Anna goes searching for a prey --- and finds one.
Dear P.Eddie, are you still with us? Do you still step along the Primrose Path? Yes, I'm still "watching my back" as you kindly advised. I shall not be anticipating your reply but it'll be a great pleasure to find a response from you.
Many thanks Stanley Williams for posting this sequence of Pope Eddie's original. I wonder why he hasn't made any comment as he seemed keen to read the two sequences, the other being "Anna Baptiste"?
Josh has been dating Millie, the daughter of a genetic's engineer, for over a year. As their senior year of high school begins to come to a close, Millie's father dies tragically in a car accident. Millie, having just turned 18, has inherited the family home by the lake. Millie uses the excuse of her father's death to end the relationship.
As Josh quickly finds himself heartbroken, he tries desperately to rekindle their relationship. By calling reguarly, leaving notes in her locker, and stopping by her athletic practices after school, he unknowingly draws the unwanted attention of Millie's darker side.
This story follows Josh and Millie, as she takes care of her ex-boyfriend once and for all.
WARNING: My writing tends to get descriptive and extremely perverse quickly. This story is NOT recommended for anyone under the age of 18.
DISCLAIMER: All pubicly recognized characters, schools, locations, and/or businesses are the imagination of the author. In no way are these things meant to protray any real life persons, places, or things. Absolutely no copyright infringement is intended.
Thanks ShadowCross for the explanation Re: counter. We call such a facility 'washbasin' or 'handbasin.' Glad to learn that your original story will continue. We over here call that room 'bathroom' if it contains a bath. Otherwise it is either a W.C. or lavatory; but a lot of people here simply say 'toilet' which, in its proper sense, covers everything from shaving, showering, bathing, washing and attending to one's hygiene as well as combing and brushing the hair. Sorry to be so pedantic.
I can't agree with zol his suggestion of Josh being introduced to a male's rear orifice. Humiliating, yes, but not for heterosexual chaps...unless "Bill" was called Billie and was a lovely-looking shemale.
I was glad the whole story (is it completed?) was broken up into short chapters.
Overall, I would give the story 5 stars and a good rating for its originalty. One question I have: What is a "counter" next to the lavatory? Counters are usually only seen in shops, banks and the like.
Well, I read the 3 parts and, as usual, corrected the many grammatical errors which is excusable as it appears English is not your first language. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter while anticipating more exciting acts being centred on the shrunken male. However, the story was well written. I would have made Claire become rather resentful of the 'jouet' as most dominant lovers would be and consequently would have her dispose of her 'rival' in the most intimate manner; but that is my way of concluding such a yarn.....in a more exciting finale.
Author's Response:
Well, since my tale is not yet finished, i can't see there is a more or less "exciting finale" to discuss. But yes, it probably won't be the ending you wish, I'm affraid.
A good, exciting yarn, girlfood. You do have a good style. Thanks for adding that hint of actually biting into tthat girl's human morsel.
Author's Response: thank you sir
I've just re-read "Breaking in" and it was like reading it for the first time, I loved it! I made a few adjustments such as Amanda and the young, pretty girl chewing up a few of their human morsels - to savour the taste, you know. You're a jolly good author, Bob, pity we don't communicate any more. Tony
Hello "girlfood" Bob. AS said previously, pity we don't communicate any more.
I have a unique yarn that I'd like to post on site but find it difficult for some unknown reason. I doubt whether you will answer but I am asking you whether you would be kind enough to post the story for me? I've alread sent you an email so you know my address.
Hello Bob. You may have forgot me now, but I can never forget you. You may recall my server title...blueyonder. That is because I live over the blueyonder of the Atantic ocean. Well, my friend (erstwhile) I've just re-read this yarn and thoroughly enjoyed it, and I've taken the liberty of recording several more of your stories. If you have a mind to, please drop me a line. I'm at banfield18@blueyonder.co.uk It will be delightful to hear from you again. Tony
Now that was a good, wholesome yarn that will not be found in any public library. Well done. I still wonder why we find stories about girls eating males exciting, but we do! Thank you.
The answers to some of the questons in A dream come true,
Amanda, this yarn has been one of the best of its kind I've read for some years. I was engrossed and consequently excited, so I have saved it to read over and over again Many thanks from the U.K.
Author's Response:
Hello back from the UK,thank you Banfield for your lovely review this story just came to me i know not why i can assure you i'm not a lesbian.Although i would be telling lies if i told you i wasn't aroused by my words, i may explore this new page in my book of life further who knows.
Amanda.
Well, chozo, this would have been a thrilling yarn if you had not introduced a male to share the gts female's pleasure. I would say that only 0ne per cent of readers would care for a giant male - and you can guess who that 0ne per cent are. My wish was that female predator/gts had a girlfriend, or that her "husband" had been a Shemale in order to make the yarn that more exciting.
I know it's your story, and it was good while it focussed on the female, but bringing a male into it rather puts one off.
A shemale is a male, dude.
Anyway, I like how you give it 2 and a half stars. That's like punishing an apple for not being an orange.
First, chozo, I'm not sure what a "dude" is. However, altho a shemale is a male - almost, she/he can be a beautiful/sexy creature, and more sexy than a female proper. After all, we are into fantasy, not reality.
Of course I thoroughly enjoyed the yarn, but, as said, was turned off by the intro of that male character. I only hope other members of this site make the same comment. I've read many of your other yarns but can't recall whether I was as critical....but let me assure you, they are constructive criticisms. BTW: I gave 5 not 2.5
This is not my work although Banfield has kindly written it about me i trust you shall all give the credit to this wonderfull author who i have the utmost respect for.
Amanda.
Many, many thanks Amanda, for posting this article. It may disappoint some readers as Tony wasn't reduced in size, but it does make the work more realistic.
Author's Response:
Banfield you are more than welcome and besides its about meeee thank you for writing such an erotic account of your demise at my hands.x.
Amanda.
Amanda, I am still awaiting your response. If you will, contact banfield18@blueyonder.co.uk Tony
hello stranger
hehe are you still wandering through these pages looking to fullfill your darkest desires hehe. My old address failed tried ever so hard to retrieve it,i need to get another one cannot use my family one for obvious reasons lol.
Amanda xx
So sorry, Amanda, I gave incorrect e-mail address. It should be banfielf18@blueyonder.co.uk As said before, it would be good to be in touch again, but how long this time? Tony
Hello there Amanda. Sorry to learn about the e-mail cancellation. Here is my address. banfield11@blueyonder.co.uk It'll be marvellous to be in touch again. Tony
As I suspected, Amanda, only one appreciative reviewer, the marvellous Mr Stanley Williams. Of course it was because "I" wasn't shrunk to an improbalbe size, but as I said in my profile, I much prefer the victims of cannibalistic females to be fully-sized even altho I love the thought of being inserted in those very intimate orifices - especially yours. Ho-hum!
Author's Response:
I enjoyed it Banfield take comfort for that,once again i thank you for including me in your fantasy.
Amanda.
Amanda, have you flown off to the Far East yet? It seems so by your sudden cessation in communicating.
Author's Response:
Hi banfield sorry for no reples they have cancelled my e-mail address grrr can you post yours on here please so i can add it when i sort out new e-mail account thank you
Amanda xx
To VITO; But of course you would, I too if I were you, but one had to use discretion, and besides, seeing the very few reviewers, it would not have been worthwhile.
Author's Response:
Thank you Banfield my dignity was at stake here but you gallantly used discretion to protect me, for this i am gratefull,so Vito please if i may Banfield did this for me so i am to blame for his lack of descriptives in his tale.
Amanda.