Penname: D W [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

A short story about a hopelessly awkward, unpopular guy named Mark who is inexplicably invited to a sorority Halloween party. Mark meets the impossibly sexy Chloe, which is when his perspective suddenly shifts, shall we say.

There is also a delightful size comparison image tucked within the body of the story. You'll just have to read through to see it. 


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1790 Read Count: 8287
[Report This] Published: October 31 2019 Updated: October 31 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dang!  That's an impressive image / picture / situation for Mark.  Thank you for suppling a new link.

One has to wonder what exactly Emma "just came down with" and why she's "not really feeling to well".

I really look forward to future chapters, especially since we now know Chloe is a Dominatrix and perhaps likes some or all of her submisives shrunk like Mark.  The wearing of a shrunkie as an article of clothing or body decoration is also a terrific fantasy.

One last point, in the image you attached, I believe she is wearing latex, not spandex {even though some spandex can be shiny too, but not as shiny as latex usually is}.

Summary:

Trent is looking for a gift for his neighbor Rebecca, but finds something better. He finds an orb that grants magical wishes. He wishes for Rebecca's sexual fantasy to be a reality, but he may not like what that means.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Growing Woman, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2360 Read Count: 8598
[Report This] Published: November 02 2019 Updated: November 02 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Dangerous Wishes

Very nice twist, hope the story continues.

Scrying Pool by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A wizard experiments with a new type of scrying pool in her quest for ultimate power.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5845 Read Count: 21345
[Report This] Published: November 03 2019 Updated: November 07 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 04 2019 Title: Chapter 1: First Test

Nice!  Very Nice!

Agatha "the Black Hearted" sounds like the type of self-absorbed Giantess that defines the unaware genre even if she does destroy tinies knowingly.  It's her complete detachment from human suffering and indifference to her victims that makes her such an incredibly unaware Giantess.

I really like the fact she desposited Marcus on her floor just to ignor his existance.

The scrying pool dimension play is great.  Perhaps she could reroute some of the exscape portals of "thieves and assassins" to positions of subservience to Agatha {e.g. exit portals between her toes, in her stomach, on her clit, or up her butt as possibilities should you so choose}.



Author's Response:

I really appreciate the enthusiasm! 

The idea that her victims are "human" is something that barely even registers to Agatha, as becomes clear later.  They're just a means to an end for her.  I went in a different direction with it than your suggestion, but I think you'll like how it ends up anyway.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 08 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Conquest

I really like this story, and the concept of an ALL POWERFUL WOMAN / GODDESS.  That said, I notice that Agatha's rule is noted as unchallenged; what if another woman / sacred virgin rose to counter Agatha?

Years ago I wrote a story (unposted) of a preitess and a group of celestial virgins who shrink a massive invading army and place them within the sunken floor of the preitess's great hall, before her throne.  The Virgins go off destroying the massive, shrunken army in various ways.  You reminded me of that story, perhaps I'll revisit it and post it.

Great story line.  BRAVO!



Author's Response:

There will be challenges to Agatha's reign, but those are stories for another time.

You should finish that story!  I originally wanted the force that confronted her to be much larger, but couldn't justify how an entire field army would assemble within a couple minutes.

Thanks!

Summary:

100 years ago, war ravaged the world. Germany used biological warfare to shrink a massive chunk of the male population. Now, in the modern day, all males have the virus. For some people, itll never activate. Others arent so lucky. Riku was just going into a normal day at his same old job. What could possibly go wrong?


Categories: Unaware, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adventure, BBW, Body Exploration, Butt, Fantasy, Giantess, Feet, Footwear, Entrapment, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8268 Read Count: 39081
[Report This] Published: November 14 2019 Updated: March 30 2020
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Meet our main characters

A young woman performing analvore never gets tiring.  It's simply too popular and interesting a fantasy for us tiny wannabes.

It would be nice to find out if and where Alexis might be wearing another tiny, or perhaps tinies.

Feeding disobedient tinies to her cat seems, well oddly enough perverse, rather than her simply swallowing them herself.  Hopefully such a waste of a tiny being fed to her cat never happened and is only a threat, as she either may eat them herself or just keep them locked away in punishment in order to rehabilitate them.  But hey, it's your story and it's just fine the way you are writing it.

At one point Alexis threatens to squash Riku like a bug; yet you write that shrunken men are resiliant.  Would he be squashed and killed, or squashed and reform?

You state Riku is only 3 inches, yet describe him and his sorroundings as if he is 1 inch or less {e.g. the deep valleys of the tiled floor, Alexis' shoes hundreds of times bigger than Riku}.  Just how small is Riku?

Aside from very few grammatical errors {that's just me being nitpicky, your grammar is fine} you have a most interesting and enjoyable story.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Meet our main characters

Reading the other reviews I just noticed you asked for some suggestions.  Here are a few if you do not mind.

What ever happens to Riku, no matter what another girl does with him, he always is handed back to Alexis to live out his life in her asshole.  Just a pleasant thought.

Since the shrinking men are resiliant, perhaps swallowing them, they travel the girls' stomach and intestines, only to be pooped out alive and healthy ready for further use / abuse.

Alexis wears not one, but a dozen men at any given time.  In her bra, under her breasts, in her panty crotch, as another reviewer suggested as body jewelry {as a living belly botton piercing}, in her shoes {perhaps in hollows cut out beneath her insoles, with sizes ranging from a centimeter (1/2") to six inches, the amount in either shoe can vary, or perhaps the amount / size varying between different pairs of shoes, especially if the shrunken men are kept inside permantly only to be changed out when Alexis gets new shoes}.

Perhaps the "bigger" shrunken men she can put in a stiff harness {or on a rod inserted through their butts and out their mouths like a pig on a scqoor, remember they're resiliant} she can wear as part of a strap-on, making the 6" guy(s) her human dildos to have sex / anal sex at her party scene with her many female friends.

Just some thoughts, well, rather fantasies to think about.

BTW, Riku's in her butt, so fart stuff may offend some it's still fun.



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for your reviews! I always take writing advice especially the grammatical and continuity stuff. As far as Riku's exact size, that's a hard one for me personally, especially writing because eveeybody likes a little different and 1inches or 3 inches to goddesses is nothing but to us bugs it's everything, so I'll work on being a little more exact with that. But as far as your ideas go, I think you're going to LOVE chapters 2-4(ish.) We meet a new character next chapter and she may be your favorite. It should be up in a day or two. 

 

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 17 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Alexis's playtime

Really nice chapter.

I have to say I like Odysseus's ideas.  I also have to say a lot depends on Rikus' new size.  To be Alexis' buttplug, 3" makes a lot of sense, especially considering Riku felt so "bothered" at not being noticed stuffed in Alexis' cleavage so much so that Brooke did not even notice him in there.

As far as where Alexis hides Riku on Brooke, even at 1" or less, the ability of Alexis to slip Riku inside Brookes' "tight sports bra" or "tight yoga shorts" seems remote.  Though dropping him inside Brookes' awaiting jogging sneakers would make a lot of sense for a tiny of 1" or less.

At 1", Brooke could easily not notice Riku till she was running and mistake him for a pebble; but her sneakers are probably already full of 1" tiny men sewn into the insoles so he'd almost be negliable.

At 3", Brooke might think her sweat sock is bunched up under her toes.  She ignores it at first, then notices it wiggling annoyingly as she is running.  Going along Odysseus' idea, she could take off her sneaker, discover Riku, and stuff him down the back of her thong.

Staying with this scenario, Riku could discover a group of other tiny men stuffed in the back of Brookes' thong, and the addition of him at his size along with both the pressure of Brookes' thong and her jogging cause several tinies to be forced inside her asshole {which Brooke feels and enjoys}.

I also like Odysseus' idea of a tiny as a toe ring {one of my pseudonyms' is "HERToeRing"}, only with the stipulation that the tinys' head is wedged firmly in the space between her pinky and ring toe so that all he senses is the space between those two toes and their sweat and toe jam {YUMMY!}.

One idea, before Alexis drops Riku in one of Brookes' stank sneakers, she whispers to Riku "If you decide to come back to me, you do so with the acceptance you are to live in my ass as my buttplug.  I will not shove you up there again.  It's up to you to crawl inside of my asshole on your own, however you need to do it, you are to do it head first".

After suffering Brookes' sadism {what ever hijinks she bring upon him, perhaps peeing on him after she gets home after her long jog, or stuffing him in the front of her sweaty thong as she rubs out a few orgasms, without bothering to shower, then fooleshly falling asleep thinking Riku will still be stuck in her panties when she wakes up}, Riku sneaks away and works his way to Alexis' room, where she is in bed falling asleep.  Riku climbs up her bed and under her covers, gazing in amazement at her long, sexy legs till he reaches her buttcheeks.  He works his way up one of her buttcheeks, then squirms between her cheeks and head first inside her asshole as he not only accepts but embraces his life as Alexis' buttplug.

As Alexis is dozing off, she feels Riku squirm his way between her tight buttcheeks then up her asshole.  She smiles, not bothering to acknowledge him nor his existance, and she falls asleep knowing her buttplug has come home.

These are some ideas; but I would like to convey the advice another writter here at this site gave me early on {yes, I a have a few stories under the penname D W (Dark Writer from WritingDotCom) you may want to read if you have time to waste}.  The advice she gave me was write for yourself.  You will never please all of your readers, so simply write for your own pleasure and those who appreciate your style and subject matter will do so with the profound knowledge you are writing what and as you yourself believe in.



Author's Response:

Dude I love your in depth reviews it makes me want to write more, thank you. I am starting to have a solid idea of what chapter 3 is going to be, and I promise you Riku will make his way back to Alexis. The question you may want to ask though is 1) how long until he does 2) in what condition and 3) What's Alexis plan for him? 

And as for size, next chapter i have a plan to retcon that slightly I'm going to re establish his size as 1". For my writing style it will work better having him slightly smaller. 

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 17 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Alexis's playtime

Remember, always write for yourself first and foremost; that keeps it real.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: March 02 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Into the pink abyss

Definitely option #1 with the party scene and drunk teens {girls only hopefully} getting frisky.

Very curious as to Brooke's spells and witchcraft scenarios.

Still a bit confused as to Riku's shrunken size.  How small is he?



Author's Response:

So as far as Riku's size goes, I'm thinking of him as 2 inches. In my head, I'm thinking of this as the most traumatic experience of his lifetime, so some things may be exaggerated, in the sense of he's absolutely terrified and it may see worse than it is so realistically that foot is only maybe 3-4 times his size, but in the moment he's so terrified it seems to be a million times his size. It's why I tend to like second person, it gives it more the horror feel, and that horror feel is definitely going to become more prominent when Brooke gets her time with him, the witchcraft with her I have plans for and everybody should be very excited 

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: March 06 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Eternity with your Goddess

I wasn't expecting him to be Brooke's forever, but I really like the idea.

I really love the concept that Brooke can bring him back from any form of death, and reincarnate him anyplace she so desires.  That's pretty hot.

I do have to ask, if Brooke can bring him back "anyplace" she wants, can Brooke also bring him back as any 'object' she desires?  Imagine if Brooke turns him into a cracker another girl is eating, or a slug another girl is about to step upon, or even a pair of panties or a buttplug another girl is going to wear.

What ever she does, it sounds like one fun party they are going to have together.

There were a few grammatical errors; but as you explained you were in a hurry to get this out.

I enjoyed the music, though don't know exactly where it is to be played in relationship to your story.



Author's Response:

Hi, yeah I didn't go through this one as much as normal I really wanted to update it. And "forever" is a strong term ;) as far as the music it was more juts an interesting touch with the more witchcraft chapter it was intended to be played with the chapter, I'm thinking of adding a song every chapter. And I've been considering the object side of things, I haven't decided yet to be honest. On that note, the next chapter should be up within a week at absolute most. Work is kicking my butt but I've got a good chunk written so we shall see :) 

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: March 31 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The Magic Shop

Not about to complain about some Giantess / shrunken guy butt action.  Sounds great.

Some questions, why did Alexis give Riku away so readily unless she has some plans for him?

Who are these other tinies Brooke keeps talking about and will we see her using / abusing any alongside Riku?



Author's Response:

That's A bit crappy universe expansion on my part, Brooke gives him away so easily because in their society tinies are diaposable. They're bugs,nothing more. So she knows Riku will be dead in less than a day or two and right back where she wants him. Just a small price to pay for her new toy which will be used in a scene the following chapter which answers all your questions rolled sup in a burrito. This is just some side acrion, universe and new character expansion before I continue on to the main course a bit. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

After a recent development disorder leaves him much shorter than he used to be, Reese has become academically demotivated, and worries he won't receive his diploma in his final few weeks of high school. But his sister, a recent college graduate who's twice as tall as him, moves back home. Her arrival sparks a change in Reese's attitude to start treating his family - and particularly his amazon of a sister - a lot nicer than anyone would reasonably expect. Eventually his sister realizes she might be able to save him from failing his senior year, and Reese does his best to more than thank her in return.

There was some kind of spam attack on the website which is why it says I have over a thousand reviews. The moderators deleted the fakes but I guess the site still says I have a bunch. The real number is like 250ish or something. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: How to Train Someone in 23 Days or Less
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222990 Read Count: 1106513
[Report This] Published: November 15 2019 Updated: July 12 2023
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 17 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Day 2

I actually wrote out a positive feedback for "Day 1" after you posted it; but this site said I could not post at that time and my comments were lost.

Though I personally would prefer stepsister / stepbrother, you have an interesting story going on.

I like the unrushed aspect of the Dominant / submissive relationship building up between Reese and Olivia.

One thing I am curious about {and had commented on in my first attempt at posting} is will Reese shrink any further?  Will he shrink from Olivia's dominance, or the onset of winter {which would be more than 29 days away since it's the start of summer}.

Definitely do continue.

 



Author's Response:

Personally, I don't see the difference between stepsibling stuff and blood relation, at least on a moral level. Like, if you find out you were adopted, does that suddenly make it fine to have feelings for your sibling? On a primal, genetic level it's the actual relation that makes those kind of things messed up but from a social aspect, with how people judge you, there's almost no difference. I've never really seen anyone who thinks that things happening between stepsiblings in real life is totally fine, but if they're related it's totally wrong.  So that's why I didn't specify, because I didn't think it matters. "Either it's all OK, or none of it's OK." Also, I tried to make it very clear via Reese's thoughts in chapter 1 (and 2) that he has no feelings towards his sister. That won't change, and she won't develop anything for him either. "Sexual things" will happen eventually (not actual sex), but it will be more about her controlling him than anything. Power, not love or lust. I don't have any plans for either of them to get turned on by any of the experiences.

So with that in mind, and with that being said, it's not important to the story that they're blood related and there's no mention in the story (or do I plan on there being) of Tracy specifically birthing Olivia and Reese with Stuart as the dad. The important part is the relationship dynamic that they share as people who grew up as a "family" together. If you want to imagine them as stepsiblings, I can assure you there won't be anything in the story that will break that head canon :)

Reese won't shrink any further, not as a slow size change at least - although the next versions will see him at around 3 feet, 1.5 feet, and 8 inches. I liked that idea because then I don't have to wonder like I do with other slow size change stories - oh, what if he shrunk just a bit earlier? Or just a bit later? I can see how the interactions would carry out over each size, you know? It'll be awhile before I get around to those iterations but they're definitely coming and I have plans for how they're going to be different and add new subplots, and not just changing up a few words. I think most instant size change stories either have the main character having been at that size their whole life, or they make themselves that height, or someone else does. So I like designing my story like this because neither Olivia or Reese wanted him to be small, but it's a relatively new experience for both of them. 

Whew quite the response haha! Thanks for your feedback and questions though!

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 25 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Day 6

I love the conditioning / training that Olivia is putting Reese through.

At 6' 6", adding another inch or two, though great, would make Olivia more freakish more than anything else; but adding muscle mass {e.g. She-Hulk} would be cool.

Since Reese started out at 4' 9", a new measurement of 4' 5" or less, and still shrinking, since Olivia came home would be great to hear.

Is Olivia going to confront Reese's shrinking and servitude to her?  Will Olivia offer Reese the position of being her personal slave, in response to caring for him in his ever shrinking form?  Will Reese see this as his destiny, especially focused on Olivia's ever huge breasts?



Author's Response:

yeah, on day 11 she confronts him about his behavior

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 01 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Day 8

Will Resse ever start to begin appreciating Olivia's massive breasts and the magnificence they are?

 

When will Resse begin to ask / beg to do Olivia's fingernails and toenails; perhaps even massaging Olivia's feet out of adoring them rather than as a task?



Author's Response:

guess youll find out wont you

Boiling hot by Dustman1 Rated: R [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

You wake up as a single grain of rice in a bag, this bag is about to be bought by natalia, who is room mates with sasha.


Categories: Violent, Unaware, Object, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Goddess natalia
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1161 Read Count: 5622
[Report This] Published: November 17 2019 Updated: November 17 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: From bag to boiled

The following toilet sceen would be nice to read.

World in a box by DankMip Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

In a future where people can upload themselves into the digital world, a group of a few hundred had, over the course of a decade, decided to give themselves to a cute woman in her 30s! Their entire existence being stored in a little drive that could easily fit between her fingertips. Follow the story of these people as they live at the complete and total mercy of an ordinary woman who holds godlike power over them


Categories: Giantess, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Object
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5625 Read Count: 36874
[Report This] Published: November 18 2019 Updated: December 19 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Newcomer

Very cool concept.  It's also one of the most mystifying as the tinies have no actual size since they are all digitized onto her computer drive.  Sharon could be any size, even conceivably small compared to her volunteered captives, or huge beyond their comprehansion.  You made the possibilities endless.

The same holds true for Sharons' power over their wills and actions, she has complete power over them.

I am curious how Sharon will be able to interact with her devoted worshippers on an actual physical level.  Perhaps Sharon has a room / sphere / sensory deprivasion tank-chamber she can enter and have her worshippers appear as virtual holograms like 3D printing so they can feel and sense one another.

It would be nice to hear about the actual digitizing process.  Are Sharons' volunteers diced up and sucked in by a laser like Tron, or some other process?

Can't wait to read more about their interactions with Sharon their Goddess, and her "MILF" mindest at being a Goddess to so many men {women?} devoted to her.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 30 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Ann

I hadn't realized Sharon plays with their minds so much. 

It could be an interesting twist if instead of saying how much Chris and Ann love one another, they instead state how much they both love Sharon; and then make love while each of them think about Sharon, either freely or not.

Sharon could ask them afterwards which was better, being in love with each other while having sex, or being in love with and thinking of her while having sex with each other.

It would be nice to hear some prayer sessions to Sharon. 

Oh, putting the drive, their entire existance in her back pocket was a great touch.  Perhaps Sharon could put the drive elsewhere on her body such as in her clevage.

You have a unique concept going on here, please continue on.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it so far!

I wound up making the next chapter be about prayers to her. In looking after a world with so many people in it, prayers just seems like the most practical way to interact with them without having to worry about things like burning out socially :p

The Guinea Pig by Napalm Rated: X [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A young man soon regrets being part of an experiment.


Categories: Giantess, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1109 Read Count: 3461
[Report This] Published: November 19 2019 Updated: November 19 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 21 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Last Chance

You make it clear English is not your first language, so I have no issue with grammatical errors.  That said, I like the way your story is playing out so far.  Hopefuly you post more to your story and soon.

Emma sounds quite hot.  I am excited to see if she plays a "dominant" role in your story.

The TF app by Dustman1 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

You see an ad for a new app, it is like tinder but instead of dates it is for women to live out fantasies of owning men as objects. You download it and your adventure begins.

 

(storyline completed now)

 

its back, now with an alternate ending!!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Object, Adult 30-39, Couples, Footwear, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12539 Read Count: 147871
[Report This] Published: November 23 2019 Updated: October 19 2020
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 24 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Orders

It would be interesting if he had the option of listing the objects he wanted to try being, then given a selection of women who are looking for such items.



Author's Response:

Interesting concept, ill see if i can integrate this

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: December 16 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Favourites

 

#1 Jessica Nigri - survive {she's HOT!}

 #2 Bela Fernandez - death {though it would be such a shame to end such a great story line, her ass is worth it}

 A personal complaint, a guy wearing him as a condom, "EWE"!  Even if used inside Lydia, though being inside Lydia would be great.

 Eating her lover, very Black Widow / Praying Mantis. Kinda hot.

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Author's Response:

Unfortunately in the world of dominant women like lydia, we dont get a say in what happens to us. And i can confirm the lover made it to her stomach to digest in an ocean of acid and his own cum.