Follow David as his life falls apart!
Awesome second chapter! I love the perspective change from David's point of view than to the family members. Makes his plight that much crueler knowing the most normal thing for his sisters has a titanic effect on him.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you have enjoyed the story so far. Any and all feedback helps me greatly while also inspiring me. While writing this chapter however it uncovered some facts for me to contemplate. In this I was able to rethink what I wanted to achieve with this story. It also forced me to adapt my writing to best suit this story. When I post the chapter one rework the chapter and story notes will be changed to show the new vision of the story.
I thank you for your time in giving me feedback zbh.
Sincerely,
Lexander
Good start. Interested in seeing where this goes from here. Would love to make requests in the fetish content but needs to see what happens in the next chapter first tho. Does he shrink?transform? What size? How durable etc. However will save I love foot torture, especially unaware for awhile than they realize they have been torturing the shrunken person with there feet without knowing :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the early review, I know the first Chapter is a bit bare. I just wanted to get a start to the story, it also gives me more of a reason to write chapters. You will denfinity see more information about the state of the Davids body in the upcoming chapters.
Sincerly,
Lexander
Nobody ever expected her to win, but now that she has the new President is gonna live up to her word and Make America Big Again
Need to see the second chapter! Was funny to read but gotta get to the good stuff lol.
You, the Champion, are out of Beast Balls and there are still Ultra Beasts on the loose. Seeking assistance from Wicke, you go to meet her in secret.
Obvious disclaimer of not owning Pokémon or its character and settings.
Spoiler alert for post Sun and Moon game story.
Awesome Chapter! Keep it up!!! Also working on any new stories for Sancus's universe?
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I have a couple core ideas but nothing that forms a full story yet, though I do intend to write more for it :D
It happened suddenly one day. A being calling itself Sancus announced to the world that he had had enough of human deceit and dishonesty in the commitments and contracts they themselves enter into. The so-called God of Contracts claimed that for those who wished to invoke his power, they need only write an agreement in his name and what was agreed upon in the document would be enforced by his power.
There were, however, several conditions for his power to be invoked. Chief among the conditions are that no parties involved in the contract may be tricked into signing and that one cannot offer services or goods that do not belong to them. These contracts need not be formal, dense documents to be overseen by Sancus, even an informal written agreement on a napkin will carry the weight his power so long as it is written in his name.
Through Sancus' power, corruption in society plummeted and everyone was using the fair ruling of the God of Contract's authority to conduct business on all levels.
I like it! It's a new concept and it's well written! It can be adapted to anyfetish feet, ass, transformation etc. I hope we get to see more! Can also have different stories in the same universe!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It most definitely has a lot of potential and I will probably come back to this in the future, most likely with different characters.
A young boy insults an old woman and is shrunk in his own home, left to survive his mother and three sisters for the weekend. Will he make it?
Cool so far! Any chance for some feet in this story? Didn't see it in the tags
Tiffany wanted to live off sunlight just like a solar giantess. Dr. Grow seams to answer her dreams. But she soon discovers the side effects of Dr Grow experiment.
Wouldn't mind to see more. I love your work Mr. G. Been following your work on here for years. One of my favorite stories to this day is Curse of the Unaware Giantess and I don't want to be a Giant Mermaid!
Loved the new chapter! Thanks for including feet, even tho it isn't your forte. Just try every so often maybe once every 4-5 chapters to indulge is foot lovers occasionally :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the support!! I definitely will include feet more. Although I dont possess the fetish, I do enjoy the dominance that giant feet represent. Hope you enjoy the future chapters!!
Here starts the misadventures of the lovely, innocent Jessica. When a strange device is sent to her with the power to transform her into a random object, Jessica makes the extremely unwise desision to use it, but what will she become? This is a sort of... choose your own adventure type story. This chapter is the start of her misfortune, subsequent chapters will be possible outcomes for the story.
I enjoy it. It's different which is always great! Any chance of her becoming the insole of her sisters shoes?
Author's Response:
I doubt it, that's not really my thing so I wouldn't know how to do it justice, sorry. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
I agree one of the better written stories so far this year. I like the pacing and the premise. Also as much as I like sadistic giantesses, I do love Gentle stories too. Hope to keep reading more soon!
Will Peterson has hidden part of himself behind the mask of an average guy for most of his life. Every day that part of him becomes more and more difficult to hide from those he cares about. A chance encounter with a mysterious girl is going to change Will's life forever. She's going to help him not be afraid to show who he really is and show him that he's not the only one hiding behind a mask.
I think you're off to a great start! Can't wait to see the character development with Maize and Rebecca! Welcome back!
Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot. The next chapter will be up tomorrow so look out for it!
Glad to see this story back and you writing again!!! Here's hoping for more!!!
Thanks, zbh! It feels pretty good to be back. I'm not sure when the next chapter of this will be ready, but it will definitely come. I think I might try out my idea for a short story compendium next. Have to wait and see.
Hope everything works out for you. Love all your work here! Hope Kelsey decides to be evil with him a bit and Maize doesn't find out! Maybe make him Maize's shoes unaware and her feet get really vile?
new chapter soon :)?
Anxiously waiting for Chatper 5 :)!
Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to say that haha. Chapter 5 has been done for awhile. I just really don't wanna post it until chapter 6 is done because I'm trying to stay one chapter ahead. It's taking longer than I originally thought. I'll probably end up posting chapter 5 when 6 is close to being done. Don't worry, I'm not disappearing for over a year again.
Another great chapter. I wonder what Maize has in store in the coming chapters... Witchcraft leaves open endless possibilities! Maybe some unaware later in the story? Some transformation? Got lots of fun possibilities I am looking forward to!
Author's Response: Thanks! Witchcraft certainly does open up many different options. Both of your ideas have a good chance of showing up at some point. You'll just have to wait and see.
I hope the next chapter comes soon! Depending on where you go with Kelsey, I could see simalarities with "Double Trouble". Especially if Kelsey has fun at Will's expense, unaware torture from Maize or Rebecca until Mainze figures it out or Kelsey reveals it. Either Way next chapter can't come soon enough!
Another excellent chapter!!! Maize roommate has already had a bad first impression with our hero lol.
Author's Response: Yep. Maize's description of her was quite accurate haha.
Being a parent is a hard job. Being the step parent is a even harder job. One step mother finds her job just got that much harder when she takes some medicine which isn't perscribed to her and finds herself shrinking.
Damn that was a great chapter! Any chance of a image showing the new Twerp after gaining her Cotten "fur"?
Author's Response: I can maybe arrange something. Stay tuned for the next chapter. I will see if I can include as a bonus.
Ashley uses a potion, found in a book that was given to her. The results end up giving Ashley an incredible ability. Her darkest wishes and desires will be brought to light.
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Amazing start! I hope to see more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I hope to do my best to stick with it and finish it out.
