: good to know you are feeling better and hope you get fully recovered soon.

About the last two chapters, the ticklig was by far my favorite part! Often an playful act, it’s also a symbol of intimacy. It’s a touch that invade our space, causing a loss of control and at the same time undeniable… pleasure. That’s what I imagine Nell experienced when Anna pulled the splinter out. She liked it and actively searched excuses for more.

Repeating what others already said, Nell and Annabelle interactions are the most wholesome and intriguing. Did Anna enjoy it? She denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert, but I am inclined to believe all this denial is due to her situation – having seen so much suffering and death, having been abused and tortured herself, Anna is uncapable of allowing any sense of pleasure or happiness that is not through Poppy.

Both have problems. Nell can’t stand up to Naomi and be honest about how she fells towards her new friend. And Anna also denies any pleasure for herself, going as far as calling Poppy a pervert for something might very well be her own lust at work.

But wasn’t Anna the one first impressed with Nell feet to begin with? Only after that Poppy begun to have ideas of touching and cleaning her sole. At this point neither are being honest with each other. There is also the aditional problem that Nell is regarding her as Poppy like all the others. Why not use her true name?

Because as Poppy she can stay forever with her. Yes, I am a romantic and foolish foot lover, but what can I do? I hope Nell is able to prove and open herself to Anna. The problem is her family, especially Naomi.

Talking about Naomi, how woud the entiltled punk-rock giantess react if Anna ever said she liked Nell feet more? That she found them beautifull and Nell even more beautifull? Would she do it without Poppy’s help and aware Byte might be watching? Acknowledging one simple desires as her own might be the first step to start turning the tables.

There is more… a lot more. For Annabelle’s sake Nell is willing to go far and that might be the entire plan those monsters of a parents have. But I need to think more about all that happened.

Again, thanks for your dedication, even droping a chapter when you are recovering. But please take care of your health first.

Have a good easter and until the next chapter!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12 2023 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Life can throw us curve balls. Lately I ‘ve also had to deal with some problems, not even sleeping well for the last couple weeks, so I am glad to know you are safe and well and working through.

Speaking of working through, man… Anna can’t have nice things. Great gruesome depictions during the village destruction. For the short amount of time he had, the chief’s death was hard and even with the dream scene, I wasn’t expecting for it to turn out like it did.

In fact, I don’t know what to say. Yes, I thought Nell could be dangerous, but… man! Are all the bridges burn? I could say no, but I am not sure this wouldn’t just be me trying to force my views upon the characters.

Life isn't throwing curve balls at little Anna... It's trying to shove a gigantic fucking wrecking ball down her throat!

Great come back! Great to have you back! As always, thanks for writing and sharing. Stay safe!

The School of Giantesses (A Matt Dexter Story) by Bob Typhon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Chestnut Boarding School is a school where the girls are giants and boys are much smaller. New student Matt Dexter has one goal: to take over the school. It is going to be difficult to gain influence or power as a shrunken boy in this school of giantesses, especially when he has to go up against the 'Queen of Chestnut'.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41091 Read Count: 184762
[Report This] Published: September 08 2020 Updated: October 26 2020
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2020 Title: Chapter 19: The Queen of Chestnut

You present a kind of interaction I've never seen on other stories of the site. I like Matt composure and honest when facing Anna and am enjoying every bit of interaction between the two.

Thanks a lot for writing and for sharing. Will eagerly wait for the next chapters.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like the interaction between Matt and Anna, I put it at the center of the story, so thank you

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2020 Title: Chapter 26: The Most Wack of Jobs

Very interesting progression on those last couple of chapters, especially regarding Anna’s mother and Matt job.

I am guessing Anna’s mother has some sort of scheme regarding the size of the male population, but that is just because I love unaware scenarios with feet and can’t help but hope that Mr. Dexter will shrink even more kkkk.

It could also be something regarding the size of the female population. Maybe Anna’s mother hope to make females even bigger, while she and her daughter ascent to god-like sizes... oh yeah, there it is the unaware scenarios kkkkkk

Anyway, great chapters, even greater story and characters. I am already shipping Anna and Matt.

As Always, thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your theories. I do have to admit that I'm not a huge fan of unaware scenarios, and I don't intend on making Matt smaller or Anna bigger

The Beaumonts by carnage Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 204]
Summary:

Natalie Beaumont hates shrinkies. Which is a huge problem for two of her children who have caught the shrinking virus. Life gets extremely difficult and scary for them as they deal with their giant mom. And it only gets more terrifying for them as their only ally, their big sister Aubreigh, is starting to see them differently as well.


Categories: Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163349 Read Count: 228904
[Report This] Published: January 03 2021 Updated: April 02 2023
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Changes

I don’t know how this story passed under my radar. It’s the type I love – character driven, with great feet scenes - and I just wasn’t aware!

Reading the reviews, I think I am a minority When I say I hope Natalie Beaumont SHRINKS AND DIE!!! Ok. Sorry, lost control there, but I am back. Yes, you wrote a very despisable villainess.

But I am most stuned with Aubreigh character and it’s changes! First clearly enjoying the power trip and now, grieving and feeling angry because of the guilty she now bears. She has broken, like Natalie (that bitch!) noticed.

Since the beggining Aubreigh is clearly insecure about how others perceive her and right now she is more emotionally dependant of her family ties than ever, this idea that her family and friends are perfectly fine and have to stay within her grasp is proving to be her undoing.

It costed her friends life, but that obviously wasn’t enough.  which is why I believe Aubreigh will only wake up, will only come back to being something like the sister Thomas once knew...  when Thomas dies... and by her hand. Yes, I am saying that, if things don’t change course, Aubreigh will destroy exactly what she so hardly tried to protect... her fragile ego.

I might be way off, but that is the feeling I am getting.

Thank you for sharing this story, I already favorited it. Also, sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.



Author's Response:

Hey man, thanks! I did take the summer off, so the story has been buried for a while.

And yes, haha, I'm afraid you're in the minority for sure! Natalie Beaumont is a guilty pleasure of mine. She's great fun to write for, especially if you like cruel giants, which I do. I have the next few chapters mapped out... but I'm unsure of how it will end for sure... but don't expect Natalie to shrink and die, lol. (I did have an idea for that type of ending, but I tossed it out pretty quickly.) I admit, the writer side of me wants to see a proper ending complete with justice... but the fetishbside of me says "nah, she has to win".

Aubreigh's character has also been very fun and satisfying to write for. Although see will never be on the same level of apathetic cruelty like her mom, she will do some pretty unforgivable things.

As for who else dies, and by whose hands (or feet, lol), well, that's anybody's guess! Thanks for reading and thanks for the thoughtful comment. I hope you enjoy what's coming up!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Timberline

Well... I guess Aubreigh never really carred for either her siblings or other tinies in general. Sad, really sad. But I loved the sanctuary scenes, Aubreigh and Natalie entrance and all. You are really good in writing both characters and feet scenarios, knowing how to describe and create a tension that estimulates imagination.



Author's Response:

I know... a lot of people were hoping for Aubreigh to turn good. I originally was going to do that but decided to go in another direction. Thank you for your kind words about my writing, I appreciate that!

A Mother-Son Weekend by Pluto Pendragon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Sarah Bridges is a loving, hard-working single mother to her 18-year-old son. After an incident, though, she realizes that she has been neglecting him in favor of her demanding but exciting job at a research lab. Fearing that she may lose him forever, she decides to take drastic action. Drastic action that involves the lab's latest invention.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15834 Read Count: 28258
[Report This] Published: June 11 2021 Updated: September 20 2021
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2021 Title: Chapter 3: A Secret Plan

Waiting was worth it. Your building of the main characters relation, as well as the inner world of Sarah these 3 chapters was nothing short of amazing. I am really invested and enjoied every chapter so far.

As I see it, Sarah, as a young and single mother, is going from one extreme to another, not realizing the changes and dangers her plan can bring to her and her son’s psyche.

The juxtaposition of Sarah’s fears together with her motherly instincts  throughtout chapter 3, even refering to Matt as her “cub”, grant the final part, where she actually concocts her secret plan, a sweet but also erotic and dangerous flavor - something I also felt in her interactions with Matt during the first chapter.

Sarah seems to be (willingly) ignorant about this very subtle side of her “loving adoration” and plans for Matt, but I wouldn’t say it’s the same for him, whom seemed really disturbed by the displays of affection in chapter 1.

I usually like to make theories about what is going to happen next, but I want to wain and see the aftermatch of the shrinking process.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Really good storytelling with amazing characters. Please, continue. I need to know what is going to happen!

 

PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.



Author's Response:

Sincerely, thank you so much for the extremely kind review!! I truly appreciate your kind words, and I'm really happy that you're enjoying the buildup of Matt and Sarah's relationship.

You're completely right with your observations of Sarah's behavior so far, and I hope you enjoy finding out how her plan progresses, as well as how it affects Matt. After realizing that she was basically ignoring him, she's now gravitating towards the extreme opposite end of the spectrum - which obviously isn't the best solution. Especially once her son is small, and basically loses his autonomy.

You're also right that she's painfully unaware of how her actions affect others, while Matt is more sensitive to that. I think this will make for an interesting dynamic, and I hope you enjoy how it progresses! I'll try not to have as long a wait for the next chapter. Regardless, thanks again for your review! It means a lot.

-Pluto

Micro vacation by ittybittyman Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Brother and sister go on vacation, but a technical error on their flight causes a little problem. 


Categories: Humiliation, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7378 Read Count: 43041
[Report This] Published: September 05 2021 Updated: November 10 2021
Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I knew I remembered your name from somewhere! 'itty bitty epidemic'! I loved that story... and I am loving this one too, your characters are almost immediately likeable. So good to see you writing again!

On the first chapter you asked if you should keep going or try something else. Definitely keep going! 

Scott and Tiffany's relation is what you expect of siblings with age gaps, and Scott is already 21, probably working, so it's understandable he wants to enjoy his vacations time.

On the other hand, Tiffany wants to be grown up like him, probably taking after from Internet/TV models and influencers, but her shananigans with her brother shows that Scott is right, she is a child trying too hard to be an adult. Putting his life in danger out of pure spite or to get attention on the Internet shows how naive she is, with his situation and her own body. 

 

Now, for sugestions (it's actually just what I wish will happen on future chapters LOL)

I look forward to see their relationship developing. But they need a way to comunicate. At his size there are two options: Scott cellphone shrunk with him or Tifany brings him up to her ear.

Scott gave some hints on the first chapter that, behind a grump exterior, he cares a for his sister. I think would be interesting if Tiffany, after going to a party, got in trouble. Maybe kidnapped by some creppy and Scott uses his phone to call for help, or maybe guide her out of the situation from her ear.

As for the message at the end of chapter 2... It could be an ex-girlfriend that stills friends with his sister because of some weird obssession... or some of Tifany's friends with a giant crush on her brother... either way, I think Tiffany's childish behavior will bring trouble for both of them.


Anyway, very good star. Loved both chapters, especially Scott's fear and confusion before Tiffany's size, running out of fear of his own sister and when she used her sandal clad foot to stop him and pretended would flatten him. 

Thanks for sharing. Favorited this story. I will wait eagerly for the next chapters to come.

PS.: sorry for any misspelling. I think I said this already to you, but, although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I must thank you for not letting it overtly blunt that Sarah likes Scott from the get go. Some stories just drop a character and her first line to the shrunk guy is ‘I wat you inside me’ -_-

The way you portrayed, Sarah strucked me as a good friend to balance Tiffany’s inconsequential behavior, while being a bit clumsy and wanting to party herself. Which means, Scott is obviously more safe in her hands, but not completely out of danger.

Had you made this chapter too focussed on Sarah and Scott, it could have ruined her introduction. You were carefull to focus on Sarah while not forgetting she existis in relation to Tiffany’s role in the story, giving space for each personality to shine.

I also liked you established a time frame for the story. Tiffany has called and already schedulled Scott regrowth in one week. This makes everything more real and worthy the time, it reasures us that we will be able to see the conclusion of Scott and Tiffany adventure at some point.

Last but not least, I loved the beach scenes, all of them. They highlight a lot. First the size diferences from Scott perspective; secondly the attention the girls pay to Scott as well as how immature they really are, choosing to wear “scandalous bikinis”... to play sand castle and giant monster with Scott.

I feel you've once again built a lot of good material and I can’t wait to see how each relationship will evolve along this week the three spend together.

 

Thanks for sharing your story with us!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great reviews. Comments like these keep me writing!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.