Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed
January 29 2014
Chapter 3: The Next Morning
Just caught up with this final chapter... great way to tie-it-up, though, I kept expecting him to have a cup of coffee at breakfast, and well... you know! ;)
Your spin-off sounds very interesting. You could have all sorts of people coming in, (even through the drive thru) ordering coffee and swiftly exiting into the unknown...
Short, quick, little clips, that just give enough to raise the pressure!
Ex: Joe handed the coffee to his wife to hold while he parked the car in front of the beauty salon, she handed it back to him after he parked and she went inside to get her hair done...
Upon returning, she thinks that he has left the car, as she opens the door and see's his clothe's lying there on the seat?
She would somehow discover her tiny naked husband and....
___can't wait for the spin-offs!
I'm glad you liked it! I am working on the spinnoff now, and I have to say one of the chapters I'm working on is very similar to the scenario you described!
Ths spinoff is going to be fun because it is a bit of a change for me--I am used to writing longer stories, and this will give me a chance to do short stories based around a common concept but with a wide variety of possibilities.