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In a world of giants and humans, the giant slayer race was created by the gods to keep the power hungry giants in check and restore balance. This arrangement worked for thousands of years but now, after a key assassination, even the power of slayers may not be enough to stop the force that is coming.
Damn. I got mix feelings about what Juliette did. The village did have Ant and the Slayers go after her to rescue the son and they did kill her guards but it's not like the entire village was responsible.
What about the kids that had no idea what was going on or the elderly that probably couldn't hear that well. She killed innocent people indiscriminately and even felt good about it. Maybe it's just how I saw Juliette as this chivalrous woman who was probably just following her sister's orders but now she comes of as a monster. Well, at least to the humans and Slayers that is.
I'm still curious about her having regrets for her actions as the story progress. She at least may be the least cruelest out of the Daughter but I guess we'll see once we meet Florence even though her reputation gives me doubts. Great work as always.
There isn't much I can say without spoilers here. I would just say that while Juliette might be "pleasant", it's not to be mistaken for good I guess. This is the last Juliette chapter for a while though so know immediate answers. It was just a side scene I decided to do before going back to the main story.
R.I.P. Zahra. While her reputation wasn't good, she didn't appear all that bad but alas, the fantasy-medieval times are cruel. Dark Souls and Fire Emblem have taught me that much lol I am worried about the slayers even with this new team now that Juliette and Zahra's crew will most likely avenge their fallen sisters in rage.
There had been a shift in how the world runs that most people were not aware of. It was a subtle change, one masterminded over a couple decades by an entity that is merely known as 'Goddess'. This ageless, powerful being manipulated political and economical powers to get her believers into influential positions, all of whom claim and proved to be able to use supernatural powers they refer to as 'Witchcraft'. Government offices, military leaders, wealthy V.I.P.s, once all the pieces were in place a bloodless revolution changed the world in a single night, or at least that's how it appeared to the public. Little changed once the 'Goddess' took over, other than the recognition that Witches were the dominant species and had the right to, under the watchful gaze of their deity like leader, use their Witchcraft as they see fit to 'punish' humans who cross them. However, should a Witch be caught abusing her power, retribution from the Goddess is immediate and unforgiving.
Witches are free to enjoy an easier life than most, and so long as she isn't smitten by the Goddess, a Witch can use her magic as she sees fit thanks to the extra boons granted to them through the Goddess. Apparently, before the rise of this mysterious Goddess, Witches only had access to their magic on Halloween night when, as they say, the border between there and here were thinnest and only with a Coven of no less than 3 Witches cooperation in a ritual all night. Now, feats of magic before thought to be impossible for the average WItch to cast are treated as parlour tricks. Despite this, the world adapted and while their numbers are nowhere near that of the human population, roughly only a hundred thousand to humanity's nine billion plus, people now know that if you value your life, don't cross a Witch!
Unfortunately for some humans, they didn't get the message. These are the stories submitted by either the Witches themselves or a witness of humans getting put in their place, posted on the fastest growing Witch news website, Witchit!
Good stuff here, man. I like how witches, who are normally potrayed as evil, are actually punishing these spoiled, entitled civilians. Keep up the good work!
Thanks! Yeah, I mean Witches can be pretty evil but normal people can also be dicks too lol XD
Hex Maniac's attraction towards the strange and arcane leads her to buying a mysterious bracelet from a foreign region, a relic from long ago. Convinced it must be haunted, Hex Maniac accidentally brings Dynamaxing to Kalos -- in a way that only she can. A Pokemon fanfiction.
First off, I loved your Endless Story. It's pretty clear you're a incredible writer. As a avid Pokemon fan, this was a really well read pokemon giantess story and who better to choose for a dynamaxing than tge Pokedere herself, Hex Maniac.
Everything about how you wrote her was spot on, I felt like I was watching a episode of Pokemon itself in my head. Her morbid curiosity was there. Her excitement at being a giantess was there. Her insecurities when downgrading herself compared the Furisode Girls and calling herself a "gross giant monster" was there.
You went as far as nailing Valerie's personality perfectly, getting her Sylveon's gender right, adding that female ranger and her Arbok, even the Hex Maniac's Gourgeist was a nice touch. You didn't make her go rampagy-mode, just a curious woman who's probably just socially awkward.
This was really good. Even if it was a one-shot.
Thank you for so many kind words! There's so many in here, just kind words all over the place, bouncing around. Just going out of your way to leave a review is so nice, and to be so kind about it, ha!
I'm glad so many of these small details were picked up on! I was afraid I'd look like an idiot, googling which pokemon trainers were actually in those areas and actually using their pokemon. But even the details of her being self-deprecating and her curiosity, I'm happy to see those subtle details didn't go to waste, and were actually a beloved part of it!
I'm sure this won't be the last time I write something involving Hex, fortunately! Thank you again for this review~
I really like this story. It gives two of my favorite things: 1900s nostalgia and giantess vore. The flow is not too complex but enough to give the readers the info that's necessary and even better you did your research on what was in the 1900s. (That or you have a really good memory lol.) I actually learned what year specifically Vans were made by reading this. Awesome job.
One of my favorite giantess stories of all times is "Amanda at large" from Typesbad. I've already written some other giantess stories, but I believe "The breaking point" is the one that feels more like the classic.
As Typesbad said when he posted Amanda at Large for the first time: consider it your typical, if somewhat long, giantess in the city procedural
I really like where this is going. Curious to know what's going to happen when Lucia gets hungry. It's definitely a more realistic scenario if a woman was to become giant.
Thank you! I hope you will continue enjoying it. BTW, the story will cover well what happens when Lucia's hunger catches up with her. It's a few chapters from now...
Yes! That chapter was amazing! The belittling of Jennifer before being devoured by Lucia was genius! Jennifer's reactions to seeing the giantess felt very real, too.
This is a really good story, it doesn't rush to the giantess action right away, we see what goes on in Lucia's mind, how she got from scared to confident, her hesitation to some things and her willingness to simple just enjoy her newfound stature. I also read your "I, Giantess" story, very good stuff. If someone wanted to read a story were a giantess's thoughts were transitioned perfectly, I'd recommend you, my friend.
Thank you! I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it!
Even if this is a rampage story, I always try to develop the characters and their reactions and psychololgy. The situation is, of course, impossible, but I like to try and imagine how would people in different rols behave in this impossible situation.
Thanks for the kind words about the story overall and about my writing. This type of feedback is what encourages to keep me going!
In the country of Cambria, a menacing group of kings and queens’ rule with an iron fist. The humans live at the mercy of them all, while the mystical faeries of Faye live secluded from them all. The giant clan of Alvita, a once independent and powerful race of massive people faced an unexpected onslaught, nearly the entire clan facing extinction.
Receiving a quest from her ancestors, Ravia of Alvita, a 9 foot tall, barbarian woman with the gift of growing to tremendous heights must go on a perilous journey to bring her clan back from the dead. Will she prevail, or will her rampant need of death and destruction for all those beneath her become her downfall?
For more details and images of Ravia herself, please check out my DeviantArt here:
https://www.deviantart.com/giantesslover45/gallery/67896408/ravia-the-giantess-barbarian
Good story. As much as I like her cruelty, it's nice to see Ravia show a bit of a vulnerable side when she was talking to the elder.
A costly 64 year long intergalactic war waged by the one dreaded giant species of humanoids called the Devex results in billions of deaths of miniature class humanoid species. In a desperate struggle to tip the scales, the coalition of miniature class humanoids deployed a genetically engineered virus that all but wiped out the Devex. Then after winning the war in 2412 the coalition of miniature class humanoids keep the few remaining hostile giant species of humanoid under lock and key. Yet despite universal fervent animosity for the Devex, some dare oppose their blanket legal status as war criminals and indefinite detention as slaves, pets and zoo exhibits.
I'm surprised this hasn't been reviewed yet. I missed your Fracture Factor X the Retroactive story but this one also shows a promising start.
Thank you for the review on this story and I am glad you think it's got a promising start. As for my Fracture factor X story I plan on putting up chapter 29 in about a week or so.
