Reviewer: Sugary-Micro Signed
Date: September 02 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)
Oh god, this story is lovely, it's amazing and this site needs more dirty ass material, hope this is heading to more gassy material and maybe some scat, I think you should just do what you love however but for opinion or suggestion? Personally I'd love some more prolonged torture, he's durable after all lol. But i'd love to see him tossed into a pile of dog shit by the end of that hell, quick place to drop him off when you wanna end the story pft, but can't wait to read more no matter what you choose c:
Author's Response: I know, right? Barely anybody gets into the nitty-gritty dirty stuff. I'm kind of having a hard time coming up with good ways to describe stuff because I can count on one hand the times I've seen it done well. Don't worry, though, it'll get dirty. And don't get worried when the first ass scene is over, I'll be coming back to it. :D Don't think he'll end up in dog shit, though. Girl shit is more my thing. XP I'll think you'll like the next chapter though, and it won't be long~!