I realize this is years late, but I just want to say this story -- and this chapter in particular -- are great. If you do manage to see this review, please continue the story. What made this chapter in particular so good was the more extreme height difference, since the country of Ireland is smaller than the ones in other chapters. That, plus the fact there is some actual violence and death here, even though you are abstract in your account of it. I don't recall any instances of tiny people being crushed or eaten in the other chapters, so this one specifically really stood out, and I enjoyed that. So if you do continue this story, please carry on this storyline with Robyn and Roman, or do others similar to it.

And this has got me thinking about other countries. If Americans are this huge in Ireland, how huge would Americans be in Luxembourg? Or what about in Liechtenstein or Monaco? Would an American even be able to fit in these countries? Or would they simply be able to snuff out the entire nation with one footstep? That would be insane to think about.

Very nice! Please continue!

The people of the city might not be happy with Camila taking all their food, but at least they can get some of that food back after it has worked its way through her guts. The city should be producing a lot of food which Camila can sell and make a lot of money, but a small amount of it she could eat herself, and then give it back to the city in the form of her waste.

Of course this first load she dropped on them is her own food that she ate and her body digested for them. You wrote that she ate Cauliflower. Hopefully the citizens of the city like pre-digested Cauliflower because that will be there meal now. :)

I recently discovered this story, and just finished reading through all of it. I'll give you my overall thoughts on the story as a whole and some ideas and suggestions that have come to my mind, but I decided to leave my review under this chapter specifically because of the part regarding Nyla, which I'll get to later.

First of all, I want to applaud you for the slow-rolling and plausible descent of Kristen into madness (or power-lust). Your story is a very welcome and refreshing change from the vast majority of stories out there, where the woman is always invariably turned on by destruction and killing right off the start. It is so very much over done, and feels very contrived, yet most giantess stories are like that, and frankly it gets a bit tiresome and boring. But the way you wrote Kristen being depressed and horrified that she had killed so many people (even if on accident) was on point. You had her gradually evolve and ease into embracing her dominance over the tiny people, and it was well done, so I applaud you on that.

Now for a bit of constructive criticism, though. You wrote that eventually Kristen began bringing food and water to the micros, and this works out well and good to explain how they get their food, but if I am recalling correctly, it took some months before Kristen started doing this. So how were these cities able to survive for those months without food or water? For Ostrov it kinda made some sense, because it was not only their cities but also the farmlands of the entire country that was brought with them. Cities can't supply their own food and need to have it brought in. A city might have enough food to last a few days or weeks at most, but certainly not months.

Now, as for Nyla and why I am posting the review on this chapter specifically. I'm NGL, I was kinda looking forward to seeing Kristen do something to punish this tiny woman for the threats she made to her daughter. It felt anti-climatic that she was not only allowed to survive (when so many others had died for so much less), but even ended up being rewarded by given such a powerful position and a life of luxury. I guess you could consider this a complaint, but I was bit disappointed she didn't get what she deserved for the threats she made.

That said, I do enjoy the humiliation she is subjecting the city to in forcing them to clean the filth from her shoes. Please do not hesitate to go into as much detail as you can when it comes to these humiliating and degrading jobs Braithe is now being forced to do.

Now, if you are receptive to ideas and suggestions, this chapter mentioned the black tar filth stuff that the workers cleaned from Kristen's sandals and made up of her skin, oil, dirt, sweat, etc. What exactly do they do with this stuff after they clean it off? It has to be discarded somehow, but where and how? My idea, if you're interested, is that someone in Braithe (maybe Nyla herself?) comes up with creative uses for Kristen's foot filth. Maybe it can be turned into compost and used to create some arable land for farming like Ostrov does? Not that they need to, since Kristen now provides them with food, but maybe they want to have a little more variety in their diet or something by growing crops native to their world which Kristen can't provide? Otherwise, maybe the foot gunk could be refined down into industrial chemicals like fuel or lubricants or something? The oil from Kristen's feet is oil, after all, so maybe it can be used to power and lubricate the very machinery they use to clean her shoes? Maybe they are able to collect Kristen's foot oil to such an amount that they can use it to power their vehicles or export it to other cities in the room for them to use? Or maybe if they don't think its too disgusting they might even eat Kristen's foot gunk or dried skin cells as a delicacy? Or use it has building materials somehow? Maybe in place of concrete and steel, they can use Kristen's skin cells as building blocks? The city of Crest might want Kristen's foot oil to use as annointing oils or incense or something in their temples when they do their rituals in worship of her. So please consider my idea that the city of Crest might really want to import this stuff Braithe is extracting from Kristen's shoes as a waste product.

Also, have you considered having Kristen put the nation of Ostrov to work for her in some similar fashion? The thought of even tinier people being put to work to clean Kristen's intimate objects is very hot. Its hot when that entire cities are doing this, but an entire nation which is even smaller? Wow. It doesn't necessarily just have to be her footwear, like what about making them clean her dirty panties, or even her vibrator? Butt plug? ;) Maybe the nanos of Ostrov can find some legit uses for the filth like I suggested with Braithe? Just some ideas, of course. But I do understand that Kristen is on great terms with Justyna, so I'm not sure what would prompt her to impose such a punishment on these hapless nanos. I just know that I would love to see such a punishment be imposed. ;)

And what about Ginny? Surely her footwear (and other intimate items) could use some TLC too, right?

Oh! And that's another thing which reminds me. When you wrote about Ginny taking the cap of tinies home with her, it made me think: what if Ginny had used those tinies as colonists to found a new city of her own inside of her own home? Having a cap full of thousands would have been a great starter population. Don't get me wrong, it was great she enjoyed herself with them, but she could have used just some of them and kept the rest to replenish their numbers so she could continue to enjoy them over the long run.

BTW, that's another thing.... whether intentionally or not, Kristen, Ginny, Leslie, etc. are taking a HUGE toll on the population of these people. I don't know what your long term plans are for this story, but if Kirsten is to maintain her role of goddess for a long time to come and if she isn't being much more sparing in their lives than she is, then she's going to run out. These people are reproducing and regenerating their populations right? I could see them being so demoralized by their situation that they don't reproduce much, but assuming they do it is still a long time for new micros to be born and grow to adulthood. Unless the tinies have some sort of accelerated growth that comes from the shrinking or something?

Oh, and btw what about actual literal bugs and stuff? Every house has them. if, say, a spider got into one of those rooms it could be a disaster, right? Maybe just possible the militaries of the Micro cities might be capable of killing a spider though. I know they can't do anything more than tickle Kristen.

And as for the crack in the wall... here's another idea I'd like to toss out to you. What if the Micros dug through the wall into the adjacent room with the Nanos and were able to interact with them or something? I mean there's LOTS of potential to this idea. Or Kristen might even purposely arrange for the Micros to interact with the Nanos somehow? For example, in the last chapter where someone had tried to assassinate Justyna, Kristen understandably wants to do something to help her friend out, but given her enormous size its impossible for her to do anything with the precision necessary. But a Micro on the other hand could make for a great intermediary, right? Kristen could deploy a Micro (or team of them) into Ostrov and order them to assist Justyna or something.

Before I forget, here's one final thought about Kristen putting the Micros (and maybe Nanos) to work for her. Making them clean her items is very cool and intoxicating, but what if she could put them to work in a way that was profitable to her somehow? Being so tiny, they can do extremely intricate and detailed work that normal sized people can't. Maybe Kristen could make herself rich in the real world by putting these people to work making something that she could sell for profit?

I don't know, anyway this is your story and I don't mean to impose or anything but I just wanted to share these ideas that popped into my mind as I was reading it.

It's a great story, and I look forward to your future updates!

Hi! I just finished reading this chapter, so I thought I'd leave a review. I can see that it is your longest chapter so far, and I want to tell you that it is appreciated. Don't hold back on the writing or the details.

I left a couple reviews over a month ago and I know you read at least one of them because you responded to the first one. And that was before this chapter came out, so I did have some thoughts in my head on how this chapter would turn out since Chapter 17. I did expect that Ostrov was going to be in a world of hurt because of how angry Kristen was in the last chapter, and my predictions turned out to be right. :)

But it wasn't quite what I predicted would happen. The assassins that tried to kill Justyna in the previous chapter seemed to have been pissed off by Kristen's lewd masturbation on the couch for all of Ostrov to see. So the thought that popped into my head was that Kristen was going to punish those assassins by masturbating herself over whatever city they were in, and I guess drowning them in her juices or something like that. I just thought that would be a more "poetic" punishment for them, since they would be killed by the very act that they tried to kill Justyna over. But oh well, either way they're certainly dead now. :) Along with, unfortunately, millions (?) of other Ostrovians.

Justyna has every right to be upset by this gratuitous slaughter of her people, so I am keenly intrigued by what the conversation that she will be having with Kristen in the next chapter will be like. They could have a complete falling out, a patching up, or really anything might happen. I'm very interested to find out how that goes. And yes, the animosity Ostrovians have to Justyna is still there, and actually no doubt even worse now, so this demonstration of power (which killed countless innocents in the process) has done nothing to make Ostrovians respect or love Justyna, but it may have made them fear her (by proxy). I note that this is the same dilemma Justyna's father faced himself, where he was damned either way when he tried to either interact with Kristen, or ignore her entirely. Either way is a losing prospect which results in millions of deaths regardless. And then to have your own people hate you for it to boot. Its not a good situation for any leader to be in, so I can imagine Justyna would be under that same stress and either want to retire from office (or follow her father's example). No matter who the "leader" of Ostrov is, they're ultimately just a puppet proxy ruler that answers to Kristen. Same goes for the micros in the city in the other room.

BTW, Ginny punishing the micros in Port Leslie with the stench of her feet was excellent. :) I like it because it humiliates them, but at the same time it doesn't cause a mass extinction event. Now that being said, in the case of the nanos in the other room it might be another story. The Micros "merely" suffered from the odor, but nanos being oh so very much smaller, it might actually be literally fatal to them. I'm no expert on the science involved here, but I do know that if you don't get enough oxygen, you die, and whatever the gasses that emanated from Ginny's stinky feet were, are definitely not oxygen. So its not just simply a matter of being an unpleasant thing to breath in her foot stink (though this is true), but since you're breathing that instead of breathable air, then you are probably going to literally die for real from it. And that's no joke (though the giantesses might think so).

I hope in the next chapter you'll give some account from the POV of the nanos on what the smell was like or did to them. Since her nyloned feet didn't linger over them for very long, and since there was some amount of time for them to air out as she walked through the hall without her heels on, that probably helped somewhat, but again, the nanos are massively smaller than the micros, so stuff is going to hit them a lot harder, including feet odor. If they got the Port Leslie treatment from Ginny's feet freshly extracted from the shoes, well it might have caused the death of millions in that vinegary scent... like a mustard gas attack during WW1 or something.

So far you've had the Micros cleaning Kristen's sandals and some heels, but though those are pretty bad (for them), it would be massively worse if they were made to clean a pair of jogging sneakers which are going to reek far worse. I think its also a much more degrading thing to force them to clean some plain old sneakers, since at least in the case of heels that is some classy footwear, but sneakers on the other hand are not. So not only is the smell worse, but its a more humiliating thing to be made to service. So consider that for the future.

Also please consider other things too, like sweaty socks, or Ginny's nylons like she wore in this chapter. As those can really soak up the smell also.  In fact, even more than shoes, probably. Just place a pair of sweaty socks in the room, and all the millions of people in the room are going to suffer just from it being in the room. Even moreso if they're made to clean them (though I don't know how they even would clean socks).

When I was reading that part about Kristen's silver heels, and how she wore them during her meetings with the micros and nanos and did some destruction with them and ultimately left them in the nano room to intimidate them, it occurred to me that it would be a good thing for your story to include the juxtaposition of Kristen wearing things like this in her normal every day life and her interactions with Madelyn, or work, or whatever, and then again later the devastating impact those same items have to the little people in the rooms. And this is something that can happen in reverse, because at the end of the chapter you wrote about her going to work with some micro crew trapped inside of her shoes, so she's taking them to work with her. And if you do write about her experience at work that day, you could say something about them inside her shoe, how she feels them, or if she takes them out to do something with them, or even from their own perspective, etc. But as for the other way around, I mean to say it makes for a great juxtaposition to write about how she had stepped on an ant during her time at work, and the squished remnants of the ant stuck to the show is then something extra the tinies have to deal with when cleaning them. Or, how she went on a date and went dancing and worked up a sweat, which again has some implications for the tinies when they are forced to deal with it. Or maybe, I dunno, Madelyn draws on Kristen's shoes with crayons (or something), and then cleaning that off becomes the assignment for the tinies. Its these really mundane things that might happen to her footwear in Kristen's everyday life that you could write about in those segments, then later the juxtaposition of that same footwear and its impact on the tinies. I felt this was a missed opportunity in this chapter, because there was no mention of those silver heels in those day to day life segments. Something like that would have made it more interesting, in my opinion.

Just some stuff to think about.

I do want to comment on the 180 degree shift in morality of Kristen in Ginny. In my first review I applauded the slow and gradual development of Kristen to get to this point, and how this is in my opinion preferable to the vast majority of stories where the giantess is cruel and evil right from the very start. But regardless of the slow development to get to this point, Kristen and Ginny are now there. This is both good and bad at the same time. When you responded to my first review you said it would take a lot of calamites before the population is reduced to a scary level, but I dunno. The like 15 minutes or so Kristen and Ginny spent in that room probably killed millions of people in that short space of time. And yes, we're talking about a nation of hundreds of millions. But they probably killed like 1% of the population in that short period of time and that's not an insignificant blow for such a space of time. It wouldn't have been so bad if Kristen correctly identified the right city the first time and only wiped out that one, but even then that's massive overkill for a couple assassins. And they are completely indifferent to all these deaths, which is the total opposite of where things started. Like I said, its a double edged sword. There's both good and bad things to say about it.

Its kinda weird, too, that you wrote Ginny being a Vegan, so she's against eating animals, but eating tiny humans (even on accident) doesn't seem to bother her in the slightest. Its a really strange contradiction. IIRC, this was before she even knew that the micros were people. Because she ate that piece of banana even though she knew it was covered with (what she thought were) "ants", but despite being "vegan" she still ate it anyway. Either way, it just seems to go against her character, whether its eating humans or even just (what she thinks are) bugs. Because actual vegans don't eat bugs, and they certainly wouldn't eat people either. I dunno... it just seems like an odd break in character in my opinion.

But anyway, even though Leslie's visit got Kristen to embrace her power and dominance (and I'm not saying this is a bad thing), it is possible to ease back on this a little, even if just temporarily. For example, when Kristen has her conversation with Justyna in the next chapter, you could have Justyna show her videos of the death and destruction that her actions caused, and maybe this causes her to have a twinge of guilt and remorse and she regains some of the humanity she had lost... even if just temporarily.

I apologize if the lengthy reviews I left annoyed you. I see you've responded to others, but not mine, and I'll assume that's the reason. So I'll try to keep it more brief this time.

The only negative thing I have to say is that the story seems to have skipped forward in time beyond the conversation Kristen was going to have with Justyna about the destruction she and Ginny caused a couple chapters back. Since Justyna was able to text her about Rasha getting into the room I'll take it as an indication their conversation went well since they're still on speaking terms, but I am disappointed the story skipped forward past.

With that out of the way, the chapter was otherwise great. Since Rasha's introduction into the story several chapters back, I hoped that she would get into the rooms (the Nano room specifically) one way or another, and this chapter did not disappoint. :) I'm very much interested in how things proceed from here.

I have to say, I saw it coming too. When you wrote about how Kristen placed the keys in the jewelry box before going to the party instead of taking them with her while Rasha and Madelyn played hide and seek, I just knew that was going to be a Chekhov's Gun. :)

Rasha's snooping would have been so easy to avert if Kristen had just taken those damn keys with her to the party. But of course, we WANT Rasha to snoop. The only other way would have been if she would have like picked the locks or went in through the window or something, and Rasha is too nice of a girl to do that sort of thing, so I guess it HAD to be this way.

Anyway, like I said I don't want to make this be too long and bother you, but I would like to show you a couple images I AI generated that were inspired by the events in this chapter:

https://www.deviantart.com/giantess-nation/art/Rasha-Discovers-Ostrov-991469102

https://www.deviantart.com/giantess-nation/art/Rasha-Steps-Into-Ostrov-991475090

I posted links on them to this story, so I hope that helps you get a bit more traffic and exposure. I also hope you don't mind that I've done that, but if its a problem I'll delete them if you want. As I explained in the descriptions, they're not as good as I'd have liked, but its the best I could get the AI to do.

This was one of the best chapters so far, and also one of the longest too (which is a great combination lol). Were it not for the nudity and the gratuitous sexual content, the violence and destruction of the battle and the giant Ginny monster would have made for a great action flick or giant-monster horror flick (or whatever genre this could rightly be classified as). If only we could convince hollywood to produce such a film, then that would be a pretty awesome thing to see. If such a movie ever were to be made, then I'd nominate Jeannie Mai https://www.instagram.com/thejeanniemai to star in the roll as the Ginny monster (her real name is even kinda similar). Whenever I read this story, I always think of her whenever imagining what Ginny looks like.

That said, it was cool that you wrote how Ginny's appearance is completely alien to the people of Ostrov because Asians or people like Asians don't exist on their home world. I know you'd written similarly in one of the earlier chapters about some of the micros, when she ate them on the banana. The cool thing about her exotic appearance being completely alien to them is that it synergizes very well with the whole giant monster thing. :) Having your cities attacked, devoured, fucked, etc. by a giant woman that seems familiar to you is one thing, but Ginny being something they've never seen before takes it to a whole other level. It probably causes them to be more intimidated and terrified of her. This same thing could also be true in the case of Rasha also, in any hypothetical future interactions they have... though she already did interact with them by stepping on them (though you didn't write an account of this from their perspective, but I wonder what they made of her appearance and whether it was exotic to them like with Ginny, etc.)

Speaking of Rasha, you may have something already in mind and if so don't let me interrupt you with that, but if you need a suggestion on where to take things with her character, I was thinking that she has probably been thinking it all over and might be connecting the dots on what is going on. Obviously she saw Ostrov (and stepped on it), but in addition to that, she also stepped on those weird "bugs" before that. Either one of those on their own is weird in itself, but both these things plus Kristen's strict secrecy regarding those rooms are things that might be running through her head and maybe she'll either figure it out based off just that, or its something that will eat at her and she'll need to find out and either snoop some more or confront Kristen about it... or maybe Kristen will confront her about having snooped (and lying about it).

Plus I see you now have Janelle peering into the windows also, so it doesn't look like things are boding well for the tinies... more and more people are becoming more and more aware of things and that's more and more potential people to cause destruction, so that's not a good thing... for them, but maybe it is good for the readers. :)

In regards to criticism of this chapter, the only thing I really felt was off was Ginny's ability to see the Ostrovian military as "particles". My math could be off, but I remember trying to calculate how small they would be in relation to her (and Kristen) when she is 200 miles tall, and the best I could figure out is that they would be roughly on par with the size of Bacteria, and even a human's skin cells would dwarf them. So I think that's a good rule of thumb to consider when writing them, because a naked human eye can't see something like a bacteria, not as dots, and not even as particles like the chapter says. Of course this isn't including larger things they have like military vehicles, tanks, etc. Those are good deal larger than a human so maybe those things would be perceptible as "particles" to her. If that's what you mean then I retract my criticism there.

That said, under a microscope they absolutely would be observable to her. If she could get them onto a slide then I think she could see certainly see them. But not with the naked eye is all.

That being said, all those "particles" being stuck to her dildo and then going inside of her ass was very hot. :) Just like you wrote from the perspective of Rev and the city she devoured, I'm sure that many of those "particles" are still alive, albeit lost somewhere deep inside of her ass. Its just a shame you hadn't written it from their perspective, but perhaps in the next chapter or something? ;)

Anyway, if I understand things correctly, this was an excellent juxtaposition here. Ostrov being the most powerful, respected, and perhaps feared nation on its planet, and having this powerful and respected military being defeated by a this woman's dildo, getting stuck to it, and then being plunged deep inside of her rectum... where presumably many of them still remain and are trapped. Yes, that is a very powerful juxtaposition indeed. I hope that isn't overlooked in the next chapter. :)

The idea of the nanos surviving on (or inside) of Ginny's body was something I've been thinking of since several chapters back when she squished that city (and several others) with her stinky nylon-clad feet. While many surely ended up dead, the advantage they have in being as tiny as they are is that it gives them some ability to evade being squished and killed to some extent. So I think it is safe to say there were many survivors that just got caught up in the fibers of those nylons to face an unknown fate... probably lasting until drowning when she put those nylons in the washer... or something like that.

The account you gave from Rev's perspective was good, and potentially he could last a good while in there. They're so tiny that even brushing her teeth might not clear them out, but if Ginny rinses her mouth with mouthwash then that would wipe them out for sure. I will say it was kinda sad that Rev won't be able to accomplish his goal of getting to work in that city... :(

Anyway, now that much or most (all?) of the Rebel military forces have been defeated and imprisoned inside of Ginny's rectum, and the dildo which sent them there has been planted into the ground to tower over the landscape like a monolith, I reckon there will probably be some fanatics coming to worship that just as there were with Kristen's heels. There's undoubtedly many people still stuck to the juices on it so that would be a major rescue operation to try to save them... but if they're rebels then maybe Justyna would just prefer to leave them rot there. Besides, the priority of the rescue forces should be to save her, right? :)

Very interesting to see where things will develop from here. Part of me kinda hopes that not all of the rebels were defeated by Ginny's dildo, so that the fighting isn't entirely over yet, and that way there can be more shenanigans in the next chapter too... but that of course is up to you.

Oh! One final thought about the nukes. Like you had written, they might have a hard time to kill the giants with them, but if they have a LOT of them and concentrate them, then maybe its possible they could kill Kristen, Ginny, or whoever. But if only just one or a few hit then it would probably just cause a bad blister or burn on the skin or something. The worst thing would be to target the eyes, as that would be the most vulnerable part.

Anyway, I remember way way way back in one of the earliest chapters of the story when that female mayor (whose name I can't recall at the moment) threatened to kill Madelyn (when she was a baby) and that of course naturally pissed Kristen off. This chapter with the stuff about the nukes sorta reminds me about that. If that female mayor still holds a grudge after all these years then she might want to acquire those nukes somehow. Even though those nukes are nano scale, the cities I presume don't have any nukes at all, so it seems like something she'd want to get in order to get her revenge. But I completely understand if you don't want the nanos and micros to interact, but that was just something that came to mind.

Anyway, this was a great chapter! I look forward to seeing how things unfold in the next.