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Nova by FleetingMoment Rated: R [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

After a nuclear holocaust, civilization had to move into enourmous cities. During this time humanity discovered an alternet source of power called Eyous. However several years after this discovery, people have been disapearing off the streets from both the middle level and the lower level.

The story begins with the lead protaginist named Alice Vermire. Her parents and herself are driving on the highway when a tragedy befalls them. There she caught a glimps of what looked like a monster and another human sized figure covered in a blood colored tattered cloak called Red Raven.

Reviews may contain spoilers. Please be advised.

[AWHILE AGO I CHOSE TO REARRANGE SOME PLOT POINTS BECAUSE I THOUGHT I COULD DO A BETTER JOB THEN THAT SO YOU MAY HAVE TO RETURN TO A PREVIOUS CHAPTER]

I actually was in the process of writing a different story but I wanted to test some of the ideas for it here. Any criticism is greatly appreciated. And I don't want to sound like a jerk but Some more reviews would be nice.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 102487 Read Count: 104065
[Report This] Published: August 23 2011 Updated: March 08 2015
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed
Date: March 04 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ravens fly towards Death

I just read the first chapter, and it has interesting characters and plot.  Thanks for writing it.  I like the futuristic setting, cars that drive themselves, and also the dystopia of large cities after worldwide tragedy.

I like Alice, and the merging of her with Nova is a nice twist.  I like the whole electronic theme with the veins being more computer-like.  And Red Raven is very mysterious and superhero-like, with a cool attitude.  And he uses unique weaponry, very original and cool.

I like how Alice's parents had developed Nova and so are experts with it, while she is just learning about it firsthand, with it now as part of her body.  It's also cool that Nova speaks to Alice, informing her, and can even cause her to possibly grow.



Author's Response:

Well I thank you and hope you enjoy the other 22 chapters that are currently up right now. Although it will still take me awhile to finish this I will be completing it and then I will move on to the editing. If there are any questions you have or there was a mistake I have made, please let me know.

. by GTS33 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

A story about a loving aunt and a nephew who have to deal with each other's size differences.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Shrinking Orb Series
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23 Read Count: 240747
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: March 13 2015
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2015 Title: Chapter 12: A Day To Myself

I didn't think it was possible, but I like Annie even more now.  That "whoops" scenario was fantastic.  She can tease him while having total control.

Both of their personalities gel well together in this story.



Author's Response:

Love the positive feedback, thanks a ton! Stay tuned to the story and you'll get a lot more of what you're talking about now. (That was sort of what I wrote this entire story for to begin with) I like the playful teasing XD

Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2015 Title: Chapter 13: P.E - Private Exploration

Entering the space between Annie's boobs... the funnest place on Earth... or was that Disney World.  No, Annie's cleavage is better.

I liked hearing Ryan's thought process about Annie's intentions.  And the cake analogy was good.  She has the size advantage and the power advantage.  And she has the sexy as hell advantage. :)

Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Dreams and Awkwardness

I enjoyed reading this.  Thanks for writing it.  It will be fun to see how far their relationship can go.

Boobs are fun.  I like Annie.



Author's Response:

I agree lol. The story's headed in a direction I think you'd like ;)

Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2015 Title: Chapter 14: A Bit Too Far...

Yes, I'd say it's getting interesting.  The chapter kept getting better and better as I read it.  I loved when Annie asked sternly, eyebrow raised, “What were you doing in my dress Ryan?”  And Ryan has experienced fear that he hadn't since the first time he had shrunk.  The whole idea of him being in trouble, sort of, is an exciting direction for the story.  Thanks.

Titan Realm by Princess Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

This story will be rated X and is not yet complete...

 

We are all aware that every reality in the multiverse is as distinct and unique as the next.  Each with its own rules and social guidelines.  What may be acceptable in one realm may not be tolerated in another.

 

When traversing between dimensions one has to keep an open mind to the many infinite diversities within infinite combinations without bringing their own preconceived restrictions on moral social norms into different realities.  In fact, there is no standard to which one can judge parallel worlds too.  These lessons are taught to anyone wishing to cross between worlds.  With a firm warning not to jump to too quick a judgment without knowing with what is deemed right or wrong in that particular culture.

 

This is the story of you leaping into a much more different way of life than you have ever known or experienced before.  A new world of epic proportions, fraught with danger, sexual freedoms, and unlimited opportunities.  As anything goes in this new world, the only question is what do you desire to experience?

 

This is my first attempt ever to write anything amounting to a story.  I will eventually have over 100 chapters when I am finished but for now just started. Please be patient as I slowly get this story attended too.  Feedback is welcome as well as any ideas and any grammar or spelling issues you may find.  Thank you.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Body Part, Giantess, Body Exploration, BBW, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4533 Read Count: 12515
[Report This] Published: January 06 2015 Updated: January 15 2015
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed
Date: January 15 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prolog

The story is imaginative and also has a sense of realism to it.  I personally would go with choice B, miniature male, but the majority have spoken for choice D.  I'm sure it will be good whatever direction the story takes.

Summary:

Devil plays his tricks and edits the Magicians spellbook to have "mini," which he then accidentally casts whil arguing with Star. Now Devil and the Magician are as tiny as a clown as they struggle to find their way back to their height - don't split the party!

///Re-upload: Cleaned up and moved to a new account///


Categories: Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4753 Read Count: 9795
[Report This] Published: January 10 2015 Updated: January 10 2015
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18 2015 Title: Chapter 4: When Worlds Colide

“massive spheres of hatred”… great line.

 This was a fun and sexy story with great dialogue.  I really liked it a lot.

Summary:

A young witch and her adopted brother find themselves with a weekend alone, which gets far more interesting for both when the powerful girl decides she prefers her human sibling on the shorter side.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Size & Sorcery
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23650 Read Count: 111409
[Report This] Published: March 13 2015 Updated: May 15 2015
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Real Way

Awesome story and a fitting ending.  I like Roxy and Allen a lot.  They’re like cool friends to the reader.  It was funny when Roxy regrew Allen for the debriefing with Grace’s parents, and “it had noticeably taken several seconds longer than usual.”  It took a while, I thought at first, because she disliked having her brother at his full height :) … and later I factored in that she was also fatigued.

Grace… I really, really, really, really like.  Reading Snack for Grace for the first time, right after she made her appearance in Hybrid, identified Grace as being fucking awesome… godlike in her toying with Jay.  To see that *epic* side of Grace, in SfG, made her role in Hybrid seem all the more exciting.  (SfG was like a glimpse of heaven, in my opinion.)

I’d say I have a crush on the character of Grace.  A bit embarrassed to admit that.  That’s what amazing writing will do.  She seems real… just words on a page… but I never tire of her presence “on screen”.  She makes any story five stars in my view.  The whole story could be about a boring topic like the history of rock formation in Boring National Park… and then you write that Grace walks by and simply waves.  Bam!  Five stars!  That’s how I view it. :) :) :)

Grace’s downfall is just fuel for her ascending, for her rising, for her revenge. :)  She had some significant discomfort and she cried.  But she is such an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G character that even her imperfections and weaknesses are ultimately included in her perfection and strength.  Like I said, I never tire of Grace.  I like that she has a fetish for vore, and she is very playful.  I like her choice of words when she speaks -- elements of being maternal and dominating… desirous and impulsive.  She is my favorite character of all time for shrinking/GTS stories.  Thanks Jack.



Author's Response:

Thanks much! You're right that Roxy would probably procrastinate regrowing Allen, though it also had to do with her fatigue in that case.

Glad to hear Grace went over so well and that she felt realistic. I've certainly had mini crushes on fictional giantesses around this site before, so you're not alone there. I will keep Hybrid: Boring National Park in mind as a story.

You're correct too that Grace won't be so forgiving of all this. Hubris is a sure weakness of hers, and later on, we may well see it lead her in some more drastic directions.

Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed
Date: May 04 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Payback's a Witch

You are an amazing, talented wordsmith.  Thank you so much for writing this, Jack.

Grace is a fantastic character, and I love vore.  I read Snack for Grace, after starting the Hybrid story, and SfG is incredible!  The setup is perfect, with repeat vore and teasing.  It's the best vore story I've read.  I liked the line in Snack for Grace when she said “You might be older than me, but since I can make you whatever size I want, whenever I want, I think this name fits you better, don’t you?"

I was wondering the likelihood that Grace will appear in another story in the future, say, in the next 12 months?  Maybe a long story with Grace as the lead?  I understand you need to write what interests you most, so I'm guessing it's unlikely, but thank you very much for what you did write with Grace.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying this, and I appreciate what you say about SfG. With lines like that one I wanted Grace to come across as a self-righteous brat with just enough skill to back it up.

I have fun writing Grace so she will definitely appear in another story, though I honestly can't say when; I try to only work on stories when I feel a great urge to do so, hoping that helps the quality.

Summary:

A woman grows to gigantic size and has some fun.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Destruction
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3178 Read Count: 39575
[Report This] Published: March 21 2015 Updated: May 09 2020
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed
Date: August 20 2015 Title: The 120 foot woman.

Interesting gts story.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Summary:

A brother, haunted by the years of shrunken captivity he spent beneath his younger sister’s foot, struggles to confront his demons and, ultimately, the demented girl who stole his humanity.


Categories: Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59576 Read Count: 218414
[Report This] Published: June 24 2015 Updated: May 13 2016
Reviewer: Starfleet Jedi Signed
Date: October 23 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Life After Carly

I was wondering if you could please tell me the process for deleting my account.  I also lost the password to the email I signed up with, so just made a new email.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Sure. I've responded to your email.