Great story so far!  I really like the fact that you've got some complex characters going on here.  Much more than the ubiquitous cruel girl and gentle/kind girl.  Really interested to see where this goes.  

A nice start.  Interesting characters so far.  I'm a bit confused as I've never read about the Interchangables universe though.  Maybe I missed it, but are there male Amazons/Titans?  I assume not, but I wasn't sure.

Patricia seems particularly well written.  She's snarky in an underhanded kind of way, but not downright nasty enough that she becomes one dimensional.  Nicely done.

Interesting to get a POV from the Titans.  I would imagine that their issues and concerns are completely different than normals/Amazons, and it's showing through in this chapter.  Good stuff here.  Thankfully I have several more chapters to go before running out of material :)

Some good backstory on Cassie here.  Based on this chapter and what some other reviewers have said, I guess I read it a little backward - I kinda sensed that Alvin was the one that didn't return *Cassie's* feelings.  The read I got was that he finds her attractive, but not "relationship material".  Yet she seems to constantly want to be with him.  And if she has no feelings for him, is all her kindness to Alvin based on guilt?  It seems she probably wouldn't have given him the time of day until she wronged him.  Just thinking "out loud"...

Just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite GTS stories.  The characters and world you have developed are just superb.  As a new author myself I now have an appreciation of what feedback can do for a writer, so I wanted to offer my kudos for your most excellent story.  Really hoping you decide to continue this when you get a chance.

Always love seeing GTS stories - it seems like they're outnumbered 10:1 by shrink stories. You've got a great start going here.  I like the characters a lot, but I'm a little confused - in one chapter it's mentioned that the Alphas have a naturally maternal inclination, yet that's not quite what I'm getting from chapter 1 (lust) or chapter 2 (disregard for human life).  Chapter 2 was very inventive, and well done all around, but I'd be curious to see what was done to the Alpha population to make them treat Betas as inhuman dolls.  I kept thinking that even teenagers know better than to do that kind of thing to pets in the real world.  I could easily see that scene with a group of 10-12 year olds though...

Hopefully I'm not being overly critical.  I just like to understand the writer's perspective. Your story is great so far.  I'm going to be keeping up with this one!

Another excellent chapter, thanks for keeping up with this!  I'm eager to see if the council meeting to decide Vincent's fate will shake things up a bit.  Right now it seems as though I could say how things will go with Ariel as the Alpha and her friends as the lessers, but who knows?  Either way, you've written a superb story.

Looking forward to it!  Should be "steamy" indeed :)

I also like the addition of another ascended in the cast.  Might she play a larger role?  At least now you have her as a secondary in case you want to go that route.  A double date at some point in the future could be an awesome way to show gender dynamics outside of one-on-one. 

Great work, I'm really digging their easy relationship.

Wow!  One of my favorite stories of all time has been given new breath.  You've done an absolutely superb job of maintaining the voice of the original series, and you clearly nailed the personalities through your coordination with SpookyTaco.  I really hope you decide to keep going with this. You've done exceptional justice to the original work, and I'm just as spellbound by your words as I was by those of SpookyTaco.

I was suprised at how powerful you've made the glimmer effect on men.  It seems to steal even their mental coherence and ability to maintain their own desires, let alone actions.  They are truly powerless if their own desires can be subverted by the women around them.  Very titillating stuff.  Also, and perhaps its just too early to see, but given her misgivings in the first series, I expected to see a bit more reservation on Luna's part regarding the use of her new "powers".  Instead, it seemed to only bolster her enjoyment of her new position of superiority. 

Also, with Luna's recognition that sharing her man is only right and fair, I feel it's changed his role somewhat.  Maybe this is by design to undermine his control even more, but something about her statement about not sharing him now seeming illogical and selfish seems to shift him from a soulmate and lover to a sort of pet that should be shared to bring enjoyment to other women.  I'd be very curious to see if her new feelings on the matter drive her to compel him to service other women, perhaps even against his wishes.  So far, he's appeared to prefer manogamy.

Of course, as a (very amateur) writer myself, I understand that you really need to write the story you envision.  I hope I haven't offended you; I'm just trying to communicate what I was thinking as I read.

Your continuation of this story has truly grabbed me and you can be sure I'll be devouring any future chapters you put out.   Fantastic work. 

Got through the whole thing in less than a day.  Definitely ranks as one of the very best on the site, IMO.  Good differentiation of personalities, pretty good realism in character actions, not to heavy on exposition.  Also appreciated the Mini, Gentle (mostly) themes, as they are uncommon on this site. Great work!  I'll be coming back to this one in the future for sure.

However, I just had two relatively small nits: 1. There is a decent amount of inconsistency in the sizes of women's bodies/features as described in the text with respect to the stated heights.  E.g. a 13' woman with 4' breasts, a 15' woman who is able to encircle a 6' man's chest with a single hand.  Especially in the latter parts of the story, some of the descriptions of features relative to the size of the male protag seemed more appropriate for women in the 20'+ range. 

2. Understanding that there is a follow on story (albeit one that doesn't appear to pick up where the first left off), the ending still felt abrupt.

Neither of these significantly distracted from the story though.  This one is a true gem.  Thanks for sharing it.