Penname: zumi [Contact] Real name: Mark
Member Since: April 13 2014
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Nothing much -- just sitting here writing stories or programming or something...


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Rise of the Nephilim by Amateur Wordsmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Thousands of years ago a powerful and highly advanced civilization attempts to retrieve one of its most prized possessions from the surface of a planet inhabited by a race of giants.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28165 Read Count: 49524
[Report This] Published: July 26 2013 Updated: July 22 2014
Reviewer: zumi Signed
Date: April 24 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Bonus Chapter: Nephilim Dictionary

Yes! Love it that you're inventing a language to accompany your fantastic world! I've always found such great pleasure in seeing and exploring the wonderful little treasures that languages are, and you seem to be doing a great job with yours so far. :)

As far as any advice I can give, I've never been to terribly adept at syntax, tenses, and stuff like that, but I do enjoy phonetics quite a bit and might be able to help you some there. Even though while your language is probably going to be exclusively in written form, if you're interested in the topic I'd suggest further exploring the topic regardless. :)

Now for the advice: each and every language has a flow and feeling to it (or lack thereof if made improperly). This flow is an expression of culture, social mentality, and emotional tendencies. I'd suggest then you make a standard alphabet of sounds for your language and come up with rules on certain combinations of sounds that are pennies. For example, a gutteral consonant must always follow a long vowel. Once you come up with rules that meet the flow you're looking for, or one that reflects how you are trying to portray your culture, you can just follow the rules and make a consistent (beautiful) sounding language.

 

Again, great story! And good luck with the language!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and the little treasure that comes with it ;D

On the subject of phonetics, the giants in the story have no written language. Thus the language has to be a believable spoken one.

The idea of pronounciation rules is something I could probably look into. I have a good idea of the giants culture and everything else so all I need to do is make it happen.

thank you for the advice

Erica's House by realRS Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house. 

Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge?  Will Erica let the power go to her head?  


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28671 Read Count: 97664
[Report This] Published: January 16 2014 Updated: September 29 2016
Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Great story so far! Love the power struggle and role reversal issues prsented: it adds a very realistic aspect that greatly improves the feeling of immersion (at least for me). Hope you continue with this story and I'd also love to see some kind of struggle that lasts more than a few chapters in the future, like one of the characters is lost or Brittany runs away.

Anywho, looking forward to future chapters!



Author's Response:

That's a good point, I've so far been structuring chapters around having a beginning, middle, and end which usually resolves that chapters' conflicts.  Might be good to split them up a bit more.

Thanks for taking the time to comment!

Reviewer: zumi Signed
Date: January 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Morning Inspection

Loving the story! Glad to see you're continuing it :)

Olympus by Uncle Funkle Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

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Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4 Read Count: 55787
[Report This] Published: June 12 2014 Updated: February 14 2017
Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2014 Title: Olympus

Absolutely amazing story--please keep going with this! Looking forward to seeing what's going to happen to the two. :)

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2014 Title: Olympus

Wow, great chapter! The dialogue (or lack thereof?) was just amazing. You did it absolutely perfectly, handling communication without spoken words. I hope you keep this story up!

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2014 Title: Olympus

Amazing chapter as always! In absolutely loving this story: the characters are great, there's a HUGE amount if mystery about what's going on. Definitely going to look forward to the next chapter! :)

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by DollsizeHarlequin Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Princess Gwendoline, or Goldilocks as she is known, is a spoilt girl who has too often been used to pushing her subjects around and getting her way. What she is about to realise however is that messing around with a family of Giants will never end well when a Mother's Son is put in danger...

(This is Not a furry story!!)

This is my own version of a kind of "Grimm Fairy Tale". Most of the "hardcore" (eg, violence/humiliation/vore) stuff will not be until the last couple of chapters, but the story revolves around the interaction between the Giant family and the humans and how they try to co-exist.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Adventure, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24544 Read Count: 39209
[Report This] Published: June 19 2014 Updated: September 11 2017
Reviewer: zumi Signed
Date: June 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Princess

Very nice introduction. :) I've really enjoyed reading your other stuff and while this may be differwnt, I'm definitely looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)  This may seem a bit 'out there' lol i think the general premise and tags.. and warnings in the summary... will scare a lot of folks off but it will be worth the read (hopefully) I promise!! :P

The Perks of Being Her Pet by dingbing Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

A young woman discovers a tiny man and decides to take him home. What might his new life in her possession be like?

Terrible summary, am I right?


Categories: Adventure, Giantess, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3357 Read Count: 16017
[Report This] Published: July 14 2014 Updated: July 18 2014
Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prologue

Loved the start to this story!

Great writing and description; only thing is it seemed too short and fast paced, but that's just me wanting more. :)

To be honest, you could continue with either (or both!) of your stories and I'd be following closely. Looking forward earnestly to any future chapters you happen to throw out. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad to hear you enjoyed and are looking forward to more! 

Did you really feel it was too short? As I was writing it I was actually thinking it was getting rather lengthy for a prologue, haha. I thought people were probably going to get bored reading about this guy running around in the rain. 

Thanks again for the review, I appreciate it!

The Spice Up by TinyBrad Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Follow Jessica on her rise from spicing up her marriage to discovering and acting on carnal desire.


Categories: Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27531 Read Count: 97187
[Report This] Published: July 27 2014 Updated: September 01 2014
Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Love the start to this story! I'm certainly looking forward to you continuing it! :) I hope if this is a gentle story that "accidents" occur in the future chapters. ;). Again, though, great start! 



Author's Response:

It won't be all gentle. Tempers will be lost, discipline and humiliation doled out. But there will be no straight up violent cruelty. And yes accidents will happen. Along with shenanigans. 

Beach Girl by WrittenInTheStars Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Christy is 40ft tall due to an experiment on her genes which went wrong. She lives life next to the beach in her home which is scaled to her size, living a relaxing and catered lifestyle... Meanwhile an event occurs which will change the world forever, while Christy watches on...


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43545 Read Count: 141689
[Report This] Published: August 11 2014 Updated: October 25 2014
Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: 'Meet Christy'

Great chapter as always! Always look forward to reading this story, and these last few chapters have been absolute gold especially. Definitely looking forward to more. :)

 



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2014 Title: Chapter 10: 'Anger and Relief'

Uffda, that was quite a chapter. Sorry to see them part with such sad sorrow. Very nice unaware though, hope you happen to include that element again. :) Looking forward to resolution! 

Role Reversal by Sonicfan287 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

A young boy named Jake finds a tiny woman in a museum and winds up on the wrong end of a "role reversal" when he tries to help her. I may continue this depending on reader reaction. I've always been a big fan of this kind of scenario. 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67092 Read Count: 154780
[Report This] Published: November 12 2014 Updated: February 09 2015
Reviewer: zumi Signed
Date: November 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Role Reversal

Great character development this chapter! You couldn't have done it better in my opinion. :) Looking forward to more updates!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I was hoping throwing Lillian's point of view into the mix would make it more interesting for both characters in the long run 

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Role Reversal

Ooh, this Kevin business adds some nice conflict to the story. Great chapter as always! Looking forward to finding out what Jake thinks of all this and how he's going to get out of his sticky situation. :)

Rehabilitation by Chekhovs Gum Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

After discovering her best friend's plan to take his life, Annie takes drastic measures to keep Josh alive and safe under her protective watch. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13442 Read Count: 49771
[Report This] Published: November 13 2014 Updated: March 10 2015
Reviewer: zumi Signed
Date: November 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Sips and Giggles

Wow, this is an amazing story. Your storytelling abilities are absolutely incredible. Already the characters seem alive, and I cant wait until we get to see Josh's reaction. Fantastic story you have here. :)



Author's Response:

Oh man, thanks a ton. I get really anxious when I post a new story, but hearing this really makes it worth it. I'll be focusing on Josh's view a bit more really soon though.

 

Titan Realm by Princess Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

This story will be rated X and is not yet complete...

 

We are all aware that every reality in the multiverse is as distinct and unique as the next.  Each with its own rules and social guidelines.  What may be acceptable in one realm may not be tolerated in another.

 

When traversing between dimensions one has to keep an open mind to the many infinite diversities within infinite combinations without bringing their own preconceived restrictions on moral social norms into different realities.  In fact, there is no standard to which one can judge parallel worlds too.  These lessons are taught to anyone wishing to cross between worlds.  With a firm warning not to jump to too quick a judgment without knowing with what is deemed right or wrong in that particular culture.

 

This is the story of you leaping into a much more different way of life than you have ever known or experienced before.  A new world of epic proportions, fraught with danger, sexual freedoms, and unlimited opportunities.  As anything goes in this new world, the only question is what do you desire to experience?

 

This is my first attempt ever to write anything amounting to a story.  I will eventually have over 100 chapters when I am finished but for now just started. Please be patient as I slowly get this story attended too.  Feedback is welcome as well as any ideas and any grammar or spelling issues you may find.  Thank you.

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Body Part, Giantess, Body Exploration, BBW, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4533 Read Count: 15409
[Report This] Published: January 06 2015 Updated: January 15 2015
Reviewer: zumi Signed
Date: January 07 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prolog

Wow, great intro to the story! I would love to see you continue as D. :)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.