Penname: vxrx11758 [Contact] Real name: I.M.Male
Member Since: September 04 2016
Membership status: Member
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Summary:

A young man must come to terms with the fact that he no longer enjoys the station in life that was his by birthright and must now adjust to the cruel fate that life has dealt him.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39102 Read Count: 470756
[Report This] Published: July 06 2013 Updated: January 28 2021
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: January 28 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back!  Sorry the gtsart site didn't work out.



Author's Response:

Yeah so am I.  If I then what I know now I would have just stayed here.  But, I guess  I might not have decided to turn it into a published novel if things hadn't happened the way that they did.  Thanks a lot for your continual support of the story and hope to talk to you over at Deviant Art.    Try this link if you have any  problems:    https://www.deviantart.com/crocodilewriter

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: December 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see this is back!!



Author's Response:

It's definately back and rolling right along!

You'll see the updates over there now though.  www.gtsart.net

Shoebox by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary:

A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed

 


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67654 Read Count: 538515
[Report This] Published: April 23 2016 Updated: November 25 2016
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: September 07 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

Please kill Julian ASAP. I don't care how. He's a douchebag asshole of literally unbelievable magnitude.

Sometimes in fiction, characters are so unsavory that members of the audience either begin to lose suspension of disbelief or abandon the work entirely because the real world is filled with enough unpleasant people that the audience member thinks "Why should I waste my free time exposing myself to another one?"

Julian is such a character. In the real world, an alpha douchebag like that would either get the shit kicked out of him to take him down a few pegs or outright murdered. (*) If I was another guy in this story, while Julian was being used as a buttplug, I'd be conspiring with the others to take him out.

(*) This sort of thing happens in reality too. I've seen on PBS an alpha female hyena who was a real douchebag. The other hyenas got fed up with her and beat her to within an inch of her life and she became the lowest in social order.

So, either please kill Julian or cause something to happen to him so he reassesses being the alpha douche he is.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to write a review and share your feelings about the story. Yes, Julian is an asshole and I've tried to shed some light on some of his character flaws. While I can't defend what an absolute tool he's been to other characters, he is has been trapped here longer than any of the others and has constructed defense mechanism to push others away, all the while desperately afraid of being al;one. I too have seen usurpation of misplaced authroity and social upheaval both in the animal kingdom and obviously through human history. Rest assured, there will be some comeuppance for our disagreeable mouthpiece.

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: September 07 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

He's a douche. This is reality....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwnUrmA8Nbw
Gork, the hyena queen, has been a total douche and threatening the existence of her clan with her selfish behavior. The others take out You can watch around 19:00 minutes. By 22:00, Gork is maimed and by 25 minutes, we see what happens. This is mammalian behavior in a social order and that includes humans.

Upon Bohdi's healing, together, we would have killed Julian.

Author's Response:

Things may change given the fact Faith is not acquiring more tinies on a regular basis and who can say how Julian will be tolerated over a longer period of time before someone attempts to put him in his place. Maybe they could just freeze him out...

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: September 09 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

I don't have a major problem keeping Julian as long as something shitty happens to him.

Having to read the antics of this asshole....  When I imagine being imprisoned with such a dick, it's like being raped with a flail enema.

 

A flail



Author's Response:

I think being imprisoned in someone's ass, not matter achingly cute would constiutue a shitty situation, just saying :)

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: September 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar Places

Like Feyd-Rautha Harkonnen in Dune, I wish Duggernaut would say about Julian....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNqpdggBfgY



Author's Response:

My response to that would be michael Wincott's dialogue at 1:27

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDwlbuyDPfk

:)

Summary:

A commission from my DA page I'd like to share :)

There are 22 parts to this story, I probably won't be able to upload them all tonight but I will tomorrow ;)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

------Warning-----

This story contains furries


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19944 Read Count: 83973
[Report This] Published: February 08 2017 Updated: February 14 2017
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: February 10 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Welcome to the community! I look forward to more of your work! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks! In the short time my work has been on this website I've probably already had about fifteen times the amount of views I've ever had on DeviantArt :P

Summary:

A middle-aged woman takes charge of her troublemaker son’s shrunken punishment, but motherly lust soon causes her to see him as more toy than boy.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32540 Read Count: 308253
[Report This] Published: February 04 2018 Updated: August 16 2018
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: February 09 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more.
Consider adding another middle-aged female character - a friend of Roberta's, for example - at some point. For instance, the friend comes over for coffee and Roberta forces Kyle to be respectful, etc.

Author's Response:

Not a bad concept, though this particular custom story is pretty squarely focused on Roberta and her relationship with her son.

Summary:

On my way to a seminar, things take a unexpected turn as I end up taking a crash course in human survival.

PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW. I WILL ONLY CONTINUE THIS STORY IF THERE IS SOME FEEDBACK.

This is a first person unaware shrunken story that contains much graphic content and is intended for entertainment purposes only which may not be suitable for some.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Humiliation, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13841 Read Count: 30745
[Report This] Published: March 20 2018 Updated: April 11 2018
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: March 20 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good luck with getting password help.  I've been waiting 2 or 3 years.

 

Now, with my "new" user ID, I can't even post a story!

 

I'm thinking about starting a new archive that is STRICTLY capital F's and small m's. 

Summary:

This is a Madlib i made on Writing.com.

If you want a customizable version. Click the link before

https://www.writing.com/main/madlibs/item_id/2159263-Shrunk-By-Your-Female-Boss

 

Just a quick sexual erotic story.

 

Waiting For Reviews

 

Also its 1500 words not 1360. dont know why it says otherwise but it does

 


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1365 Read Count: 6730
[Report This] Published: May 26 2018 Updated: May 26 2018
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: May 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Don't use "You" for the reader.  That's so unprofessional and almost lazy.  Invent a character for "You".



Author's Response:

Thank you but this was orignanlly from a madlib i made. Ment for a single reader to place themself in.

 

If it was an actual story i made, then i wouldnt be using you.

 

Thank you for the input though

 

Summary:

A Canadian tiny is bought by a giantess from the other side of the world.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Body Exploration, Entrapment, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3851 Read Count: 13770
[Report This] Published: August 23 2018 Updated: August 24 2018
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: August 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You need to change this:

 

Size Roles: F/m

 

because

Mister Fujiwara is very big fucking M.

 

This is like false advertising!

Summary:

What happens if you place shrunken people in a closed space with a normal girl for a long period of time? There is only a way to find out!

 

First story ever, i've been a lurker for a while but i wrote this in the spur of the moment, hope you like it!   Please be patient, english is not my mother language so i’ll surely make tons of mistakes.
Feel free to review and let me know what you think, or how i can improve.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14331 Read Count: 65823
[Report This] Published: December 26 2018 Updated: August 07 2019
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: December 29 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The room

This:

 

"Their voice doesn’t get squeaky..."

I believe is incorrect.

From Wikipedia:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Voice_frequency

The voiced speech of a typical adult male will have a fundamental frequency from 85 to 180 Hz, and that of a typical adult female from 165 to 255 Hz.

 

So, if we take a 5 foot 10 inch man, he'd be about 178 cm tall.  Shrink him to 5 cm tall, then he is now 0.0281 of his original height.  That means that the wavelengths involved in making his voice will all be reduced by that same factor.  The frequency is the inverse of that factor so, his frequencies will go up by a factor of 35.56.

If we take the low end of his normal voice as 85 Hz and multiply that by 35.56, we get  3022.6 Hz which is rather squeaky.

This video puts out a tone of 3022 Hz.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d08SmFKhO7Q

For comparison, this is 6000 Hz which would be the frequency near the upper end of speech (180 * 35.56 = 6400.8)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyZhQj0k7-s

 

So, in the end, his voice would be quite a bit higher in pitch.



Author's Response: Yes, i’m aware of the issue. If we keep on thinking that way, a tiny human wouldn’t even be able to survive for more than a few second, for a hundred different reasons. My point was that since 100% scientific accuracy is not possible, i explained how those phenomena worked (or didn’t work) in this specific, fictional world. In particular, i don’t like the idea of the tinies having such a ridiculous voice, it feels comical and definitely not necessary. But don’t mind me, it’a just my autistic self rambling about something minir

Summary:

Marcus Tilden, a single father since his daughter's birth, gets laid off from his job one day after shrinking to less than a foot tall. Depressed about his sudden height loss and doubly miserable after becoming unemployed, he feels hopeless about finding a new career and being able to continue providing for him and his daughter. But after the two of them start spending more time together, he starts to develop a kind of job in itself just by serving his daughter and doing his best to keep her happy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Object, Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Breasts, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: How to Train Someone in 23 Days or Less
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 179510 Read Count: 543874
[Report This] Published: August 02 2020 Updated: April 13 2023
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: March 12 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Day 20: Toes and a Nose

This:


" Reese could tell she was feeling especially vulnerable opening up to him like this. He obviously couldn’t have foreseen this as being a side effect of his shrinking."


You mean:

 Marcus could tell she was feeling especially vulnerable opening up to him like this. He obviously couldn’t have foreseen this as being a side effect of his shrinking.



Author's Response:

oh woops! lol i accidentally make those mistakes all the time but normally catch myself, my bad. thanks for letting me know!

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: February 22 2021 Title: None

I really don't get this story.  I am not into butts and anal insertion, so it really doesn't appeal to me on a GTS level, but that's OK because "to each his own".

 

However, as a scientific American, I am having a problem with "suspension of disbelief".  How could it possibly have any scientific value to stick a shrunken person up someone else's ass?  How is this justifiable?



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks a lot for the review. Let's work backwards from the end.  

 

Mandatory, permanent rear-housing is a means to an end. The "end" is a significant cutback on use of non-renewable resources and redirecting the climate crisis trend downward or at least decreasing its upward slope as well as improving socioeconomic conditions around the world. (This is what Dr. Walker has suggested and admittedly, the "end" has really not been discussed at great length, and any mentioning of it has been pretty vague.  The reason for that will be revealed in future installments.)

 

Mandatory, permanent rear-housing is the means, but we're not even up to the "means" yet...Dr. Walker hasn't confirmed if long-term rear housing is even viable, and that will take years...decades even...nor has she addressed some of the other logistic concerns such as reproduction...so fully understanding if the "means" is truly an effective approach won't be known until the experiment concludes, and this series is all about the experiment. 

 

Between Lori's story and Becca's story, Dr. Walker has went pretty indepth on the justifications, hypotheses, and data analysis.  If any of these in particular jump out at you and you have corrections/suggestions, I would truly value your input on some of the scientific details because I'm very interested in suspending disbelief as much as reasonably possible. At the end of the day though, this story exists solely to talk about shrunken people in butts...there's no way to achieve 100% believablity...the ethical and moral components alone are enough to cripple suspension of disbelief, let alone scientific authenticity, but then again so too does most setups, such as the "girl finds magic book and shrinks guy" trope. Again, thanks for the review and feel free to join us on the Discord server.  

 

https://discord.gg/pZaUN8hgMq

Summary: The first day of a tiny’s new job aboard a cruise ship
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1990 Read Count: 5263
[Report This] Published: December 18 2020 Updated: December 18 2020
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: December 25 2020 Title: Chapter 1: First Day on the Job

This is an old, but good story.

Did the original one disappear or something?

 

I noticed that you did a flurry of uploads.  Are these old stories of yours that you had to reupload under a new ID or something?



Author's Response: No, I just forgot that I had a giantessworld account for the last few years. During the time I just wrote for contests or myself. After finding my old account and logging back in, I decided to add all the old stories I wrote and haven’t been lost to time here. I’ll keep adding stories as long as I don’t forget again.

Author's Response: No, I just forgot that I had a giantessworld account for the last few years. During the time I just wrote for contests or myself. After finding my old account and logging back in, I decided to add all the old stories I wrote and haven’t been lost to time here. I’ll keep adding stories as long as I don’t forget again.

Tiny-Knapper by JT7 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

After a 16-year old girl receives 10 tinies as a Christmas present, the tinies strangely go missing, one-by-one.

This is a fetish-oriented story for those who are looking for a lot of "scenes".

Categories: Breasts, Butt, insertion, Vore, crush, unaware, slave


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39879 Read Count: 54861
[Report This] Published: December 25 2020 Updated: April 01 2021
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: February 16 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Present

Change the size roles to F/ffmm because you include both tiny males and females.



Author's Response:

I added F/f next to F/m.

Summary:

After her youngest child left the nest, a mother finds herself quite lonely in her now empty home. To help cope with their absense, her daughters gave her a mini: a luxurous and popular tiny humanoid pet/toy. With no one else to smother, she is more than willing to care for her new pet. And as their relationship grows she finds great comfort and fun in her mini.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23894 Read Count: 68181
[Report This] Published: December 25 2020 Updated: February 26 2021
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: December 26 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Gift

Wonderful start!  I am definitely looking forward to subsequent chapters and your other work.

 

I have one question: Why did you make the boy 14 and not older?

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: January 30 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: New Activities

Glad that you have a new chapter!  I was worried that you were going to abandon this promising story!

Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: March 24 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Gift

Any chance of an update soon?

(Today is W 24 MAR 2021.)

Mini Mason by Jessajess99 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A meandering, day-in-the-life kind of story about a 3-inch boy, and his loving but frustrating relationship with his mom and sisters.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53640 Read Count: 203582
[Report This] Published: December 21 2021 Updated: March 19 2024
Reviewer: vxrx11758 Signed
Date: January 05 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is very good stuff.  A good example of why GTS work written by women is my preferred choice over men because women add details, implications, and subtleties that many young male authors do not.



Author's Response:

well the client who came up with the story is a guy (i think) but i guess im still the one who wrote it so thanks!