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Therapy by Nigma Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

In a world where anyone could shrink at any moment, one woman talks to her therapist about how this is affecting her.


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2172 Read Count: 6667
[Report This] Published: April 29 2019 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: May 06 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice, if not unsettling short story.

Summary:

**UPDATE: Chapter 10 Has been added! Over 15,000 views! Thank you so much for the support! More chapters coming soon, as well as 2 other stories I have planned.

 

If anyone is interested in a personalized story, let me know. Will be taking a few commissions

 

This is my first fetish story, but not my first time writing. Please enjoy, and let me know what you think.

 

When a mysterious necklace comes into my posession I turn to the only person I can think of: A new friend with a passion for the weird and unusual. Am I right to place my trust in her? Will friend become foe, or will a friendship turn into an Owner/posession relationship as trust grows stronger?

 

Together we will experiment with different sizes, different transformations, and possibly explore deep, hidden desires.

 

NOTE:

This story will contain different fetishes and fantasies, including shrinking and transformation, both object and animal. In each chapter title I will attempt to include what the chapter includes such as (TF/Animal, TF/Object, Shrinking/Micro) etc so that if it is not something you wish to read, then you can skip it.


Categories: Animal, Object, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34148 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: May 04 2019 Updated: May 17 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: May 18 2019 Title: Chapter 10: See Spot Play (TF/Puppy)

Hopefully the misunderstanding will never be rectified and James will remain Spot; though I have a sneaky suspicion Spot, oops, James will be spending some time as a leather skirt {then hopefully back as Spot, only this time voluntarily and remembering-accepting everything}.

This is a terrific story.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: May 29 2019 Title: Chapter 10: See Spot Play (TF/Puppy)

As much as it would be great for James to remain Spot, him returning to being an ant living between her toes, only this time retaining his human mind along with his ant instincts and senses would be pretty hot too.

The Potion by Vatrena Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A tiny attempts to find a fabled potion for growth, but he only ends up finding out how cruel the world can be to tinies, especially those who decide to snoop in a witch's home.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2937 Read Count: 10276
[Report This] Published: June 15 2019 Updated: June 15 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 15 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Part III

Terrifyingly sadistic.  What a cold witch, though quite sexy in her indifference to Nate.

Aside from a few spelling mistakes {which we all make from time to time}, a very nicely written story.  Looking forward to your next story.

Hmmm, Goddess Vetrena, that's probably a better penname. ; ) 



Author's Response:

Well, thank you! She's done worse when she was playing with them without trying to be careful not to break them for her potion recipe.

 

Yes, I may make a spelling error from time to time seeing as i'm not native English myself. So please forgive me if there is a mistake or two.

 

Well, maybe. Although I don't need to show off Goddesshood in my name to be a Goddess. But I'll think about it.

Summary:

A hormonal young man lusts after his buxom next-door neighbor, his mother's best friend, who decides to indulge his crush to her well-endowed advantage.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7227 Read Count: 66866
[Report This] Published: June 24 2019 Updated: August 20 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: June 26 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm, freckles that seemingly move into her cleavage; lucky freckles or Karen's shrunken / transformed boob enthusiasts? 



Author's Response:

Probably just lucky freckles, but we'll see Karen has enough of a mysterious side that anything's possible.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: July 28 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great story, can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

It'll appear quite soon.

Passenger by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A voluptuous thirty-something on a long flight is stuck with a rude young pervert for a seat neighbor and decides to put him in his place.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6765 Read Count: 40147
[Report This] Published: September 01 2019 Updated: December 10 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 08 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hopefully not the end.



Author's Response:

Nope, I've got more to post.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: December 10 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not the ending I was expecting; but a fine ending notwithstanding.  I especially like Barbara growing her breasts to completely crush Gabe into oblivion; very, very nice.

One other point, one which I find seldom exploited by Giantess writters, is the finger flick.  You did it, and you made it forceful and resounding.  Congratulations on such an overlooked aspect of Ginatess / tiny interaction.  Well done!

Looking forward to future stories by you.



Author's Response:

I'm not sure I was aware of the flick as an isolated kink, but glad I did it justice. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: November 12 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What's not to like?  Barbara tries to punish a young jerk only to find he loves being shrunk and stuffed in her sweaty cleavage.  The young guy squirms in protest of his situation and the hot, sweaty, hormone scented prison of Barbara's cleavage only to start licking away at her in sexually frenzied delight before finally getting off in there.  Best, and hopefully a correct guess by the young guy, is his realization "she intended on simply keeping him as a breast-dwelling pet".

I have to admit, I thought by the title and brief description {what happens when one "assumes", you make an "ass" out of "u" and "me"; Benny Hill} this would simply be an average or below average story.  Boy was I wrong, it's great!



Author's Response:

I'll be the first to admit my titles can be hit-or-miss. Glad it was enjoyed despite the summary.

Summary: Rose’s submissive came to visit for vacation, but today is the day that vacation ends, and he goes home.. Unless she has her way.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1608 Read Count: 2937
[Report This] Published: September 16 2019 Updated: September 16 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: September 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A really nice story.  I hope you add to it.

Pros:  The caring interaction between the two of them.  Her ownership of him in such a tender way.  His acceptance and even desire to be used by her in a way that she wants, despite his feers (well, minus the panic of being swallowed and crushed by her womanhood).

Cons:  Only grammatical errors.  More specifically, your lack of paragraphs.  Some of this can be attributed to copying and pasting your story, though you always have the preview option to check your work.  

When two different characters are speaking, their comments should each merit their own paragraphs.

This may seem nitpicky, but for the reader it makes a significant difference in ease of reading and comprehension.  Reread your story as it appears on this site and you will see it's one massive run on paragraph.

This is a simple grammatical presentation that you can easily fix on what is a terrific story.  In other words, always remember who your audience is and what they expect and will deal with.

Please take these words as constructive, because your story is truly great and your ideas fantastic.

 



Author's Response: Thank you! I’ll do my best to address the things you pointed out- it’s been a while since I’ve done anything like this, and I couldn’t remember how to tab on my phone.. (That feels quite pathetic to say, but it’s the truth, so I’ll own my pathetic-ness and do my best to correct it in the future.) “Nitpicking” is good! If everyone smoothed over all the nitpick-y stuff, I wouldn’t ever realize, and would keep making the same mistakes.

Summary:

A lonely young man looking for love turns to Tinder. What may seem like a stroke of luck turns out to be quite the opposite.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1307 Read Count: 9899
[Report This] Published: September 25 2019 Updated: September 25 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: September 25 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Catfished

Very nice!!!

Summary:

Howard comes across a picture of a shrunken person at Robin's feet on Instagram. He needs to determine if that is even real and how he can also find himself shrunken at Robin's feet. Could his biggest fantasy actually come true?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: DownSizer Universe
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14146 Read Count: 23002
[Report This] Published: September 25 2019 Updated: October 08 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: September 25 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime

I'm hoping Howard ends up with his crush Robin rather than Rachel.

Summary: Jeremy offers to help his best friend Olivia with her science project, but not all goes to plan...
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Footwear, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2126 Read Count: 22512
[Report This] Published: September 30 2019 Updated: October 08 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 01 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aside from the numerous gramatical errors {paragraph spacing, etc.}, this is a great story.  Please continue on with it.



Author's Response: Thanks, this was kind of in a rush and I will fix the issues soon! 😁

A Way Out by johnbart37 Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A desperate man with no other options, finds a goddess through a peculiar site. The site matches men in horrible situations with a female goddess. Once a man has been matched, he shrinks for his goddess and yields his freedom in exchange for safety from the outside world.


Categories: Entrapment, Breasts, Maternal, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1909 Read Count: 7030
[Report This] Published: October 02 2019 Updated: October 02 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 03 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice concept.  I realize it's the first chapter, but it does lack a bit of detail {e.g. life in her panty drawer, what it's like to suckle by her, etc.}.

I truly hope you continue this story, it's really great.

It would be an interesting twist if Vanessa decided to control the height / smallness of his shrinking as you mentioned as an option, as this would add a lot of possibilities.



Author's Response: I could understand the concern with there being a lack of detail, but this was meant to be a short story. This was my first foray into this world, where men who are on the run have the option to shrink themselves and gain a female guardian. So for now, this is a self-contained work. I am open to writing a longer version in the future (maybe a few chapters, like a novella).

Cabin Fever by TheTinyMan Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

When a businesswoman needs to get away from it all, she decides to go back to her family cabin. Little did she know, she was going to have a few uninvited guests waiting for her.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Feet, Crush, Butt, Breasts, Entrapment, Fantasy, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3044 Read Count: 8178
[Report This] Published: October 19 2019 Updated: October 19 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 21 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Normally I would say continue on and tell us all about Nathan spending his life eating Sam's toe jam; but it's great just the way it is.

To bad James was burried face down in Sam's toenail polish rather than face up so he could survive there for a week or two staring up at her.

Nicely done!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I would have if I was younger, but honestly, I lose motivation quickly, so I plan on doing one-shots exclusively, so I never leave anybody hanging.

As for James' ending, I see what you're saying, but instead, he's forced to only see her nail, forced to be one with her foot. I kind of think he'd almost prefer that.

Thanks again for the review!

Summary:

Jeff meets Mia, an extraordinarily curvy and sexy woman. They hit it off in a supermarket and Jeff agrees to be her trainer. He soon finds out that she has been keeping a big secret from him.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Breast Enlargement, Adult 30-39
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1990 Read Count: 5579
[Report This] Published: October 23 2019 Updated: October 23 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!  Exceptionally great story.

Your writing style is easy to read as it flows very smooth with nice grammar.

Your "quick to the point" approach keeps the story line moving along at an interesting pace.

The premise is not only intriguing, it's fantastic.

Please keep up the story.

 



Author's Response: Thank you for all the kind words! I wrote this almost a year ago for a contest, so it’s been quite a while since I’ve thought about it. I’ll definitely consider continuing this because it’s definitely a fun world to explore.

Summary:

A young woman lost and without a compass as to her future, makes a delightful and startling discovery during a hike. But not all is as it seems.


Categories: Body Exploration, Destruction, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11638 Read Count: 11913
[Report This] Published: October 28 2019 Updated: January 30 2020
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: January 31 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Compared to others, your story may be slow in developing; yet your story is much more realistic in being so.

Really like the sexual tension between Emilia and Becky.

Now that Emilia has Francois and Michael prisoners in a fish tank, how can she convince the rest of the tinies that she is safe to be with without the consent of those two {unless the rest of the group will believe Becky's testimony alone}?  That's assuming Emilia is determined to possess the rest of the group.

Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: January 01 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmm, the fact that many, if not all of the tinies are convicts {apparently Becky, and perhaps others are actually innocent prison guards} leaves open the question: 'Better to be imprisoned by Emilia than try to survive as a tiny amongst animals and insects that want to eat you".

Even though this was breifly discussed, the reality of their deadly situation must be setting in amoungst most of the prisoners.

Who are the ones who shrunk them?  Is Angela going to become part of the situation, perhaps deciding to retain and punish a few prisoners for her personal amusement?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary:

In a world where a small portion of the male population has mysteriously shrunk down to half an inch tall due to a genetic defect, Anik must try to adapt to his new life. A task made more difficult when a giant girl catfishes him into a tinder date. Believing that he'll be meeting up with a fellow shrinker, Anik is in for quite the surprise.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7804 Read Count: 24242
[Report This] Published: October 28 2019 Updated: October 30 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The First Date

Nice start.  Will be interesting to see where this, and Anik, go.  The big boobs is always a plus.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

A short story about a hopelessly awkward, unpopular guy named Mark who is inexplicably invited to a sorority Halloween party. Mark meets the impossibly sexy Chloe, which is when his perspective suddenly shifts, shall we say.

There is also a delightful size comparison image tucked within the body of the story. You'll just have to read through to see it. 


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1790 Read Count: 8288
[Report This] Published: October 31 2019 Updated: October 31 2019
Reviewer: D W Signed
Date: October 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story, hope it continues; but your image is linked to a website that one has to sign in to inorder to see it.  Could you please reinsert the image as an attachment rather than a link?



Author's Response:

I'm having a lot of trouble inserting an image as an attachment into the story. Here's a link to deviantart where the image is there in the story. Sorry for the inconvenience.