This is a series of short stories involving primarily butt stuff. There will be toilet stuff, so beware.
One of the best stories I have ever read. Keep it up, you have such an amazing writing style, great ironic dark twists, loving the toilet humor so much. Havent read all chapters so far but this is the best, I am in love with the Lexic character. Especially the ending was stunning, I like the shrunken guy ending in the girls shitter/rectum more than any other ending. Loved the wiping with sheet of paper details.
Youre a genius, this chapter was epic. The ending a masterpeice, so good irony. You have such a good hand for ironic, sarcastic toilet humor. Hope to see more. Ill try to review on the other chapters too I liked the most, this one is totally my 2nd favorite especially the ending, the 2nd chapter is still the best, and I love the Lexi one too, mostly all endings the guy ending in the rectum or smeared on a toilet paper.
Hope to see more, really good to se this story has not died.
Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.
After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.
one of the longest stories I read on here for sure lol
Thanks for taking the time to play along, I'm still not quite sure how this thing will turn out
Nathan was just an average college student. He loved to have a good time, make friends, all while trying to focus on keeping his grades up. One day though, he needs money, so he agrees to take part in an experiment... Will he soon come to regret his decision?
I would love seeing a sequel to this story. The idea of some poor college kid desperatly needs money and takes in some medicine/science testint job and is shrunk to nano size is awesome, of coruse him totally have no clue what he signs for, totally thinks it's just an ordinary testing job for new medicine or vitamine products. The ironic twist could be that at the same time, the facility takes testers for new products which on the other hands get paied too, though they just have the "ordinary" testing for new eating products, and the micro kid lands in their meals. The irony would be them both meeting before in the waiting room, and the girl maybe even walking in him and be like cant you watch where you step, hope you have a shitty day, just literally...
[Incomplete]This story centers around the main protagonist, Eric Fayton. Currently beginning his second year of graduate school into physics. Upon reading an article about physics, he experiments with several theories and ends up regretting at least one of them!
Eric: He is 5'10, short hair lightly brushed to the side with full exposure of his face and forehead. Moderately athletic with mostly lean weight and only a little cushioning of fat. Fairly layed back overall, his strict regiment of schooling is coupled with a strict diet and light workout regiment. He offsets this stress with his weekly pot and meditation routines, as well as yearly dabbling of mind-expanding drugs. He is stricken with a confidence and inquisitive nature that were somewhat dangerous together. Whether out of unintentional narcissism or optimism, he often brazenly rushes into situations without properly analyzing their implications on reality or negative consequences.
hope you continue this, I loved the plot so far. I like micro or even better nano unaware vore+scat+insertion plots a lot
A very stinky punishment for a deserving step-son.
please continue this story is so hot!!!!!
Mark has always dreamed of being shrunk down and eaten by a beautiful woman. Lisa holds the key to his most secret desire and is more than happy to gulp him down.
really interesting and well written
Brandon trys to uncover some dirty on one of his victims, but he shoud be careful at what he might find.
Jason and Amber are in a dream relationship, but things start to change when Jason suddenly shrinks. Amber’s hot cousin Carly might be willing to help, or the now titanic girl might just accidentally step on him.
really like. unaware are always good stuff, actually my favorites.
Sammy is bullied in school all the time by the upperclassmen. What kind of revenge will he seek when giving the power to do so?
wish i were given powers like that in school. was bullied a lot during school, that would have been fun. liked even more
Hot you're going for Sammy stay unawre and also Joseph stayed aware of thngs happening to him, this was lit and a huge turn on, than them just losing it at some point. This chapter was truly hot chapter again. A more cruel ending would have been Sammy left the pantis on his floor and using it from then as a cum-rag, and it becoming really nasty smelling more and more, smell and dried cum building up in it, and Joseph suffering through evry day sammy jerking off in it, then after a week or two, Joseph just a shell of his former self, Sammy throwing away the nasty pants. Maybe doing something like that again in another chapter. Keep it up man, hot story always a pleasure reading a new piece. Maybe someone ending as a cum stain on his bed cover he doesn't change for months, or on a under pants of his, all with them keping their awareness. Thanks for writing.
huge fan of mm, this story is totally for my likins so far. would be great seeing lots of chapters. I find it hilerious to think about the kid goes through school and turning random people into objects without any clue, and he even thought his first encounter with the bully was a dream. good idea with him trying it out and it didn't work and this totally added to him thinking it was just a dream.
Don't make Sammy aware of the things he did, that would ruin his 'good heart'. It is so much better to hink of those bad guys turned into nightmarish body parts and Sammy goes through his day withouth any thought of them. Speaking of heart... how ironic his name is Heart! That was such a cool idea, so fitting. I liked how you make Sammy sorrow and feel worried all the time, even he didnt do anything bad, and how he was all hope he is fine, and I am sure he is fine and all. The last part: it would kill Sammy if it turned out something bad happened to the Coach. I had such a good laugh. Also glad Lucas didnt find out, I dont want the friendship be ruined or break between them. As a ittle wish, dont let Lucas die. Also dont make Lucas become gay, that wouldnt fit in the plot. It is such a thrilling little teas Sammy has these feelings for him, maybe a part of Lucas starts to talk with Sammy about chicks and Lucas actually has no idea about Sammy being gay or bi. I also thought after this chapter, Sammy could be straight too but just a heartly character. Hope the police will move away from the school and wont play any role anymore, I would like the plot continue without this, having them go into other directions. I just loved about this story the most this school atmosphere and everything, let it continue like that. Maybe make a few tf more suffering with them still be aware of whats happening especially in cruel parts they became, that would be cool. Thanks for writing,
got bored the other day and remembered I had bookmarke this story and read it again completly and I just remembered how great it was. please continue it!!!
YOU BACK!! enjoyed the two chapters more than any else so far, so happy your back and how you are. the last one was the best, the popcorn kernel idea, the best so far. would enjoy another vore and or scat tf, totally the best becazse the most cruel. the party one was also good.
condom totally great idea, doing a 2nd maybe or even more cruel. but 8 was the best so far, totally.
Tthe 'curse' is now over, Sammy never noticed, and that made the story so amazing. glad you stayed with it. and please write another by time, would ya? just if you want to of course. I am happy to see this story had an ending. it was fun to go with Sammy through the story. I liked a lot.
I just noticed yesterday night you had writte a new chapter on this, and couldnt get enough reading. length and everything was so good. The ide with Sammy thinking it all was just a dream is the best, hope it stays like this. There arent enough good m/m stories on here, so I hope it will continue like this, please don't ruin this amazing with going apart this road. How you made Sammy speak and act is the key to the success on this story, totally stay with it and it's just gold. I just love the unfair and ironic parts the most, for example here "There was a loud growling, like a feral beast, off to Chad's left that caught his attention. It was Sammy's stomach." that was a good laugh, he was nearly over the top and maybe able to roll out of the pac.. *GRRRRLRLLL* LOL! I could see his suggar "skin" literally melting of his body of this nightmarish sound, like it was mocking and laughing at him, and it made it so much better, because it was Sammys stomach sound. I liked how one thing led to another, Sammy forgot to eat, if he hadnt he may have not eaten Chad. and the unfairness of it was actually Sammys fault of what he said about Chads mother, and now Chad had the honor of going through Sammys digestive tract. So glad I found to this story. It's one of my favorites now. I Like.
