Penname: Marcinballa [Contact] Real name: Unknown
Member Since: May 17 2019
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Summary:

A tiny girl must explore her brother's stinky feet in order to save her family.


Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4895 Read Count: 42250
[Report This] Published: September 03 2014 Updated: March 12 2015
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: June 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story, hope you eventually add on to it

Summary:

Professor Janice Wahlstrom may be the smartest woman in the world, and her groundbreaking invention of SAF (Size Altering Formula) may be one of the most influential discoveries in human history. For the first true experiment of the formula, she takes 8 volunteers on an incredible tour of the human body.

 

(This story is based loosely on the book Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Although the characters are of my own creation, they are inspired but not directly copied off anyone fictional or real. No copyright infrigment is intended.)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Feet, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2616 Read Count: 6522
[Report This] Published: February 10 2019 Updated: February 10 2019
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: June 30 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Nia

Excellent work on this story, can’t wait to see where you go from here!

Summary:

Alex is an aspiring young woman who is unfortunately caught in the middle of a game with the game-master being her younger cousin, Ellie. The game she's caught in? Getting eaten over and over. Will Alex find someway to break the cycle? Or will she find something different about her as well as her cousin?


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11389 Read Count: 39088
[Report This] Published: February 14 2019 Updated: June 27 2020
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: On the Plate

Love the story so far! I hope you continue to add on to it! Great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I do plan on doing three to four more chapters in between my other stories so it might take a bit to update but I'll do my best to get it up as soon as I can!

Summary:

Rose is a doctor that specializes in piloting a P.O.D. (Physician Operated Diminisher), a vehicle designed to investigate health issues at a small size. Sara is her “guardian”, who assists in the procedures she performs. James is Rose’s boyfriend and Sara is far from his biggest fan. When he comes to Rose with a personal issue that he wants her to look into off the books, the three of them get tangled in a series of multisized affairs, some of which are not fun for all involved.

This heavily features giant male and giant couple. There will be sexual content.


Categories: Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Sci-Fi, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10931 Read Count: 27685
[Report This] Published: February 15 2019 Updated: February 27 2019
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: May 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this story is pretty good. The first chapter is spectacular and provides great world building. I was hoping it would go in some different directions in the later chapters, but is still good. Hope to see more here in this storyline.

Summary:

A college student's secret collection of shrunken nano-cities receives two new inhabitants in the form of her brother and his friend, who must adapt quickly to appease their new god or be destroyed.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15416 Read Count: 118521
[Report This] Published: June 02 2019 Updated: November 26 2019
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: June 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this story, hope you add to it soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks, more will be up soon.

Summary:

An unemployed son is reunited with his mother, but not the way he wanted ... or was it?


Categories: BBW, Mature (40-49), Butt, Couples, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19989 Read Count: 105567
[Report This] Published: July 01 2019 Updated: July 19 2019
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: July 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the story. I’d love to see it continue in a way where his mom decides to keep him and use him for herself for longer

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the rest.

Summary:

John Stones is about to make history being the first human to interdimensionally transport himself to an alien world through a portal. This momentous occassion will be broadcast to the entire world including in a certain liberal arts classroom where a young girl named Lisa is forced to watch. Unbeknownst to both of them however they are about to become a lot "closer" to each other than expected!


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Sci-Fi, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4159 Read Count: 38657
[Report This] Published: August 29 2019 Updated: August 29 2019
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: September 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Mission Preparation

Love the unaware perspective in this story. Hope you continue writing it soon! I’d love to see how this plays out. Maybe more people get teleported there??

Author's Response:

Thanks! I meant it as a one shot, but I have had a lot of people ask me for more from it. Not sure where I would take it from here but there could be some interesting predicaments

Summary:

Ken and Samantha's Giantess Tour has been going on for two years and continues to be going strong. But when Ken wakes up to find himself smaller than he's ever been on his sleeping girlfriend's body without his shrinking device, will he survive long enough to figure out what on earth is going on?

 

The Conclusion to the Tour of a Giantess Trilogy


Categories: Watersports, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Giantess Tour Series
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8161 Read Count: 30157
[Report This] Published: September 01 2019 Updated: September 01 2019
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed
Date: September 01 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Tour to Mount Clitoris

Fantastic series of stories! You really are one of the best writers on this website! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you! That is definitely high praise as there are some authors on here whose works I considered pretty amazing. I am glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

A single mother tries a new dating app, with surprising results


Categories: Couples, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18741 Read Count: 31878
[Report This] Published: October 29 2019 Updated: June 12 2020
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Trish's First Meetup

This is a fantastic story, one of the best written ones on the site!

Summary:

Natalie is just a girl who needs some money. Luckily for her she learns about a new app. This app gives people who always wanted to be crushed by a Giantess in a specific way or experience a Giantess attack on a city a chance to do so. 

The app lets tiny cities appear and girls get money to torture these Cities.

 

This story will start slowly but Natalie and all the other girls will be pushed to do unspeakable things to the city.

 

Please enjoy and leave some review if I should continue or stop writting after my first try.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Futanari, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18609 Read Count: 113853
[Report This] Published: December 03 2019 Updated: February 12 2020
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Start

Fantastic work so far!  Can't wait to see where it goes!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

 

There is a lot more planned. I think the next 5 to 6 chapters are almost finished in my head.

Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08 2019 Title: Chapter 4: The Smell of success

This story just keeps getting better. Excellent work! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you

 

I will try to post the next part pretty soon

Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Fame

Another great addition! I wonder if Natalie is gonna end up cloned and in a shrunken city...

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

 

I am sure she was many times but the real natalie wouldn't know

Summary:

A mother intends on throwing a wholesome 21st birthday party for her son. But little did she know that her and all participants will end up as small playthings in her son's unaware game. It's now a fight to survive for each guest of the party as Edward comes home to an empty house; well empty except for the bugs he loves toying with.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Giant, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19359 Read Count: 115587
[Report This] Published: December 09 2019 Updated: January 25 2020
Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2019 Title: Chapter 1: An Introduction to a Frightening Party

Been a while since I’ve come across a great unaware M/f story on here! I hope to see a lot more of this!

Author's Response:

Thanks my dude! I'll try and put another chapter(s) out either today or tonight.

Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Amber's Agonizing Annihilation (M/F)

Another great addition. I’m really looking forward to seeing where this goes, particular with the mom and the girlfriend.

Reviewer: Marcinballa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15 2019 Title: Chapter 2: A Sister's Ironic Demise (M/F)

This might be my favorite chapter of the story yet!

Also, do you take commissions?

Author's Response:

Not as of now, but I've toyed with possibly taking commissions. For now, since my work schedule isn't consistent maybe not, but if that changes I will make a post in whatever story I'm working on ATM.