I was curious how you'd handle the authorities, considering Mandy would be the prime suspect. Now I know! Still, hopefully they'll find some evidence at her house to implicate her.

I only read this chapter because of Ancient Relic's review. I'm too afraid to read the others.

I'm hoping that the baby flips a permanent switch in Julia's mind. Maybe Julia will regain a sliver of humanity.

Though a world where giantesses dominate is not unique (in and of itself), you've made it unique. You've detailed a set of rules, customs, and cultural behaviors that add a lot of flavor. The POV is likable. The female characters humiliate, but they aren't too cruel. I like that. There are a couple of things I don't understand: How is Bianchi his teacher in the new world? If he isn't supposed to be able to read, how does she teach him with the girls in the class? Like if he never misbehaved by going to the library, would he have sat at a desk instead of her lap? Or would she have given him private lessons after class? I'm just a bit confused there since it seems that the world is one where males aren't given the same learning priveledges.

Another question I had was about the growth formula. Five feet seems like a lot to grow for a single packet. Is it random? If not, how is the tallest person only 50 feet tall? Surely a wealthy person could buy a lot more than a teacher like Bianchi and could grow to 100+ feet by consuming a lot of the stuff. Perhaps it interacts with genetics in a way and hits a plateau at some point?

I'm probably asking too many questions but they crossed my mind. :) Most importantly, keep writing if you have time. It's a really good story.

columbiform — I almost thought you made that word up!

Great imagery in the paragraph starting with “Marna could not help giggling as she watched...”

Very nice!

Beautiful and well worth the wait!

The question is - where do you go from here? As a writer, I struggle once a point of tension disappears. However, as a reader, I sincerely do hope there are more chapters, even if they're just going on picnics and stuff. :)

He's got a bad case of PTSD. If he's not going to go to the authorities or faculty, he should just man up and go sit with Cait at lunch. I'm sure that would surprise her. Better to face her head on in a public location than in a dark alley. Plus it would show he's mastering his fear, something which often makes bullies back off. Cait derserves to be locked up in juvey, but she wouldn't go so far as to actually kill him. I.e., she's not insane and pure evil, just spoiled and cruel, so he should face her.

I'm still hoping Penny and Jack become a couple, in spite of her rejecting him earlier. They're good together, hopefully she sees that before Jack finds a girl his own size.

and which subsequently urinated that sucked blood into a pool of similarly mutated leeches
I cracked up when I read this. Is that really the process they use to create the growth formula?

This conversation:

did Grandpa Howard love his work more than me?

Of course, he did!

It seems odd. I think Ash mean to say “Of course not!”

Also this may be the first time I’ve seen a werewolf in a giantess story. :)

Finally, for those having trouble reading this story on tablet or pc, switch to a different browser and it should open.

Wow! That shrinking serum works pretty fast. I think the only good news is that the poor octogenarian won’t have to endure her stomach juices for too long, assuming the fork punctured his vital organs. Wouldn’t want to meet that lady in a dark alley.