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Summary:

After reading countless reviews about people only wanting to see the nasty stuff without actually reading the entire story, I've decided to make short death scenes of that nature. Each chapter will revolve around a specific aspect of giantess and grant that type of death scene. Many chapters and types of scenes will be added. These are not stories. These are just The Good Parts.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Futanari, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Toilet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10927 Read Count: 110394
[Report This] Published: January 05 2014 Updated: November 17 2015
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: August 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Vore

Oooh how fun :D

How about a focus on odor, but not just any odor.  I'd like to request a focus on bad breath.  Maybe a micro gets stuck in the braces of some unknowing slob?  Maybe a cruel master tortuers her slave with morning breath?  



Author's Response: That is definitely an interesting request. But yeah, totally, I'll throw it in. I don't know if I can drag out a chapter for it, but I can definitely put a scene in there for you.

Summary:

This story follows a man named Nathan, who is a seemingly regular 20 year old, with a rare, unknown condition.

Disclaimer: This is all purely fiction, coming from my mind. The resemblance to any person or situation is merely coincidental.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6914 Read Count: 88113
[Report This] Published: June 22 2015 Updated: July 22 2015
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: June 23 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Madness Begins

Love the tone so far.  Seems like there is a lot of potential for different "fun" senarios.  Jogging is a good way to get the blood pumping and the sweat pouring.  Plus it sounds like she went to bed without showering showering or brushing her teeth so there is probably a whole nother layer of grime.  Really looking forward to what horrors our hero may face inside her mouth.  Might even find some leftover pizza in there ~_~

 

Chapters are short but if they are coming out this quick that really isn't a problem.  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I have plans to put him into many different "fun" scenarios. Oh boy, is the sweat going to pour, good thing he can't drown, or this story would end fast. Nope, she sure didn't, she's a bit lazy that way, which will make things oh so fun for our friend Nathan. I'm looking forward into exploring some vore, and seeing where that heads. x3

 

I'm definitely going to try and release on a semi-daily basis. It all depends on how much time I have, but I'm looking forward to posting more too c:

Summary:

Jason finds himself in a peculiar position when a strange, white-haired security worker searches him at the airport. One thing leads to another and he doesn't quite get the vacation he was expecting.


Categories: Unaware, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9773 Read Count: 33519
[Report This] Published: July 01 2015 Updated: July 22 2015
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: July 22 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Lexi's Big Mouth

I would think that her morning breath would be more pungent than of the fresh shrimp XP.  Really glad to see some mouthplay after that preview of her breath we got last chapter.  Totally looking forward to the rest of the story.  

I wonder if the guy Lexi is crushing on is Jason, hmm.  How does that saying go?  "The way to a man's heart is throught your stomach" or something?

Seriously though, love the great presentation of the friendly/careless slob giantess and the variety of situations.  Personally hoping she doesn't spit him out right away (or brush later XD) but I'll keep reading either way.



Author's Response:

Nice speculation, and thanks for the review! Of the four main female characters I've written, carelessness has been a part of three to fuel the unaware scenes, so I'm glad you like that trait. And her putting him in her mouth was really only to prevent Michelle from seeing him, also to get some mouthplay. I don't plan on having Lexi swallow my main character :).

Summary:

Two goddesses have decided that, rather than just let humans get caught up in their fighting, they should decide which of them deserves to be considered the better sibling. 

Problem: neither one intends to play fair.

Please note that I'm no longer accepting requests. 


Categories: Vore, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: Silent Dance
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21587 Read Count: 73249
[Report This] Published: July 08 2015 Updated: August 20 2015
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction to the Goddesses

Loved this story and thanks for doing all my request!  I might just take up that offer of writing my own continuation with one of my guys, though I might ask for a little input to make sure I get the Goddesses right.

Can't wait to see this universe even more fleshed out.



Author's Response:

Any questions that do not comprise spoilers will be answered.

"Terrible Work", the next entry in the series, should begin sometime tomorrow. 

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: July 18 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction to the Goddesses

A wonderful idea to see someone taking free requests from the community.  I was very satisfied with the chapter you did for me.  Included everything I asked and added quality details to make the story feel organic.  

Do you have an idea of how long you want to make it or if any sort of continuation/side story is possible?  How are you doing on requests?

Love how the story is going and I look forward to exploring more of these lovely goddesses.  

 

P.S. Go Dark!  I love you! :3



Author's Response:

No problem! Glad to make something you liked!

I'm going to make it as long or short as the community lets me. If I don't get another request by 11 PM PST on Monday, I'm posting Abigail's chapter, then the finale. The vote count is going to determine which of three endings I shoe you. I will count my own vote.

I'm actually out of requests. 

Continuations, side stories and the like may be made if I can get this over 10000 views. There are six other deities, but none of them will show up unless you guys request HIGHLY SPECIFIC things.

Well, at this rate, you're not going to see much more.

Summary:

When my friend and I are accidentally shrunk by a chemical mishap, our only chance of getting back to normal is to scale the giant body of my unaware crush.


Categories: Nose, Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Vore, Watersports, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15164 Read Count: 220624
[Report This] Published: July 27 2015 Updated: July 28 2016
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chemical Spills & Shrinking Thrills

Ending is a little silly and fast for my tastes but glad it was a happy one.  A great adventure with some nice twists on some normal senarios.  Would love to see some more of these characters.  Maybe the shrinking randomly kicks in again durring the first time our lovebirds sleep together?  Maybe he shrinks and has to get help from her older, slobish sister how... less helpful once she finds him?  Maybe fast forward to being 18 and they are about to have their first time together when, shrink.  Could even make that one aware.

Like I said before, great tone and realistic characters.  More detail wouldn't hurt though.  I look forward to more from you my friend.

 

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: August 10 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Where the Sun Doesn't Shine

Really loving the tone of this story.  It's interesting to see a hygenic giantess within an odor story too.  I wonder if her toothpaste will have worn off by the time they end up at the mouth?  Perhaps they get trapped in a smelly, closed mouth burp.  We still have quite a few more tags to cover though so I am looking forward to everything that comes next :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the input. I'm really liking that burp idea so I'll keep that in mind. ;)

Summary:

Dark is the most knowledgeable of human holidays, and this year she will teach the other deities how they work- starting with teaching Light about Labor Day.

The start of a new mini-series, if it wasn't clear. 


Categories: Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: Silent Dance, Holidays With the Pantheon
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1321 Read Count: 4229
[Report This] Published: September 07 2015 Updated: September 07 2015
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I <3 Dark!!  What a nice surprize this was.  A fun, short, sexy read and a fun way to continue the antics of Light and Dark.  

Next holiday is Halloween, when being scary and scantily-clad is par for the course.  Sounds perfect for Dark but otherwise there are a lot of options.  



Author's Response:

She doesn't necessarily have to mess with Light for every holiday, y'know.

Although you have given me an idea of how to handle Halloween . . .

I thought there was something between now and Halloween, though. Huh. Okay, I have more time than I thought I did. 

Summary:

An exchange student in France gets shrunk by a girl that turns out to be his stalker and who will do anything in her power to make him love her back. Anything!


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6856 Read Count: 9268
[Report This] Published: March 15 2016 Updated: March 21 2016
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: March 15 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and First Part - Chapter 1 and 2.

Off to a solid start!  Great detail and a unique setting.  If I had to critisize, maybe include a translation in parenthasis or at the end of the chapter so readers don't have to switch over to a translator that might lose the meaning.

Looking forward to more!

 

P.S.  I LOVE preds with bad breath >_<



Author's Response:

Hey! Thank you for taking the time to post a review, as you can see, I'm new to all this and would like some guidance. I considered adding the translations but I figured that since the main character doesn't understand them, readers shouldn't either, but maybe I should add the translations to make it easier to read.  I'm glad you liked the breath part, I didn't intentionally write it, I just tried to figure out how a normal breath would smell at that size, but since you liked it, I'll keep it coming. Thanks for reading me. 

Tongue Ring by JDO Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Tiny girl trapped in a tongue ring during a blowjob. Also technically my first micro story.


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Giant, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2883 Read Count: 11425
[Report This] Published: May 19 2016 Updated: May 19 2016
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: May 25 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely LOVE this story.  The emphasis on the gross (and to many, less kinky people unwanted ;) ) details is amazing and refreshing.  I wish more writers would talk about things like chronic halitosis, level of noise, and the horrors that one would experience if actually inside somebody's mouth.  

Can't wait for the next part.  Exceptional potential for a prequel chapter.  Maybe show us glimpses of Carrie's trials, her first gasp of morning breath, when she decided to finally eat, maybe another encounter with the boy from before bed.

Summary:

A shrunken brother, having survived for years as his sister’s secret slave, finally commits to be his giant sibling’s property forever. Now the only thing standing in the way of their wildest fantasies is the limit of their imaginations.


Categories: Breasts, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38574 Read Count: 219395
[Report This] Published: July 02 2016 Updated: July 25 2017
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: July 05 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: What Might Have Been

What a fun idea for a spin off!  It will be interesting to see how our broken protaginist will react not to things he use to hate, or will he still hate them?  Personally hoping for mouthplay, been too long since we got to experience Carly's cronic halitosis and wonderful morning breath ~_~



Author's Response:

It's a good question to ask; there are some things that are still physically difficult for Jack to endure, although he's going to be looking on them with fresh eyes in this story, and plus, Carly has no desire to torture her brother any longer purely for the sake of it.  There will indeed be mouthplay in this story. Hehe, I wouldn't quite say Carly has halitosis, but she does enjoy delaying brushing her teeth just to use it against Jack.

Summary:

I've always had a gambling problem and it's gotten me into trouble before, but now I am definitely in over my head. I made one last bet with a friend, if I lose, I live on her as a parasite for a month to "learn a lesson." What will I do once her girlfriend and my sister get involved too? Can my mite sized body survive a month at the hands and bodies of three playful and taunting women?


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11143 Read Count: 126731
[Report This] Published: September 06 2016 Updated: November 10 2016
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: September 12 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

LOVE the level of detail, especially for the sights and scents.  It's rare to see a story where the shrinkie is microscopic and the giantess knows where they are, a lot of fun potential here.  Personally looking forward to some epic mouthplay/exploring.  Don't be afraid to get gross where appropriate he he~



Author's Response:

Trust me, we are going to get some mouthplay really soon ;)

 

As for the description, that was very important to me in crafting this story. It was difficult but I wanted to visualize how alien things would seem at that size.

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

Glad to see you back!  Love this new chapter and thrilled to see that you are listening to suggestions.  My vote is for kissy time, let's see if he can tell even who's mouth he's in.  I'd love to see him get some time in the mouth while it is resting, get some quality time like he did with the nipple.  Maybe get stuck in a glob of food between teeth or just ending in the middle of the tongue when the girls tucker out and fall asleep.  A night to himself that gradually ends in a virtual gas chamber of morning breath, maybe even a brief drop into the stomach before being teleported out for a check in.  Just ideas <3  Looking forward to whatever you come up with! 



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it. I am listening to a lot of the suggestions because it helps keep me going and avoiding writer's block! I definitely have more mouth play and eventually MAYBE some stomach stuff planned. We'll see eventually though! He will be in a restful mouth at some point. There's just WAY too much to do there for him not to be.

Jo's Mouth by Lord Aj Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

A young man gets far more up close and personal with his co-worker than he ever imagined, and experiences more of the human mouth than he ever wanted to.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Nose, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69928 Read Count: 138771
[Report This] Published: January 31 2017 Updated: June 22 2017
Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: February 02 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Jo's Intentions

She's aware of him, his fetish, and she's annoyed by it?  Wow, what a twist!  Seriously I don't think I've seen this type of entrapment premise before.  Kudos.  I hope that staying in her mouth for the day includes surviving the night while she sleeps XP  Hang in there bugman!  Survive and maybe she will let you stay in there XD



Author's Response: Yeah, I suppose it's pretty unique in that she knows about his fetish, or even that it's mentioned. I tend to find that's a bit more uncommon round here. As for surviving the night, I honestly hadn't considered that... but it's certainly on the cards now. Ooh, I can feel the ideas coming to me as I write this... As for staying in there.... I think our little guy nay have had his fill for mouths for life after this. But who knows? Nothing's set in stone yet..... ;)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: February 12 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Jo's Lips

Oh man it is ON!  If his eyes were watering with her jaws still open... man I can't wait ^_^  To say I'm looking forward to a micro's detailed description of an unhygenic mouth is an understatement to be sure.  Gingivitis here we come!



Author's Response: Oh, it is on like Donkey Kong. I'll give you fair warning, there is a toothbrush in both Jo's and thus our tiny protagonist's future... but not before he gets to experience the true inner stench and experience of her filthy mouth, so get hyped for that. Oh, and don't worry about her mouth getting clean; even if she does brush her teeth, her mouth certainly isn't immediately going to be utopia; that's just no fun. What I have planned will make her mouth even worse than before by the end of this... so stay tuned. ;)

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Jo's Breath

10 and a cum from me.  Love the detail and pacing.  I'm guessing this is not going to be a short story?



Author's Response: Excellent to hear you're so invested! As to your question, no, this is gonna be a long one- not sure exactly how long, but easily above ten chapters, maybe even breaking twenty, depending. I can imagine that a whole long story solely focusing on mouth play may drive off some people, but hey, for people like us in the mouthplay-odour niche it's a fun ride, right?

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Jo's Judgement

Sigh, what a ride.  We've reached the end of an epic.  Sure we've got more bits would can explore but this is how it ends.  Love it, glad we had a happy ending and some more info from Jo.  Seems she's at least somewhat self aware.  Bit surprized that he loved every part of it.  Guess he's a bit more of a massicist than we thought if he can look back on the singing, gum chewiong, and smoking as favorable.  Hey, we've all got our kinks lol.  So what's on the horizon?  New long story?  Some short ones like the others?  More alternate chapters for this tale or some of the past exploits?  Or maybe You'll take me up on that RP invite ;)

 

You are a terrific author! 



Author's Response: Oh, when he said he loved everything, he was more than certainly exaggerating to help his argument. The good outweighs the bad, sure, but the bad is still pretty bad. xD It certainly has been a wild ride, and while this is ending the world I've created is still open for more stories. I'm gonna take a good break for a while, collect my thoughts on what next, maybe write a few more shorties, and then we'll perhaps return to the world of Jo and our unnamed hero. No idea is off the table for what I could do with this world... so stay tuned. ;) Thank you for all your kind words over the course of this tale, my friend. It warms my heart to know that someone else out there has the same sort of niche fantasies as me, and gets enjoyment out of my humble works. :')

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed
Date: May 16 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Jo's Gullet

And there it is.  Our new aquentance turns out to be even more evil than Jo, who'd have guessed?!  Great work on the multi-mouth perspective, during and after the kiss.  Next chapter will be a doozy and I'm thinking it and the next will set the tone for the way this will end.  I see 3 ways this can go.  Can not wait!!!



Author's Response: Well, like I said in response to Yiur last review, certainly not me! Trying actively to kill the little dude is evil, I suppose, but who knows what her intentions were for it? It could easily have been jealousy rather than just gleeful sadden, and I tried to keep that ambiguous for a bit of mystery. Thing is, 'evil' can be completely subjective, so... who knows? :P Glad you liked the use of Melissa's mouth; I'd been itching to describe something a little different after I felt like it was getting a little same-y. As for the next few chapters...the end is indeed in sight, but as I said to Shaman, how soon will it come? I couldn't possibly say, for fear of spoiling it. You'll just have to wait and see,,, and God, I can tell its gonna be a hell of a lot of fun to write, Until then, you'll just ha d to imagine.... ;P

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Jo's Inebriation

Knew it and personally happy c:  Amazing details as always.  Somehow this stomach chapter is evenn better than the one dedicated to it?!  Really love the portrayal of food rafts, churning, and a moving host.  Here's hoping he doesn't stay knocked out for long, ever minute unconcious in a minute less experiencing that maw.  The question is, will she brush her teeth before bed or go to sleep with sick in her mouth XP

 

Still a number of ways this could go but I'll save my predictions unless you want feedback for things yet to be written :x

 

Prequel, sequel, alternate chapters, I need more Jo's Mouth! <3



Author's Response: Glad you liked it as always, my good man! Yeah, I sorta split the chapters into stomach-description (because there was just so much of it) and stomach-action, and as a result I think the latter turned out better, or at least more exciting, than the former. Trust me, he'll wake up soon... and no, do you really think someone as drunk as Jo is gonna remember dental hygiene? ;) There will most likely be a prequel, but it won't be mouth-centred; though don't fret, it'll still appear as much as possible. Until then, though, there's still three chapters to go.... so stay tuned!

Reviewer: ilikepie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Jo's Gum

Glad to see you're back!  Also thrilled to see you took some of my ideas :)  Jo really is a mean girl huh?  It might be interesting working together with her if he survives this.  I'm guessing the mouth puns would never stop xD.  Dream stomach fake-out was an interesting maybe preview ;).  Lots of opportunity for fun coming up.  Club means dancing, dirnking, and maybe even romance?  If Jo is closing the cafe herself, maybe she could take some of the alone time to check in with her captive, a progress review.  

Lastly, you should consider posting your stuff (or at least have an account for back-up) on another sight like giantesscity.com or writing.com.  Would hate to see someone with your talent give up just because of a technical problem <3



Author's Response: Always back for more when it comes to this story, my friend! I feel like, of all the erotica I've written in the past (most if not all of which is long gone), this is my magnum opus. It's really coming together nicely. I wouldn't say Jo was inherently mean, but the dominance she has over our little protagonist brings out this new side in her, and she's certainly enjoying it. Her love of bad puns stems from my own, so don't expect it to stop any time soon! ;D Will definitely fake you up on that review-type chapter; I feel like I can easily transition to it from this one, and I have a good idea of how to do it, too. As for posting my work elsewhere, after this scare I'll certainly look into it, but I feel like nowhere's quite as good as here. We'll see. Until then, I hope to God this place starts open for as long as possible- for all our sakes. :)