Ryan thinks he's safe from Shrinkism but finds out that he is in for a big surprise.
This story remains one of my favorites, please keep it up! As I said in my prior review, this story is great as its so realistic. Even though I'm never interested in vote stories, this one is too good to not follow. To answer your question, it would be amazing to have some feet focused portions of the story. Maybe Tess gets ahold on him when he's only a few inches tall and is into making him serve her feet: a deal she made with him to avoid being eaten by Emily or Allison.
I really like the start of this story. Even though I'm typically a fan of feet stories and not vore, this story is written so well that I'm really looking forward to finding out how everyone will suddenly stop treating him human. I really like the Tess character... I'm hoping she's the one who will get him at the end (maybe snatch him up and have fun with him and he dwindles his last inches).
Tiffany Standish is supposed to be Immune. So why the hell did she shrink? And what's going to happen to her now?
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Can't wait for your next story. Its so weird each Friday without having one of your chapters! Look forward to whats next.
In the midst of the shrinking epidemic, those that are Immune can earn money caring for the afflicted. Follow the story of one man as he prepares to have his life changed forever and the young woman that will become his Guardian.
She has sworn to keep and protect him, her house mate however has other plans…
This story is so great, especially the realism. I almost wish he doesn't shrink too soon, I'm loving the interaction with Abi and humiliation from Sofia. Hopefully you give it a few more chapters of the interaction.
I wonder if after he shrinks if Sofia will slowly convince Abi to treat him as a bug as well.
In any case, really looking forward to what happens next!
He's not got long left but theres going to be a little bit more interaction before he does.
I'm not sure how persuasive Sofia can be...
This story remains one of my favorites. Really would love more story with Abi and Sophia. Whether an epilogue, sequel, or alternative ending... such a great, realistic set-up, just demands more story. In any case, your stories remain top-notch.
189 years ago the world was ravaged by the Shrining Virus. 99.5% of humanity was shrunk within a matter of days. Since then, the world has adapted to the existence of Big and Small people. While some Smalls are free others are owned.
However, the Bigs are not safe, because the shrinking virus still lingers in the blood of all humans. One out of every 15 Bigs will shrink during their lives.
Paul is the son of a powerful woman: a Senator who fights for the rights of Smalls. However, when Paul shrinks, will he be treated fairly by the women in his life or will he learn that all those lofty ideals are just for show?
Really loving this story so far. My favorite are realistic stories - that are clearly well written with a developed storyline - and this is a perfect example. The world you created is so great, I hope this story lasts a very long time. I'm interested to see him interacting with each of the characters introduced so far, looking forward to what's next!
I hope the positive feedback from everyone will make you consider writing more in the future. Either in this 'world' or just other stories.
Thank you! The worldbuilding comest out of a mental exersize I asked myself: "What would happen if 99% of everyone shrunk? What would happen in 2 years? 10? 50? 200?" And then this story basically grew out of that.
Right now I'm planning on focusing my energies on other things besides this kind of writing, but who knows, never say never.
I'm really liking the Brie/Paul portion of the story. Much more direct interaction between Paul and the full-sized Brie vs the minimal interaction with Sarah. I really hope that this portion of the story can last a little while. I'm hoping for some foot action - maybe somehow she blames him for them losing the game and punishes him somehow - or just like this chapter, just makes him rub her feet for her own arousal. In any case, this story is already a classic and I hope it lasts for a much longer time - so much more to explore, especially with multiple full-size characters he hasn't interacted with yet (his mom, Jen, and Hannah). In fact, Brie sounds like she wants to playfully humiliate him, maybe by inviting Jen over for a bit.
A man has an odd dream that just may foreshadow an un-planned hiatus from work thanks to some new policies that came down from Corporate.
I really like where this story is heading. Please continue! Look forward to what's next.
James suffers from the Matheson's Syndrome, an ailment which leaves its victims to shrink away to nothing. Heather, his former lover, agrees to keep him company in his final moments.
Great start, really looking forward to this one! I really like how realistic the characters are, and how much you already you pick up their personalities. I hope that Heather lets James enjoy himself in his last days (and maybe vice versa too), including maybe let him partake in his obvious attraction to her feet. Can't wait for the rest! I know this is likely a gentle story, but maybe right before the very end, she puts him out of his misery so he doesn't shrink to nothing like her dad.
Thank you, glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far. : ) And also glad to hear I did something right constructing the characters.
Without revealing much, yes, the two will enjoy each other's company. ; )
Wow, that was great, but almost ended too quicky. Ever consider an alternate ending where he shrinks more slowly and they get more ime together? I really like the premise and characters, so selfishly want more of them. look forward to whats next in any case.
Thank you! In the case of this story I thought of it as a one-shot, and a quick one at that. So I never really planned to do anything longer with it. But, I was thinking of slow shrink stories that go on longer, so I'll write something similar to this one eventually. : )
One day, out of the blue, Andrew finds himself getting smaller. How will he and his roommates adapt to these sudden changes?
Really looking forward to this story. Should be interesting given their different personalities and how they see him as he shrinks down and loses his humanity. Seems like they still care for his safety even once he's small based on the first chapter. But I'm hoping they also get to enjoy him at his size as he shrinks, maybe serving their feet a bit. In any case, can't wait to read the rest!
I will touch upon the question of how they perceive him the smaller he gets, so you guessed that right. As well as the fact they care for him and his well-being, even when he's that minuscule. And yes, there will be some fun with his new size(s). Thank you for the review, more chapters coming soon. : )
I feel like I have everything in my life together. A steady job, the most wonderful girfriend I could have ever asked for. She's perfect in every way, but our opinoins do clash on one thing. How tinies are treated. She casually torments them and sees them as nothing more than a bug or her plaything. I just hope I never become a tiny.
Hope you continue this story one day, looking forward to what happens next.
Before becoming an adult every person must partake in a test to see if they are worthy of being in our society or whether they are a liability. Those that fit the latter are forced to shrink down as lesser beings along with the other shrinkies of the world.
Our story follows Chris as he takes said test. Unfortunately he has always been a bit of a slacker, something that may have finally caught up with him. He must learn to live beneath his friends and family, but more importantly among the other shrinkies of the world.
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I really love this story so far, especially the realism of the characters. Look forward to what's next, both him witnessing what may happen to him and after he shrinks. Also hope that he ends up having to serve the feet of one of the girls.
Author's Response:
As to the first part of your review I am greatful to hear you enjoy it so far, believe me there is a lot I have planned in terms of narrative. As for the second part (the feet part) I can't promise anything but I can say it'd be a wasted opportunity not to have some interaction of that sort with either one of the girls ;)
So looking forward the next chapters. Hope you keep it up, so realistic and so much potential to explore.
I will continue to add more dont worry. Been pretty slow with this chapter but rest assured it will come.
“No Vaccine for me”
By Hanssmith7670
Chapter 25 is now live! Drop a review, i love hearing from you all!
Alot of this is based on Experiences from my life with different people ;)
This story is my first in a long time, I have most of it planned out right now as it stands! Hopefully everyone enjoys it as much as I enjoy writing it!
Really great start to the story. I love the realism of the story and the characters - especially with the apparent slower shrinking. Really hope to get a few more chapters of her teasing of how she's going to have him worship her feet when he's smaller. Keep it up!
Thank you very much! yes i really want to set the stage for later play with the build up in the slow shrinking process!
Stay tuned as i am writing more to be released tonight!
Natalie Beaumont hates shrinkies. Which is a huge problem for two of her children who have caught the shrinking virus. Life gets extremely difficult and scary for them as they deal with their giant mom. And it only gets more terrifying for them as their only ally, their big sister Aubreigh, is starting to see them differently as well.
Really hope you continue, this story is one of the best.
I'm so glad you like it. I hope to keep at it more frequently now.
250 people are kidnapped and forced into participation of a violent game-show that specializes in size-based games for the entertainment of a secret group.
Great start, I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story! Really good realism and building up of the characters. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Glad you thought so, will continue to work on this and give you more to read. :)
Such a great story. Definitely been my favorite to follow each week on the site. Can't wait for the ending. Have you considered a prequel or sequel?
I've planned both actually, I've got a story about Mineko's games planned as well as a sequel focusing on Lisa. Might be a while before I do them though.
James and Michael are cousins spending the weekend together to play videogames. The only problem is that they are tinies living a small life in a big world. How will the presence Michael's mom and sister, who are giants, affect their weekend? Can these two successfully live a small life around their big family?
This is a great story, really looking forward to new chapters. Hope you continue it soon.
John partners with a girl who is way out of his league for his science project and gets himself into some trouble along the way.
Hope you continue this story!
