Reviewer: fanofff Signed
Date: August 24 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
this is my first review but i feel i HAVE to leave my thoughts on this masterpiece of fetish work
do not ever ever EVER delete this story it is one of if not THE best i've read on this site
the pacing the descriptive words the amazing balance between story and "action" it's a story that i read in whole no skipping to the "good" parts as everything ties in so well
the last chapter of season one will be coming soon so i know it's too late but..may i throw some directions or plot points to incorporate in later chapters?
1: at some point Laurissa drinks Guy's medicine resulting in her actually becoming taller and resulting in
2: her breasts gradually increasing in size and some "unfortunate" side effects..one being heavy lactation..which "requires" Guy's help (maybe the milk can affect him or she can use it to her advantage
either way thank you for writing this (and 3 stepsisters anger) and keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your nice comments. It makes me happy that you enjoyed the story. And I appreciate the suggestions.... as it's fun to brainstorm ideas. I've fantasized about similar ideas. Thanks again.